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Posted: 7 years ago
#41
Yay
Loved it..
Acha hua mayank ne jaldi haath mang Lia..
Ab jaldi se shaadi kara do..
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Finally mayur ki shadi fix ho gae an jaldi se unki shadi kardooo yrrr
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Posted: 7 years ago
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very nice update. yeee mayur ki shaadi fix hogayi.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: sheetal1979

All agreed for Mayur marriage and Nupur also accepted mayank proposal and y Nupur and her family scared wt happened in past and who's that guy eagerly waiting for nxt dear

keep reading you will get to know😉
thank u 😊😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bhatakti_atma

Yay

Loved it..
Acha hua mayank ne jaldi haath mang Lia..
Ab jaldi se shaadi kara do..
Update soon

jo hukum mere akar
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ruhana05

Finally mayur ki shadi fix ho gae an jaldi se unki shadi kardooo yrrr

bas ho hi gayi 😆😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Faria.

very nice update. yeee mayur ki shaadi fix hogayi.

thank u so much for liking it 😊😊
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Part-9

London

Prerna- kya!!! Itni jaldi bhi kya hai.

Rishab- Prerna araam se mai office. Bhale hi hum phone pe baat kar rahe hai par agar tum is volume mai baat karogi toh pura staff sunnega. (he tries to calm her down)

Prerna- toh sun le. Rishaab itni bhi kya jaldi hai shaadi ki.

Rishaab- ladki k papa army mai hai who chate hai ki unke duty pe lautne se pehle yeh shaadi ho jaye.

Prerna- aur mera kya? Kitne sapne dekhe maine apne mayu k shaadi k liye. 1 hafte k ander shaadi kon karta hai. Meri kismet bhi toh dekho riddhima k exams hai. Mai apne bete ki shaadi nhi dekh paugi (she was very upset)

Rishaab- Prerna please baat samjho. Humara mayu nupur se bahut pyaar karta hai. Toh kya hua tum shaadi nhi dekh pai toh. London aane k baad hum itna bada reception rakhege ki sari duniya dekhega. (trying to cheer her up)

Prerna- aacha theek hai. Mai nandhini ko bhej detii hu meri jagah who sare rasam karegi.

She disconnects the call.

Nadhini- kya kaha bhaishab ne.

Prerna sits next to her.

Prerna- nadhini tumhe india jana hoga. (she said holding her hands) ladki k papa army mai hai aur unki khawish hai ki shaadi unki duty pe jane se pehle ho jaye.

Nadhini- aare. Phir hum aur bache toh mayu ki shaadi dekh hi nhi payege exams ki wajah se.

Prerna- is liye tumhe jana hoga. Meri jagah tumhe sari rasam karni hogi.

...

India

Marriage preparation stared with full swing. Nupur had mixed feeling. She was sitting in her room holding her mother's picture. Raghuveer comes.

Raghuveer- bahut yaad aa rahi hai na apni maa ki. ( rubbing her head lovingly)

Nupur looks at him with teary eyes and nods her head positively. Raghuveer sits next to her.

Raghuveer-hum samaj sakte hai aap kis feeling se gujar rahi hai. Har ladki k saath bhi asia hi hota hai. Bete aap bhale hi is ghar se shaadi kar k chali jao par yeh baat hamesha yaad rakhna ki is ghar k darwaze hamesha tumhare liye khule hue hai.

Nupur hugs her father

Nupur- papa! (tears flows form her eyes)

Raghuveer hugs her back.

Raghuveer- yeh kya humari princess ro rahi hai. Aap ek army officer ki beti hai nupur aap kafi strong hai (he said with heavy voice)

Nupur- mai waha aap sab k bina kaise rahugi. Aap sab se itni dur.

Raghuveer- dur toh hum bhi nhi reh sakte aapse. Par yeh sab aapke liye hai. Mayank aapse bahut pyaar karte hai. Aap waha unke pass save rahegi. (wiping his tears)

Nupur's Bhabhi comes

Bhabhi- yeh kya aap dono abhi se hi rone lage. Aare nupur thoda bidai k liye bhi bacha le warna mehmaan kahege ki lo dulhan toh rona hi bhul gayi (teasingly)

Nupur- Bhabhi aap bhi na. (she tries to smile)

Bhabhi- aacha chal ab jaldi tayar ho jaa haldi ki rasam shuru hone wali hai.

...

Nupur comes down wearing turmeric yellow lehga looking very beautiful.

Haldi rasam starts.

Nupur nani first apply haldi to her followed by her dadi and nanu.

Banno Re Banno Meri Chali Sasuraal Ko
Ankhiyon Mein Paani De Gayi
Duaa Mein Meethi Gud Dhaani Le Gayi (x2)

Nupur's brother krishna comes near her to apply haldi to her. After applying haldi he pulls her nose.

Re Kabira Maan Jaa
Re Faqeera Yun Na Ja
Aaja Tujhko Pukaare Teri Parchhaaiyan

Nupur's bhabhi apply haldi to her
Re Kabira Maan Ja
Re Faqeera Yun Na Ja
Kaisa Tu Hai Nirmohi Kaisa Harjaaiya

Re Kabira, Re Kabira
Re Fakeera, Re Fakeera... (x2)

Nupur's father apply haldi to her and hugs her

Tooti Chaarpai Wohi Thandi Purvaai Rasta Dekhe
Doodhoon Ki Malaai Wohi
Mitti Ki Suraahi Rasta Dekhe... (x2)

Ho Doodhoon Ki Malaai Wohi
Mitti Ki Suraahi Rasta Dekhe...

Nupur bhabhi takes her to the centre of the hall where all ladies were dancing.

Gudiya Ri Gudiya Tera Gudda Perdesiya
Jodi Aasmani Ho Gayi
Shagun Pe Dekho Shaad Maani Ho Gayi (x2)

Everyone starts dancing.

Re Kabira Maan Jaa
Re Faqeera Yun Na Jaa
Aaja Tujhko Pukaare Teri Parchhaaiyan
Re Kabira Maan Ja
Re Faqeera Yun Na Ja
Kaisa Tu Hai Nirmohi Kaisa Harjaaiya

Re Kabira, Re Kabira

Wedding day.

Mayank was getting ready. Rishab comes in his room

Rishab- so son. Tayar ho. (placing his hand on mayank's shoulder)

Mayank- pata nhi kyun dad halka sa dar lag rha hai.

Rishab smiles.

Rishab- hota hai bete. But yeh nervousness thode waqt k liye hi hota hai. Dekhna jaise hi apne dulhan ko dekhega na tu waise hi yeh nervousness chale jayegi.

Karan comes there

Karan- aur nhi toh kya. Aacha sun meri baat dekh kuch bhi ho jaye koi bhi rasammai tu nupur k samne mat jhukna warna sari zindagi jhukni padegi.

Mayank- aacha. Matlab aa is liye hamesh nadhini chachi k samne jhukte ho. ( he said teasingly )

Karan- lo bhai shaadi iski ho rahi hai aur tang keechai meri.

Nadhini too comes there.

Nandhini- offo sirf baatein hi aaj aap log karte rahoge ya chaloge bhi.

...

Wedding venue

Nupur's nani did arti and welcome everyone. Mayank was about to touch raguveer feet to take blessing but raghuveer stops him.

Raghuveer- bete pau nhi chute lage lagte hai.

He hugs mayank.

Soon wedding ceremony started. Mayank tied mangalsutra around nupur's neck and put vermillion on her forehead.

And then came time to bid bye to each other. Nupur hugged her father and cried a lot. Raghuveer made her sit in the car. Nupur was not ready to leave his hand.

Raghuveer- nhi bete aise nhi rote. Har ladki ko ek din apne ghar jana hota hai. Please aise na roye aapke yeh ansu hume kamzor kar rahe hai.

He freed his hand from her. And joins his hand before sharma family.

Raghuveer-nupur meri ek lauti aulad hai usse kabhi koi bhul ho jaye toh usse maaf kar dijiyega.

Rishab- yeh aap kya kar rahe hai. ( holding raghuveer's hand) nupur ko hum bahu nhi beti bana k le jaa rahe hai. Apni beti ki tarha hi uska khayal rakhege.

...

They reached shrama house. Nandhini did ghar pravesh rasam of nupur and took her to mayank's room. She made her sit on bed.

Nandhini- mai mayank ko bhejti hu.

She leaves from there.

Nupur- (in her mind) yeh raat bhi aayegi maine yeh socha bhi nhi tha. Mai abhi tayar nhi hu. Agar mayank ne zabardastu ki toh. (tears forms in her eyes)

Mayank enters the room. Her heart began to beat fast. Mayank sits next to her and takes her veils off. Her eyes were tightly shut. He smiled

Mayank- relax. Mai tab tak kuch nhi karuga tab tak tumhari marzi nhi hogi.

Nupur slowly opens her eyes and looks at him.

Mayank- itna darti kyun ho mujhe. (holding her hands) mai kabhi tumhara dil nhi toduga aur nahi kabhi saath choduga. Ek baar bharosa kar k dekho. Aacha chalo aaj ek dusare se friendship kar lete hai. Taki ek dusare k saath comfortable ho sake.

She smiled at him and nods her head. Mayank kiss her hands.

Mayank- nupur. Mere liye meri family bahut important hai. Aur aaj se tum bhi is family ka hissa ho. Bahut hi pyaari hai meri family hamesha meri family ko aise hi banaye rakhne. (he said looking into her eyes)

Nupur- aapki family meri family. Mai hamesha koshis karugi ki unhe kabhi koi takleef na ho.

Mayank smiles

Mayank- aacha chalo ab so jate hai kal hum nikalna hai..

...

In flight

Filght was about to take off. Mayank phones ring

Mayank- mai abhi call annwer kar k aaya.

Nupur nods her head

Mayank- maa I missed u so much.

Prerna- haan itna miss kiya ki itni jaldi shaadi kar li maa k bare mai ek baar soch bhi nhi.maine ek baar dekha tak nhi ki meri bahu kaisi dekhti hai.

Mayank- mai usse le kar toh aa hi raha huna maa. Dekh lena.

Prerna- rehne de pata nhi kaisi ladki se shaadi ki hogi mai tujhse is baar bahut naraaz hu mayank

She disconnects the call. Mayank returns back to his seat

Nupur- kya hua itna time kyun lag gaya.

Mayank- who nupur ek chotti si problem ho gayi hai. (he didn't want to lie to her)

Nupur- kya ? (looking into his eyes)

Mayank- who maa thodi naraaz hai

Nupur- kyun?

Mayank- who itni jaldi sab kuch hua ki.. who tumse shaadi se pehle mil bhi ni payi.

Nupur- agar unhone mujhe accept nhi kiya toh (tears foms in her eyes)

Mayank- aisa kuchnhi hoga mai janta hu apni mom ko thoda gussa karegi but man jayegi. (kissing her eyes).

hope you guys enjoyed reading 😳

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Posted: 7 years ago
#50
Amazing...
Sab kuch jaldi jaldi hogaya...
Felt sad when nupur was crying with her dad..
Let's see what is mayu's mom's reaction on Nupur.
Hopefully she will like her..
We love all your stories...
They are so refreshing and different with amazing concepts..
Keep writing..
Update soon
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