IshVeer FF : La Douleur Exquise| Important Announcement (Page 51) - Page 7

Hi,Elvish!
How are you doing??
not update till, hope every thing ok with you.

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

hi elvish
i am literally holding my ears for replying so late and vanishing without informing actually i was out of station went to a trip with family.
now back to reviewing
warning this will be my lamest response because i am already so late and have been busy so please forgive me
poor guy is on the verge of loosing everything they had and these ancestral property hold special place in heart because of emotions attached to it and still he is trying to give himself a positive hope.
amba is so right that parekh mansion is as good as hell infact hell will be better than this but poor fate brought them there itself with yamraj like baa ( sorry yamraj for such a derogatory comparision)
despite all the helplessness his mind never wanders in taking help from HP or ishani this quality of his never taking advantage of anything was really so awesome
but apart from all and every problem he never fails to show his most charming smile when she calls up but sometimes i use to wonder hoe come ishani despite being his best friend never noticed the pain in his eyes and the smile.
gauri is back and here she is happy for the freedom she got not for the marriage because she still loves pranav and she is holding herself responsible for being coward
i sometime feel she might know the hidden chemistry of ishveer but in the show she was nothing more than a abla nari
ishani has the support of her cousin who in present times are not that good apart from sharman
but this good man romil is different now because she has divorced him
i must say girl you have done some good amount of planning in taking the story in a completely different way.
these idiots fighting in front of her like tom and jerry i do hope gauri infuse somesense in present time ishani she is hell bent in going against her heart
this boy stuck up in worst situation but still manages to laugha nd when he makes fun of his most dreaded day her marriage
so are we getting a ghar jamai in present time as well.
i so like that scene in serial because it showed a pool emotion in ranveer's eyes when ishani got insulted infront of everyone
i just wish he should take his revenge and in that scene the pain in his eyes on her insult was overwhelming
baa this old hag never leaves a chance to insult everyone no matter what
and her confession of love poor guy for few minutes his heart was literally not beating at all
i was wondering how you are able to infuse such an intense emotions even in simple scene the way he came just to make her smile and all he did for that even if it means hurting himself and the last line that was the best
rain lashing even harder and poor guy is suffering all the things which was in her share
this twist was awesome i know i have told you before also but the way you bring a new perspective to those scenes is really amazing i love that fact about you.
this chapter was good but the last part was awesome I am impressed with that and now i just can't wait to see the situation which cause so much difference in between them.
thnx for pm waiting for next
sorry again
HAPPY NEW YEAR DEAR MAY ALL YOUR WISHES COME TRUE THIS YEAR AND I GET TO READ MORE WORK FROM YOU

Finally, I've returned. :D Ah, it's alright, girl. I understand real life is way more important. :)

And, no. This wasn't lame at all!
Coming to the review, yes, they are about to lose everything and it's of course going to be like it was in the show but you'll see how. :D Amba was wise in the show before arrogance and money became her better pals.

Ishani... well, it's how she is. The girl couldn't see (in the show) that he was suffering so bad during the Chirag phase. So this is still mild.

Anyone will be happier out of Baa's clutches, Gauri is truly no exception. She just happened to lost her love. Though you'll know more about her story in the upcoming chapters too. And actually, you'll know about the relationships between the cousins and Ishani in the present day chapters. And, yes, I do have some things planned but please don't think too much about them because I'm right now going through a bit of weirdness when it comes to this story. :( Need to focus on it, though. Sighs.

For the present day situation, you'll have to wait for those chapters only. ;) Not very much, though.

Oh, I've never seen this episode in the show. Just collecting the episodes from LM only so that I can help with these chapters. The pre-leap ones, atleast.

That confession part was my most favorite to write but didn't like how his little hope shattered so quickly. :( Thank you so much. And the last person does mean something more than just what he's going through today. About what went wrong between them, someone else will be just as curious as you. xD

I will be updating the chapter in a while.

Happy New Year again. 😛

Originally posted by: tnzila

Hi,Elvish!
How are you doing??
not update till, hope every thing ok with you.

Sana! I'm good. How are you? I'm sorry. I've been little busy and I was supposed to be updating the chapter today, but have been feeling little out place. Can't focus on anything. I hope I'll post the chapter by tomorrow. :)

Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

Sana! I'm good. How are you? I'm sorry. I've been little busy and I was supposed to be updating the chapter today, but have been feeling little out place. Can't focus on anything. I hope I'll post the chapter by tomorrow. :)

I'm doing well dear. Arey, don't be feel sorry. it's ok, when you will get time and feel easy then update it.

Originally posted by: Alisha306

Hi Elvish!!!

Great episode. You are a wonderful writer.

Ishveer are so romantic. They already love each other but just don't understand it. I like their pillow fight and terrace scene.

Update soon.

Waiting for the next.

😊😊😊

Thank you, Alisha. :) I'm sorry for being so late. :( :(

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I will be updating the next chapter soon. :)

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Nope you are not at all doing drama dear I am really sorry for my this sudden disappearance but give me a chance to explain.
This year has been amazing for me and thank you for making this journey on the forum memorable and giving me such a good friend and a writer in you. And I wish this year brings you happiness success and love

You know I have a record people cannot remain angry with me for long I hope it doesn't break
Please please please sorry I am holding ears and will do sit ups also if you want.

Hahaha. 😛 😛 Thank God my reaction my reaction wasn't dramatic. xD

It's okay. I'm sorry for overreacting too. But it has a reason, so. 🤔

Feelings are mutual. 🤗🤗🤗🤗

And you can proudly say your record isn't broken at all. 😛 😛

Originally posted by: anaptiras

Hello Elvish!!!

Very interesting episode. Your description of Ishveer friendship is breathtaking.

The rain scene is so romantic.

Waiting for the next episode.

Thank you so much, mate! ❤️ I'm glad to know you liked the chapter. :) I will be updating it soon. Apologies for the delay in reply.

Originally posted by: tnzila

I'm doing well dear. Arey, don't be feel sorry. it's ok, when you will get time and feel easy then update it.

I'm going to update it in a while. I must be the worst promise-breaker, I swear.