FF: PALLAVI by Jalebi Jane SEE NOTE PAGE 117 - Page 87

I forgot to write from the last chapter that I’m happy Gorilla is fine

Oo loved friends catching up, sweetie pie 😂😂

Even I wonder what Pallavi will do now

Can’t wait to read more!!

Originally posted by: JalebiJane

Why don't you write a tale? Your comments show me that you are articulate and understand story structure. You may discover as I did nine years ago that writing the story you want to read is doubly-entertaining :-) India Forums is such a supportive space for new writers.

Thanks for the suggestion :) But I had tried some years back. I kept staring at the letter 'I' for 30 mins & figured that I can't write even if my life depended on it 🤣. I think I can think of concepts fine but writing a whole screenplay wouldn't be possible for me🙈.

Wonderful update as always. Looking forward to the reaction to the nickname. Imagine the emotins 🤣at being called sweet-pie in front of Gorilla or Farhad.

Things are progressively smoothly for the leads, can we expect this to continue?

Episode 45

I kinda like the deceptive politeness in front of RR fam. They kept their polite distance. Until the woman wants and conveys it clearly keeping the distance in public shows maturity

I hope his Amma does eventually understand and make peace with past

Loved the pallu and sweet gorilla interaction

Please have a cute heroine for my gorilla 💕 if possible

Stay safe 😘

Originally posted by: chat_3

Wonderful update as always. Looking forward to the reaction to the nickname. Imagine the emotins 🤣at being called sweet-pie in front of Gorilla or Farhad.

Things are progressively smoothly for the leads, can we expect this to continue?

That's a good observation, Sister.

My pleasure in writing comes from showing how a couple interact and how they bridge each others shortcomings. I like painting portraits of amazing couples. I'm not very good at throwing obstacles at them---and when I do, I remove them quickly. So yes, things will go smoothly for them except for one significant bump near the end. For the most part I want to depict how beautiful they are together :-) That is why I write.

Did you complete the whole story and updating it daily?? Or are you writing episodes after each updates?

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

Episode 45

I kinda like the deceptive politeness in front of RR fam. They kept their polite distance. Until the woman wants and conveys it clearly keeping the distance in public shows maturity

I hope his Amma does eventually understand and make peace with past

Loved the pallu and sweet gorilla interaction

Please have a cute heroine for my gorilla 💕 if possible

Stay safe 😘

Thank you for noting that---however the way Raghav treated her in front of Baba was perhaps wrong from this perspective. Pallavi will have something to say about this. Stay tuned :-)

Originally posted by: JalebiJane

Thank you for noting that---however the way Raghav treated her in front of Baba was perhaps wrong from this perspective. Pallavi will have something to say about this. Stay tuned :-)

That felt was kind of marking territory types.

It annoys my parents and sometimes my husband when my older brother can read and say what's on mind without me opening my mouth and with just a glance. Sometimes it surprises me too 😂

I would probably be more polite but bro can be brash

Originally posted by: Amnnaaaa

Did you complete the whole story and updating it daily?? Or are you writing episodes after each updates?

I write an episode and immediately post. And if I'm unhappy with a plot decision or regret the quality for whatever reason, I live with it. For me the thing is to move forward a bit in the story each day.

Edited: Before I begin a story I do outline it. The outline usually gets abandoned early because I follow where the characters take me. In this tale everything has changed however the ending I originally outlined is still somehow going to be happen. Fingers crossed.