Teri Galliyan MayUr SS Last part-pg19

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Sheetal wants a Mayur SS from me.But since I have lots of other ffs to complete I am converting my old SS which I wrote on another couple to Mayur version.Sheetal is a sweet girl who always helped me with written updates of SSK n supporting my Rosid ffs.This is my small gift for her.

In your way where you live Teri Galliyan Part 1

She found darkness everywhere when she entered her husband's room as a bride.She sat down weeping.She was none other than Nupur.

"Hey God!What a fate!How will I stand before my husband?If he takes his husband rights on me...I can't even imagine.."

Mayank entered the room.She shivered.He went closer to her.She started sweating.

He caressed her face passionately.She closed her eyes in fear.

Suddenly she realized that it was only a dream.A horrific dream.

Mayank entered.

She thought:This is not my dream again.It is reality.Mayank Sharma has come.Now how will I escape from him?

Mayank stared at her.

She shivered like hell.Silently he went to bed sleeping.

Nupur found him strange.

She thought:He is so strange.He did'nt even bother to speak up to his newly wed wife.Which husband does that?Anyways I escaped from him.Thanks God.

Slowly she walked to the bed and lay on the other side of the bed.She could'nt sleep properly as she was scared of the fact that he was lying near her.

She thought:If he does something?

She did'nt know when she fell asleep.

In the morning she woke up finding Mayank sleeping peacefully.

She took bath and went outside.

Mayank's Nani Devayani smiled at her:How do you feel Nupur bitiya?

NUPUR:Nice Naniji.

She touched her feet.

Devayani blessed:Always be happy with Mayank.

Nupur's heart was picked.

She said in her mind:I can never accept Mayank as my husband.

Nupur went to the kitchen and started cooking.
She was tense:Will they like my cooking?


She made puri and chana for break fast.Feeling the smell Mayank's little sister Durga came running.

D:Wow Nupur bhabhi...I can't wait to eat it.

Devayani smiled:It's a tradition that on the first day the daughter in law of the family makes food for the family members.Let me see how you made it.

Devayani tasted it.

Deva:So tasty.Nupur bitiya...you won the test.

NUPUR:Thank you so much Naniji.

Mayank came.

Deva:Mayank...have your wife's first made food.

Durga:Bhaiyya...you need to eat it.Bhabhi has made yummy food.

Mayank:I am not hungry.And I need to go for an urgent meeting.I need to leave now.

Deva:Mayank...today is the first day of your wedding and you are going to office?Not fair.I have informed Aman to take care of things.He will handle the meeting.Don't go.

Mayank:But Nani...

Deva:It's my order.And eat my daughter in law's food.

Nupur brought food for him.

Mayank sat slowly to eat.Nupur served him break fast.Mayank started eating it silently.

Durga:Bhaiyya...why are you not commenting anything on bhabhi's cooking?

Mayank:What to say?

Deva:Mayank...can't you give an honest opinion?

Mayank:It is good.

Deva:Look at your wife and tell.

Mayank looked at Nupur:It was nice.

NUPUR:Thanks.

Nupur thought:Mayank is really strange.Why is he so cold?But good that he is like this.Otherwise I would have been forced to surrender to him.If so I would die.

Durga rang up Aman:Hi Aman.

Am:Hi Durga.

D:You got to do a lot of work.Right?

Am:Ya.What to do?Afterall it is for MAYANK.He is the one who supported our love.I am grateful to him.I really owe to him Durga.

Durga smiled:I am happy that my lover is someone who understands my brother a lot.

Aman smiled.

Am:Ok Durga.I will catch you later as I have a lot of work to do.

D:Carry on Aman.Bye.

Night...

Again Nupur entered the room shivering.

She thought:Yesterday I escaped from him.But will I be able to escape from him always?

She saw Mayank already sleeping on the bed.She was relieved.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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So nice to see a story on mayur lovely..
Nupur scared from mayank.. Mayank sleep without saying seems something definitely
Wrong want to know the story..
So need a quick update..
Update soon
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Mayur ss🥳superbbb start plzzz pm me whenever u update
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Thanks a lot dear u accepted my request and dedicated to me fab start Nupur don't want physical relationship with her husband is she luv someone else or feared for sudden change and wt about mayank nice start dear eagerly waiting for nxt one req if possible u shift ur ss on fan fiction forum eagerly waiting for nxt dear
Edited by sheetal1979 - 7 years ago
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Nice start
Looking forward to reading story again this time with manyak n nupur
Looking forward to next update
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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a mayur ff. wow. thanks dear. very nice part. mayur are married but they r not happy with this marriage. both are run away frm each other. why?
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Interesting start...continue soon plz
Thanks for pm 😛
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hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update
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Part2

Mayank came for break fast.
Devayani:Mayank...Nupur is preparing your favourite breakfast.You are lucky to have such a loving wife.
Mayank got angry and went to the kitchen.Nupur was cooking.
Mayank:Nani told me that you are so loving that you are cooking for me.Don't try to be a loving wife.No need to be a dutiful wife.No need to cook specially for me.I am not dying to eat the food cooked by you.Understand?


Nupur was shocked to see the angry face of Mayank.She got angry.
NUPUR:Even I am not keen to cook for you.I cooked only because I like cooking.Seeing me cook naniji said that it was your favourite breakfast.That time only I came to know that you like this.Naniji must have thought that you shared your interests with me.What can I do?And what did you say?That I am trying to be a loving wife?No way.Just because you are a superb business man doesn't mean that all girls are trying to woo you.If you have that misunderstanding just ease that thought from your mind.I am not interested in you.


Mayank:You think you can irritate me by talking so?No.I am happy that you don't love me.If you love me I won't spare you.
Mayank left.Nupur smiled.
NUPUR:Strange!Thank you Mayank.Thank you so much for hating me.

Mayank saw Nupur watering his plants in the garden.
Mayank:How dare you water my plants?Only I have the right to do so?Heard it?

Nupur looked at him.
NUPUR:I am not interested in gardening.Naniji told me to do so as she thinks if I do so you will be very happy.
Mayank:Oh God!Go to hell.
Nupur threw the mug in anger.Unexpectedly the water splashed on Mayank,

He shivered due to anger.


He stared at her in anger.
NUPUR:So...sorry.
Mayank took drinking bottle from the fridge and poured it into the bucket.Then he poured that water on her head.
She was shocked.

Mayank:If you play with MAYANK SHARMA you won't be spared.

Nupur was shocked.
Mayank went away.Nupur tried hard to control her anger.

Nupur was wiping her hair.The water drops from her hair fell on Mayank who was working on the laptop.He got irritated.
Mayank:What the hell!Why are you irritating me damn it.
NUPUR:What did I do?I was just wiping my hair.
Mayank:The dirty water drops from your hair fell on me.
NUPUR:That water is not dirty.You only poured water on my head.It was drinking water.It is pure water.


Mayank:No use of talking to this girl.Oh!
Mayank went out.Nupur smiled.


After a few days...

Mayank:In the evening we have a party.
Devayani:Ya...all your employees and outsiders are also attending it.Right?Durga told me.She is getting ready to go with Aman.
Mayank:I will be going alone.
Deva:Why are you not taking Nupur with you?
Durga came.
Mayank:Naniji...I don't want to get embarrassed in front of all.Nupur is a villager and I don't want everyone to know how country my wife is.All the wives will be wearing western clothes.Nupur has not worn western dress in her life.
Dur:Bhaiyya...Nupur bhabhi is very beautiful and I will make her look more stylish than other wives.Wait and watch.
Mayank:Durga...don't be kiddish.
Dur:Trust me bhaiyya.I will make it.
Mayank:That behenji can never look good in western clothes.
Nupur who over heard it became upset.

Durga went to Nupur with a western dress.
Dur:Bhabhi...this is for you.
NUPUR:No Durga.I can't carry off western clothes.I have never worn this before.
Dur:Bhabhi...just wear it and leave everything else to me.I will do your hair and make up.
Nupur was hesitant.
Dur:Come on bhabhi.Fast...
Nupur wore it.She was quite uncomfortable.
Durga styled her hair,put make up on her face.
Dur:Wow Bhabhi.Damn good.
Nupur couldn't believe it:Are you sure Durga?I can't believe it.
Dur:Really bhabhi.You look adorable.

Mayank was getting restless.
Mayank:Where the hell is this Nupur?
Nupur came out.
Mayank couldn't believe his eyes.
The village girl Nupur has turned out to be a stylish girl.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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superb part...
loved both the parts
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