NYC update dear
Loved it!!Mayur is super cute and adorableMayank received sucide note of nupur's from deshmukhMayank vow to take his revenge from ranvijayThanks for the pmWill be waiting for the next update
NYC update dear
Loved it!!Mayur is super cute and adorableMayank received sucide note of nupur's from deshmukhMayank vow to take his revenge from ranvijayThanks for the pmWill be waiting for the next update
Originally posted by: shafy_MN
nice update...
Originally posted by: Jade0001
Awesome Part
Part-5
Maaynk and samrat kept eyes on sanju and as they expected he contact ranvijay. Ranvijay was in banglore. "toh yeh kutta banglore mai hai." Said samrat. "agar yeh narak mai bhi chup k baitha hota toh bhi mai usse dhundh nikalta." Said mayank angrily. "aage kya karna hai" asked samrat. "who aaj sham ko Mumbai aa raha hai. Aate hi who sanju se milega. Par who sirf sanju se nhi mujhse bhi milega."said mayank. His eyes fall on a woman who was beating her husband for beaking tv. He smiled. Samrat asked him why was he smiling.
Past
Nupur was watching her favourite serial on tv. Mayank and mayur were playing cricket. By mistake ball hits the tv glass. At first nupur got scared after few seconds she realized what just happened. She turned to mayank and mayur. She was so shocked that words were not coming out of her mouth. With great difficulty she finally spoke "tod diya... Mera tv tod diya.." mayank tries to calm her down "nupur. Relax." He said sitting on his knees and holding her hand. "relax? Mera tv tod diya upar se bolte ho relax. Kaise ho tum" she shouted. "aare nupur relax tum itni hyper kyun ho rahi ho tv hi toh tuta hai mai banwa duga"he said. "tv nhi mera dil tuta hai.tumhara kya tum toh office chale jate ho rehti mai hu gharpe upar se tum restaurant bhi nhi jane dete ghar pe bhi koi kaam nhi karne dete. Bas ek tv hi mera sahara tha usse bhi tod diya. ab mai miley jab hum tum aur dil mil gaye kaise dekhugi." She shouted. "aacha baba im sorry tum please chillao mat baby k liye aacha nhi." He said placing his hand on her stomach. Mayur holds his ears and says, "sorry mumma. Ab mai kabhi ghar k ander cricket nhi kheluga". Nupur makes him sit on her lap "ale mela bacha. Mumma aapse gussa nhi hai" she said kissing him. "meri kiss?" mayank asked. "maine tumhe maaf nhi kiya. Tum pehele mera tv theek karo" said nupur pampering mayur. Mayank makes sad face and place both his hand on her stomach and talks to their baby"dekha baby aapki mummy kitna cheating karti hai aapke bhaiya ko maaf kar diya mujhe. Papa ko aapke alwa koi pyaar nhi karta aap jaldi bahar aa jao."
After two weeks, nupur was sleeping. Mayank wakes her up. "mrs sharma good morning kitna sougi aaj k din toh thoda jaldi uth jao" he said placing kiss on her cheek. "good morning baby"she wraped her hands around his neck. "happy anniversary mrs sharma"mayank kissed her nose. "same to you mr sharma"she replied. "tumhare liye ek surprise hai" said mayank. "kya?" asked nupur getting up. "maine tumhare liye tv order kiya hai, dophar tak aa jayega" he said. Nupur widen her eyes and ask "sachi?" he nods his head. She hugs him and say, "tum duniya k sabse aache husband ho". "aur tum duniya k sabse aachi wife. Aacha chalo ab mujhe office jana hai" he said breaking the hug.
In afternoon, nupur was in kitchen preparing her lunch. She was wearing long sleevless maxi dress. Looking very beautiful. She remembers something and call mayank.
Mayank- bolo Janu
Nupur- suno who na maine john ko cake banana ko kaha tha ghar aate waqt na le k aana.
Mayank- aur
Nupur- aur jaldi aana. Aacha suno lagta hai tv wala aaya hai mai baad mai baat karti hu.
She disconnects the call.
Present.
Mayank called mrs pinto.
Mayank- hello. Mrs pinto mayur kaisa hai.
Mrs pinto- yahi hai tumhare bare mai hi hamesha puchta rehta hai lo baat karo usse. She gives phone to mayur.
Mayur- hello papa. Aap jaldi aao mayur aapko aur mumma ko bahut miss karta hai. (she said crying)
Mayank- mayur no aap good boy ho na good boy aise nhi rote aise.
Mayur- mayur mumma se gussa hai mumma bad mumma. Mayur kabhi mumma se baat nhi karega. (he was still crying)
Mayank too had tears in his eyes.
Mayank- mayur. Aap mumma se bahut pyaar karte ho na? papa se bhi zada. Toh please rona band karo. Papa jaldi aa jayege.
Mayur- aap mayur ko chod k kabhi nhi jaoge na. ( wiping his tears)
Mayank- nhi beta. Kabhi nhi. Aacha baby abhi papa ko jana hai. Papa aapke pass kal aa jayege.
Mayur- promise?
Mayank- promise.
He disconnects the call.
Samrat comes there, "chale?" mayank nodded his head. They reached a place where sanju and ranvijay was about to meet. "ranvijay. Aacha hua tum aa gaye dekho us mayank ne mera kya haal kiya."said sanju. "mujhe pura yakeen that u akele nhi aayega. Who bhi tere saath aayega." Said ranvijay. "kon who" asked sanju. "MAYANK" replied ranvijay. Mayank and samrat comes out of their car. "mujhe tujh tak tere kutte ne hi pauchaya hai."said mayank tightening his fist. "aacha hua tu khud aa gaya mere haatho marne. Lekin marne se pehle yeh nhi janna chahega us din teri biwi k saath kya hua. Chal mai phir bhi tujhe bata hi deta hu" said ranvijay.
Past.
Nupur was very happy to see new tv. "bhaiya jaldi fix karona"said nupur excitedly. "aare madam bas 2 min ho hi gaya" said the man who was fixing the tv. "lo madam ho gaya aapka tv fix. Yaha is paper pe sign kar do hum chalet hai."said the man. After those people left nupur called mayank but he did not answer her call so send a voice message.
"hello mayank. Tum na world k best husband ho. I love u soo much. Muaaahhh!!!"
She turned to close the door. But ranvijay along with sanju entered the house.
"kaha hai tera pati haan."asked ranvijay holding her by her hair. "kon hai aap log aur kya chahiye aapko"asked nupur trying to free herself. "Sali mere samne natak karti hai"said ranvijay and slapped her she fall on ground. "dekhiye aap log jo bhi hai please mujhe jane dijiye. Mai maa banne wali. Please mujhe mere bache k liye chod dijiye mai usse is duniya mai lana chahti hu." she said crying. Ranvijay again holds her hair and makes her stand. "yeh drama band kar aur mere sawalo ka jawab de" she slapped her again and she falls on her stomach. Ranvijay kicked her on her stomach. "ranvijay yeh tu kya kar raha hai chod de usse maa banne wali hai who" sanju tries to stop him. "mera bacha!!" she cried. " tu aise nhi manegi na chal" he dragged her to the bedroom. "nhi please mujhe jane do" she screamed. She was in pain. She couldn't even move. Ranvijay pushed her on the bed and got on top of her. She tried to escape many times but failed. At last she stopped struggling. "kuch bhi bol maal kadak hai tu. Chinta mat kar tujhe mai baichuga nhi. Tujhe mai apne liye rakhuga" said ranvijay wearing his shirt. Mera intezaar karna mai wapas aauga" said ranvijay and he left from there. Nupur was lying on bed like a dead person.
Present.
Tears flows from mayank eyes. "maine toh socha tha ki tujhe marne k baad teri biwi ko apni rakher bana k rakhuga aur tere bete ko apne dhande mai shamil kar luga par bechari ne suicide kar li. Chalo koi nhi aaj mai tujhe maar kar apna badla le luga." Said ranvijay. He was about to punch mayank but mayank holds his hand and twisted it and kicked his leg. Samrat attacked sanju. Ranvijay falls on ground. Mayank was kicking him continuously. Ranvijay got the hold of steel rod and attack mayank with it on his leg. Mayank falls on ground. Ranvijay got on top of his and starts punching him. Mayank hits him by his leg and stands. "teri dushmani mujhse thi usko kyun takleef di" he said hitting him with iron rod. "mere bache ko duniya mai aane se pehle hi tune maar diya" he hits him again. He holded ranvijay from behind and bangs his head against the wall. Ranvijay falls on ground. Mayank kicks him on his stomach. Blood comes out from ranvijay's mouth. "mujhe chod de"said ranvijay in very week voice. "tujhe itni dard ho rahi hai. Soch uske pet mai 4 mahine ka bacha tha" said mayank with heavy voice. He could feel the pain nupur must have gone throught before dying. Mayank breaks both his hands. He makes ranvijay stands and bang his face against the wall till he dies. His body falls on ground but stills mayank contined to kick him. Samrat comes there and tries to stop him, but he pushed samrat away and gets on top of ranvijay and starts punching his face. NUPUR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He screams.
...
Mayank takes mayur to park. Everying Sunday mayank nupur and mayur used to go to park for picnic. Mayank had mayur had become best friends. Mayur used to obey mayank like an obedient child. He used miss his mother a lot. Same with mayank, he used to miss his wife, his nupur a lot. But decided to start his life again with mayur. he used to get mayur ready for school prepare his tiffin. Play with him. Takes his study. And take him to park every Sunday for picnic after Sunday mass. Mayank felt some one holding his hand. He turns his face and smiles to see nupur. "hide and seek khele"she asked. Mayank turns his face to mayur and asked "hide and seek khele?" mayur happily nodded his head. Mayank cover his eyes and starts counting mayur runs to hide himself.
THE END.
HOPE U GUYS LIKED THIS STORY 😳
Originally posted by: Ruhana05
Itni sad ending krna zarori tha 😭 per superb written yaar sachi 👏 ranvijay deserve this feeling sad for mayank ...waiting 4 ur new ss sweetie ❤️❤️❤️
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