FF: PALLAVI by Jalebi Jane SEE NOTE PAGE 117 - Page 94

I am new to the forum. Discovered the show thanks to a friend only a short while ago when the show was already wrapped and done. Since then have been stalking this forum, liking long archived threads and reading the excellent fanfiction by so many amazing writers!

Being late in the game, I would have remained the silent stalker, but for this story. Having already read it once in a single sitting, I felt as a reader, I should put down in words how much I loved this story.

Needless to say you are an absolutely amazing writer. I have a suspicion you do this for a living! And if you don't, I am just happy the world of fandom found you. Your style reminds me of all the wholesome comfort-reads I grew up on-- Jane Austen, L.M Alcott, L.M. Montgomery. By the way, your website is such a delight! Visually in design and text font, it is such a treat for the eyes. It has the feel of the book you want to spend a rainy afternoon with, curled up in your favourite lumpy couch.

Then your attention to details in character and storyline is wonderful! Every single character is precious the way you write it. While your story revolves around the primary couple, just like Raghav always remembers to send food/drinks for Krishna, you too treat every single other character, original or from the show, as something more than mere props to further the canon couple's plot.

Then the spaces you create become more and more tangible as your story progresses. Be it the casino, Sagar Lake, Pallavi's shop, Raghav's house, Falaknama Palace (which I have already commented saying that to me it is a tad less ambitious and more liveable version of Golconda Fort), the cafe Koffee Kahani--- that is a whole world that you are creating. Why mind the ending of the show when there is such a vivid world of Raghav and Pallavi where we can get lost in?

And finally, the sizzling sparkling wine of a romance you are concocting here with liberal doses of humour and wicked passion, has left this one reader very very heady indeed! I hope you write more on this couple, this world, or create other worlds with this couple.

And I have started reading another story on your website-- Khushi, which I am loving. But perhaps I will leave my reaction to that story for another day/thread.

Oooooohhhhhh!!!!!! Won't you continue, please?! I remember reading Khushi last year and being extremely impressed with your reading! As a late follower of IPKKND, I could only wonder how it would have felt to read your works as you wrote them!

I followed MHRW in its initial months, and then left it when the drama got to be a bit too much for me, but I recently discovered your fic, and just finished binging on it! Please do continue this beautiful spell you've woven around the two of them!!!!

Hi.liked your story and would like to read further chapters of the same.Could you please help me with that?

I found your story recently and read all parts in one go.You are a great narrator.Please send me link to other chapters

Hi can someone please point me in the direction of the website where I could find more on this story. TIA

Unfortunately, the website is no longer viewable. You can search the internet for Jalebi Jane and find the website link, but it won't work.

JalebiJane left India Forums before I joined. She may be busy with studies. If she ever returns, she might post chapters 36-46 on India Forums, as they didn't contain the "graphic sex scenes" that she predicted.