a different story of mayur. but i loved it. matabk punished ran vijay who destroyed his life by killing nupur indirectly. agar nupur zinda hoti to aur bhi accha hoti. but its also very nice. Do write more story. but this time happy mayur wala story. no sad one. ok???
Originally posted by: Priya258
sad ending
ranvijay deserve this punishment
very well written
Originally posted by: shafy_MN
very nice...
it was really heart touching...Mayank's sins were eventually paid by Nupur.But very well written
Originally posted by: Bhatakti_atma
Refreshing and sad both..
Loved the plot..The past scenes were very cute . .But hated Rannvijay..Glad Mayank took revenge.Keep writing :)
MERE BROTHER KI DULHAAN
Part-3
Mayank was sleeping peacefully dreaming of nupur. His sleep was disturbed by his ringing mobile. With great difficulty he open his eyes and see nupur name flashing. He gets up with jerk and answer the call.
Mayank- hello. Good morning
Nupur- good morning. Tum aaj free ho?
Mayank- haan bilkul.
Nupur- great 1 ghante baad bandra coffee shop mai milte hai.
She disconnects the call.
Mayank gets ready and comes down. Samrat and shilpa aunty were shock to see him awake so early.
Shilpa aunty- may uteri tabyat toh theek hai na.
Mayank- haan maa kyun. (searching his car keys)
Shilpa aunty- abhi sirf 8:30 hue hai aur tu itne jaldi tayar ho gaya.
Mayank- who muje nupur se aadhe ghante mai milna hai. (he said with big smile on his face)
Samrat- aacha toh baat yaha tak pahuch gayi. (said samrat teasingly)
Mayank- oye zada na bol. Aacha maa mai chalta hu.
He leaves from there.
Samrat- lagta hai is baar bhai ko sach mai pyaar ho gaya hai.
Shilpa aunty- hope so. Agar aisa hua aur nupur mere ghar bahu ban k aayi toh mai mata rani ko pure 5 nariyal chadaugi. ( she said joining her hands)
In coffee shop.
Mayank was eagerly waiting for nupur. Wonder where she was. He was about to call her but she comes.
Nupur- sorry mai late ho gayi. Traffic mai phas gayi thi.
Mayank smiles and replies
Mayank- koi baat nhi. Aacha tumne mujhe yuh aachanak bulaya.
Nupur- haan. Us din theek se baat nhi kar pai aur mai chahti hu ki shaadi se pehle sari baatein clear ho jaye aur hum dono ek dusare ko theek se jaan le taki future mai koi problem na ho.
Mayank was impressed by her. He found her very sensible.
Mayank- tum sahi keh rahi ho. Par pehle kuch order kar le bahut bhuk lagi hai.
Nupur smiles and nods her head. Mayank calls a waiter and order their breakfast.
Mayank- haan toh batao kya bol rahi thi tum.
Nupur- tum batao tum shaadi k liye maan kaise gaye espically subha k meeting k baad. (folding her hands)
Mayank- tumhe reject karne ka koi reason bhi toh nhi tha. Tum beautiful ho smart ho aachi khasi padhi likhi doctor ho aur mujhe lagta hai tum mujhe kafi aache se handle kar paugi is liye. Tum batao tumne haan kyun kiya. (placing both his hands on table)
Nupur- india mai ladki jaise hi 21 - 22 cross karti hai sab uski shaadi k bare mai baat karne lagte hai aur mai 24 saal ki. Mom dad mere pass aaye aur is bare mai pucha toh maine haan kar diya.
Mayank- ohh toh yeh baat hai.
Waiter comes there with their order and place it on the table.
Nupur- haan. Mere liye relationships bahut important hai. Humari life humare relationship sundar banate hai.
Mayank always wanted someone who values relationships and can handle him.
They had their breakfast and chatted for sometimes after which mayank dropped her home. He was on his way to home, he gets call and the name flashed was sheena.
Mayank- (to himself) ab isse kya chahiye. Us din bada attitude dekha rahi thi. Mai bhi iska call answer nhi karuga.
He reached home.
Shilpa aunty- toh kaisa raha breakfast date.
Mayank sits next to her.
Mayank- bahut hi aacha. Kafi suljhi hui ladki hai nupur.
Shilpa aunty- waise kya kya baatein hui. ( she asked looking at him)
Mayank- yahi ki shaadi se pehle ek dusare ko aache se jaan le taki future mai problem na ho.
Shilpa aunty- so next date kab hai (she asked his teasingly)
Marriage preparation began. Mayank and nupur started meeting each other almost every day. Mayank used pick her up from hospital. They used hangout with each other for sometimes and then mayank used to drop her home. They also did their wedding shopping together. Mayank was already fida on nupur, nupur too also started falling for him.
One evening both were together.
Nupur- aacha mayank ek baat kehni hai (she said looking at him)
Mayank- hmm. Bolo na.
Nupur- dekho mayank. Mai shaadi k baad bhi kaam karna chahti hu. Doctor banna mera bachpan ka sapna raha hai aur mai isse chod nhi sakti.
Mayank- toh chodne ko kon bol raha hai. (he said placing his hand on her) tumhe jo aacha lagta hai tum kar sakti ho koi tumhe nhi rokega sivay ek cheez k.
Nupur- kya?
Mayank- please no saas bahu serial drama.
Both laughed. After sometimes mayank drops her home.
Mayank reached his home and gets shock to see sheena. Samrat and shilpa aunty were not there. Sheena hugs him tightly.
Sheena- ohh baby I missed you so much!!!
Mayank- what are you doing here sheena ( breaking the hug)
Sheena- ab tak mujhe naraaz ho baby. Im sorry tumhe pata hai na mai kabhi kabhi bahut hyper ho jati hu. (she said playing with his shirt button)
Mayank raised his brows
Mayank- kabhi kabhi? Anyways sheena. Meri shaadi tay ho gayi hai. ( he said putting his hands on his pockets)
Sheena- WHATT!!! Mayank how can you do this. Pyaar toh ek baar hota hai na aur jisse pyaar karte hai usse hi shaadi karna chahiye na. (she said cupping his face)
Mayank- (in his mind) aare yaar. Yeh toh problem ho gayi. Ab mai pyaar kisse karta hu sheena se ya nupur se)
Mayank was always a confused character. Due to which he always landed in trouble.
Sheena- ek kaam karte hai. Hum us ladki ko kal hi sab kuch bata dete hai.
Mayank- kal! Kal toh engagement hai (h was horrified)
Mayank- (in his mind) nupur mujhe kacha chaba jayegi.
Sheena- toh kya hua. Shaadi thodi hai. Relax baby sab sahi ho jayega.
Engagement hall.
Everyone was very happy. They were dancing with joy. Especially mayank's mom. Finally her son was going to get settle.
Soon mayank and nupur exchanged ring. Both were very happy. Mayank had totally forgotten about sheena. Both were dancing together and then his eyes falls on sheena.
Mayank- (in his mind) aare yaar ab mai kya karu. Par nupur ko batana toh padega hi is problem k bare mai.
Mayank- nupur mujhe tumse kuch baat karna chahta hu.
Nupur- kaho na (moving more close to him)
Mayank- yaha nhi. Yaha bahut shor hai bahar chate hai.
They came out.
Nupur- bolo kya bolna hai. (with sweet smile)
Mayank- nupur who mai.. who.. who baat yeh hai ki..
Nupur- kya baat hai
Sheena comes there
Sheena- mai batati hu. Mai aur maya nk ek dusare se pyaar karte hai. Who beech mai humara jhagada ho gaya that oh mayank yaha aa gaya aur uski mom ne tumse shaadi fix kar di. But who tumse nhi mujhse shaadi karna chahta hai.
Nupur looked at him
Nupur- yeh kya keh rahi hai.
Mayank did not answer. Nupur smiled at him and next moment slapped him.
hope u guys enjoyed reading 😳
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