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Posted: 7 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Faria.

beautiful part. so our hero Mayank is in love with nupur. and what mehendiwali ko bribe karke M likhwa liya. hehehe. lovely part. keep it up.

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Originally posted by: arfanazneen

Nice one..Update soon..

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Part -6

Kritika- chalo meri bhi mehendi lag gayi. Yeh dekh nupur kaisi lag rahi hai (showing her mehendi)

Nupur- aare wah bahut hi sundar hai (seeing her mehendi)

Kritika- tu bhi apni mehendi dekha

(nupur shows her mehendi)

Kritika- wow so beautiful (she notice m in her hand) par yeh m kyun likhaya. Nupur naughty girl kon hai who ( she winked at her)

Nupur- kya bol rahi hai tu aisa kuch bhi nhi hai samjhi. Yeh m galti se us mehendiwali se lag gaya bas aur kuch nhi

Kritika- toh tu milai kyun nhi?

Nupur- tu hi deh yeh m designs k beecho beech mai hai agar mai mitati toh puri mehendi kharab ho jati.

Kritika- ho sakta hai bhagwaan koi ishara de raha ho. Kya pata tanu k baad teri doli uthe

Nupur- nhi aisa bilkul nhi ho sakta. Mujhe nhi karni kissi se shaadi nhi karti mai kissi se pyaar.

Kritika- toh kya tu zindagibhar kuwari rahegi? Nupur dekh duniya mai sare insaan bure nhi hote. Ek baar apni kismet pe bharosa kar k dekh (putting her hand hin nupur's shoulder)

Nupur- nhi mai apni wajah se kissi aur ki jaan khatare main hi dal sakti. Aur tut oh janti hai na who kitna khatarnak hai (turning her back to kritika and shedding her tears )

Kritika- mai samaj sakti hu (wiping nupur's tears) cha lab rona band kar kuch ansu tanu ki bidai k liye bhi bacha k rakh

(nupur smiles )

Mayank along with karan and rishi was sitting at coner table

Karan- waise tu nupur k kan mai bol kya raha tha

Mayank- kuch nhi bas thoda romance kar raha tha

(Rishi was about to take a sip of his juice he stopped and look at mayank with jerk)

Rishi- romance?

Mayank- yeah ( he narrated them how he bribed mehendiwali to write m on nupur's hand and what all things he said to her)

Rishi- wah mayank tu toh chupa rustom nikla.

Karan- wais ek raaz batau nupur k bare mai? Woh na die hard srk fan hai. Agar raat k 3 baje bhi srk apni movie ki trailer launch kare toh who jag k dekhegi. Ddlj ka koi bhi dialogue koi bhi scene bolwa lo usse.

Mayank- hmm srk. Ab toh dilwale apni dulhaniya le hi jayege (smiling ). Bas rishi tu kal ghodi chad aur mai nupur ko kal propose karuga

Rishi- I'm really happy for u bro (putting his hand on mayank's hand)

Mayank- pata hai mujhe in pyaar vyaar sab mazak lagta tha par jab se nupur life mai aayi hai zindagi ki khubsurat hai jana hai maine.

Karan- sach kahu toh mujhe bhi nhi laga tha ki tujhe kabhi pyaar hoga bhi. Par kissi ne sach hi kaha hai pyaar har kissi ko ek baar hota hai apni zindagi mai. Par na teri aur meri love story mai ek choti si problem hai.

Mayank and rishi- kya? (together)

Karan- teri aur meri wali samajti hai ki hum dono who hai.

Mayank- sh*t mai uska doubt clear karna bhul gaya. Mujhe uska doubt clear karan hoga sabse pehle

(tanu comes there)

Tanu- yeh maine expect nhi kiya tha

Rishi- kya

Tanu- humari shaadi ho rahi hai aur tum yaha kopche mai baith k ladkiyon ki tarha gape maar rahe ho. Aur tum dono, tum dodo ko sharam nhi aati tum log ko apne friend ki shaadi ko yaadgar banana chahiye aur tum log ho ki

Mayank- wohi toh bhabhi mai toh tabse rishi ko yehi keh raha tha aur yeh ki keh raha hai ki kya yeh boring mehendi ceremony mai..

Tanu- boring?

(nupur and kritika too comes there)

Nupur- kya ho raha hai

Tanu- dekhna yeh gadha shaadi se ek din pehle yeh sare ceremony ko boring bolta hai

Rishi- aare mai nhi bola yeh mayank jhoot bol raha hai. Kamine bol na

Mayank- mai kya bolu tune jo bola maine bhabhi ko wohi bataya

Rishi- tujhe toh mai dekh lugi

Tanu- pehele idhar dekho mr aur utho sab

Nupur- chod na tanu kyun jhagada kar rahi hai pata nhi shaadi k baad kitna ladegi jiju se

Kritika- tu chup reh nupur tujhe kuch nhi pata in ladko k bare mai pata nhi kya kya karte hai ( looking at karan)

Kaaran- aare nhi yaar hum dono who nhi hai jo tum dono soch rahi ho.

(ria comes there)

Ria- baby (hugs mayank from side and place a quick kiss on his lips) dekho maine bhi mehendi lagai

Karan- dekha ab toh yakeen ho gaya na

Nupur- chee! (she said softly making face)

(girls leave from there)

Mayank- sh*t yeh nhi hona tha kya soch raha tha kya ho gaya (banging his hand on wall)

Karan- dude sab theek ho jayega don't wMayank- tumne suna nhi who kya keh k gayi. Che! Mai ria ko kaise bhul sakta hu ab kya karu nupur samajti hai ki.. (closing his eyes)

Rishi- mayank sun meri baat tu nupur se baat kar aur sari baat clear kar. Who samajdar hai zarur samjhegi tere pyaar ko. (putting his hand on mayank's shoulder)

(mayank nodded his head)

Next day

Mayank was in his room getting ready.

Karan- tu abhi tak ready nhi hua jaldi karna bhuk lag rahi hai

Mayank- bas shoes pehene de

(his phone rings)

Mayank- ridzi my baby how are u my child

Rid- bhai please come soon (in crying tone)

Mayank- rids what happened why are u crying (he asked worriedly)

Rid- u just come bhai

Maynk- ok ok I'm coming you don't worry and please don't cry I'll be there by tomorrow

(he cuts the call)

Mayank- bro I think there is some problem I'll have to leave

Karan- what's the matter bro

Mayank- I really don't know kiddo was crying I have to back. Can u please arrange next flight ticket. By the time I pack my suitcase.

Karan- sure

At airport

Karan and rishi hugs mayank

Rishi- waha pahuch k phone karan

Karan- take care bro

Maynk- bye guys n rishi all the best.

In flight

Mayank In his mind

Sorry nupur aaj ka day humare naam honi chahiye thi. But I promise mai jaldi aauga aur tumhe hamesha k liye apna banauga. (he smiles)

Sharma mansion

Whole Sharma family was sitting in living room and looking at mayank blankly

Rid- sorry bhai but I was missing u so u know ( getting up from couch and hugs him)

Mayank- its ok kido but don't do it next time u scared me (hugging her back)

Rid- so let us how was your trip

Mayank- it was great ( he smiled)

Whole family noticed there was something different about his smile

Sam- bhai did u met someone special in india?

Mayank- huh? What are u talking about? Kuch bhi bolta hai tu

Prerna- mayank

Mayank- yes mom

Prerna- tu hindi bola? Bolna beta kya hua kya hua?

Adhiraj- bro naughty boy

Mayank- shut up adhi. I'm tired I need some sleep ( he leaves from there)

At night after dinner

Mayank was in garden looking at moon. Sam and adhi comes there

Sam- come on bhai no one is here now lets us about bhabhi

Adhi- yes bro no more excuse

Mayank smiles and starts imaging nupur coming towards him

He starts singing

Yun tera muskurana
Aur aake chale jaana

Yun tera muskurana aur aake chale jaana
Kismat ka hai khul jaana

(He starts dancing(
Tera Deedar Hua, pehla sa pyar hua
Pehli hi baar hua iss dil ko
Naa toh inkaar hua
Naa hi iqraar hua
Jaane kya yaar hua iss dil ko (x2 times)

Re ga ra re...

(he imagine nupur dancing holding ger saree's pallu)

Tujhse mila toh jaagi duaayein
Aur nazaro ne sajda kiya
Jannat zameen par aayi utar ke
Khushiyon ne jaise chun sa liya (x2 times)

Har manzar dilnasheen hai
Tu hi tu har kahin hai
Oh.. teri ye rajayein toh hai qatilana

( mayank starts dancing again and sam and adhi joins him)

Tera Deedar Hua, pehla sa pyar hua
Pehli hi baar hua iss dil ko
Naa toh inkaar hua
Naa hi iqraar hua
Jaane kya yaar hua iss dil ko

Tere bina tanha tha hardam
Hothon pe hardam thi tishnagi
Maqsad nahi tha, sapne nahi thay
Thi zindagi mein aawargi


Tu mera rehnuma hai
Manzil hai raasta hai
O mere liye tu toh jaise
Rab ka hai nazrana

(( ridhhima to comes there and joins them)

Tera Deedar Hua, pehla sa pyar hua
Pehli hi baar hua iss dil ko
Naa toh inkaar hua
Naa hi iqraar hua
Jaane kya yaar hua iss dil ko

Yun tera muskurana aur aake chale jaana
Yun tera muskurana aur aake chale jaana
Kismat ka hai khul jaana
Tera Deedar Hua, pehla sa pyar hua
Pehli hi baar hua iss dil ko
Naa toh inkaar hua
Naa hi iqraar hua
Jaane kya yaar hua iss dil ko


precap- nupur goes missing

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Finally u updated ..superbbb part continue sooon dear.. 😊
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Originally posted by: Ruhana05

Finally u updated ..superbbb part continue sooon dear.. 😊

Thanks 😊

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Beautiful update. Waiting for next part.
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#27
Hey
Amazing concept
Loved Mayank..
Update sooonnn plz
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Faria.

Beautiful update. Waiting for next part.

thanks 😊

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Originally posted by: Bhatakti_atma

Hey

Amazing concept
Loved Mayank..
Update sooonnn plz

thanks😊

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Part-7

A week later. Mayank got busy with his work. He had also breakup with ria. Whenever he got free time he use to see nupur's pics on his phone. He had click her pictures without her acknowledgement. He was terribly missing her. One night he was sitting near the swimming pool. Rishab and karan (his uncle) comes there and joins him.

Rishab- so son, what'sup.

Mayank- nothing much dad. You and chahu are still awake is there a problem?

Karan- no beta. We are here to know (looking at rishab.) about the girl with whom you met in india?

Mayank felt his checks burning. He moved his head from left to right looking at both the men next to him.

Mayank- what are you talking about chahu? Which girl. For now I have only one girlfriend and that's ria.

Rishab- with whom you broke up a week ago. Right son?

Mayank- how you know? (raising his brow)

Rishab- baap hu tumhara mujhe nhi pata hoga toh kisse ho? Chal bata kon hai who ladki aur kaisi hai.

Mayank- konsi ladki? (looking down_

Karan- wohi ladki jiski photo tere phone mai hai. Jiska wallpaper tune apne phone aur laptop pe laga rakha hai. Aur usse dekh dekh k man hi man mai muskurata hai. Aur is waqt sharma raha hai.( teasing him)

Mayank- (taking deep breath) nupur. She is very sweet and very simple girl. Bahut sharmati hai. (smiling) uski smile by god jab bhi smile karti hai aisa lagta hai sari duniya jeet liya maine. Uski ankhe bin bole na jane kitni baat bol jati hai.

Karan- dekha bhai humare nawabzade ko pyaar ho gaya hai.(with big smile on his face)

Rishab- yeh toh hume bas confess karana tha. Iski halat dekh kar andhe ko bhi baat samaj aa jayega.

Karan- waise mayu usko propose kiya ki nhi?

Mayank- kaise karu. Jab bhi uske pass jata hu ghabra jati hai. Thodi ajeeb hai zada logo se mix up nhi hoti. Akele akele rehti hai aur akele rehne se bhi darti hai.

Rishab- hota hai beta. Jab mai pehle baar teri maa se mila tha toh mujhe bhi aisi badi innocent lagi baad mai pata chala ki who masumiyat toofan se pehele wali shaanti thi.

Karan- aur mere case mai teri nandu chachi hamesha se hi bandit queen thi. Waise kab mila raha hai usse.

Mayank- yaha itna kaam pending pada hai chahu. Kaise mai... (before he could complete)

Rishab- hum yaha kyun hai. Tu jaa meri bahu ko pata.

Mayank- and kaam ka kya.

Karan- beta tu abhi humari bahu k pass jaa usse apni dil ki baat bol aur jaldi se ghar le aa. Uske baad sare kaam karna. Tab honeymoon ki bhi chutti nhi dege. (teasing him) aur haan apne dad ki tarha joru ka gulam na banna (pulling rishab leg)

Rishab- haan beta apne chahu ki tarha bheegi billi banna. Chal karan jaa aur mayank k liye kal subha ki hi flight book kar de.

Karan- good idea.

Mayank- kal?

Rishab- haan kal. Shub kaam mai deri kaisi.

Mayank- dad chachu. Please don't tell mom and chachi about it. Pehle mai nupur ka answer janna chahta hu main phir mai khud dono ko surprise duga.

Rishab and karan- ok (they smile)

Next morning

Prerna- kya phir se india jaa raha hai? Abhi toh aaya tha mera beta phir itni jaldi kyun

Karan- Bhabhi ek client se milke k important decision lena hai.

Nandhini- phir bhi abhi abhi toh ghar aaya tha bacha. Aap log bhi na sara kaam usse hi karate ho.

Mayank goes near Prerna and nadhini and hold there hands

Mayank- mom chahi don't worry I'll be fine. Mai time pe khauga piyuga, zada kaam ka load nhi luga aur time pe souga.

Prerna- mera bacha (rubbing his head) mai nashta lagati hu chal nandhini.

They go to kitchen.

Mayank goes and sit next to rishab in dinning table. Next to him was ridhima and beside her was adhiraj. Karan and samrat was sitting opposite to him

Ridhima- so bhai are you to meet Barbie (whispering on his ear)

Mayank- kiddo its Bhabhi.

Karan- yes kiddo. And this time he is going to propose her

Ridhima samrat and adhiraj in one tune- really bahi

Mayank nodding his head- yeah. Hope she accept my love.

Adhiraj- she will bro. you are the best.

Samrat- look guys I'm making it very clear I'm Bhabhi side from now only. So bro if u ever fight with Bhabhi after marriage or even before it. I'll support her and not you.

Ridhima- me too.

Adhiraj- me three

Prerna and nandhini comes there with tray of food in their hand.

Prerna- kya baatein ho rahi hai ?

Samrat- nothingv mom I was just telling bro not to forget his ticket and passport.

Prerna- chal mayu ab phata phat kha le.

Both nandhini and Prerna was feeding him like he was a baby. Seeing their act samrat said

Samrat- itne pyaar se kabhi hume nhi khilaya

Ridhima- I agree with sam bro

Nandhini- chup raho dono. Mere bache ko nazar na lagao

Prerna- kha beta kha

Mayank- bas mom pet bhar gaya. Aur nhi kha sakta

Adhiraj- aise kaise ho gaya bhai abhi khaya hi kaha hai apne? (teasing him)

Everyone got up from there place and start feeding mayank

After lots of masti mayank left for india

Mumbai airport

Karan (mayank's friend) and mayank hugs each other. After parting away

Karan- kya baat hai nupur ki yaad mai itni jaldi aa gaya wapas. (teasing him)

Mayank- haan aur agar sab theek raha toh is baar usse hameasha k liye apna bana k le k jauga. (with smile on his face)

They sat on their car

On their way to hotel

Mayank- waise kritika kaha hai.

Karan- keh rahi thi aaj shopping karne jayegi toh shayad shopping kar rahi hogi

Mayank- great phir meri wali bhi hogi uske saath. Chal phone laga uski awaz sunni hai.

Karan- aaye haye sabra nhi ho raha humre romeo se (dialing kritika's number)

Phone cono

Karan- hello kritika

Kritika- karan mai baad mai baat karti hu ( in crying tone)

Karan- kya hua baby tum ro kyun rahi hu

Mayank who was driving stops the car listening to their conversation

Kritka- nupur mil nhi rahi hai karan. Hum shopping se pehle mandir aaye the. Phir kuch kirtan wale badi group pe aaye aur tab se nupur nhi mil rahi maine uska phone try kiya. Uska phone yahi gira hua mila.

Karan- baby don't cry hum aa rahe hai mil k dhundege usse. We'll be there in 5 min ok.

He disconnects the call

Mayank- kya hua?

Karan- nupur kahi mil nhi rahi hai. Kritika k saath mandir mai thi par achank gayab ho gayi aur uska phone bhi kritika ko gira hua mila. Bahut zada pareshan lag rahi thi kritika.

Mayank- hume waha abhi issi waqt jana hoga ( he was very worried about her)

On their way to temple

Mayank- kaha chale jati hai yeh ladki khud ka khayal nhi rakh sakti yeh.

Karan- kuch nhi hoga usse tu chinta mat kar

Suddenly a girl comes in front of their car.mayank puts emergency break. The car hit the girl slightly and she falls on the ground. Mayank and karan comes out of their car. They goes near her and find out that girl was nupur. She was wearing turmeric yellow churidar. The sleeves of her hand were torn and her dupatta was missing. She was lying unconscious on the ground. Mayank picked her immediately in his arms and made her lie and cars back seat. Karan called kritika and told her they found nupur and they were taking her to city hospital and ask her to inform nupur's family

In hospital

Mayank and karan were standing outside OT.

Mayank had tears in his eyes. Karan have never seen mayank like this.

Karan- sab theek ho jayega don't worry (putting his hand on his shoulder)

Doctor comes out of ot

Mayank- how is she?

Doctor- your wife is absolutely fine mr sharma. Abhi behosh hai don't worry thode der mai hosh aa jaye

Mayank silently thanks god for saving his life, his nupur

Meanwhile kritika along with nupur's family comes there.

Nupur's nani- kaisi hai meri bachi. (crying badly)

Mayank- aap roye mat who bilkul theek hai bas abhi behosh hai

Nupur's badi nani- bhagwaan ka lakh lakh shukar hai. Humari bachi sahi salamat hai.

Nupur's nanu- (to mayank) aapka bahut bahut sukriya apne humari bachi ki jaan bachai. Mai aapka ehsaan kabhi nhi bhuluga. (joining his hand)

Mayank- nhi uncle aap haath na jodiye yeh toh mera farj tha.

Nupur's nani- bete aap jante nhi aapne humare liye kya kiya.

Mayank- aap beta bhi keh rahi hai aur sharminda bhi kar rahi hai

Karan- chal mayank thoda aram kar le

Nupur's nanu- haan beta aap jao aram kar lo

Mayank- nhi mai theek hu

Nupur's nani- aao jao beta shamko aa jana

Mayank- theek hai

Mayank and karan leaves from there

After sometimes nupurs father comes there

By the time nupur to had gain conscious

Raghuveer- yeh kya haal bana liya hai aapne apna bete? Jante hai jaan nikal di thi meri aapne. (rubbing her head)

Nupur- who wapas aa gaya hai papa. Who mujhe nhi chodega. Mujhe bahut dar lagta hai usse (she was crying)

Her father hugs her

Raghuveer- kuch nhi hoga aapko hum sab hai na kuch nhi hoga (placing a kiss on her forehead)

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