Originally posted by: ReemShah
I lovee it--you showed Pallavi's conflicting thoughts and Raghav's determination-exciteed to read the next part
Thanks Reem🤗
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Originally posted by: Isamreen
Addy you chupi rustom 🙂
Kitna accha likha hai, I liked that you had used Farhad and his sis....
The dialogues and the character are on point...👍🏼
Farhad hinting about amma's doubt was smart...
Lovely writing 😊
Chupi rustom🤣
Its good to hear that you liked it;😳
Originally posted by: Isamreen
The next one is amazing...
Keerthi ko jaldi office jana hai ya sunny se milne?
The moment between Raghavi was so intense and the song was just ❤️...
Whats there in Pallavi's mind?
Man I love cliffhanger
Addy your so creative toh ab tak kyun nahi likha....
I hope Farhad ki koi acchi girlfriend mile,show ki sari girls toh useless hain.....
Pata Nhi...Maine socha nhi🤪
Hayee ...your sweet words!😳
Tysm🤗....100 epi hone ka wait kar rhi thi🤣isliye nhi likha😆
Yes...they all are useless!🤣
Continued...
Part-3
Cherishing Moments!
Raghav:O Saree ka Dukaan! Kidhar kho gya tum?? Apne fantasy land se bahar aao...
He snapped his finger.
Pallavi: Main yahin he hun...
She rudely said and behaved as if she knew when he came.
Raghav: Ha toh phir paglo ki tarah kyu muskura rha tha? Ha batao zara???..
Pallavi: Tumne mujhe pagal kaha...!
She angrily said.
Raghav: Ha toh pagal ko pagal nhi bolega toh aur kya bolu??
Pallavi with irritating tone. "Accha...Main pagal to tum Sanki.."
"Nhi vo toh tumhara Baba hai..." He said it in one breathe. Then was about to laugh on what he said,he stopped. Upon Seeing Pallavi staring him with folded arms.
Raghav:oh sorry!...flow flow mein nikal gya..
Vaise bhi kal toh tum tumare pagal khane...mera matlab apne ghar vapas ja rha h..Hamesha ke liye(in low tone)...Tum toh khush hogi na...isliya itna smile kar rha tha.."
Pallavi:Hamesha ke liye... In same tone.
She repeated his words.
Raghav's phone Rings
Raghav: Ha bol Farhad...
Farhad:Anna...kahan hai aap? Syra aur Ammi aapka wait kar rhi hai...
Raghav: Ha ...main bas thodi der mein aa rha hai...teri bhabhi ko thoda aur waqt lagega ka sajne sawarne mein...
Farhad: ji Anna... He chuckled.
Then he cuts the call.
Pallavi:You...Raghav...!
Raghav: What!...tum toh aisa dekh rha h jaise kha jaayega...jao ...jake jaldi ready ho..
She nodded. As she didn't want to argue at this time because of less time.
After Half n hour
"Ha...Farhad main bas 5 min mein nikal rha h"
He walked out from his room , adjusting his wrist watch from his one hand while attending call.
He was looking so handsome in golden shalwar and white kurta.
Raghav: Saree ka Dukaan...ready hua ki nhi? Hamein nikah mein aaj he jana h agle saal nhi..
No answer
Tum toh aisa tayyar ho rha h jaise aaj tumhara Nikah h ...aur kitna time...
Raghav paused and got mesmerized seeing Pallavi. He stared at her without blinking.
Pallavi: offo Raghav!...pichle janam mein loudspeaker the kya ?? Tumhe kya pata ladkiyon ko kitna kaam hota hai ...cheeze choose krna aur unpe hazaar baar sochna ki theek lag rha h ki nhi...
Pallavi took a pause.
Raghav got astonished upon seeing her was lost in her beauty. She was looking absolutely stunning in white and golden combo. Her gharara with checks of golden zari on white base. Her short (mid thigh length) kameez with golden tinted silhouette of flowers. The three golden button in between and her dupatta, draped from on one side, with banarsi touch. Her small maang tika and simple plain golden earrings.
Pallavi: Raghav....ab tumhe der nhi ho rhi??
Raghav came back to senses.
"Amma aur Kirti ready ho gye?" He asked
Amma and kirti together: Ha...hum ready hain...
Raghav:hmm...chalo...bhut late ho gya hai..
Pallavi:Oh..
Raghav:Ab kya hua Saree ka Dukaan...
Pallavi:vo main jhoomar lagana bhool gyi.. main bas abhi aati hun...
She immediately goes to her room.
Raghav: Ek kaam kariye Amma aap dono driver ke saath jaiye..Main Pallavi ko leke aata hun...
Amma and Kirti left.
Raghav goes to her room.
Raghav: Tumne itne kuch pehna toh hai ...ab chhodo isko...aur chalo...Farhad dus baar call kr chuka hai...
Pallavi: Ab tumne itne pyaar se diya tha toh kaise na pehenti...bs ho gya ...2 min
She said while adjusting her jhoomar infront of mirror.
Raghav hold her hand and adjusted it by himself.
The way he was staring her,this gaze was different. As if he was seeing her last time. He wanted to hold her back but he can't.He wanted to give her happiness back at the cost of his own happiness. He will be left alone like before.
He puts control on his emotions!
Raghav: Ab mirror mein ghoorta he rahega ...ya chalega bhi...main car mein wait kr rha hun...jaldi aao...
He left.
Pallavi: Ajeeb insaan hai...ghoor khud rha tha aur mujhe keh rha ...ab itna ghoor he rha tha toh kam se kaam tareef he kardeta ...nhi voh kaha hoga iss Ghamandi Rao se...pata nhi main issko poori life jhelungi... Pheww....
On the way to the venue (In Car)
Pallavi twirling her mangalsutra from her hand. Thinking on what circumstances they married to each other. From day one she wanted to go away from him,now when the time has finally arrived why she is hesistating ?
To be continued...
Precap: Rose ( aage guess karo)
Thank you 😊 for taking your precious time out for reading it! Please leave your comments below. And let me know how you feel about this part!
"No...I don't believe in soulmates but
teri nazron ne dil ka kiya jo hashar asar ye hua ...ab in mein he doob ke ho jaaon paar yhi hai dua aa Ankhon mein teri ajab se ajab se aadayein hai"
Yes...This reel song running whole time in my mind when i am writing this...lol🤣
Originally posted by: xxStrangerxx
Continued...
Part-3
Cherishing Moments!
Raghav:O Saree ka Dukaan! Kidhar kho gya tum?? Apne fantasy land se bahar aao...
He snapped his finger.
Pallavi: Main yahin he hun...
She rudely said and behaved as if she knew when he came.
Raghav: Ha toh phir paglo ki tarah kyu muskura rha tha? Ha batao zara???..
Pallavi: Tumne mujhe pagal kaha...!
She angrily said.
Raghav: Ha toh pagal ko pagal nhi bolega toh aur kya bolu??
Pallavi with irritating tone. "Accha...Main pagal to tum Sanki.."
"Nhi vo toh tumhara Baba hai..." He said it in one breathe. Then was about to laugh on what he said,he stopped. Upon Seeing Pallavi staring him with folded arms.
Raghav:oh sorry!...flow flow mein nikal gya..
Vaise bhi kal toh tum tumare pagal khane...mera matlab apne ghar vapas ja rha h..Hamesha ke liye(in low tone)...Tum toh khush hogi na...isliya itna smile kar rha tha.."
Pallavi:Hamesha ke liye... In same tone.
She repeated his words.
Raghav's phone Rings
Raghav: Ha bol Farhad...
Farhad:Anna...kahan hai aap? Syra aur Ammi aapka wait kar rhi hai...
Raghav: Ha ...main bas thodi der mein aa rha hai...teri bhabhi ko thoda aur waqt lagega ka sajne sawarne mein...
Farhad: ji Anna... He chuckled.
Then he cuts the call.
Pallavi:You...Raghav...!
Raghav: What!...tum toh aisa dekh rha h jaise kha jaayega...jao ...jake jaldi ready ho..
She nodded. As she didn't want to argue at this time because of less time.
After Half n hour
"Ha...Farhad main bas 5 min mein nikal rha h"
He walked out from his room , setting his wrist watch from his one hand while attending call.
He was looking so handsome in golden shalwar and white kurta.
Raghav: Saree ka Dukaan...ready hua ki nhi? Hamein nikah mein aaj he jana h agle saal nhi..
No answer
Tum toh aisa tayyar ho rha h jaise aaj tumhara Nikah h ...aur kitna time...
Raghav paused and got mesmerized seeing Pallavi. He stared at her without blinking.
Pallavi: offo Raghav!...pichle janam mein loudspeaker the kya ?? Tumhe kya pata ladkiyon ko kitna kaam hota hai ...cheeze choose krna aur unpe hazaar baar sochna ki theek lag rha h ki nhi...
Pallavi took a pause.
Raghav got astonished upon seeing her was lost in her beauty. She was looking absolutely stunning in white and golden combo. Her gharara with checks of golden zari on white base. Her short (mid thigh length) kameez with golden tinted silhouette of flowers. The three golden button in between and her dupatta, draped from on one side, with banarsi touch. Her small maang tika and simple plain golden earrings.
Pallavi: Raghav....ab tumhe der nhi ho rhi??
Raghav came back to senses.
"Amma aur Kirti ready ho gye?" He asked
Amma and kirti together: Ha...hum ready hain...
Raghav:hmm...chalo...bhut late ho gya hai..
Pallavi:Oh..
Raghav:Ab kya hua Saree ka Dukaan...
Pallavi:vo main jhoomar lagana bhool gyi.. main bas abhi aati hun...
She immediately goes to her room.
Raghav: Ek kaam kariye Amma aap dono driver ke saath jaiye..Main Pallavi ko leke aata hun...
Amma and Kirti left.
Raghav goes to her room.
Raghav: Tumne itne kuch pehna toh hai ...ab chhodo isko...aur chalo...Farhad dus baar call kr chuka hai...
Pallavi: Ab tumne itne pyaar se diya tha toh kaise na pehenti...bs ho gya ...2 min
She said while adjusting her jhoomar infront of mirror.
Raghav hold her hand and adjusted it by himself.
The way he was staring her,this gaze was different. As if he was seeing her last time. He wanted to hold her back but he can't.He wanted to give her happiness back at the cost of his own happiness. He will be left alone like before.
He puts control on his emotions!
Raghav: Ab mirror mein ghoorta he rahega ...ya chalega bhi...main car mein wait kr rha hun...jaldi aao...
He left.
Pallavi: Ajeeb insaan hai...ghoor khud rha tha aur mujhe keh rha ...ab itna ghoor he rha tha toh kam se kaam tareef he kardeta ...nhi voh kaha hoga iss Ghamandi Rao se...pata nhi main issko poori life jhelungi... Pheww....
On the way to the venue (In Car)
Pallavi twirling her mangalsutra from her hand. Thinking on what circumstances they married to each other. From day one she wanted to go away from him,now when the time has finally arrived why she is hesistating ?
To be continued...
Precap: Rose ( aage guess karo)
Thank you 😊 for taking your precious time out for reading it! Please leave your comments below. And let me know how you feel about this part!
"No...I don't believe in soulmates but
teri nazron ne dil ka kiya jo hashar asar ye hua ...ab in mein he doob ke ho jaaon paar yhi hai dua aa Ankhon mein teri ajab se ajab se aadayein hai"
Yes...This reel song running whole time in my mind when i am writing this...lol🤣
Lovely update❤ wait for next chapter
Roses🌷🌷🌷 proposal hai kyaaa?
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