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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

take your time dear 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: sakshi5050

Hi Dear
Nice work
so finally Ishani and Milan didn't have a wedding night
you finished at a place where I need to know what happened
what was that phone call? Hope you will reveal it soon
keep updating 😉😉😉


Hi Sakshi!

Thanks dear! I am glad that you liked my work! Yup, Ishani and Milan didn't have their wedding night. That phone call thing will be soon revealed dear. Hmm I will keep updating and thanks again dear.

Take Care

With love and regards
Diya


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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Sahil88

Oh story is soo interesting
U end it on a suspense i like it
Update soon


Hi Hafsa!

Thanks dear! I had to end it in suspense and I am glad that you liked it 😳 I will update soon.

Take Care

With love and regards
Diya
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Mayashelly

Hy dr... The chapter ia amzing... Niz start... What's that phn call. Hope suspense reveals soon. Waiting for your next dr... Keep smiling... 😆


HI dear!

Thanks dear for liking my chapter! The phone call will be soon revealed. I will soon update the next chapter dear. You too keep smiling.

Take Care

With love and regards
Diya
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: shaktiluvradz

Hey dear it's a different story. ..good try hope ishveer should meet soon


Hi dear!

I am glad that you found my story a different one and yeah, soon Ishveer will meet. Thanks again!

Take Care

With love and regards
Diya
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Chapter 2


Milan woke up as the sun rays fell on his face. He opened his eyes with a disturbed look. When he saw around, he didn't find Ishani next to him. He then saw his room which was still decorated with flowers.


Milan(with irritated face) - Yesterday that phone call disturbed my mood!


*Flashback*

Milan picked up his phone call.

Milan(with an angry tone) - What?! Why the hell are you calling me at this time?!


Rahul - Sir, woh, Mr.Mehra is standing out of your company with some construction builders. He trying to fall your building.


Milan(shocked hearing his assistance words) - What!


Rahul - Yes Sir.


Milan - Ok wait, I am coming there and stop them! Don't let anyone touch my building.


Milan turned around and saw Ishani who was sitting on the bed like dulhan and looking at him.

Milan - Ishani, woh, I have to go...I have work.


Ishani - At this time? It's too late.


Milan - I know but I have to go, it's an emergency in my office. So I have to go.


Ishani - Ok, but change, you are in your sherwani.


Milan - Ok, let me.


Milan went to his bathroom to change into casual white t-shirt and his black pants. After few minutes he came out.


Milan - Ok, I am leaving.


Ishani(in a sleepy tone) - Ok Milan, come fast.


Milan - Ok.


He left.


Ishani - I think so today is not our night.

Milan & Blocks

Milan reached outside his office where his assistance, Rahul, Mr.Mehra, and the construction builders were standing outside with a construction truck. He stepped out of the car and went to them.


Mr.Mehra - Oh, Look the owner of this fail business is here! Welcome sir! Welcome!


Milan(with irked face) - What are you doing here at this time?


Mr.Mehra - I am here for my money. You have to give me 90,000. Remember the deal? Let me tell you, the deal was that if this company faces financial crisis then this property is mine and your office will fall. But also I said that if you don't want me to do this then you have to pay me 90,000 under 10 days and today is the 21st day. Still you didn't give me money. Your employees are quitting jobs because your company got nothing now and your employees have family.


Milan - Please, one more day! Please!


Mr.Mehra - How many days do you want more! You already had 11 days but didn't do anything. I am not giving another day! Your office is falling today, infront of your eyes!


Milan - Sir, please! I will give you money in 2 days! I promise! Your money will be infront of you in 2 days.


Mr.Mehra - I don't trust you!


Milan - Sir, please! I will give you your money.


Mr.Mehra(in thoughts) - Oh my god! Let me give another chance to him. Ifhe didn't give me my money, without informing him, I will break his building.


Mr.Mehra - Ok, let me give you 2 days. If you didn't give me my money then...


Milan - Ok sir, I promise, I will give you your money.


Mr.Mehra, without saying anything signaled the construction builders to leave. After that, he gave an irked look to Milan and left.


Milan(in thoughts) - I have to finish this Mehra's game! He still don't know who I am, the real me. He should know who I am before messing up with me!


Milan(seeing Rahul) - You go and even I am leaving.


Rahul gave a head shake and left to his car. After that, even Milan left to his car with an angry face. In the car, he opened a beer bottle and started gulping it.


Milan(with anger on his face) - Today was my suhaagrat! I thought of doing many things with Ishani but this Mehra came on my way! I will never forgive him for this! F**king Idiot! Ishani will be sleeping by now because it's almost 2 and I still want to have fun. I thought I will get Ishani today and after this she will agree on what I say...but everything got messed up! But, no, I will still have fun! I will go to red light area like everytime! I can now have s-


Suddenly, his phone beeped.


Milan - Who is calling me now?!


Milan took out his phone from his pocket and saw the display, it was Ruby. Milan got happy seeing that Ruby is calling him.


Milan(having a lusty smile) - Aah...Ruby! How can I forget that I still have her. So, no need to go to red light area!


Milan(picking up the call) - Hi Ruby!


Ruby - Hi meri jaan! I missing you badly!


Milan - Accha, let me come there.


Ruby - Right now?


Milan - Yes!


Ruby - Come fast jaan, I am waiting!


Milan - Bas, abhi aaya!


Ruby hung up the call and so did Milan. Milan with a smile started driving to Ruby's house. After few minutes of driving, Milan reached her house and was standing outside her house. He ranged the doorbell where after few seconds, Ruby opened the door with a smile. Milan got amused to see Ruby in short pink and black sleeveless nighty.


Ruby(giving a naughty wink) - So finally you are here!


Milan(giving a smirk) - How I cannot come here when you call me.

Ruby - Oh really!


Milan - You will not call me in now?


Ruby - Haan..Haan. Why not?


Milan smiled and stepped in and locked the main door. Milan then carried Ruby in his arms and took her to her bedroom and locked the door.


*Flashback ends*


Edited by luvishveer - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Hey luvishveer!!!
I like ur concept of story..
I have read ur both cchapters
& it's really nice...
Do pm me next time When u update...
Edited by Lovemyself... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Hy da. Gud epi. Waiting for next... Keep smiling...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Hii diya..
Nice episode..so thia was the call...milan will remain millan only..:-(
Just cheating ishani..
Waiting for next..update soon..
Take care and kEEp smiling:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Hi Diya
nice updated dear
The concept is making the story interesting

Milan sounds to be a dangerous guy both in business and in Ishani's matter too
Nice that Ishani and Milan wedding night didn't happen
thanks for Mr. Mehra
waiting for next
update soon

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