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Posted: 3 years ago
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This update--was good--should I be expecting some tashaan in the garden or some soft emotional talk?

Mandaar pakka nightclub gaya hoga

there is a string between them which attracts them to each other

good going Kavita

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Posted: 3 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: ReemShah

This update--was good--should I be expecting some tashaan in the garden or some soft emotional talk?

Mandaar pakka nightclub gaya hoga

there is a string between them which attracts them to each other

good going Kavita

thnks ❤️jagra ya emotional talk 😜well for that u hv to wait for next.
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Posted: 3 years ago
#63

Wow Kavs...superb yaar👍🏼🤗I am so glad that you started writing.. it was very engaging. And I really want these award functions and then a salsa dance to happen in the regular story... bahut maza aaya padna mein..keep it up darling👍👍🤩🤩🤩🥰🥰🤩

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ChulbuliRao

Wow Kavs...superb yaar👍🏼🤗I am so glad that you started writing.. it was very engaging. And I really want these award functions and then a salsa dance to happen in the regular story... bahut maza aaya padna mein..keep it up darling👍👍🤩🤩🤩🥰🥰🤩

thank you chota don😜yaa will keep updating 🤗thanks for ur encouragement from start to till now❤️
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Chapter 6

Start of a journey

Unaware about who the girl is ragahv keep walking towards her. Then he saw her face.

R-ohh its you miss bad bad. What are you doing here? Party chorke yha akele bethi ho. All ok.

Pallavi turned around.

P-mr rao. Aap yaha. Aur ye miss bad bad kya hai? Mera naam pallavi hai.

R-sorry vo mai naam bhool jata hai toh.... Aur ye miss bad bad toh vo uss din tum itna bad bad kiya toh mene tumhara naam rakh diya. Tab janta nahi tha na tumhara naam pallavi hai.

P-fir toh aapko bhi jan lena chahie apka naam mene mr ghamandi rakha tha.

R-kya???? Mai aur ghamamdi. Oo hello miss sawant jakar apni eyes test karao.

P-uski koi jaroorat nahi samjhla..

R and P (together) vaise hum ye backani ladai kar kyu rahe hai?

They both Started laughing together

P-sorry about that day mr rao. I think i overreacted.

R-main bhi sorry. Main bhi bahut overreact kar diya tha.

R-but aapne mere sawal ka jawab nahi diya? Aap yaha kya kar rahi hai party chorke?

P-mai bore ho gyi toh socha yaha aakar beth jaau...Par aap yaha kaise?

R-vo mai bhi bore ho gaya tha. Mere dost bhi chale gye toh main bhi ghar hi ja raha tha.

P-oh toh mr ghamandi rao ke dost bhi hai.

R-excuse me.

P-sorry just kidding dont mind.

R-tum hamesha hi esa bad bad karte rehta hai ya aaj koi special occasion hai.

P-what?

R-tumko kya laga mazak sirf tumko karne aata hai.

They both again started laughing.

R-vese congratulations to you again. Itna kam age mai esa award milna. Great miss sawant.

P-congratulations to you too.

R-award mere nanna ko mila hai mai just receive kiya unkae behalf par.

P-i know that baba... Mere taraf se apne dad ko congratulations bolna.

R-ya sure. Ok i ll take leave. Bye.

Pallavi herself dont understand why but she blurted out-ruko.

R-yes miss sawant. Kya hua?.

P-ahh...actually hua toh kuch nahi par aapne bola na aap bore hokar ghar ja rahe aur mai bhi yaha bore hi ho rahi hu toh kyun na saath saath chale.

R(confused) - what do u mean?

P-its nothing just..... Hamari car driver le jaaege aur hum paidal chalte hain.. Mere ghar vale vaise bhi guests ke saath busy hai mai unko message kar deti hoon. Jyada toh nahi par main jaanti hu aapka aur mera ghar ek hi raaste se jaata hai.

R-are you serious?

P-yes i am. Kyu kahi tumhe dar toh nahi lag raha ke mere saath akele jaaoge toh tumhari izzat ko khatra hai.

R-whatttttt.

P-are baba just kidding.

R-we are almost strangers for each other miss sawant then why.....

P-pata nahi usually main esa behave nahi karti hoon bus ek uss din aur ek aaj....... Koi mujhe ese bolte sunega toh sochega ye miss sawant kaise baat kar rahi hai.

R-oh really. Esa toh mera saath bhi hua ek uss din aur ek aaj. Main usually apne kaam se kaam rakhta hain pata nahi mai idhar aaya kyun.

P-lagta hai hum ek jaisa sochte hain.

R-sayad

P and R (together) chalo chalte hain paidal hi ghar.

A/N

Saare raaste dono baate karte karte realise hi nahi kie ki pallavi ka ghar aa gya.

P-thanks mr ghamandi rao.

R-thanks to you too miss bad bad. Aaj tumhara bad bad se mai paka nahi.

P-ha ha ha. Muje bhi ajj vo ghamndi rao nhi dikha.

P and R (together) - so friends?

P and R - ha ha ha...Yes.

R-ok bye. Good night.

P-good night.

She entered in her house.

Their friendship is the start of their journey from friends to.........

Edited by Kavita99 - 2 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Amazing. continue soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: rinku95

Amazing. continue soon

Thanks❤️ Updated both my SS today so next maybe tomorrow or day after tomorrow 🤗
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Posted: 3 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: ReemShah

This update--was good--should I be expecting some tashaan in the garden or some soft emotional talk?

Mandaar pakka nightclub gaya hoga

there is a string between them which attracts them to each other

good going Kavita

updated. Hope disappoint nahi honge ap. 🤗
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Posted: 3 years ago
#69

Dedicated to you two❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kavita99

updated. Hope disappoint nahi honge ap. 🤗

Not disappointed at all...

This was so sweet...loved the maturity you have given to character

You left the last line incomplete--but main blank fill kar deti hun friends to lovers

They have got so much similarities...and that makes me curious Raghav ko Pallavi ki engagement ke baarein main kab pata chalega?

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