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Posted: 7 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: PriyaSweety-Anu

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

I Just completed reading this Story.😊
It was Amazing Part.😊
Mayur Part was so Interesting.😊
Mayur Marriage Part was so Nice.😊
The Story is getting so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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thank u 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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#64

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

amazing update dear

feel sad for nupur...bt finally mayur ki shadi ho gayi

do continue soon

thanks for pm,

thanks 😊

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Originally posted by: Peehu87

Awesome update... Please continue soon..

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Part-10

London.

Rishab karan and nandhini reached home before mayur to welcome them.

Prerna- aane de is ladke ko baat hi nhi karugi usse. Koi apni maa k saath aisa karta hai kya. (Prerna said angrily )

Nadhini- aare didi aap yuh hi pareshaan ho rahi hai. Ladki bahut aachi hai. Aapko jaisi bahu chahiye thi mayu k liye bilkul waisi hi hai (trying to calm Prerna down)

Prerna- janti hu mere mayu ne kissi ko pasand kiya hai toh hira hi hogi. Par mai maa hu uski haq banta tha mera uski shaadi mai hone ka.

Riddhima along with samrat and adhiraj comes there

Riddhima- I agree with mom. How can bhai do this with us. Not fair.

Karan- aare Bhabhi ab gussa chod bhi do mayu k liye.

Prerna- gussa nhi hu. Har in dono new love birds k tang keechna toh banta hai mera. Ab mai saas ban gayi hu thoda toh akad dekhaugi na. (she said in dramatic way)

Entire family busted into laughter.

They heard the doorbell.

Prerna- shh!! Aacha sab koi serious wala face bana lo lagna chahiye ki sach mai hum naraaz hai.

All the family member in one tune- ok boss.

Prerna open the door.

On seeing them she wanted to hug them but acted as if she was very upset with them.

Prerna- ab kya karne aaye ho tum dono yaha. Shaadi Karli apni marzi se maa ko bulana zaruri nhi samjha ab kyun aaye ho yaha (trying to act serious)

Nupur who was already nervous holded mayank's hand she was about to cry.

Seeing her gesture Prerna smiled.

Prerna- aare bas mujhse aur yeh drama nhi hota.

Everyone starts laughing including mayank. Nupur gets confused seeing them.

Samrat- what mom. Thoda aur drama karna tha na.

Prerna- itni pyaari bahu hai meri. Pehle hi din usko kaise pareshan kar sakti hu mai. (she said cupping her face) aur tum log bhi sun lo (looking at the entire family) meri bahu ko kissi ne bhi pareshaan kiya na toh mujhse bura koi nhi hoga. Samjhe sab

Rishab- tumse bura aur kon ho sakta hai (said to himself)

Prerna- kuch kaha aapne? (looking at rishab)

Rishab- nhi. Nhi toh.

Prerna- nandhini jaa kar Pooja ki thali le kar aa. Ghar pravesh karana hai.

Prerna did ghar pravesh rasam and welcome nupur.

Prerna- dekho sab jisko jo karna tha kar liya par reception bilkul mere marzi se hoga. Apne bete ki shaadi nhi dekh pai toh kya. Par sari duniya mere bache ka reception yaad rakhegi. Nupur tum kafi thak gayi hogi aao mai tumhe tumhara kamra dekhati hu.

...

Mayur's room

Prerna- kaisa laga kamra

Nupur- ji bahut aacha laga.

Prerna- aare tu khadi kyun hai baith na ( she makes nupur sit) aare tu itna dar kyun rahi hai (taking place beside her) tera hi ghar hai beta aaj yeh ghar aur is ghar k sare log tere hi hai.

Nupur smile and nods her head.

Prerna- aacha bata tere ghar pe kon kon hai.

Nupur- ji papa nanima nanu aur dadima. (she said very softly)

Prerna- aur teri maa?

Nupur- ji meri maa nhi hai who mere janam k waqt hi guzar gayi.

Prerna heart squeezed in pain and she hugged nupur tightly.

Prerna- aaj se aisa nhi kehna. Mai teri saas nhi teri maa. Mayank samrat aur riddhima se bhi zada aaj se mai pehle teri maa.

Nandhini comes there and rubs nupur hair lovingly

Nandhini- aur mai teri chachi.

Prerna breaks the hug and cup nupur's face.

Prerna- tujhe koi bhi pareshan kare ya koi bhi baat ho tere dil mai behijak aa k mujhse kehna

Nupur gets emotional and hug Prerna.

Nupur- thank u aunty.

Prerna breaks the hug and said

Prerna- aunty nhi maa. (pulling her nose)

Nupur-ji mummy ji

Prerna- mummy ji bhi chalega

They laugh. Riddhima comes there.

Riddhima- u guys are here. Dad have to discuss something important please come down soon.

...

In living hall.

Karan- toh bataye mahila mandli mayank nupur k reception k bare mai kya socha hai.

Riddhima- I want grand reception for my bhai and Barbie. (excitedly)

Nandhini- kiddo its Bhabhi.

Riddhima- I know chachi. But for me my Bhabhi is Barbie.

All laughed at her cuteness.

Prerna- dekho reception mai do din k ander chahti hu who bhi kafi dhum dham se.

Rishab- par Prerna do din mai kaise hoga.

Prerna- sab mil k kaam karege toh kyun nhi hoga. Dono ko honeymoon pe bhi toh bhejna hai

Samrat and adhiraaj in one tune- ohh honeymoon (teasing mayank and nupur)

Mayank- haan honeymoon (trying to act straight)

On other hand nupur was blushing like hell.

Ridhhima- someone is blushing haan. (teasing)

Prerna- bas karo tum log kabse mere bahu bete ko ched rahi ho

Samrat- what mom! Aapko humare side hona chahiye aur aap hai ki unki tarafdaari karf rahi ho.

Adhiraaj- I agree with samrat. You disappointed us badi mom.

Nandhini pulled his ears

Nadhini bada aaya disappointed ka bacha.

Rishab- so its done. 2 din baad hi reception hoga.

Karan- waise mayank honeymoon pe kaha jaa rahe ho tum dono.

Mayank ran his hand through his hair.

Mayank- ab tak socha nhi chachu.

Nadhini- theek hai tum dono ka honeymoon mere aur karan k taraf se gift Europe tour kaisa rahega dhed mahine ka.

Mayank and nupur exchanged look.

Mayank- dhed mahina. Don't you think its too long. Aur office ka kaam kon karega.

Karan- yaar nupur tune kitne boring insaan k saath shaadi ki hai sara din kaam kaam.

Samrat- so unromantic bro aapse zada romantic toh karna chachu aur nandhini chachi hai is umar mai bhi.

Nadhini- what u mean by is umar mai bhi. Mai toh abhi bhi jawan hu. (dramatically)

Riddhima- aaye haye nandu chachi.

Prerna- itna aacha gift de rahe hai karan aur nandhini tujhe accept kar le. Honeymoon se aane k baad tujhe teri biwi k pass bhatakne bhi nhi dege. (teasing mayank)

Mayank- tab toh hum wapas aayege hi nhi honeymoon se (naughtily)

All laughed.

Prerna- chalo mai tumahri rasaoi ki rasam kara deta hu.

Mayank- mai bhi office k liye nikalta hu. (he was about to stand)

Nandhini- kahin nhi jayega tu. (she makes him sit again) bahu ko ghar le k aaya ya nhi office chala. Bada aaya office jane wala. Agar tune aaj ghar se bahar bhi nikala toh teri tangge tod dugi. (she said In serious tone ponting finger at him)

Mayank- aare aare aacha baba mai kahin nhi jaa raha relax.

...

Dinning table.

Rishab- aahh jaldi lao jo banaya hai humari bahu rani ne ( rubbing his hand)

Nandhini gajar ka halwa banaya hai (looking at mayank) aur khusboo bhi kafi aachi aa rahi hai.

Riddhima- how romantic.

Mayank- kiddo. Stop.

Nupur served everyone.

Rishab- nupur bete yaha aana.

He takes out some money from his pocket and give it to her.

She hesitates a bit.

Prerna- le lo beta shagun hai yeh.

...

At night, mayur's room

Mayank was sitting on bed

Mayank- so kaisi lagi meri family (flipping the channels)

Nupur- bahut hi pyaari family hai (she smiles) sab bahut hi aache hai (arranging her cupboard)

Mayank hugs her from behind.

Mayank- aur mai ( he whisper in her ear)

Chill runs down her spine and she closed her eyes. Mayank smiled at her innocent act and whisper again.

Mayank- good night.

She slowly open up her eyes and look at him

Nupur good night. (in soft voice)

Mayank- aare mai ek baat puchna bhul gaya.

Nupur- kya?

Mayank honeymoon pe kaha jana chahti ho? ( looking into her eyes)

Nupur- jaha aap theek samjho (blushing)

Mayank- ok. Hum nandhini chachi k honeymoon k plan se koi problem nhi hai na

She nods her negatively.

Mayank smiled.

...

Next evening after grand reception both left for their honeymoon.

hope u guys like it.😳

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Posted: 7 years ago
#68
Mayank family so understanding and lovable fab update dear eagerly waiting for Mayur romance and thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#69
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Amazing Part.😊
Mayank Family was so Nice.😊
Mayur Part was so Nice.😊
The Story is getting So interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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PriyaSweety-Anu
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Posted: 7 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: PriyaSweety-Anu

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

I Just completed reading this Story.😊
It was Amazing Part.😊
Mayur Part was so Interesting.😊
Mayur Marriage Part was so Nice.😊
The Story is getting so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
__________________________________
(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaSweety-Anu

thank u😊
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