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CVS steal this 😂
On a serious note , well written . I would like this to happen . After this I like the idea of her missing him , unable to adjust and live with Deshmukhs anymore and leave for Kolhapur , where he goes to bring her back
Raghav got a panic attack--i hope someone arrives and helps him
I am so proud of Raghav's decision---he has fulfilled his promise
I can't bear the wait for the next update Jyoti so please post it soon
And this part was written so well👍🏼
Well written 👏. You conveyed his emotions and inner turmoil very smoothly. Can't wait to see what's in store for them. Please continue soon ❤️
He let her go and did the right thing. Now waiting for her to come back to her home, to him.
Great start, waiting for more. Update soon 🤗
Yup he did right but deep down he wanted to stop...
Next part will be her Pov as this one was his🤪
Yup i will try to post..but iss bar response acha nahi mil raha😭
Originally posted by: rikara94
Yup he did right but deep down he wanted to stop...
Next part will be her Pov as this one was his🤪
Yup i will try to post..but iss bar response acha nahi mil raha😭
Keep posting dear. Responses will come. Also I think TS should be done on separate threads. Do post your link in EDT and ATs.
Keep posting dear. Responses will come. Also I think TS should be done on separate threads. Do post your link in EDT and ATs.
No no...I made this thread as a series of one or two shots...and named it Eternally Forever...
Whenever i will write, will post in this thread only
I could feel his pain, his hesitation and most of all his love for her.
Beautiful...the emotions have come out really well the way you write.
Loved it.❤️
Double post ho gaya comment 😆
Mujhe laga maine comment nahi kiya after reading
But kiya tha 🤣
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