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Posted: 3 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: ReemShah

Not disappointed at all...

This was so sweet...loved the maturity you have given to character

You left the last line incomplete--but main blank fill kar deti hun friends to lovers

They have got so much similarities...and that makes me curious Raghav ko Pallavi ki engagement ke baarein main kab pata chalega?

glad u liked it❤️yes inke character ko maturity nahi dena is itself illogical from story pov so... But ye aapas me kiddish behave bhi karege🙈about last line u hv to wait for conclusion 🤭yes they have so much similarities thts hooked them to each other🤗ab aate hai raghav ko pata kab chalega so i m telling u one thing abtk k dono ss and dono os mene bina jyada soche bina proofread kie jo dil me aaya seedha post so abhi toh mai keh nahi sakti kese pta chlega evn i m curious to know and excited to write the same😜no jutta chappal plzz agr koi grbr hui toh🙏🏻
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Posted: 3 years ago
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ye humko chahiye tha ... safar khubsurat hai manjeel se bhi ❤️... wow bhot mst kavi the maturity and sensible swag you put in both chsr is fabulous... bsing their business background this is what i was exoecting than banter ..👏👏 good job girl carry on now i wanna see ye dosti pyar me kaise aur kab badlegi . update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ImHemangi

ye humko chahiye tha ... safar khubsurat hai manjeel se bhi ❤️... wow bhot mst kavi the maturity and sensible swag you put in both chsr is fabulous... bsing their business background this is what i was exoecting than banter ..👏👏 good job girl carry on now i wanna see ye dosti pyar me kaise aur kab badlegi . update soon

glad u like it😍Dekho jo aapko chahie tha hmko smjh aa gya isilie likh die😜ss we r🤭well likhte time realise nhi kie kya likh rhe h mature lgega ya childish but since u nd reem di bol die thn ok i did justice 🙏🏻update aate rhegi ap bs u hi encourage kro 🤗❤️
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Posted: 3 years ago
#74

Chapter 7

Chatting and meeting

As soon as pallavi entered her house her family gives her a surprise welcome. They reached home before her. When raghav reached his house his friends are already there to shower their happiness. Both are busy with their respective families but still they felt little uneasy or should i say they both are missing each other's company.

They both are sitting in their rooms but sleep is far away from their eyes.

P and r (in mind) jese me jaag raha/rahi kya vo bhi... Call karu kya.... Nahi jyada ho jaega... Abhi abhi toh friends bane hai. Ek kaam karte hai message hi kar deti/deta hu.

Both messaged each other at the same time.

Hi.

Hi.

R-oh tum jaag raha hai. Mereko laga tum so gya rahega. Kahi mera message se miss bad bad ka neend kharab ho jaata toh itna raatme mereko uska bad bad sun ne padta.

P-ha ha ha. Very funny. Me toh jaag hi rahi thi muje laga tum so gye aur kahi meri vajah se ghamndi rao ki neend kharab ho jaati toh vaha bethe bethe ghoor ghoor ke kha jate na tum mujhe.

R-accha mai itna bura dikhta hai tumko toh friendship kayko kia.

P-same question to you too. Meri bad bad se itni hi problem hai toh iss bad bad queen se dosti kyu ki.

R and p together - humne yaha bhi ladna start kar dia...we are impossible... Hahahaha..

R-toh my miss bad bad friend tum abhi abhi award jeetkar aaya hai aur apna dost ko party bhi nahi de raha very bad.

P-oo hello itni badi party me hum saath hi toh the aur award toh tumhe bhi mila hai na chahe uncle ke behalf par hi lia ho toh tum bhi party do na.

R and p together - hum friends bane uska party toh kar hi sakte hai toh what say apne busy schedule se kab time nikale.

P - hmmm abhi toh bhut saari meetings lined up hai....

R-yes and mere bhi dad ka vapus aana delay hua hai so me bhi kal se stores par rahuga jyadatar...

P-oh toh kya kare ese toh hame time milne se raha.

R-ek jagah hai jaha jaane ke liye hum kese bhi time nikal sakte hai.

P-vahi na jaha hum pehli baar mile the..

R-correct...

P-toh bolo kab mile?

R-iss sunday evening...

P-ok done.... Chalo byee good night.

R-good night.

Everything goes well and finally Sunday arrived. But little did they know how destiny will play its game.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#75

Lo iska bhi update done

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kavita99

Lo iska bhi update done

Thank you for the quick update 😁

Nice one but I am more eager for the next since it is Raghvi first date 😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Medha0609

Thank you for the quick update 😁

Nice one but I am more eager for the next since it is Raghvi first date 😍

hehehehe welcome❤️lagta hai last line padhi nahi aapne kya lagta hai kya hoega😜vese mereko bhi nahi pata kyunki mera sb update unplanned rehta hai. Bina soche samjhe jo dil ko accha lage story vesa turn leti hai so dekhte hai apki wish ki raghvi date ka kya future hai🤭
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Posted: 3 years ago
#78

Kahin in-dono ko sath main news reporters na pakar le--woh bawal create kar sakte hain

excited for their first mutual meeting

does Raghav know Pallavi is engaged?


thanks for the tag❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ReemShah

Kahin in-dono ko sath main news reporters na pakar le--woh bawal create kar sakte hain

excited for their first mutual meeting

does Raghav know Pallavi is engaged?


thanks for the tag❤️

are re re news reporters 😜naya angle soch lia aapne honestly mene nahi socha tha😜nahi abhitak toh nahi jaanta ke she is engaged. Soon he ll get to know.let's see kya hota h aage😁
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kavita99

hehehehe welcome❤️lagta hai last line padhi nahi aapne kya lagta hai kya hoega😜vese mereko bhi nahi pata kyunki mera sb update unplanned rehta hai. Bina soche samjhe jo dil ko accha lage story vesa turn leti hai so dekhte hai apki wish ki raghvi date ka kya future hai🤭

Padhi but I choose to hope for the best Kuch accha bhi toh ho skta hai. 😂

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