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Yeh wada raha

Hi everyone this is my 1st ff on mayur. This ff will also have armaan ridhima samrat gunjan adhiraj suhani karan and kritika and many more

Charater sketch

Sharma family-

Mayank Sharma- he is rich handsome Indian guy who is born and bought up in London. Loves his family a lot specially his younger sister radhima. He is bit arrogant and very proud person he can sometimes be harsh and very hardworking person.helps his fatherin their family business. Girls go gaga over him . he loves attention of girls. However his life changes after nupur enters his life

Rishab Sharma- he is mayank's father and owner of Sharma and sons. Loves his family a lot.

Prerna Sharma- she is mayank's mother. She wants mayank to get married because she is always worried about him. She wants a girl for mayank who will love him a lot and take care of him.

Radhima- apple of sharma's family eyes. She is the youngest member of the family.

Karan Sharma- mayank's uncle

Nandini Sharma- karan's wife nd mayank' aunt

Samrat - mayank's yonger brother

Adhiraj- mayank's cousin

Katiyal family

Nupur katiyal- she is very sweet and innocent person who loves everyone around her. She is very shy and reserved person.she 3rd year bmm student she fear someone. Her fear will be reveled latter

Raghuveer singh katiyal- nupur's father. He works for raw. Loves nupur a lot. He is very close to nupur.

Krishna katiyal- nupur's cousin brother. He is navi officer.

Sunita katiyal- nupur's babhi

Rakesh arora- nupur's nanu

Divya arora- nupur's nani

Sunita katiyal- nupurs dadi

Kritika- nupur's best friend

Karan kundra- mayank's best friend

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PART 1

A young and very handsome man was sleeping peacefully with soft smile on his lips when a lady enters his room

Lady- mayu, (placing a soft kiss on his forehead) beta get up

Mayank- (opening his eyes and smiling at her) good morning mom.

Perena- good morning beta. What time is your flight?

Mayank- 1 at noon. (getting up from his bed)

Prerna- ok beta get ready and come down your dad is waiting for you down.

(she leaves)

At breakfast table

Mayank- good morning everyone.

Rishab- good morning son

Mayank- mom where is she

Sam- where she will be?

Prerna- sleeping as usual . I wonder what this girl will do in her life (shaking her head)

Adhiraj- chachi don't worry. She is our kiddo .

Karan- so mayank are u ready for your trip in india?

Mayank- yes chachu infact I'm very excited.

Rishab- I guess karan will also be with you.

Mayank- yes . but I wonder if what idiot remember or not?

Sam- good morning everyone (entering dinning area) so bhai are sur

Mayank- yes sam. Why?

Sam- just (asking)

Prerna- aacha mayu listen to me very carefully. Jaise delhi pahuchega sabse pehle shiv mandir jaa k shiv ji ki darshan karna. Aur time pe khana khana aur sona aur...

(before she could complete )

Mayank-mom ( holding prerna's hands) don't worry I'll take care of my self. Please don't be emotional.

Prerna- I'm not emotional.

Mayank- mom don't lie to me because I know when ever u are tensed you talk in hindi ( kissing her hands)

Prerna - mera baccha

Mayank- aacha everyone I think I should leave I have to pick up karan from his home.

(taking blessing from his parents and uncle and aunt)

Sam- have fun bro

Adhiraj- take care

Mayank- take care of my little sis bye tc everyone

whole Sharma - bye.

...

In flight

Karan- all set Bro.

Mayank- yeh. I hope I get some hot chic in india.

Karan- aahaa

Mayank- yeah I mean you will be busy with your gf so... You know...

Karan- hahahahahahahah sure man

After 10 hours of long flight they finally reach delhi

Mayank- karan we'll 1st go to shiv temple

Karan- temple why?

Maynk- because its mom instruction

Karan- ok kritika will also be there lets go

They reach temple karan was busy in calling kritika while mayank was taking off his shoes when I saw a beautiful lady in white churidar with her hair open was coming down she was looking like an angle .

Mayank- my angel (to himself)

Their eyes meet and that lady smiled at him

...

Precap

Our nri hero will learn hindi for our desi herion

And breakup party

Edited by pihu2june - 8 years ago
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V nice start waiting 4 next part
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index charater sketch-pg 1 part 1- pg 1 part 2- pg1 part3- pg 2 part4- pg3
part5- pg4
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awesome CS. quite interesting. and lovely start. just waiting for mayur meeting.
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PART -2

Karan phone got disconnected due to network problem. He was irritated

Lady- hi karan

Karan- nupur thank god u are here. Where is krikita.

Nupur- she is on the way. How was your fight.

Karan- don't ask ( shaking his head)

By the time kritika comes

Kritika- nurrr!!!! (hugging her with big smile on her face)

Karan-( raising his brows) wahh! Bf 6 mahine baad india aaya hai aur hug best friend ko sahi hai.

Kritika- ohh mr bf se zada important hoti hai best friend (kissing nupur's check )

Karan- had hai mujhe toh aaj tak kiss wiss nhi kiya. Chod mera beat friend hi aacha hai . by the way nupur meet my best friend mayank.

Nupur- hi

Mayank- hii

Kritika- hi mayank how are you?

Mayank- I'm good and you?

Kritika- awesome as always. nupur yaad hai maine tujhe mayank k bare mai bataya tha Sharma and sons wala

Nupur- haan. Yeh hai who?

Kritika- haan.

Nupur- mujhe toh laga ki who kafi budhe hoge

Listening this karan and kritika starts laughing

Mayank- I think I should better learn hindi.

Nupur- you should ( smiling)

Mayank- I will.

Nupur- kritika we are getting late

Kritika- oh yeah ok guys see you both later bye

Both kritika and nupur leaves.

Karan- its difficult to understand girls

Mayank- and hindi ( shaking his head)

Karan laugh at him.

Karan- don't worry bro I'll teach you

Next day

Mayank and karan went around the city and had gala time later they decided to go a mall which sharma's own in the city.

Soon it was time to close the mall

Mayank- bro I use the washroom and then we'll leave

Karan- ok

Karan gets a call.

Karan- hello

Kritika- hello karan nupur is missing.

Karan- what?

Kritika- karan I'm really scared please do something.

Karan- kritika don't worry I'll find her.

Washroom

Mayank enters the washroom and find someone hiding behind the door holding her legs close to her chest eyes tightly shut and crying.

Mayank- nupur (holding her hand)

Nupur was scared. She shivered as mayank touch her and open her eyes

Nupur- mayank!!! (she hugged him tightly )

precap- breakup part and rajasthan tour
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PART-3

Mayank was bit shock by nupur's sudden act. He hugged her back. He felt strange burning sensation from inside. In past many girls had hugged and even kissed him but never felt what he was feeling. He wanted to be in her arms like this forever.

Mayank- hey. What happened? What are doing here and why are you crying?

She was not in the state of talking. She was crying badly.

Mayank moving his hand gently on her head

Mayank- its ok. Don't worry I'm here.

Nupur- mujhe ghar jana hai.. I want to go home. (still crying)

Mayank- ok ok . now stop crying. I'm here with you ( holding her face in his palm and wiping her tears)

Karan- may... (entering washroom)

He saw nupur hugging mayank and mayank consoling her.

Karan- I think we should leave.

Mayank- yeah.

Mayank helped nupur getting up and and they made their way to hotel where nupur and kritika were staying. Whole way nupur was holding mayank tightly and kept her eyes closed. When they reached hotel she was sleeping so mayank picked her in his arms and took her to her room and laid her on the bed.

Next morning

Nupur woke up with headache and saw kritika packing their bags.

Nupur- kritika... (with very low voice)

Kritika - how are you?

Nupur- I want to go home.

Kritika- don't worry today only we will go back to Mumbai. (holding nupur face)

Nupur- kritika(holding her hand)

Kritika- haan nupur

Nupur- ghar pe kissi ko mat batana sab pareshaan ho jayege please (with pleading eyes).

Kritika- ok (with soft smile)

In evening both left for Mumbai

On otherhand mayank was thinking about nupur. Her face was flashing in front of his eyes.

Karan- mayank mayank-

Mayank- umm yes bro

Karan- where are lost

Mayank- nothing you were saying something?

Karan- yes. Rishi is getting married and he has invited us.

Mayank- nice. So when is the marriage ?

Karan- next week and we have to reach there tomorrow

Mayank- tomorrow!!!

Mayank karan and rishi are childhood friends. They went to same school and college but after graduation rishi join his family business in india. But three of them were still in touch.

Next day outside Udaipur airport

Mayank- this guy can never be on time (bit irritated)

Karan- finally he is here.

Rishi- hey. ( hugging mayank and karan)

Mayank- shaadi Mubarak (hugging him back)

Rishi- not bad bro. kya baat hai

Karan- baat yeh hai ki kissi ne inki tang kich di hindi mai

Rishi -hahahahaha accha yeh baat hai

Mayank- haan that's why I'm learning hindi. By the way bhabhi kaha hai

Rishi- she is waiting for you both come on lets make a move

They reached the hotel where wedding is going to take place. The hotel looked a liked a royal palace. Tanu (soon to be rishi's wife ) was waiting for them with pooja ki thali in her hand.

Karan- wow man so we are going to get royal treatment?

Rishi- yes

Mayank- amazing

Tanu put tika on karan and mayank's forehead

Tanu - aap sab bahut thake hoge aap log rest kijiye ab sari baatein sham ko karege.

In evening

Mayank was busy flirty with a girl. When karan comes there

Karan- you got amazing luck bro where you go you are always surrounded by girls

Mayank- someone is jealous (with playful smile)

Karan- offcourse I'm

Mayank- hahahahaha should I call kritika

Karan- nooo!!!!! She'll kill me!!!

Tanu comes there

Tanu- aap dono ne rishi ko dekha

Mayank- nhi kyun?

Tanu- who actually meri cousin aur uski friend aane wali hai aur un dono ko lene airport jana hai.

Karan- bas itni si baat k liye humari bhabhi pareshan hai. Don't worry hum le aayege unhe.

Tanu- are you guys sure?

Mayank- yeah (he smile)

Tanu- thanks

And she leaves

Karan- jaa mayank bhabhi ki beheno ko le aa

Mayank- kya? You are not coming.?

Karan- come on bro let me too have some fun

Mayank-hahahahaha enjoy ( with a wink)

At airport

Mayank was waiting for tanu's cousin. Mayank to himself I should have ask for their picture how will I identify them. And then he saw kritika and nupur coming towards him

Kritika- hi mayank (with big smile)

Mayank- hi kritika. Hi nupur

Nupur- hi ( in very low soft voice)

Kritika- what are you doing here in Udaipur?

Mayank- well I'm here to attend my friend's wedding

Krtika- is your friend name is rishi?

Mayank- yes. But how you know?

Kritika- because the girl he whom he going to get married to is my cousin

Mayank- wow that's great. Karan will be very happy to see you

Kritika- even I just can't wait to see him.

Mayank in his mind - all the best karan

Thry sat in car mayank adjusted front mirror of the car and saw nupur chatting with kritika. Whole way he was seeing nupur through front mirror.

They reached the hotel and three of them got down from the car. Nupur saw karan

Nupur- kritika (pointing her finger towards karan)

Kritika saw karan flirting with another girl.

Kritika- karannn!!!!! ( she shouted angrily )

Karan- kratika.. no krutika.. no kritika ( he was shocked and scared to see her)

Kritika- hey bhagwaan yeh dekhne se pehele iss nalayak koo utha kyun nhi liya( dramatically )

Karan- are baby its nothing... Before he could complete

Kritika- chupp 1 kaan ke neeche lagaugi. Chal nupur yaha humara koi nhi hai. Aaj meri breakup ki khushi mai party

And they go away from there

Karan- tu mujhe bata nhi sakta tha

Mayank- tu busy tha maine socha kyun tujhe disturb karu

Karan - bada hi kamina hai tu. Mera dost nhi dushman hai

Mayank laughed at this

8 pm at hotels pub

Mayank karan and rishi were sitting at drink counter

Rishi - so what will you guys have?

Karan- vodka

Rishi - great. Waiter vodka please

Mayank (holding vodka glass)- cheers!!

Karan- wait wait wait girls are coming

Mayank- hi girls

Girls- hi mayank

Karan- hi kritika

Kritika- baat mat karo tum mujhse

Tanu- kritika jane bhi de na

Rishi - nhi kritika isse lesson milna chahiye

Karan- abbey tu dost hai ya dushman?

Kritika- oh hello yaha mujhse baat karo

Nupur- I'm thirsty

She picked up a glass of vodka and drinks it mayank tries to stop her but it was too late.

Nupur- che kitna ganda taste hai pani ka

Kritika- pani bhi tum gandi wali pite ho chee

Karan- aare

Kritika- chupp

While nupur drank all the glasses of vodka

Nupur- mujhe chakkar aa raha hai

Kritika- kya hua nupur, kya pila diya tumne meri best friend ko

Rishi- woh actually vodka

Tanu - kya rishi tumhe sharam nhi aati humare shaadi hone wali hi aur tum pi rahe ho

Mayank offered another glass of vodka to her and she drinks it.

Nupur- mujhe dance karna hai (in talli voice)

Kritika- yeah lets go

And they go dance floor

Breakup song, breakup song
Karde dil ki feeling strong
Saade chaar minute long
Breakup song, breakup song

Break break B B.. Breakup song
Break break B B.. Breakup song

Kritika starts singing in very dramatically

Angrezi chidiya ki khaatir
Desi dil mera tod diya
Maine chhod diya
Usey chhod diya
Uski kaali kartooton ne
Uska bhaanda phod diya
Maine chhod diya
Usey chhod diya

Nupur starts singing and dancing

Dil pe patthar rakh ke
Munh pe makeup kar liya
Oh dil pe patthar rakh ke
Munh pe makeup kar liya
Mere saiyyan ji se aaj
Maine breakup kar liya
Mere saiyyan ji se aaj
Maine breakup kar liya
Subah savere uth ke maine
Ye sab kar liya
Mere saiyyan ji se aaj
Maine breakup kar liya

Mayank looking at all the glasses which nupur have emptied

Humko bin bataye tune
Ye kab kar liya?
Arey humko bin bataye tune
Ye kab kar liya?

Comes to the dance floor


Oh tere saiyyan ji se kaahe
Tune break up kar liya

And they dance together
Tere saiyyan ji se kaahe
Tune breakup kar liya

Subah savere uth ke maine
Ye sab kar liya
Tere saiyyan ji se kaahe
Tune breakup kar liya

B b.. breakup song

Nupur sings making baby face

Kuch din to rona dhona bumper kiya
Aur phir delete uska number kiya
Aansu jo sookhe seedha parlour gayi
Parlour mein jaake shampoo jamkar kiya

she hugs tanu and kritika

College ki saheliyon se catch-up kar liya
Arey college ki saheliyon se catch-up kar liya
Jinko mill na paayi unko whatsapp kar diya

Mere saiyyan ji se aaj maine breakup kar liya
Subah savere uth ke maine ye sab kar liya
Mere saiyyan ji se aaj maine breakup kar liya

Rishi sings and dance with kritika trying to convence her to patch up with karan

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Look, baby! mujhe lagta hai ki
Jo bhi tune kiya hai wo very very right hai
Bhoot-kaal ko bhool ja ab tu
Aane wala future very very bright hai

Main hoon na baby saath tere
Party sharty honi poori night hai
Mind na karna jo thoda zyada bol doon
Kyunki banda very very tight hai

Usey phone mila aur gaali de
Photo jala ke karde raakh
Saale teri maa ki aankh!

Karan sings

Kalti hua jo saiyan stupid tera
Jeevit hua hai phir se cupid tera
Baasi relationship ka label hata
Duniya ko tu hai available bata

Mayank sings with nupur in his arms

Arey mere soye armaano ko wake up kar diya
Arey mere soye armaano ko wake up kar diya

Nupur free herself from mayank's arms


Ke tere saiyan ji se (aaha!)
Tune breakup kar liya

Tere saiyyan ji se kaahe tune..
O tere saiyyan ji se kaahe tune
breakup kar liya
Tere saiyyan ji se kaahe tune
breakup kar liya

B b.. Breakup song...

Karde dil ki feeling strong...

After a while kritika accepts karan's sorry

And now everyone is dancing with their partner

mayank and nupur were together while nupur was dancing with him holding him tightly he was enjoy the hug. Nupur was not in her sense

mayank- you are very beautiful

nupur- and u are so handsome but my papa is more handsome than you. Tumahre muscles kitne strong hai but mere papa k muscles tumse bhi zada strong hai (in talli voice)

mayank- mai tumhari tariff kar raha hu aur tum apne papa ki kar rahi ho madam

nupur- hehehehehe ab mai itni bhi special nhi

mayank- tum bahut special hu nupur

nupur- tum flirt kar rahe ho? Na karo mere papa tumhari hadiyan tod dege

mayank- tumhare liye sab manzoor hai (holding her more closer)

nupur- aacha (resting her head on his chest)

mayank- haan (he felt nupur was going weak on her knees so he picked her up in his arms) chalo madam bahut ho gaya ab so jao tum (starts waling)

nupur- mujhe nind nhi aa rahi (smiling)

mayank smiled at her. Nupur placed a wet kiss on his check.

Nupur- why are u so cute?

Mayank- because you are too hot

They reached her room. Mayank laid her on the bed and was about to leave but nupur hold his hand so he sat next to her

Nupur- please mat jao. Mujhe bahut dar lagta hai usse .

Mayank - kisse?

Nupur- please mujhe akele na chodo (holding him tightly and her eyes were tightly shut)

Mayank- mai tumhara saath kabhi nhi choduga. I promise.

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precap- haldi and mehendi ceremony and lots oof masti

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PART-4

Next morning nupur woke up with heavy head. She got ready and went to dinning area.

Dinning are

Nupur- good morning everyone (holing her head)

Kritika- yeh le juice pi aacha lagega

Nupur- thanks

Mayank too comes their with karan

Karan- good morning sweetheart (kissing kritika forehead) good morning everyone

Mayank- good morning guys. Good morning nupur

Nupur- good morning (with week smile) tum dono ka patch up o gaya (looking at karan and kritika)

Kritika- haan yaar

Karan- tumhe yaad nhi?

Nupur- nhi mujhe kuch bhi yaad nhi aa raha hai bas itna yaad hai ki hum pary k liye ready hue the baki kuch yaad nhi aa raha. (sipping her juice)

Mayank- what (shocked) you don't remember anything?

Nupur- no

Mayank- woman really don't remember anything?

Nupur- no baba

Tanu- whats the matter mayank?

Mayank- nothing. Just... ( he smiled)

Karan- teri romance ki band baj gayi ( whispering in mayanks ear)

Mayank- what romance? Its nothing like that. (sipping his glass of juice and staring at nupur)

Karan- really? Than why are you staring at her? (he winked)

Mayank- im not staring at anyone.

Karan- aahahaa

Mayank- shut up karan.

Rishi- so what's today's plan?

Kritika- we are practicing today

Tanu- what practice?

Krtika- my sweet sis for your sangeet

Karan- yeah practice karo jitni karna hai jitna toh hume hi hai

Kritika- oh really (with full on attitude)

Karan- yes really (dramatically)

Krtika- for your kind information mr kundra nupur is a great classical dancer (she said it very proudly)

Mayank- interesting

Krtika- chal nupur hume bahut kaam hai

(nupur and kritika left)

Karan- interesting haan?

Mayank- shut up karan (getting up from his place and starts walking towards his room and karan follows him)

Karan- mayank, im your best friend yaar. I know you. You have started feeling for nupur.

Mayank- if you remember I already have a gf.

Karan- but you don't love her

Mayank- how you know that I love her or not? ( he stops walking)

Karan- because you cant hide anything from me. ( he smiled)

Mayank gets a call from someone

Mayank- hello baby

Girl- hi baby. How are you?

Mayank- good.

Girl - guess what. I have a surprise for you.

Mayank- what surprise?

Girl- turn back honey.

Mayank and karan turns

Mayank- ria what are you doing here?

Ria- surprise !!!

She hugs mayank. Meanwhile nupur and kritika too came there.

Kritika- yeh chipkali yaha kya kar rahi hai (whispering in karan's ear)

Karan- surprise dene aayi hai (shaking his head.)

Breaking the hug

Mayank- ria, yeh nupur hai aur karan aur kritika ko tumjante hi ho

Ria- mayank you are talking in hindi (shocked)

Mayank- yeah

Ria- baby is everything alright because you don't speak n hindi

Mayank- so? (bit irritated)

Ria- ok ok

Nupur- yeh kon hai (whispering in kritika easrs)

Kritika- mayank ki gf

Nupur- oh ok chal hume practice karni hai

Kritika- haan chal. Bye guys see u all later

(they left)

Mayank- ria u must be tired I think you should also take rest

Ria- ok baby

(she leave. Mayank turns to karan who standing folding his hand)

Mayank- what

Karan- I thought it was guys trip

Mayank- i really had no idea that ria... (before he could finish)

Karan- its ok bro. but you have to help me now

Mayank- yeah say

Karan- wait. We cant discuss it hear lets go to my room

Mayank- ok

Karan's room

Karan- dude kuch samajh main hi aa raha hai

Mayank- say something new bro (jokingly)

Karan glare at him

Mayank- ok ok say whats the matter

Karan- actually, I want to buy something special for kritika . she always complains ki mai usko koi gift nhi deta

Mayank- ok so that's the matter. Don't worry bro I have heard of a very famous market over here so why not lets go and explore it. Shayad nupur k liye bhi kuch aacha sa mil jaye

Karan- aahaa nupurr!!! Haan

Mayank - I mean ria (realizing what he said before)

Karan- no you said nupur

Mayank- but I meant ria

Karan- omg mayank sharama is in love. Mayank Sharma is in love with Mumbai beauty nupur katiyal.

Mayank- shut up karan. Its nothing like that.

Karan- so propose kab kar raha hai

Mayank- mai kyun nupur ko propose karuga

Karan- maine kab nupur ka naam liye ( he winked)

Mayank- tuuu ruk

Mayank starts running behind karan and they fall on bed. At the same time nupur enters the room. She gets shocked and confuse seeing them like that. She had sweet box in her hand. She keeps it on table silently and turs to leave

Nupur- actually I'm sorry you guys continue.

Mayank- hey you are getting it wrong ( before he could complete nupur leaves from there closing the door behind.)

Karan- yeh kya samaj rahi hai

Mayank- wohi jot u yaha baithe baithe samaj raha hai

Karan- aare nhi yaar roko usko yeh ladki mera breakup kara k hi rahegi.

Mayank- main hi rokuga tu hi bada ched raha tha na jaa ab apne problem se khud deal kar

Karan- tu mera dost nhi dushman hai

He runs behind nupur. Mayank smiles at him and then nupur's face flashes in his mind.

Mayank- man even I need to clear her doubt (he said to himself) but why should i

She is not my gf. Than why should i? I'm really in love with her?

On other hand

Kritika sitting on floor. Her legs were folded and she was holding nupus legs

Kritika- haye ram mai lut gayi barbad ho gayi( dramatically )

Nupur- kriti kya kar rahi hai uth pair chod mera

Kritika- mera bf wohh nikla mai ab duniya ko kaise face karugi. Aansu bhi nhi aa rahe ( full on in nautanki)

Karan- kritu

Karitika- tum jao yaha hai mujhe tumhari shakal nhi dekhni nhiklo (she throws him out of her room)

In evening

Haldi ceremony

Nupur dress up in turmeric yellow lehga was walking with plate full of rose petals and her legs slip and she was about to fall when our hero hold her from her waist and saves her from falling. Her eyes were tightly shut. Slowly she opens her eyes and see mayank smiling at her. And there was eyelock between them

Aankhon mein teri...
Ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain
Ho...
ankhon mein teri...
ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain
Dil ko bana dein jo patang
Saansein ye teri vo hawaayein hain

Aankhon mein teri...
Ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain
Ho...
ankhon mein teri...
ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain
Dil ko bana dein jo patang
Saansein ye teri vo hawaayein hain

Karan comes there

Karan- ahem ahem

Mayur comes back in there sense. Nupur starts collecting all the flower petals and mayank helps her. While collecting flowers mayank hands touches her hand and she shivers. She gets up and mayank gives the plate to her

Kritika along with ria comes there

Kritika- tum ? tum yaha bhi mere peecha karte karte yaha aa gaye

She was about to start with her melodrama when nupur covers her mouth with her hand

Nupur- shhh kya kar rahi hai tu chal mere saath

(nupur takes her along with her)

And mayank smiles at her sweet yet mature act.

During the whole haldi ceremony kritika avoided karna

And mayank was busy staring at nupur whenever he got time

😳

precap- mehendi ceremony and mayank realizes his love for nupur

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PART-4

Next morning nupur woke up with heavy head. She got ready and went to dinning area.

Dinning area

Nupur- good morning everyone (holing her head)

Kritika- yeh le juice pi aacha lagega

Nupur- thanks

Mayank too comes their with karan

Karan- good morning sweetheart (kissing kritika forehead) good morning everyone

Mayank- good morning guys. Good morning nupur

Nupur- good morning (with week smile) tum dono ka patch up o gaya (looking at karan and kritika)

Kritika- haan yaar

Karan- tumhe yaad nhi?

Nupur- nhi mujhe kuch bhi yaad nhi aa raha hai bas itna yaad hai ki hum pary k liye ready hue the baki kuch yaad nhi aa raha. (sipping her juice)

Mayank- what (shocked) you don't remember anything?

Nupur- no

Mayank- woman really don't remember anything?

Nupur- no baba

Tanu- whats the matter mayank?

Mayank- nothing. Just... ( he smiled)

Karan- teri romance ki band baj gayi ( whispering in mayanks ear)

Mayank- what romance? Its nothing like that. (sipping his glass of juice and staring at nupur)

Karan- really? Than why are you staring at her? (he winked)

Mayank- im not staring at anyone.

Karan- aahahaa

Mayank- shut up karan.

Rishi- so what's today's plan?

Kritika- we are practicing today

Tanu- what practice?

Krtika- my sweet sis for your sangeet

Karan- yeah practice karo jitni karna hai jitna toh hume hi hai

Kritika- oh really (with full on attitude)

Karan- yes really (dramatically)

Krtika- for your kind information mr kundra nupur is a great classical dancer (she said it very proudly)

Mayank- interesting

Krtika- chal nupur hume bahut kaam hai

(nupur and kritika left)

Karan- interesting haan?

Mayank- shut up karan (getting up from his place and starts walking towards his room and karan follows him)

Karan- mayank, im your best friend yaar. I know you. You have started feeling for nupur.

Mayank- if you remember I already have a gf.

Karan- but you don't love her

Mayank- how you know that I love her or not? ( he stops walking)

Karan- because you cant hide anything from me. ( he smiled)

Mayank gets a call from someone

Mayank- hello baby

Girl- hi baby. How are you?

Mayank- good.

Girl - guess what. I have a surprise for you.

Mayank- what surprise?

Girl- turn back honey.

Mayank and karan turns

Mayank- ria what are you doing here?

Ria- surprise !!!

She hugs mayank. Meanwhile nupur and kritika too came there.

Kritika- yeh chipkali yaha kya kar rahi hai (whispering in karan's ear)

Karan- surprise dene aayi hai (shaking his head.)

Breaking the hug

Mayank- ria, yeh nupur hai aur karan aur kritika ko tumjante hi ho

Ria- mayank you are talking in hindi (shocked)

Mayank- yeah

Ria- baby is everything alright because you don't speak n hindi

Mayank- so? (bit irritated)

Ria- ok ok

Nupur- yeh kon hai (whispering in kritika easrs)

Kritika- mayank ki gf

Nupur- oh ok chal hume practice karni hai

Kritika- haan chal. Bye guys see u all later

(they left)

Mayank- ria u must be tired I think you should also take rest

Ria- ok baby

(she leave. Mayank turns to karan who standing folding his hand)

Mayank- what

Karan- I thought it was guys trip

Mayank- i really had no idea that ria... (before he could finish)

Karan- its ok bro. but you have to help me now

Mayank- yeah say

Karan- wait. We cant discuss it hear lets go to my room

Mayank- ok

Karan's room

Karan- dude kuch samajh main hi aa raha hai

Mayank- say something new bro (jokingly)

Karan glares at him

Mayank- ok ok say whats the matter

Karan- actually, I want to buy something special for kritika . she always complains ki mai usko koi gift nhi deta

Mayank- ok so that's the matter. Don't worry bro I have heard of a very famous market over here so why not lets go and explore it. Shayad nupur k liye bhi kuch aacha sa mil jaye

Karan- aahaa nupurr!!! Haan

Mayank - I mean ria (realizing what he said before)

Karan- no you said nupur

Mayank- but I meant ria

Karan- omg mayank sharama is in love. Mayank Sharma is in love with Mumbai beauty nupur katiyal.

Mayank- shut up karan. Its nothing like that.

Karan- so propose kab kar raha hai

Mayank- mai kyun nupur ko propose karuga

Karan- maine kab nupur ka naam liye ( he winked)

Mayank- tuuu ruk

Mayank starts running behind karan and they fall on bed. At the same time nupur enters the room. She gets shocked and confuse seeing them like that. She had sweet box in her hand. She keeps it on table silently and turs to leave

Nupur- actually I'm sorry you guys continue.

Mayank- hey you are getting it wrong ( before he could complete nupur leaves from there closing the door behind.)

Karan- yeh kya samaj rahi hai

Mayank- wohi jot u yaha baithe baithe samaj raha hai

Karan- aare nhi yaar roko usko yeh ladki mera breakup kara k hi rahegi.

Mayank- main hi rokuga tu hi bada ched raha tha na jaa ab apne problem se khud deal kar

Karan- tu mera dost nhi dushman hai

He runs behind nupur. Mayank smiles at him and then nupur's face flashes in his mind.

Mayank- man even I need to clear her doubt (he said to himself) but why should i

She is not my gf. Than why should i? I'm really in love with her?

On other hand

Kritika sitting on floor. Her legs were folded and she was holding nupus legs

Kritika- haye ram mai lut gayi barbad ho gayi( dramatically )

Nupur- kriti kya kar rahi hai uth pair chod mera

Kritika- mera bf wohh nikla mai ab duniya ko kaise face karugi. Aansu bhi nhi aa rahe ( full on in nautanki)

Karan- kritu

Karitika- tum jao yaha hai mujhe tumhari shakal nhi dekhni nhiklo (she throws him out of her room)

In evening

Haldi ceremony

Nupur dress up in turmeric yellow lehga was walking with plate full of rose petals and her legs slip and she was about to fall when our hero hold her from her waist and saves her from falling. Her eyes were tightly shut. Slowly she opens her eyes and see mayank smiling at her. And there was eyelock between them

Aankhon mein teri...
Ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain
Ho...
ankhon mein teri...
ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain
Dil ko bana dein jo patang
Saansein ye teri vo hawaayein hain

Aankhon mein teri...
Ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain
Ho...
ankhon mein teri...
ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain
Dil ko bana dein jo patang
Saansein ye teri vo hawaayein hain

Karan comes there

Karan- ahem ahem

Mayur comes back in there sense. Nupur starts collecting all the flower petals and mayank helps her. While collecting flowers mayank hands touches her hand and she shivers. She gets up and mayank gives the plate to her

Kritika along with ria comes there

Kritika- tum ? tum yaha bhi mere peecha karte karte yaha aa gaye

She was about to start with her melodrama when nupur covers her mouth with her hand

Nupur- shhh kya kar rahi hai tu chal mere saath

(nupur takes her along with her)

And mayank smiles at her sweet yet mature act.

During the whole haldi ceremony kritika avoided karna

And mayank whenever he got time was busy staring at nupur.

precap- mehendi ceremony and mayank realize his love for nupur😳


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Posted: 8 years ago
#10

PART-4

Next morning nupur woke up with heavy head. She got ready and went to dinning area.

Dinning area

Nupur- good morning everyone (holing her head)

Kritika- yeh le juice pi aacha lagega

Nupur- thanks

Mayank too comes their with karan

Karan- good morning sweetheart (kissing kritika forehead) good morning everyone

Mayank- good morning guys. Good morning nupur

Nupur- good morning (with week smile) tum dono ka patch up o gaya (looking at karan and kritika)

Kritika- haan yaar

Karan- tumhe yaad nhi?

Nupur- nhi mujhe kuch bhi yaad nhi aa raha hai bas itna yaad hai ki hum pary k liye ready hue the baki kuch yaad nhi aa raha. (sipping her juice)

Mayank- what (shocked) you don't remember anything?

Nupur- no

Mayank- woman really don't remember anything?

Nupur- no baba

Tanu- whats the matter mayank?

Mayank- nothing. Just... ( he smiled)

Karan- teri romance ki band baj gayi ( whispering in mayanks ear)

Mayank- what romance? Its nothing like that. (sipping his glass of juice and staring at nupur)

Karan- really? Than why are you staring at her? (he winked)

Mayank- im not staring at anyone.

Karan- aahahaa

Mayank- shut up karan.

Rishi- so what's today's plan?

Kritika- we are practicing today

Tanu- what practice?

Krtika- my sweet sis for your sangeet

Karan- yeah practice karo jitni karna hai jitna toh hume hi hai

Kritika- oh really (with full on attitude)

Karan- yes really (dramatically)

Krtika- for your kind information mr kundra nupur is a great classical dancer (she said it very proudly)

Mayank- interesting

Krtika- chal nupur hume bahut kaam hai

(nupur and kritika left)

Karan- interesting haan?

Mayank- shut up karan (getting up from his place and starts walking towards his room and karan follows him)

Karan- mayank, im your best friend yaar. I know you. You have started feeling for nupur.

Mayank- if you remember I already have a gf.

Karan- but you don't love her

Mayank- how you know that I love her or not? ( he stops walking)

Karan- because you cant hide anything from me. ( he smiled)

Mayank gets a call from someone

Mayank- hello baby

Girl- hi baby. How are you?

Mayank- good.

Girl - guess what. I have a surprise for you.

Mayank- what surprise?

Girl- turn back honey.

Mayank and karan turns

Mayank- ria what are you doing here?

Ria- surprise !!!

She hugs mayank. Meanwhile nupur and kritika too came there.

Kritika- yeh chipkali yaha kya kar rahi hai (whispering in karan's ear)

Karan- surprise dene aayi hai (shaking his head.)

Breaking the hug

Mayank- ria, yeh nupur hai aur karan aur kritika ko tumjante hi ho

Ria- mayank you are talking in hindi (shocked)

Mayank- yeah

Ria- baby is everything alright because you don't speak n hindi

Mayank- so? (bit irritated)

Ria- ok ok

Nupur- yeh kon hai (whispering in kritika easrs)

Kritika- mayank ki gf

Nupur- oh ok chal hume practice karni hai

Kritika- haan chal. Bye guys see u all later

(they left)

Mayank- ria u must be tired I think you should also take rest

Ria- ok baby

(she leave. Mayank turns to karan who standing folding his hand)

Mayank- what

Karan- I thought it was guys trip

Mayank- i really had no idea that ria... (before he could finish)

Karan- its ok bro. but you have to help me now

Mayank- yeah say

Karan- wait. We cant discuss it hear lets go to my room

Mayank- ok

Karan's room

Karan- dude kuch samajh main hi aa raha hai

Mayank- say something new bro (jokingly)

Karan glares at him

Mayank- ok ok say whats the matter

Karan- actually, I want to buy something special for kritika . she always complains ki mai usko koi gift nhi deta

Mayank- ok so that's the matter. Don't worry bro I have heard of a very famous market over here so why not lets go and explore it. Shayad nupur k liye bhi kuch aacha sa mil jaye

Karan- aahaa nupurr!!! Haan

Mayank - I mean ria (realizing what he said before)

Karan- no you said nupur

Mayank- but I meant ria

Karan- omg mayank sharama is in love. Mayank Sharma is in love with Mumbai beauty nupur katiyal.

Mayank- shut up karan. Its nothing like that.

Karan- so propose kab kar raha hai

Mayank- mai kyun nupur ko propose karuga

Karan- maine kab nupur ka naam liye ( he winked)

Mayank- tuuu ruk

Mayank starts running behind karan and they fall on bed. At the same time nupur enters the room. She gets shocked and confuse seeing them like that. She had sweet box in her hand. She keeps it on table silently and turs to leave

Nupur- actually I'm sorry you guys continue.

Mayank- hey you are getting it wrong ( before he could complete nupur leaves from there closing the door behind.)

Karan- yeh kya samaj rahi hai

Mayank- wohi jot u yaha baithe baithe samaj raha hai

Karan- aare nhi yaar roko usko yeh ladki mera breakup kara k hi rahegi.

Mayank- main hi rokuga tu hi bada ched raha tha na jaa ab apne problem se khud deal kar

Karan- tu mera dost nhi dushman hai

He runs behind nupur. Mayank smiles at him and then nupur's face flashes in his mind.

Mayank- man even I need to clear her doubt (he said to himself) but why should i

She is not my gf. Than why should i? I'm really in love with her?

On other hand

Kritika sitting on floor. Her legs were folded and she was holding nupus legs

Kritika- haye ram mai lut gayi barbad ho gayi( dramatically )

Nupur- kriti kya kar rahi hai uth pair chod mera

Kritika- mera bf wohh nikla mai ab duniya ko kaise face karugi. Aansu bhi nhi aa rahe ( full on in nautanki)

Karan- kritu

Karitika- tum jao yaha hai mujhe tumhari shakal nhi dekhni nhiklo (she throws him out of her room)

In evening

Haldi ceremony

Nupur dress up in turmeric yellow lehga was walking with plate full of rose petals and her legs slip and she was about to fall when our hero hold her from her waist and saves her from falling. Her eyes were tightly shut. Slowly she opens her eyes and see mayank smiling at her. And there was eyelock between them

Aankhon mein teri...
Ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain
Ho...
ankhon mein teri...
ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain
Dil ko bana dein jo patang
Saansein ye teri vo hawaayein hain

Aankhon mein teri...
Ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain
Ho...
ankhon mein teri...
ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain
Dil ko bana dein jo patang
Saansein ye teri vo hawaayein hain

Karan comes there

Karan- ahem ahem

Mayur comes back in there sense. Nupur starts collecting all the flower petals and mayank helps her. While collecting flowers mayank hands touches her hand and she shivers. She gets up and mayank gives the plate to her

Kritika along with ria comes there

Kritika- tum ? tum yaha bhi mere peecha karte karte yaha aa gaye

She was about to start with her melodrama when nupur covers her mouth with her hand

Nupur- shhh kya kar rahi hai tu chal mere saath

(nupur takes her along with her)

And mayank smiles at her sweet yet mature act.

During the whole haldi ceremony kritika avoided karna

And mayank whenever he got time was busy staring at nupur

precap - mehendi ceremony and mayank realize his love for nupur

😳

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