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A Twisted Love Story (Another Version)

Last Part
Both of them take rest back on the only isolated bed in the whole room, where Nupur was all cuddled up to him,there was single plate of food which both them shared feeding food to each other, they were sharing all the love talks with each other, it seems they were least bothered that they have been captive at one of their biggest criminal, it was very light moment for them and why won't be they has confessed their love, the ultimate thing and this sad part has turned into the most blissful part of their life.


Vinashak on the other hand was very happy,"Aaj meri life ka sabse badi khushi ka din.. I have kept them captive, instead of celebrating their life, they both must be cursing their life, I have made their day even worst then what I did to them..I need to work with my next plan also...". he resumed with his people to work on his plan lest he know love birds already celebrating their love.

Next day Vinashak opened the door and gave an assignment to Mayank, he need rob a diamond a very rare piece which is under great security level and need to present that diamond in front of him, else Nupur will be killed passing all details he captured Nupur again and gave assignment to Mayank to fulfil. Before taking exit Mayank looked at Nupur like looking at her for last time, he knew may be now he is seeing her last time and same was with Nupur as well, she freed herself from their grip and ran towards him hugging him, crushing him and confessing her love yet again,"I love you Mayank.. promise me ki tum wapis aaoge...". Mayank freed himself politely and cupping her face in his palms he slowly gave a small peck on her lips and said," I promise mein aaunga Nupur zarur aaunga..". Vinashak order his goons to seperate the dua and ask Mayank to return in 12 hours else he won't be able to see Nupur's face again.

Glaring him to death he moved ahead, Vinashak was over confident since he knew Nupur is under his captive Mayank would certainly not do anything stupid and yet was right certainly that Mayank wouldn't take any step against him as he can't let love his life to be in danger, after so many long years he has someone beside him who loves him, to whom he loves, he can't let her life at risk. Mayank reached the museum where he has to rob that diamond.

He make his way towards tunnel and was in constant touch with Vinashak. He entered to the washroom area and changed himself to disguise. Vinashak instructed him that there is a passage which he needs to pass, but it is full of red bean lights. He need to save himself from that and reach towards the centre area where that diamond is placed. With all twist and turns saving himself from every beam he turned and curved himself passing all the red thin lights. He finally crossed it an reached to the hall which was circular in shape, now he need to collect the diamond, but he cannot touch it, he need to first dis-armed the security light revolving around it. Vinashak instructed him how to dis-armed it and following his instructions very keenly Mayank failed the security part and took the diamond.

Vinashak with a winning smile,"Dekha Nupur finally usne vo chura liya.. tum to kehtithi chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye but tumhara Mayank jis per tumko hadd se zaayeda bharosa hai vo kabhi bhi galat kaam nahi rega chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye".

Nupur was just controlling her anger,"You're a devil.. tumko vo zinda nahi chodega..". Vinashak laughed at her and said,"Vo to time baayega...".

In sometime Mayank reached there, he showed diamond to him and said,"Bass ab bahut hua..!!! tmko mene diamond de diya hai ab Nupur ko chod do..!".

Vinashak ordered his men and one of them throw Nupur at him, he catches her through her waist and said,"Chalo Nupur!!". both were very dis-heartened..they were about to take their off when Vinashak goons held them back. Vinashak said to them,"Tum logo ko lya lagta hai ki mein tum dono ko aise jaane dunga..!! meri zindagi ke sabse bade dushman ho tum dono.!! ". HE instructed his goons to tie them to death. Both were now tied down above a huge vessel which was flled with acid, a very strong acid. Their the main point of their rope was under a tap of same acid fluid which was kept open and a drop by drop was faling on rope, making the scene more dreadful. Vinashak," Maut to tumko milegi..but maut se pehle jo dard hota hai aur jo khuaf hota hai vo to maut se bhi batter hota hai..kaash mein tum dono ko marte hue dekh leta but abhi mujhe mera plan pakadna hai.. chod ke jaa raha hoon mein ye desh hamesha haemsha k liye".

Mayank struggled to freed himself but he couldn't, when Nupur looked down she wa shorrified,"Mayank mujhe darr lagg raha hai..!! Mayank humara plan successfull to hoga na..!!Mayank agar mujhe kuch ho jayye".

Mayank: Shhh!! kuch nahi hoga tumhe Nupur.. kuch nahi hoga...neeche mat dekho Nupur..meri aakhon mein dekho..," She looked in his eyes while he continue,"Agar aaj hum yahan se zinda wapis chale gaye to I promise Nupur I love you till the square of this infinity.." a smile crept on her face and with that both of them dropped a bit since rope was getting lossen because of the acid, horrified both still manages to look into each other eyes, Nupur continued,"Mayank I love you.. I love you a lot..!! mein ek sach batana chahti hoon.. jab Vinashak ne bola ki uski sabse badi dushman mein hoon vo isiliye kyunki mujhe pata chall gaya ki Vinashak kon hai uss raat mujhe ek video mein kuch aisa mila jiss mein Vinashak ko pakad sakti thi.. but shayad mein tumse bahut naraz thi isiliye mene tumko phone nahi kiya I am sorry Mayank agar mein tumko phone ker deti to shayad hum dono usse paka rahe hote aur tum meri wajah se iss maut k mooh mein nahi hote..I am really sorry". Mayank interrupted and said,"Nahi Nupur..nahi..isme tumhari koi galti nahi hai...please don't say sorry... acha..!!" before he could continue both of them were made more closer towards their death, silent tears were falling from both of ther eyes but Mayank need to talk to Nupur,"Nupur.. meri taraf dekho..", she looked into his eyes and he continued,"Nupur...will you marry me..?". She was all shocked but then yes she want to...she just nodded her head and replied to him,"Mayank I'll...could you promise me one thing..please just look into my eyes... I want to capture your face before I met death". He agreed with her and both of the them drown into each other eyes..

It seems god was certainly watching from above and he can't see two love birds having such miserable death, a strong wind came and some drums from above fall down rolling to their side, their hit a board which was kept in angle which again hit a ladder and same time their rope also get detached. The timing was such that ladder landed just before them like both of them fall at that ladder. Surprise to the core they thanked god and very carefully crossed the ladder and ran towards airport to catch the villian of their life.

There on the other hand Vinashak was busy catching his plan, he instructed driver to take off when he see whole police army was standing in front of his plan and he hears a warning,"Vinashak... this is a final warning for you.. get down from your plane else we'll shoot you..!". Realising what is happening everything become crystal clear in front of him,"Tabhi Mayank meri baaton ko asani se maan raha tha..!! That's why Nupur was so confident about him, Mayank mere pass jab ayaa.. vo khud chahta tha ki mein usse pakdoon..!! ye sab uska plan tha..usne pehle se Police ko inform ker diya tha!! I am such a fool.. that I misunderstood both of them, that means Nupur ne koi clue chodha tha and Mayank used it." Angry on himself, he still instructed pilot to take off...when he saw a jeep coming towards him with great speed, it just took him few seconds to analyse they were none other than Mayank and Nupur, seeing them alive he was shock to core, Mayank took loudspeaker and said,"Vinashak tumhara khel khatam..apne aap ko police ko surrender ker do..!!". The pilot still starts the plane and get it ready for take off, Police fires on them to stop and to Vinashak's bad luck his pilot was dead, he took his seat and tried to take off.. but before he cold be fast on his act Mayank jumped and fired on his plane making it blast. They reached the spot where half-dead Vinashak was lying but still he was happy he said," I am still happy I won, cause mere saath ye diamond bhi blast ho gaya..! I won I made you rob!!". Before he could close his eyes Mayank said,"Itni ache se marne nahi doonga tumhe ab suno.. the diamond I gave you was fake..!!", Nupur came behind to him and said,"Yes..!! I already knew that your nest plan would be to rob that diamond, isiliye humse pehle se hi wahan fake diamond plan kerwa diya tha..!!". Accepting his final defeat he called off and said his last words,"I am sorry Mayank-Nupur" and saying he departed from this earth.

Mayank was very happy finally the man died, both of them received huge appreciation from government and a new good conditioned office was built for them with more equipped staff.
Its been few weeks past to this, Mayank and Nupur were in a small party when all of a sudden light went off and a spotlight came on Nupur face, she was all surprised when she saw Mayank kneeling down infront of her with a rose,"I love you..the day you entered in my life you made my life blissfull, I cannot imagine a day without you, I love fighting with you, I love when you proves your point correct, the way you hold pen in your mouth, the way your eyes speaks and reveal the whole plan without letting criminal know whats going between our mind, the way we could telepath with each other and solve all mysteries. I want to thank you for being there for me, to support me in hardest days of my life. Jaan hai tu arzoo tu, zindagi tu, bandigi tu, rab meara tu sab mera tu...Will you marry me.." with this he represents ring infront of her, streching her hand she replied in yes saying,"Na kuch poocha na kuch bola tune dil se diya jo diya, muskura ke diye jo diya, tu dhoop tu hi chaya..tu hi apna paraya..aur kuch na maangu bass itna hi jannu, tujh mein rab dikhta hai yara mein kya karoon..!!" He hugged her tightly and she continued whispering,"Sajde sir jhukta hai yara mein kya karoon..tujh mein rab dikhta hai yara mein kya karoon!!".

There was huge round of applause, finally they accomplished the made factor of their life, their love witha cupid sticke of a criminal. Carrying her towards his room for their first night Nupur asked Mayank,"Mayu what's sort love story we have". Mayank,"Hmm let say it unique but unique to sabki hoti hai humari to tedhi medhi hai..". Nupur smiled and said," A twisted love story", agreeing to her said,"A twisted love story". Closing door their entered room to celebrate their twisted love story.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome Vinashak death scene awesome mayur romantic scene luvd it beautiful ending great job dear thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: shafy_MN


Thank you Dear.. really I have no words. Being just a newbie in writing..I have never thought my ideas my stories will be loved my you guys to this extent.

Regarding serendipity, I'll try to repost it. The main issue is I lost the touch and now I have to ho back to that state of mind again. Give me sometime let me think about it. I'll update you soon.

it's ok dear no problem take ur time
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it's ok dear no problem take ur time


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Awesome Vinashak death scene awesome mayur romantic scene luvd it beautiful ending great job dear thanks for pm dear


Thank you DEar. 😊
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Original Twisted Love Story

Last Part

Both of them taken to the different direction,to have different type of deathMayank's heart wrenches with a thought what torcher they would be giving to Nupur,he didn't thought for a second what they will be doing with himhe tried to free himself, not to for himself but to save Nupur he retort,"Chodo mujhechodo mujhe.chodo".They thrown him in a chamber and opened a poisonous gashe banged the glass walls but they were too hard to get crackedthey all left from there and were started to do their work taking the diamonds from the clothes.He tried his all tactics to open - shatter the glasses but couldn't when suddenly it strikes him that had that piece of diamond which he had checked while taking the diamond from their clothwith that piece he cut the glass and came out of itbreathing heavily as the gas has been effecting a lot, he was coughing badly,he stabled his breath and searched for Nupur..he went to the direction where they had taken her in order to save her,he didn't called her name out as the goons out their could knew about his escape and can create more harm to her, he reached the hall but didn't found her, he searched her when a door of a room slight open suspecting it he opened it only to get shocked,they tied up Nupur horizontly with a rope which is been attached to a pully coming down to a chamber of glass filled with water but apart from that he noticed a pair of wires were being inserted in the chamber noticing him that the water has currenthe said to Nupur in assurance,"Don't worry Nupurmein aa gaya hoon kuch nahi hogamein..mein hoon".Her mouth was covered but she reacted through her eyes saying him I trust youHe tried to look for a switch to shut the wire offhe has a very less time as the pully was moving downwards and in few seconds Nupur would be sumberged into ithe didn't find any of it..and plus he don't have any sort of gloves or something of which he could took out the wire and if he tried bare hands he too will get shock and won't be able to protect Nupurhe was thinking hard and hard just that his eyes fall on a small hole from where the current supply was cominghe carefully removed the wires from it detataching the supply of current to flow in the water but sioll there was a lot specific current in the water to give eletric shock to Nupurby the time Nupur was very much near to the chamber..he hold her from her waist and tires to open all the ropes but since because of pully she was going down and downhe said while trying his best to open the ropes,"Don't worry Nupur".he opened the ropes of her hands and put them across his neck and said to her,"Nupur mujhe pakad loelse you'll fall down in it".She nodded her head and does as he saidhe slowly removed the ropes from her waist and very carefully from her legsshe was about to fall down when he caught her from waist and pulled her towards himselfboth of them fall down where she was on the top of himboth shared a brief eye locka wave of emotions tranpired through their eyestheir breaths were falling on each other..he removed fringes from her face putting them behind her ear , asked her,"Tum..tum thik ho na'.She replied like being drowning in his eyes,"Tumhare..hote hue mujhe kabhi kuch ho sakta hain".He smiled at what she said and replied to her,"Mein kabhi kuch hone bhi nahi doonga..".They kept on staring each other irrespective of their position for a whileafter a moment they realize their position.they got up from their place..looking here and there..avoiding each otherboth of them felt a bit awkwardbreaking the silence Mayank spoke,"So..ab..ab tum thik ho".She nodded her head to which he said again,"tum commissioner saab ko phone karo aur unko yaha jald se jald aane ko kaho..tab tak hum in sab se nipatte hainright partner..".She said,"Right!!!".

She called up the Commisioner making him explain the whole situationand ask him to arrive as soon as possibletill than he arrived with his police force..they beated few Ajesh Rawal's goon and make them busy through their talks and tacticsWhen the police took him away Nupur said to Mayank,"Phewwwye case bhi khatamthanks partner meri jaan bachane k liyevese ek baat batao..tumhe pata kese chala ki saaraa maal iss goodown mein aayega".Mayank said raising his collor,"Ab vo kya hain na tum to jaanti ho koi bhi mere charm se nahi bach sakta bas isi ka mene use kiya aur jo vo receptionist hain na usse pata kerwa liya".Nupur said in her anger tone,"Vese to bada ladkiyon se door bhagte rehte ho..lekin iss case mein to tum kuch aur hi ker rahe the..information nikalne k bahane bada flirt ker rahe the.".Mayank said in a little mocking tone,"Nupur kahin se jalne ki boo aa rahi hainkahin tum jealous to nahi ho rahi ho".

"Mein..aur jealouse..mein..mein ..kyu jealous hone lage..jealous hogi meri jootisamjhe Mr.Sharma"

"Haan ache tareeke se samjh gaya.."

"Kya ..samjhe haanmein bhi jaanu.."

"Chodo Nupur.."

"Nahi mujhe to jaannaahain"

"Sachi mein.."

"Haan.."

"To baat ye hain" Suddenly his phone rang breaking their convo he excused himself and said to her,"Nupur mujhe important kaam hainkal milte hain mein chalta hoon".Before she could call him outhe was out of sightNupur thought,"Ye ladka bhi na.pagal haina sweet smile appeared on her face pagal hain but meri fiker kerta hainbahut kerta hain..aur ye jaan ker mujhe bahut acha lagta hainrealizing what she is thinking she scolded heself,"Kya Nupur tu bhi kya sochti rehti hain".

The next Day Mayank called hr up in the restraunt saying he need to talk her urgentlyshe reached a bit early and was waiting for him..a wait of few minutes was looking ages to her she waited for more five minutes while murmuring to herself,"Mayank kahan ho tum.mujhe bulaya aur khud chale gayeMayankaa bhi jao".Just than he entered with a bag and passport in his hand , he quickly sat opposite her and apologised,"Sorry..!!! for being late".

"Mujhe bulate ho tum Mayank aur khud late ho jaate ho.."

"Ab Sorry na Nupurvo thoda kaam tha"

"Apne Dad k pass jaa rahe ho singapore.."

"Tumhekesepata.."

"Fully dressedgelled hair,haathon mein baag..aur passporttumhare Dad ka singapore mein business hain na aur humare pass koi case bhi nahi hain so that means.."

"You are really very smart.."

"Tell me something I don't know..".They shared a laughwhen he said,"Ab Nupur tum to jaanti ho na bahut mushkil se Dad ne busi ness setup kiya hain..but ab unhe meri zarurat hain Mein hamesha k liye unke pass jaa raha hoon..tumhe to maaloom hain bahut mehnat se unhone chota sa business start kiya wahan per..lekin ab he need his son there so I am leaving India foreverand my job also".She was utterly shock but soon compose herself and said to him,"Ye to achi baat hain..tum apne bete ka farz nibhaane jaa rahe ho..".He just pressed his lips showing a mild smile..which was clearing showing the painthe pain to be parted away from each other..their eyes were speaking volumes..depicting their pain to each other but their mouth weren't accepting it and weren't saying anything

After a moment Nupur said,"So tum aaj hi jaa rahe ho".He replied with,"Hmm".Nupur confessing to him,"Vese ek baat bolu I'll really gonnna miss you".He too said,"Me too".Feeling to speak all his heart out..but soon left..thinking may be..feeling are not mutual he said with his heavy heart,"Okay than Bye..!!!".Tears brimmed in her eyes but she controlled herself and said,"Bye".He said,"Airport..chodne nahi aaogi".She bluntly said ,"Nahi.."not even thinking how much it would have pained him.Accepting that she has nothing for him he leftshe silently went behind him..seeing his retreating figure sitting in the taxi and was being droven away from her..the tears which she had hold for so long finally made their way outshe sat there in the road asking herself..to Mayank,"Kyu..chod ker jaa rahe ho Mayank mujhePlease mat jaaomujhe nahi acha lagta kuch bhi tumhare bina".She felt a hand on her shoulder thinking Mayank came back she turned but soon her smile faded seeing Mrs.Bevsry their well-wisher she said consolling her,"Nupur dikra.beta to maan kyu nahi leti tu usse pyar kerti hain..bahut pyar kerti hain..ja beta apne pyar ko rok le..usse bata de..ki tu usse kitna pyar kerti hain..vo bhi tujhse bahut pyar kerta hain..my child..".Realizing the pain she is feeling is nothing but her love for him..a sweet smile on her face and confesses to herself,"Mein Mayank se pyaar kerti hoon..mein Mayank se pyaar kerti hoon..mein usse rokungi".Saying to herslef..she ran ..ran and ran..taking a taxi..she asked the driver to took her to airport as fast as she could

On the other side..Mayank was memorizing each and every moment he had spent with Nupur..how sometimes on solving the case she pretends to be his wife..her smile..her small small fights with him..due to which some times they solve the case..her daring natureeverything..a painfull smile appeared on her face and he said to himself,"Kaash mein tumhe keh pata".He reached the airport and took his luggage out.On the other side Nupur was stuck in the jaam..she said impatiently to the driver,"Bhayiya thoda jaldi chlayiye..please..".He said to her,"Madam ji..bahut bada jam laga hua hainhum kya ker sakte hain".She was getting highly restless handling him his money she moved out of the taxi and herself ran towards the airporton a way she met with Aslam bhai who one's was goon but now become a wise man because of them he promised her to drove her to Airport as fast he couldshe sat on his bike and rode towards the airport.Mayank had already checked in and was waiting for the announcement of his flight..he was sitting in the waiting area glancing of their photograph..remembering their moments together the way sometimes she used to save him from criminals sometimes he used to save her..her eyesin which he always get's drowned but controlled himselfhis heart has always given him signal that he loves her but he always ignores it but today at the time of leaving he realizes those signals which his heart used to give is nothing but is love for Nupur..whenever she was in pain his heart pricks..he used to irritate her..because he lik to see her those expressionsnow at the time of leaving the pain his heart is suffereing is the pain to leave someone behind to whom you love like anything...Just than his fight announced..taking his heavy heart he moved he turned again seeing if she is coming after him or not..but not seeing her his heart drowned and he moved towards his destination which is taking him far away from Nupurthe girl who has stolen his heart..to whom he love like anything

She reached the airport and rush to the counter to enquire about flight..when she received this news,"Mam the flight is going to take off within few minutes..!!!".She was completely helplessat that..moment she don't know what to do..and what notwhen he noticed Commissioner there she reached upto him and literally begged him,"Sirplease Sir..kuch kijiye..Sir..agar flight nahi roki gayi to Mayank hamesha hamesha k liye mujhse door chala jaayega..I really love him Sir..Please..".Commissioner said,"Calm Down Nupur..mujhe to pehle se hi pata tha..I am happy that you realized..you don't worrymein kuch kerta hoon..".A ray of hope enlighten on her facebut anything could happen..the flight took off

He looked through the window..seeing may be he could see her glance..but to his bad luck..there were only clouds and cloudshe murmered to himself,"I love You Nupur".After around an hour of the flight being take off and since he was in business class so very less people were therehe relaxed himself on his seat and closed his eyeswhen suddenly he felt a moment beside him.he opened to see a Sardarji was sitting beside himand was doing domething on his shoulderhe jerked and asked him,"Ye kya ker rahe aap.."

"Oji..Aap ko utha rahe the.."

"Mujhemein jaan sakta hoon kis khushi mein.."

"Oji..vo kya hain..nayaha per aadhe se zaayeda log so..chuke hainaur ji..mera na..baatein shaatein kerne ka mann ker raha tha..to mene socha ki mein aapse thodi-bahut gappe-shappe maar loon.."

"Dekhiye..jab aap aaye tab bhi mein so hi raha tha..aur please apni seat per jaaa ker beth jaayiyemujhe nind aa rahi hain.."

"Oji..nind ko door kerna to mere..baayen haath ka kaam hain..aap bhi kitna boring sa kaam kerte ho flight mein sona..yo bhi koi kaam hove hain..aa ji aayiye ..gaape shappe kerte hain..pehle mein start kerta hoon ji.."

"Dekhiye mujhe koi shauk nahi nahi gappe maarne ka samjhe aap.."

"Oji shauk nahi hain to kya hua hum bana denge"

"Dekhiye Sardar ji mujhe irritate mat kijiye"

"Ji..aap na..bade higusse type ko..ho mein to bas baatein hi kerna chahta tha"

"But mujhe nahi kerni..maaf karo mujhe..".Scolding him he sat back on his seat and closed his eyes..his sleep again got disturb when the Sardarji.. poking his finger sometimes on his shoulder, on his thighs..and also on his neck..he was getting irritated and try to ignore..but more he ignores more his such deeds increasesat last he looses his control and said.

Dekhiye Sardar ji zaraa tameez se bethiyeaas paas ke logo ko problem ho rahi hain..

Oooji...Sirji...humare aas paas to aap hi hain...to kya aapko problem ho rahi hainaji ho bhi rahi hain to thoda adjust ker lo..Ki farak penda hain...tussi bhi kya yaad rakhoge

Dekhiye...

Dekhayie ji...hum to every ready hain dekhne k liye aap kya dikhana chahte ho ji...

Tum nahi sudhroge...

Ojihum bigdae hi kab Jo sudher jaaye aap bhi...


Not waiting anymore second he grabbed the sardarji's neck sitting beside him and pressed his lips on hissardarji was in huge shock with sudden kisswhen Mayank started removing his fake beared, moostache , pagdiand finally it revealed he was not Sardarji but a girl and also A girl Named Nupur.he ruffled her hair.holding her head tightly..while deepening the kisshis hands travelled to her waist pulling her more toward him, soon she lost herself in him and sealed herself with his name on her heart

They broke the kiss after agesbreathing heaving they touched their forhead and both said in union,"I LOVE YOU".It really felt blisshe hugged her tightly to believe that she is real and she really loves him.breaking the hug she showers him with her slaps on his shoulder scolding him,"Tum .tum pehle nahi bol sakte the".To which he retort,"Aur tum..ye kaam tum bhi to ker sakti thi".She said,"Mayank mein ladkihoon..tum bhi na..".He replied,"Tumhe koi shak tha kya apne ladki hone per..".She was getting irritated and continued with her work beating him..when he stops her saying,"Nupur log kya kahenge".She said,"Kehne domujhe koi farak nahi padta".He said,"Okay..".Holding her one hand he pulled her towards him through waist and again sealed her lips with him

On reaching Singapore Mayank discloses everything to his parent about his and Nupur relation..he took over his father's business and preferred it ot run it from India as he thinks it will flourish their moreNupur too joined him in his business..getting approval from both the families in a three months on relationshipthey were all set to get marriedIt was nice and decent type of wedding took place where Mayank was being teased like hellOn their wedding night..Nupur saw that side of Mayankwhich she had never imagined he could be even more reomantic than her SRK ..it was like a dream but you see after all he was Mayank..how can't he be romantic to the person he loves the mostFinally the two detectives who made the best team against crime finally made a beautifull couple , the most adorable and most romantic .

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Awesome ending finally vishanak ko us ke kiye ki saza mili... Thanks 4 pm me
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Awesome ending finally vishanak ko us ke kiye ki saza mili... Thanks 4 pm me



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Fabulous ending flight scene remind me of movie hadh kar di some fab os hope more os from u soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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awesome update shaffy. i really liked both part. but loved original part more. it was totally mayurish type. fantastic OS. do write more.
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