Mera!😆
Un-Mera!Srutha...Srutha...if it indeed is possible then I am more in love with Krishna!!! Gosh you have such a way with words, I would not term them as beautiful for that'd be a gross understatement. This was beyond that. I have always loved Bhama but she has rarely been presented the way you have done here. She is either a possessive hag or a psychotic woman not the nature loving, fierce priestess that she was! I don't think I'll ever be able to thank you enough bringing out this narrative of Krishna-Satyabhama.
The other thing I simply loved was that there was nothing too dramatic or tad romantic here...it went with the flow and that was simply marvelous. I vehemently detest those scenarios where you have a dramatic entrance and confrontation planned...love never happens that way. You don't have the added taam-jhaam while experiencing this remotely strange yet familiar feeling and I loved, loved it to the core that you kept it that way.
Aww and Adi-Shakti came to meet her brother's would be wife! How adorable, I can wager that Vishnu-Parvati are the best siblings you can quote and you just proved my point. Then the spark that turned into a flame...what more can I say? Moi loves it and you are to write more now!
P.S. My favorite line:
"That's okay. I am pretty sure you of all people should know about pranks and adventures, and how to get out of getting scolded", said Satyabhama, a teasing look on her face.
Krishna looked a little dazed for a second, and then said, "Well well! The little kitten has claws", while simultaneously thinking, This is fun'
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