Jan 12th - Written update

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guyz..dis 1 iz shortt as itz mi 1st tym..buh i hope it gifs yuh a clue of wat happened..the stori iz abut a family..dat has 2 brothers..a son iz born to the younger brother..de elder brother gets worried as their 'nanaji' had made a will which said that all his property would be divided in both de brothers sons in half..but as the younger brother din haf a son and had 2 daughters, the property would all go to the elder brother's son..so de elder brother gets greedy for all dis wealth ..tells his wife all abut de will nd how dey would lose abut 2 crores worth property if dey dun haf a son..as a result..de wife tells her husband abut dis 'tantrik baba' she had heard abut which could so anythingg..then both decide to go and meet up with the 'tantrik baba'..de tantrik baba tells dem to sacrifice a child who is less then n yr old on de next 'amawas ki raat' if he wanted a son..de younger brother says okie 2 him..

alott of tym passes by buh de yunger bro cudn't find a child less den n yr old..on de dai of 'amavas'..he sees his elder bro's son playingg in front of him..nd plans to take his son as de child he would sacrifice soon..alongg wid his wife he plans how we would take de kid as dere waz a party at his bro's house as it waz de dai of lodi..evrythingg is fine as de partyy untill dis strange ladyy cums nd picks upp de elder bro's son frm his carraige(evry1 waz distracted at de partyy 2 c de ladi take away de kid..part of dere plan waz 2 keep dem distracted sum how)..dere mother-in-law cumz ndd starts yellin abut how dere son wazn't dere nd went missingg..all of dem get worried nd de younger bro along wid his wife pretends to be worried nd tell his elder bro to cum along wid him nd try 2 find his son..de elder bro goz 2 de police station nd tells de police abut his missingg son..next scene..de younger bro nd his wife r in front of dis jungle (KANT jungle..were dey had met de baba)..

dere dey meet up wid de strange lady..all dis was de part of dere plan 2 get his elder bro's son..dey take de kid frm de lady..pay her nd go 2 were de baba was..dere de baba starts preparin for de sacrifice..while de kids mom iz prayingg 2 Guru Nanak ji..while de younger bro gets ready 2 kill de kid..all of a sudden..police sirens cum outta no were nd a voice tells dem 2 drop dere weapon nd not 2 touch de kid..de tantrik baba nd de elder couple get scared nd run into de trees..de kid iz cryingg rele loud..frm nowere cumz dis person dressed in white choga ..he has long hair..nd a white mist aroundd him..de younger bro's wife is watchingg all dis wonderingg who da person waz..dis baba person cumz nd touches de kid on de head..pats him..while de kid's mom iz banging her head on de floor pleadingg nd prayingg 2 wahe guru to save her son..her mother-in-law n husband cum nd c her fainted..a voice in de bakgroundd..itz guru nanak ji) tells de mom of de kid(younger bro's wife) dat her son is in de KANT jungle and dat he is safe nd dat she can go nd get him..she wakes up nd tells her husband (elder bro) dat dere kid is in de jungle..dey all go nd c de kid exactly were wahe guru had told her it wud b..de elder bro nd his wife r rele happi..de elder bro lukz all aroundd nd sees dis big knife nd all de 'tatrik stuff'..

next scene is in de police station..dere de elder bro nd her wife r tryin 2 tell de police dat dey din want de police 2 find who did all dis..de younger bro pretends 2 b veri angry nd tells his elder bro dat dey should atleast find out who did all dis nd dat person should be punished..buh de elder's bros wife tells him dat de 'kanoon' won't gif him de punishment..god will as he is watchingg evrythin..

as a result if all dis..de elder bro's son gets teribly sick nd has a high fever...no matta wat dey tried buh de kid's fever wudn't go down..de wife decides 2 go to gurudwara nd prays 2 wahe guru..she begs him for her son's lyf..suddenly..behind dem..cumz de same man..who had cum in de jungle 2 protect de younger couple's son..he tells de couple dat he has a medecine dat wud help his son get better...he takes dem 2 dis place..den gifs dem de medecine..de couple thnk him..after takingg de medecin dere son becums alritee nd iz all fit nd finee

on de otha handd..de younger bro's daughter gets rele sick..his wife gets rele worried nd scared..de youngerr bro decides 2 take dere daughter 2 de hospital..de wife realizes watevr things dey had done 2 dere younger bro's kid nd remembers how de elder bros wife tells dem dat de person who did all dat wud get punished frm god..she tells her husband dat dey shud go to her nd tell her de truth..de husband gets all mad nd tells her dat dey wud get all in trouble nd lose watevr dey have rite now nd also mayb end up in jail..de wife tells him dat she duzn't care nd dat her daughter matters de most at dis tym..so she takes her daughter alongg wid her nd goz 2 de younger bro's wife

at dere house..de younger bro's wife gets all worried at de site of her sister-in-law's daughter..de elder bro's wife pleads wid her for her daughter's lyf..de younger bro's wife remembers de medecine dey had gotten frm de man wen her son waz rele sick. so she gifs her de same medecine..de elder bro's wife thnx her nd goz bak 2 her house..

at de younger bros house..dere daughter's gets further sick bi eatin de medecine..nd wen de elder bro's wife tells her dat de medecine waz frm de younger bro's wife ..her husband(de yunger bro) gets all mad nd blames his younger bro nd his wife for her daughters worsened health..dey decide 2 go over de other couple's house

at de elder bros house..de couple r shocked 2 c dat de gurl's health had worsened as dere son actually got better after eatin de same medecine..while de elder bro nd his wife r blamin de otha couple..de otha couple plead wid dem nd tell dem dat dey had given de same mededince 2 dere son nd dey neva tried 2 take dere daughter's life..dey tell dem abut how dey had met de baba nd how he had taken dem 2 dis place 2 gif dem de medecine..de elder bro threatens his bro dat he wud go 2 police nd get dem jailed..de younger bro's wife tells dem dat she cud take dere daughter 2 de baba nd mayb he wud help get dere daughter better

@ de place were baba had taken dem waz locked..de younger couple get shocked..de younger bro's asks dis otha man passing by if a baba lived dere..buh de man tells her dat no1 had lived dere for yrz..ndd itz waz closed since a lott of tym..she tells de man abut how dis man de otha dai had given him medecines frm inside..de man tells her dat yea dis waz a homopathic shop but now de medecine's must b expired nd prolly poison bi now..de elder bro tells his younger bro 2 stop makin up lies nd dat derez a limit.. de younger bro nd his wife swear dat dey had cum here de otha dai nd de baba had taken out medecine frm dis same place..she describes de baba 2 dem

de younger bro's wife suddenly remembers de person she had seen during de tym she waz hiding behind de tree..nd it totalli matched de younger bro's wife's description..wen de younger bro's wife asked her how she knew..she spills out de whole truth abut how her nd her husband had taken dere son 2 b sacrificed..de younger couple r shocked 2 hear all is..buh de younger bro's wife tells dem dat yuh got ur punishment buh now i haf 2 to sumthingg dat i shud haf done long tym before..she tells dem to cum alongg wid har to gurudwara..dey all go dere nd pray nd plead frm wahe guruji until de elder couple's daughter's opens her eyes nd calls out 2 her mom..dey all thnk wahe guru ji nd go outside..de younger bro along wid his wife tells his elder bro dat he din want no proprety nd he cud haf all of it..de younger bro starts cryingg nd tells him..mi eyes juzz opened nd yu r talkingg abut de propertyy..he tells dem dat he din want nuthingg..dat all dis property rele waz dere son's..de younger bro's wife tell dem..dere son would want 2 share it wid his sistres..de couple's get all emotional nd hug each other

the END

sry guyz if i messed sumthingg..forgive mehh..itz mi 1st tri😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank you so mucch πŸ‘ i dont think i cud give update and thank you for doing that. dont worry ure update is good πŸ‘ good job
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~Nikki

thank you so mucch πŸ‘ i dont think i cud give update and thank you for doing that. dont worry ure update is good πŸ‘ good job

aww thnk yuh..😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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o btw..itz de update for jan 12th..sry abut dat!! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks a lot for the update
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thnx for the update.......u have done a good job 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks for the update. Another good episode with a good message. Money and property isn't everything. The older brother and his wife were so greedy! They almost killed a baby for money and property. Really sad.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonyaee

Thanks for the update. Another good episode with a good message. Money and property isn't everything. The older brother and his wife were so greedy! They almost killed a baby for money and property. Really sad.

yes its atrocious that somebody would kill a baby like that. but ofcourse god is there and Vahe Guru protected the baby πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks, that was a great episode and you really did it justice with your writing skills.



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