Onward Journey ...... Sammy and Skep - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
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*Sigh* - Skep your poems are so heartwarming - who needs hot chocolate on a cold morning, I just need to read your poems...absolutely awesome!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: h&rblock

*Sigh* - Skep your poems are so heartwarming - who needs hot chocolate on a cold morning, I just need to read your poems...absolutely awesome!



DITTO!! So well put...look how she brings the best even in in us!
God bless you Meera........My Mon Ami!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
skep.....i don't know what to say...i mean i can't describe ur poem...its simply so sweet..reallu liked ur poem....thanks for letting me know about ur poem..really enjoyed reading it..the poem is just mindbling....and awesome i can say...ur a great poem writer...keep it up...
luv,
Mariam
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was absolutely awesome Skep ....*applause* ....
All I can do is sigh with pure happiness !!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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You know Skep ..... I had posted a poem by Brian Patten just like the one you've written ..... about a child's thots and dreams .... I'm copying it here again ..... just to refresh your memory .......
You Can't Be That ................. By Brian Patten
I told them:
When I grow up
I'm not goimg to be a Scientist
Or someonewho reads the news on TV.
No, a million birds will fly through me
I'M GOING TO BE A TREE.
They said:
You can't be that ...... No, you can't be that.
I told them:
When I grow up
I'm not going to ba an airline pilot,
A dancer, a lawyer, or a MC.
No, huge whales will swim in me
I'M GOING TO BE AN OCEAN.
They said:
You can't be that ...... No, you can't be that.
I told them:
I'm not going to be a DJ,
A compyter programmer, a muscian or a beautician,
No, streams will flow throughme, I'll be the home for eagles,
I'll be full of nooks, crannies, vallyes and fountains.
I'M GOING TO BE A RANGE OF MOUNTAINS
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They said:
You can't be that ...... No, you can't be that.
I asked them:
Just what do you think I am?
Just a child, they said,
And children always become
At least one of the things
We want them to be.
They do not understand me.
I'll be a stable if I want, smelling of fresh hay........
I'll be a lost glade in which unicorns still play......
They do not realise I can fulfill any ambition.
They do not realise among them
Walks a magician.
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Isn't that fabulously written ?????
I felt enchanted reading this.......
How beautifully the poet has captured a child's thoughts !!!!!!!
Imagine, all of us started like this ....
And then, we grew up .....
Sighhhhhhh !!!!!!!!!
Edited by Dawn Idol - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
Yes............sigh!!!!! 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I sat at the table stirring my hot cuppa tea
A fruit pie with peach cream I didn't even see
A worried frown on my face as I ate the muesli
I worried about my friend across the seven seas.
The day was dull, the clouds filled the blue sky
My concentration was gone and I could tell why
Some one far away was to be put through a test
My Sakhi was harried by an exasperating pest.
I sat in my carriage and returned over the bridge
The buggy jolted as it ran noisily over the ridge
T'was the end of day for me but what about her?
I prayed that things would change for the better.
The water ran gurgling by but I did not heed it
The birds cooed in their nest but I didn't heed it
The clouds descended down but I didn't see it
My heart prayed for her - I hoped she'd heed it.
I lay down on my bed my lashes floated down
In the silence of the night there was not a sound
I saw a beautiful valley with the flowing stream
Was this real or just a part of my dream?
The firs stood upright and with them I did plead
I spoke to every flower and to every seed
Will she be okay, will she have a reason to smile
Will her anxiety go away in just a little while?
I reached the end of that most ethreal forest
A figure was there in white looking the purest
He was writing with his plume in golden ink
I was so mesmerised, that I just couldn't think.
Who was in the gazebo.... .God or a holy man?
I couldn't reach him due to the water's span
Oh take my message across, ye divine birds
And exactly express my thoughts in simple words.
The leaves looked purple in the blessed light
Flowers growing on the banks were such a delight
My heart almost stopped its beat at this lovely sight
I hope my friend is spared and is no more in fright.
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Edited by skeptical - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dear Kal,
It's so nice to know you are visiting this forum.........................🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thats so wonderfully put Skep👏 ...I have prayed for our dear Sakhi too...hope all her worries end and she is back with her lovely smile.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
That was awesome Skep ....
One small Q .... who is sakhi ? ....... anyone I know ?
I pray too that her troubles melt away ......
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