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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mayu girlfriend 🥺 wo bhi ria vese nice part continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yaaayyy...so happy to read smtng on mayur
..awesome updates dear...loved it...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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thank u friends yours appreciation means a lot to me. you guys encourage me to continue writing. but my dear friends I have my exams now so i'll update next part after 15 days hope you guys understand. 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very sweet part. loved teasing scenes. so mayank is falling for nupur. lekin ye haddi Ria kaha se agayi?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Faria.

Very sweet part. loved teasing scenes. so mayank is falling for nupur. lekin ye haddi Ria kaha se agayi?



thanks faria . ria aayi hai aur jaldi chale bhi jayegi.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Keep on writing buddy...you are talented by the way..all the best dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Souparnikakk

Keep on writing buddy...you are talented by the way..all the best dear


Thank you so much
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part-5

At night

Whatsapp group chat

( nupur was not In this group as she did not like talking to strangers much)

Karan- aare baby sorry na

Tanu- kritika ab bhav mat kha pehle batao toh sahi hua kya hai

Kritika-batane layak baat hi nhi haye mai tu lut gayi barbad ho gayi

Mayank- hi guys. What's happening?

Rishi- nothing new bro. bas wohi ruthna manana

Mayank- haha mujhe toh kabhi kabhi lagta hai yeh friends group nhi lovers group hai

Kritika- mayankkk!!!!

Mayank- what?

Kritika- tum nupur pe line maar rahe ho?

Mayank- have u lost it?

Kritika- tell me the truth. Tell me yaar setting karau kya?

Mayank- kuch bhi bol rahi hai pagal

Kritika- what kuch bhi. Maine notice kiya aaj pure ceremony mai tum usse ghur rahe the.

Karan- hahahaha aaj kal janab ke sapne mai bhi aati hai nupur

Rishi- really? Good choice mayank

Tanu- nupur is a great girl. 1000 times better than ria

Kritika- hey don't compare her with that stupid ria. Meri nupur Kohinoor ka hira hai

Mayank- don't you guys think u all are assuming too much

Karan- nahh

Kritika- agar aisa nhi hai toh tum usko ghurte kyun rehte hai jab woh girti hai bachte kyun ho

Mayank- come on she is pretty

Rishi- pretty haan

Karan- you know what guys mayank ko toh pehli naraz mai hi pyaar ho gaya tha

Tanu- wow soo romantic

Mayank- stop it guys. I and ria are planning to get married

All- whattt?????

Mayank- yeah. Good night guys. See u all in morning.

Next morning

Breakfast table

Mayank- good morning

Karan- how can u marry ria? Mayank u don't love her.

Mayank- cool cool. See I don't want to marry her either. But she wants to get married

Karan- so will u marry her?

Mayank- no. forget ria I'm not even thinking about it.

Karan- so nupur ka patta saaf hai.

Mayank- what? Ab nupur beech mai kaha se aayi?

Karan- stop lying to yourself

Rishi joins them

Rishi- yeah mayank. Kab tak bhaagega apni feeling se (taking his seat)

Mayank- guys its nothing like that. I'm just... (looking here and there)

Karan- just what

Mayank- attracted to her. Its just a mere attraction. Come on guys she is very sweet and innocent. She is not timepass material. She is made to be love.

Karan- just mere attraction.

Rishi- you love her a lot. ( holding his hand)

Mayank- how can you be so sure?

Rishi- close your eyes mayank

Mayank- what??

Karan- he said close your eyes

Mayank- but why?

Rishi- just do it as I say mayank. Trust me. Close your eyes and just think about the whom u love a lot.

Mayank- this is insane (closing his eyes)

After 2min, a smile form on his face. Next moment he opened his eyes suddenly

Karan- kya hau mayank?

Rishi- kiski chera dekha?

Mayank- mom, dad, chahu, chahi, Sammy, adhi, ridz and

Karan- and?

Mayank- and ... and nupur

Karan and rishi exchanged look and smiled

Rishi- so honestly tell me what u feel about her. Place your hand on your heart and close your eyes and say.

Mayank place his right hand on his heart and closed his eyes.

Karan- mayank?

Mayank- Dil diya dard liya
Haan maine ishq kiya
Dil diya dard liya
Haan maine ishq kiya

Tera deedar kiya
Haan maine ishq kiya
Tujh pe aitbaar kiya
Haan maine ishq kiya
Dil diya dard liya
Haan maine ishq kiya
Dil diya dard liya
Haan maine ishq kiya

Tere bin tadpe ye jiya
Haan maine ishq kiya
Ab to mil ja tu piya
Haan maine ishq kiya
Dil diya dard liya
Haan maine ishq kiya
Dil diya dard liya
Haan maine ishq kiya

He opened his eyes and 1st person he saw was nupur. She was standing some distance away from him and was chatting withi kritika and tanu. A soft smiled formed on his face

Karan- aare wah mere bhai tut oh shayar ban gaya.

Kritika- good morning guys

Nupur- good morning (taking her seat)

Karan- so nupur tumhe kal aache se nind toh aayi

Nupur- haan

Karan- sach mai?

Nupur- haan kyun?

Kritika- karan tum meri best friend ko pareshan karna band karo

Karan- ok ok

Kritika- waise rishi tanu kaha hai

Rishi- who ready ho rahi hai

Nupur- who mehendi ki rasam ko le k bahut excited hai. Aur is baar toh mai bhi lagaugi

Karan- kiski naam ki madam (he winked at her)

Nupur- kya (confused)

Kritika- yeh pagal hai isse chod jaldi jaldi breakfast karte hai aur ready hote hai warna tanu kha jayegi

Nupur- actually I'm done. Mai apne room mai jaa rahi hu papa ko bhi call karna

She left

Kritika- oh mr kundra yaad hai na tumko yaad hai na tumhe aaj sari tayari akele karni hai

Karan- haan baba yaad hai.

Kritika- good mai ab araam se mehendi laga sakti hu. Chalo bye

Karan- aare suno meri naam ki hi mehendi lagana

Mayank and rishi chuckled

At mehendi ceremony

Nupur dressed up in dark pink lehga was dancing was dancing with group of girls. While mayank dressed up in yellow kurta was quietly observing her every movement. Than he thought of something and went to one of the girl who was going to put mehendi for guest and said her something and paid her 500 Rs

After few minutes tanu was brought to venue by krtika n nupur. And mehendi ceremony stared nupur to forwarded her han for mehendi. After her mehendi was done she saw the girl had written m in her hand

Nupur- m?

Girl- sorry madam galti se lag gay. Mai isse saaf kar deti par aapki mehendi kharab ho jayegi

Nupur- umm koi baat nhi

She was feeling thirsty so went to the waiter but she was unable to pick up the glass. So our hero came there and helped her in drinking water.

Nupur- thanks ( with soft smile)

Mayank - my pleasure. Can I see your mehendi

She nodded her head and forwarded her hand to show him her mehendi.

Mayank- beautiful. (paused) M?

She looked at him

Mayank- I guess tumhare hone husband ka naam m se hoga (whispering in her ears)

She felt her cheeks burning

He winked at her and left.

Precap- mayank goes back to London n mayank family gets to know about mayank's new love intrest

😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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beautiful part. so our hero Mayank is in love with nupur. and what mehendiwali ko bribe karke M likhwa liya. hehehe. lovely part. keep it up.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ruhana05

Awesome update... 👍🏼

thank u 😊
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