FF: PALLAVI by Jalebi Jane SEE NOTE PAGE 117 - Page 88

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

That felt was kind of marking territory types.

It annoys my parents and sometimes my husband when my older brother can read and say what's on mind without me opening my mouth and with just a glance. Sometimes it surprises me too 😂

I would probably be more polite but bro can be brash

Yes, what Raghav did was lay claim to Pallavi in a public manner. Very alpha male. Even the way he talks to her in public as if nobody else is present. I'm excited about sharing the next episode with you.

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Posted: 3 years ago

I read the last few chapters now--and I couldn't hold back myself from saying that Pallavi has a deep interest in Raghav's jacket and always forgets to return it back to himsmiley36

As of selling the shop, I didn't like the decision of Aai and Baba-they are literally snatching Pallavi's identity from her. something she has worked so hard on for years after Mandar's death.

Krishna and Pallavi--giving code name to RR-sweetie pie--I wonder what Raghav's reaction will be as soon as he comes to know about who sweetie pie actually is.

I don't remember but in the story you have mentioned that Raghav's men report whatever Pallavi talks and does throughout the day to him--so I would really want Raghav Rao's reaction to sweetie pie and him wondering who that person is.

Amazing updates--I am so excited to know who is the other attacker of the shop.

The story still has a long way to go--concluding Mandar's chapter, going to Mumbai, Amma and Raghav's mending relation and the connection between Mrs.Raje and Pallavi( which Idk why I feel like there is something)

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: ReemShah

I read the last few chapters now--and I couldn't hold back myself from saying that Pallavi has a deep interest in Raghav's jacket and always forgets to return it back to himsmiley36

As of selling the shop, I didn't like the decision of Aai and Baba-they are literally snatching Pallavi's identity from her. something she has worked so hard on for years after Mandar's death.

Krishna and Pallavi--giving code name to RR-sweetie pie--I wonder what Raghav's reaction will be as soon as he comes to know about who sweetie pie actually is.

I don't remember but in the story you have mentioned that Raghav's men report whatever Pallavi talks and does throughout the day to him--so I would really want Raghav Rao's reaction to sweetie pie and him wondering who that person is.

Amazing updates--I am so excited to know who is the other attacker of the shop.

The story still has a long way to go--concluding Mandar's chapter, going to Mumbai, Amma and Raghav's mending relation and the connection between Mrs.Raje and Pallavi( which Idk why I feel like there is something)

The idea of Pallavi collecting Raghav's jackets came from a reader :-)

I love your idea! Of Raghav hearing about Pallavi talking of a Sweetie-Pie and getting a bit jealous.

The story is actually winding down now :-) I resume university in a couple of weeks so I cannot afford to spend too much time on secondary characters which I regret.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Such an amazing update

Ooo Amma met Pallavi - I being greedy but I want to see their interaction soon!

But let’s see if she can identify the man!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Read the updated chapter. So well written. Amazing.

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Posted: 3 years ago

I love the concept of this story. It’s completely new! Can’t wait for the next chapter!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Firstly, apologies for missing the chapters. I did not realise they were on the website. Read all the pending ones in one go. Thank God Harish is okay after saving Pallavi, Mandar's truth is out not just in front of RR and Pallu, but also his parents and Aai is on Pallavi's side for now. Selling the shop? Aah! That's not fair to Pallavi who has taken care of it to break even and hopes to take it further, but his logic does make sense ~ he wishes to pay back the inheritance. Filing charges against Mandar is a great option, but yes, the entire family will have to bear the brunt and that's a moral dilemma. So happy she met Amma, and Amma is retaining character by refusing to erase the past so easily. I wonder who the people are who wished to harm Pallavi though, coz she did not seem to have any visible enemies?! Wow! This story is getting intense and I'm loving the pace. Please do continue, and best of luck on uni! 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: JalebiJane

The idea of Pallavi collecting Raghav's jackets came from a reader :-)

I love your idea! Of Raghav hearing about Pallavi talking of a Sweetie-Pie and getting a bit jealous.

The story is actually winding down now :-) I resume university in a couple of weeks so I cannot afford to spend too much time on secondary characters which I regret.

That's such a wonderful idea--I could definitely imagine the itv's Raghav's reaction upon knowing this fact that Pallavi has got a lot of his jackets in her closet.

Write whenever you can- and don't regret it because it is not your fault that you are unable to get time-- it gets hectic- too much pressure and assignments...so rest assured....we all love what you are writing...and keep writing❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
which website?? can you share the link?😢😢😢
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Binaur

which website?? can you share the link?😢😢😢

It is in my signature below.

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