Sharada!!! This was so good, please would want you to continue.
I want to see how Raghav woo's back Pallavi and her trust. Will Pallavi give in after seeing Raghav truly repent?? I want to read it all.
Great Job on this story idea Sharada❤️
Loved it !
Would love it to continue! I want to see how he wins her back :)
Hmm I don't think I can write winning over completely but I will write to the point where Pallavi knows the truth. Because the trust of Pallavi has been broken and I can't trivialize that pain and make P forgive R in 2 updates.
This is so good Sharda. Waiting for next update.
This is how I want this track to go. Raghav coming clean to Pallavi and Pallavi choosing her self respect over her love.
Since Kolhapur mein rehkar Pallavi ka Kolhapur Ghar dikhane ka budget nahi hai Sikchand ke paas - unnki taraf se toh yeh milne se raha.
Thanks Sharada for writing this. I'm glad you're portraying our Pallavi as a human instead of MKM who would gladly be okay with everything without any breakdown. Please do continue for the next parts as well❤️
Well that was a heartbreaking start. Hope they get some happier times in the next few parts. Waiting for the next chapter.
I wish Pallavi confronts him , gives silent treatment and detaches herself from Raghav . Poor girl really doesn’t deserve to get emotionally cheated on like this .
Loved your take on current track 👍🏼 do tag me in further updates 😊.
Part 2 :-
Farhad who was just leaving heard the heartbreaking cry of his beloved bhabhi. Immediately Farhad rushed inside the house and saw Pallavi sprawled on the floor crying her heart out.
Farhad:- Bhabhi what happened. Sambhalo apne aap ko. Do you want me to call Anna?
Pallavi was just vigorously shaking her head and was crying profusely. Farhad just couldn’t do anything and held Pallavi until he saw that she had passed out in his embrace. Farhad panicked and immediately kept Pallavi on the sofa nearby and dialed Anna’s phone number
Farhad: - Anna, come quickly to Kolhapur. Bhabhi came to her brother’s place and just when I was leaving the house, I heard bhabhi cry really badly and now after crying very hard bhabhi has fallen unconscious. I am scared. You come here to Kolhapur quickly please.
Raghav was so distressed hearing the conversation from Farhad. He expected that Pallavi would go to Deshmukh house and after a day or two he would go and talk to her and apologize to her and get her back to his home. But to know that she went to Kolhapur to her brother’s place, Raghav realised that Pallavi was hurt way more than she let out in front of him. He was feeling guilty earlier too but now his guilt just increased manifold. He knew that he has to give space to Pallavi to forgive him and he did not want to impose himself on her. The best way to do that is to make Farhad stay with Pallavi in Kolhapur. So Raghav decided to come clean with Farhad
Raghav:- Farhad listen to me - I want you to stay with Pallavi till Pallavi is normal. Please get a doctor and get some treatment for her. I can’t come visit Pallavi because Pallavi is hurt because of my stupidity.
And Raghav told Farhad the entire episode with Esha. Farhad was shocked to know that his brother could do such a stupid thing and hurt his bhabhi - one he loves so much. But he realized that both Raghav and Pallavi are suffering and like Raghav mentioned it is better if he stays here to take care of Pallavi. After a good dose of how could Raghav be this stupid, Farhad cut the call and went to take care of Pallavi.
The next day, Pallavi was starting to feel better. The crying had lessened her heart and she was trying to come to terms with what happened. Pallavi saw Farhad sleeping on the couch and she was surprised to see him in her house.
Pallavi:- Farhad, you did not go back to Hyderabad. I am fine now. You can leave. I can take care of myself.
Farhad:- Bhabhi, I always called you bhabhi and I just don’t call you just like that, I mean it with all my heart. And now that I know that my bhabhi needs me more how can I leave you and go back to Hyderabad. I got to know everything that happened and the reason for your heartbreak.
Pallavi was shocked to see that Raghav disclosed everything to Farhad but then she always knew the close bond these two shared. They were really brothers in every sense of the word. Pallavi wanted a neutral opinion and Farhad was as neutral as they could come so she decided to talk to him regarding her feelings
Pallavi:- Farhad, do you think I am wrong in feeling angry or coming here? How could Raghav spend the night with Esha? Isn’t that cheating? Tell me frankly Farhad what do you think?
Farhad:- Bhabhi I don’t think you are wrong in your stance. Even Anna doesn’t think you are wrong. That is why he has allowed you to go - He knows that he has erred big time. As far as I know Anna the only thing he ever fears is abandonment and now that he loves you so deeply which you also know, the fact that he allowed you to leave him shows how much he is regretting his actions. That being said, I am not telling you to forgive him. You are right in your stance so I am here with you till your brother and sister-in-law come back or you yourself want to come back to Hyderabad.
Pallavi:- Thank you Farhad for being with me. It means a lot to me.
Farhad:- Bhabhi since the first days of your fights with Anna, I always wanted you to be in Anna’s life and I always prayed to Allah that you two end up together. It is because you too are meant to be with each other. And I am so happy to see that both of you love each other so deeply. Sometimes I wish I could get love as deep as you both share with your sister Amrutha. That being said Bhabhi, I want you to come back to Anna - not because you feel pity for him or you feel that is the right thing to do for whatever be the reasons. I want you to come back to Anna because you want to and because you know that your heart beats only when it is entwined with Anna’s. It is going to take time to get to that part so I am going to stay here till then.
Pallavi felt so light-hearted after talking to Farhad. It was like she was making sense of the things that were happening and she knew that she needed time to get closure to this chapter before she can come back to Raghav.
Here in RR Mansion, Amma was getting restless to know that Pallavi was not in the deshmukh house. She thought that Pallavi went to the Deshmukh house but when she found that Pallavi was not there she was really surprised. She decided to confront Raghav. Raghav did not have any choice other than to tell Amma everything that happened with Esha in Warangal. Amma was disappointed that Raghav could do a stupid thing like this but she understood that now Raghav needs her support.
Amma:- Raghav I know you are feeling bad but I want you to introspect as to where you went wrong. Pallavi was a blessing to you in your life - Even though the marriage was not something anyone expected, Pallavi has truly been your soul-mate and you ended up screwing it so bad. How could you have done something like this?
Raghav:- I know Amma, I am terribly sorry for hurting Pallavi and breaking her trust. I am not going to force her to forgive me but I will do everything within my limit to make her believe me once more. I have already clarified to Esha that I am not interested in anything with her and I don’t want her to contact me ever.
Amma:- What did Esha say?
Raghav:- She did not take it well - she wants me in her life back. But I am not going to do anything like that. I am Pallavi’s husband and will remain so all my life. That’s all.
Amma:- Raghav if my guess is true I think Esha will once again come to meet you in a day or two. Mark my words. Let’s see what she says when she does come back again.
To be continued. The next part would be the last part.
Originally posted by: Couch.Potato
I wish Pallavi confronts him , gives silent treatment and detaches herself from Raghav . Poor girl really doesn’t deserve to get emotionally cheated on like this .
Loved your take on current track 👍🏼 do tag me in further updates 😊.
Updated the second part - check it out
You know Farhad's advice
"That being said Bhabhi, I want you to come back to Anna - not because you feel pity for him or you feel that is the right thing to do for whatever be the reasons. I want you to come back to Anna because you want to and because you know that your heart beats only when it is entwined with Anna’s. It is going to take time to get to that part so I am going to stay here till then. "
is probably some of the most supportive advice a friend can give their friend in these kinds of situations.
I gave my friend similar advice before when she was in a situation of betrayal. I asked her if her love for her spouse was greater than the hurt he caused her. If their love was worth preserving or not. Whether she thought life without him would be better than life with him, no matter how much he had hurt her.
Sometimes even the people that hurt us the most are the ones we go back to the most because being without them is worse than just working through the pain they caused.
So beautiful. People like Farhad and Amma are needed to guide them to be together.
I really hope both of them help Raghvi handle the crises
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