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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank u soo much hope people also like it..
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Posted: 6 years ago
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You please continue dear even if no one comes to the forum I will read it
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Originally posted by: 4me2

You please continue dear even if no one comes to the forum I will read it

Ok dear .. Hn story totpuri karon ge hi karon ge
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Episode 2 :
Rohit lost in her..
Kanchan felt awkward n weave hand in front of her.
Kanchan : rohit... Rohit..
Rohit back to sense
Rohit : han..
Kanchan : kia hua?
Rohit : kuch nai..bs ase hi..
Kanchan :tm bhi na... Acha suno mn ja rahi hn room mn packing karni hai yad hai na kal nikalna hai hamn..
Rohit : are yar.. Kia tm bhi.. Kal hi to aye hn ek do din holidays to mana lenay do skoon s .. Shoping karain gaye ghumain gaye phirain gay ash karain gaye...
Kanchan : r tmhare ash ash k chakron mn na mere clinic ka kia hoga han? Kal conference hai wo attend kar k niklain gaye.. R jo ghumna phirna hai wo aj hi kar lain gaye..
Rohit : nai yar sirf ek hi din ki to bat hai... Ek din r plz..
He make cute faces..
Kanchan: tm nai mano gaye na..
Rohit : bilkul b nai..
Kanchan : theek hai lakin sirf ek r din bs..
Rohit excitedly : hn hn ek din r...
Kanchan : ok...
Rohit : tm buht achi ho... Thank u
Kanchan smiles on his innocent gesture
Scene 2 :
They visits malls does some shoping..
Long drives..
At evening :
Rohit drop kanchan at her hotel..
Rohit : so madam kesa raha ap ka din..? Maza aya?
Kanchan : hn buht enjoy kia mn n... Ab buht thak gai hn subha conference hai.. Mn n ab rest karna r tyari bhi karni hai..
Rohit : ok.. Bye take care..
Kanchn : bye.
Kanchan left..
Rohit thinks : darling tmhn ek r din yehn ruknay ka mera jo maqsad tha wo to pura ho gaya hai.. Bs ab sochna yeh hai k kase ab tmhn handle karna hai..
Khair wo to bad ki bat hai..
Rohit call someone... Hn theek hai.. Pata hai na kia karna hai? Sb set rakhna bs..
Suddenly kanchan comes..
Kanchan : rohit..
Rohit get shocked..
Rohit thought : yeh wapas kun a gai... kahin is n kuch sun to nai liye..
Rohit : ka ka kancha... kanchan...
Kanchan : sorry mm wo apna fone bhol gai the na gari mm wahi lenay ai the..
Rohit : ha han fo.. Fone.. Oh acha fone...
Kanchan felt his behavior fishy..
Kanchan : kia hua tm theek to ho na?
Rohit : hn hn baba mn theek hn tm jao rest karo subha jana nai hai..
Kanchan : hn.. Ok bye
Rohit : bye..
Kanchan left..
Rohit : aj to bar bar bach gaye..
Late night :
Kanchan unable to sleep.. She turn sides and sides.. Till 2.am
Kanchan : aj kun itni bechaini ho rahi hai..
Kanchan rise from her bed make instant coffee n goes toward terrace..
Her hair was on left shoulder... She was in white ptyala n kurta..
As she stands below the sky some sweet breeze start touching her...
For some peace she just closes her eyes n felt it from her soule.. The after a whilr she opens her teary eyes..
Kanchan : khush to hogay na aj tm... Dekho... dekho aj tmhara sapna pura honay ja raha hai... Kanchan gupta ab sirf kanchan gupta nai rahi bal k dr. Kanchan gupta bn gai hai... Tm hi thay na... Hn tm hi to thay.. Jis n mujh s b pahle yeh spna dekha tha k ek din mn dr banaon ge.. Mere naam k sath dr juray ga... Tm n hi to dekhaya tha yeh khubsurat khawab..mere dagmagatay kandmon ko tm n hi to smbhala tha... R tm hi...
N she falls on ground n start crying unconditionally
Next morning :
Kanchan get ready for confrence.. N left her room..
She reached the venue.. First she felt nervous... Then she saw something in her cluch n the become confident...
In conference she handle every thing boldly..
At evening conference ends.. Kanchan comes out fron hall.. N is very happy...
Kanchan thinks to call rohit..
Kanchan thought : nai.. Sb s pahle yeh khabar sunany ka haq kisi r ka hai...
She run from there toward her room...
She take out her dairy n write each n everything in it..
Next day :
Rohit call kanchan..
Kanchan was slept last night in that writing position.. She didn't know when n how she slept last night... Her sleep broke due to rohit call
Kanchan unconsciously attends his call
Rohit : kahan ho yar kal s koi ata oata hi nai hai
Kanchan : han sorry rohit.. Mn wo so gai the.. Thak gai the na buht..
Rohit : ok ok.. Ab kia plan hai?
Kanchan : tmhn pata... Tm batao
Rohit : ok asa kartay hn aj thora sa catchup kartay hn then aj hi india waps chaltay hn ok?
Kanchan :ok..
After some outing they left for india..
flight reached
They went to her home.. There was dark every where.. As kanchan opens the door..
Everyone : surprise..
Kanchan get shocked and angry ...
Kanchan : band karo yeh sb bakwas... Kis ki permission s hua yeh sb...? Mn n pucha kis ki permission s? Maa ap?
Maa blow her eyes..
Kanchan : leave everyone... Pls leave..
N kanchan run toward her room n cries..
Then there is knock on the door..
Her maa comes in n put hand on her shoulder..
Kanchan turn n angerly see her maa.
Maa : kanchan beta plz try to understand... Hm chahtay thay teri itni bari khushi the wo hm celebrate karain... Rohit n yeh sb bari mehnat s kia tha beta ase us ki mehnat p pani to mat phair...
Kanchan : acha to yeh sb us n kia hai.. Use to mn abhi..
Kanchan as stand to go.. Her mother holds her hand..
Maa: hn ja bol use yeh jo sb kia us n sb ghalat kia.. Tere khushi ko dugna karna chahta tha wo b ghalat kia na us n.. Hm sb to kuch hn hi nai na tere... N she cries..
Kanchan stops..
Kanchan : per maa
Maa: beta rohit buht acha larka hai.. Teri ek smile k liye jan deta hai wo larka.. Plz beta meri hath jor k benti hai k plz.. Mat tor us ka dil..
Kanchan : maa ap janti ho na mn kisi admi p bharosa nai kar sakti..
Maa : hn janti hn.. Jo kuch hua mere sath hua tha..lakin beta zindgi akele nai guzari ja skti.. Koi na koi humdard humsafar chahiye hota hai..
Kanchan : mn akele hi theek hn guzar lon ge zindgi.. Maa: nahi... Kehna asan hai lakin karna... Beta yeh jo duniya hai na.. Noch noch k khanay ko dorti hai.. Kisi mard ka hona lazmi hai.. plz ek dafa mere liye..
Kanchan thinks... N then smiles..
Maa : chal beta bahir chal..
Kanchan : mn ati hn ap chalo..
Maa goes.. N kanchan cries..
Precape : kanchan mother get call from hospital


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow what an update yaar. Kiska sapna tha woh doctor bane ? Kiski photo uski clutch me hai ? Uski maa ya aur koi ? aur kis wajah se Kanchan aisi hai ? Uski ma ke saath koi Hadsa hui kya ? Uski papa un sab ko chod ke chale gaye ? Kanchan kya koi occasion celebrate nahi karti ? par kyun ? aur yeh Rohit to kuch sahi nahi lag raha. Uska irada thik nahi hai ? Kya chahta hai woh ? Kanchan ke saath kyun hai ?
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Lols .. Sb question ka jawab milay ga thora sa sabar... 😆
Abhi to r b buht kuch hona hai
Edited by aimmyangle - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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yaar please mujhe thoda to hint de do pm me hi sahi
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Episode 3 :
Episode started with kanchan in room
Kanchan thought: kab tk akhir kab tk mn yun ateet k saye mn rahon ge? Ek na ek din to niklna hi pare ga.. Jo log meri zindgi mn nai hain un k liye mn jo hain un logon ko to nai bhula skti na... Shyad ma sai keh rahi hn... Jo beet gaya so bat gai.. Mujhe apnay beetay huye kal s nikal kar anay wale kal mn apna qadam rakhna hoga.. Magr yeh itna asan nai hai... Pr shayad itna mushkil b na ho jitna mujhe lagta.. Kabhi kabhi insan k samnay pahar hota hai jise use kameyabi tk puhnchnay k liye charhna hota hai.. Pr jb wo charh jata hai to wo mehnz kuch seerian hoti hn jo use us k madsad k liye charni hoti... Yeh insani dimagh ki soch hai... Jo jis cheez s darta hai to use wahi cheez bar bar darati hai... R jiise nai darta wo chahye pahar hi kun na ho wo unchai tk puhnch hi jata hai.. Shayd mn b kuch zyada hi dar rahi hn.. Kb tk mn apnay dar ko jar s nai ukhar k phenkon ge tb tk shayd ase hi darti rahon ge... Mujhe ateet k saye s niklna hi hoga.. Apnay liye nai apno k liye..
She wipes her tears n got ready for party..
Kanchan comes out.. Everyone wishes her birthday
Rohit comes near her..
Rohit : happy birthday sweet heart... U r looking gorgeous
Kanchan : thank u.. Thank u for everything... I m sorry us wkt mn n ase react kia..
Rohit : madam jahan ap hn wahn dhamak na ho.. Asa kab hua hai.. I expected that... Bt mn yeh b janta tha k ap apni maa ki b suno ge...ab chalain cake cutting k liye dair ho rahi hai
Kanchan nodes...
Kanchan cuts cake... Everyone cheers.. Kanchan cut one piece from cake n about to give rohit as fone ring.. Her mother who is near fone attend the call
Maa : aj? Nai aj to nai...
O. Side : plz mam
Maa : acha acha..
N she ends the call
Kanchan : kia hua ma kon tha
Maa : beta tu celebrate kar le na.. Phr batati hn..
Kanchan : nai abhi batao
Maa : beta wo hospital s fone tha koi emergency hai..foran tujhe bulaya hai..
Kanchan : kia maa.. Hospital mn emergency hai kisi ki zindgi moit ka sawal tha r ap mujhe celebration ka keh rahi the.. Ap b na..
Rohit tm plz mind mat karna... I have to go plz..
Rohit nods smilingly..
Kanchan left..
Kanchan reached hospital..
She inform on reception.. N gies toward her clinic..
Nurse come in her office..
Nurse : mam wo d.r neha chahti the un ka ek patient hai 2 saal s he is in coma due to an incident... N he is biten by snake.. So she didn't have experience on antivinome.. Unhn n ek diya b bt us ka asr nai hua.. R ap k to kafi cases guzray.. So wo chati hn k ap us patient ko over take karain...
Kanchan : ok.. Ap dr neha ko bhej dain mere cabin mn
Nurse :mam wo to kahin important meeting mn gai hn..
Kanchan : ok then mujhe us patient ki file sb reports r record chahiye i will study..
Nurse: ok mam
Nurse goes to bring..
Kanchan drinks water...
After sometime nurse comes back with file...
Kanchan study it... Then call nurse.. Nurse comes
Kanchan : kahn hai patient wo
Nurse : mam wo icu mn hai bed no 4 p
Kanchan : ok mn chal k dekhti hn..
Tm asa karo use 1 antivinome r 2 glucose injection do.. Mn ati hn..
Nurse :ok mam
Nurse left..
Kanchan felt uneasy n things got blur infront of her eyes..
Kanchan again drink water.. N then left for the checkup..
As she was progressing toward icu.. Her fone rings..
Its rohit kanchan attends the call
Kanchan : he.. Hello
Rohit : hn kanchan tm puhnch gai?
Kanchan : ha.. Han pu.. Puhnch gai..
Rohit : kia hua kanchan tm theek to ho na?
Kanchan : ha.. Han.. M. Mn the... Theek hn..
Rohit : nai mujhe nai lag raha... Tm bhi na kitni tension leti ho kam ki... Mn a raha hn tmhn lenay
Kanchan : nai mn theek hn rohit... Mujhe patient ko check karna hai..
Rohit : mn kuch nai sun raha bs a raha hn... Hm drive p chalain gaye... Then i will drop u..
Kanchan : tm nai mano gaye na..
Rohit : nai..
Kanchan : ok then...
Rohit comes to pick her up.. Kanchan comes n sit in the car...
Rohit smiles at her... N she smiles back.. Kanchan still feel uncomfortable..
Rohit : kanchan tm theek to ho na?
Kanchan : h... Han.. M.. Mn.. Theek hn.. Tm plz ghar... Chalo..
Rohit : hn han abhi chaltay hn..
N he stops the car near any construction side...
There is dark everywhere..
Kanchan : tu.. Tum n.. Ye.. Yehn kun rok di gari...
Rohit : wo wo... Kanchan mujhe b zara chakar a rahe thay.. Is lye
Kanchan : plz mujhe ghar chor ao...
Rohit : hn hn abhi chaltay hn.. Chaltay hn abhi..
Kanchan falls unconcious..
At hospital:
Kanchan reached hospital... Her makup was sumdged she was horrified..
Staff gethered arround her..
One nurse gives water to her... She drank it...People start ask what happens to her..
Kanchan screams band karo sb band karo n falls unconcious..
Then after some time she opens her eyes... N shiver with fear.. N cries...
Drs tries to calm her down..
Dr. Neeta :kanchan calm down everything is alright... N then nurse gives her injection n she goes unconscious
After sometime kanchan become conscious..
Kanchan : mn.. Mn yehan kase puhnchi? Kon laya mujhe..
Everyone saw eachother face..
Kanchan :batao na.? Kia hua tha mujhe...
Dr comes
Dr :kanchan sb theek hai.. Tm batao kia hua tha..
Kanchan : mujhe kuch yad nai...
Dr : thora sa try karo...
Kanchan start remembering
Dr : kanchan batao mujhe kia hua tmhare sath everything is alright.?
Flashback:
Rohit smriks.. He pull kanchan up n take her to that site..
At site:
One of his friend wi8ing...
Rohit : sb set hai na?
Vikram : hn sb set hai
Rohit lay her down on bed..
Ishka ise tyar karo..
Ishika : ok sir..
After sometime kanchan was ready..
Vikram : ab kia tu use shadi karega?
Rohit : shadi to karon ga ise.. Isi s to karni hai shadi bs... R kisi s nai.. Lakin itna saal mn n to intzar kia hai us ka zara phal to chakh lon..
Vikram : matlab..??
Rohit : matlab yeh mere dost.. K shadi mn thora sa twist hai... Shadi to karon ga mn use... Magr pahle mn r kanchan ek hn gaye.. R phr ehsan k natay kar longa shadi..
Precape: kanchan falls on ground n cries... In rain..

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Posted: 6 years ago
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matlab Rohit raped her when she was unconscious ? dam how sick and pervert
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Originally posted by: 4me2

matlab Rohit raped her when she was unconscious ? dam how sick and pervert

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