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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 9089721152

Wonderful writing !
Please update soon.

Thank you for your appreciation.I agree with all your points. Please go through my thread ' Did Draupadi Love Arjun More?" Where I thoroughly discussed these points and established Draupadi's love for him and his love For Draupadi. Arjun and Draupadi just loved each other to the maximum.
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Yukti, (Fairy Dust) ! I am waiting for your comment on Ulupi-Panchali conversation.Please let me know your take.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahiima16

nice.) loved the coversation between draupadi and uloopi!
well i'm not sure where i read the story but i read somewhere that once draupadi saved the life of arjuna and uloopi's son iravana and then iravana promised her that he will always take care of her as a son cares for her own mother. i wanted a scene between uloopi, draupadi,iravana and arjuna since i read this story and finally you fulfilled my wish 😊
and also i don't know if it's too much to ask but if possible plz try to give a scene between iravana,draupadi and arjuna πŸ˜ƒ i like iravana and shrutakirti the most among arjuna's sons 😊

Thank you. I sincerely try to include Iravan in the story.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: naturelover33

The first part was amazing, di!! And panchali is all- rounder!!!!😎

She knows everyone's heart!!!And thought for some moment, Bheem gave me a big laugh!!!! And krishna ji ko toh chor hi do!!!!πŸ˜† And kirti becoming maa ka laadla!!!πŸ˜†
But the second part!!!! I was crying reading the second part. It was indirectly describing Arjun's situation!!!😭

True. Anvi, Even I felt so much pain writing Ulupi and Panchali in conversation.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ltelidevaralak

Yukti, (Fairy Dust) ! I am waiting for your comment on Ulupi-Panchali conversation.Please let me know your take.

Yes yukti, we r missing u!!! Why did u get MIA again!!!😭
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 9089721152

Wonderful writing !
Please update soon.

Hello!!! Welcome to the ArDi world!!!πŸ€— This is Aanvi!!!😳
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As Ulupi walked out she crossed Arjun who is coming towards Panchali's mansion.Arjun is in shock seeing Ulupi at Panchali's place at that time of the night. As he stopped with a question mark on his face Ulupi moved nearer to him and said. I unfolded the reality of that night before Panchal princess. It is essential. Ulupi walked away leaving a bewildered Atjun whose face showed his anxiety as he knew how much pain it would have caused to his Krishnaa. He went inside and found her in a pathetic position. Panchali still is in the same position with head in her knees.Her shoulders are shaking indicating her uncontrolled sorrow. Arjun stood still in a daze. He knew how deep his Krishnaa must have sank into the ocean of past memories. It takes so much time and effort to get her back to normalcy. Arjun slowly sat beside her and placed his hand on her shoulder. Panchali looked up with swollen eyes and in one go hugged him in her close embrace. Keeping her head on his heart she stammered.Forgive me Arjun,I couldn't understand your grief.I was too absorbed in my sorrow that I became blind to acknowledge your feelings. But why did you do that? She forcefully dug her nails into his shoulders and repeated. Why Arjun? Why were you silent? Why didn't you protest? Why are we the victims of that cruel fate? Panchali broke down. Why can't I be like your other wives? Why can't you possess me always? ...Arjun did not answer. He had tears in his eyes. Ulupi's self defence and her immense love for him resulted in rejuvenating the pain of Panchali,to such an extent that simple words may not get back her composure. He sat on the floor,kept his head on her lap and circled her waist tightly with his arms. The moon, the Rohini star, the gentle breeze,the jasmines,the Jhoola became the witnesses of the grief filled hearts that belonged to the greatest archer and the most beautiful woman.After a while Arjun felt Panchali's hands in his hair softening the curls with undeterred love that brought back hope and peace into his whole being. Krishnaa,Forgive me,He pleaded with her looking into those eye lotuses that had the Kajal wiped off due to her tears. Panchali pulled him up and placed him on her his huge form covering her svelte figure completely. She clasped his neck posessively and whispered in her sweet voice. Don't you take your reward from your queen? Her charming husband hid his face in her heart as is his habit and answered. Waiting since ages. Not satisfied yet. Be ready to float in the ocean of my passion.?...The jasmines nodded their heads in relief. The breeze blew over them. Chandrama smiled at Rohini. The love always prevails. The love wins forever against all odds. Rohini smiled back making Chandrama mesmerised .
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow!!! It was simply grt!!!
P.s i hv sent a PM to u. plz read it!!
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Indra Prasth got up with excitement as The Great Dronacharya who trained their Raj Kumar Arjun to become the greatest warrior on earth is gracing Indraprasth. They know the story of Arjun's Gurudakhina followed by The Fish Target Victory. So they are curious to see The Acharya and his son Aswathama. Arjun made all the preparations to welcome him with Purnkumbh. The Brahmins under the leadership of Dhaumya waited at the outskirts. Grandfather Bhishm is too excited as he considered Drona as one of the well wishers of Kuru clan and the architect of the excellence of his grand children especially Arjun.The moment finally arrived and Drona descended from the chariot. Arjun and Krishna went forward followed by Bheem and Sahadev.As Arjun touched his Guru's feet he could see moisture in his eyes. He pulled him up and blessed. May you live for hundreds of years and your fame as the Best live forever. He then acknowledged Krishna who folded his hands.Govind,take my salutation for making the Pandava Empire the most Formidable in Aryavarth. I know you contributed a lot towards their glory. Drona said with admiration. Krishna smiled and retorted. Don't undermine your contribution Guru Dron. The live example is before you in the form of Parth. He said. Bheeshm greeted Dron and stated with pride. You will see the way your disciples developed a barren Khandav into Indraprasth. As they moved forward Drona faced his friend cum rival Drupad who greeted him with a glowing face. Welcome to Indraprasth . The most prosperous kingdom in Aryavarth. He said with a wry smile. Dron folded his hands and remarked. Finally we met at last. Drupad countered. Of course we have to meet here as per our destiny. You may feel elated on seeing the glory of Indraprasth the outcome of the outstanding achievements of my son in law. Dron smiled with sarcasm. You son in law is my desciple first. I hope you won't forget it. Bheeshm intervened. I hope you will give me credit because he is my grandson first. Arjun desperately looked at Krishna who went forward and commented. All you three are right in your own way . But you have to compete with me and his seven wives . Every one laughed at his light hearted ness and proceeded to the Royal mansion.Gurumata blessed Pandavas and hugged Arjun with tears of joy. Not even one day is spent by your Gurudev without praising your achievements. She said. Aswathama met Arjun politely and said. My father is too anxious to see your Gandiv. Me too . Arjun smiled and replied. Sure. But first relax after your tedious journey. He took them to their rest houses and attended on them personally. After a while Gurumata met Kunti and Gandhari in Kunti's chamber. Panchali Subhadra and other wives of Arjun touched her feet. Kunti happily greeted her. Finally you came here at least to be present at Rajasuya. Gurumata immediately refuted her word. Who told you I came for Rajasuya? I came to meet all the wives of Arjun together.with their children. I desperately want to see Pragati, Arjun and Draupadi's daughter. Gandhari felt happy and asked Panchali to bring Pragati. Panchali gave Pragati to Gurumata who is ecastic. Arjun's eyes and remaining every thing Bahulike. She blessed the baby again and again. The second day celebrations of Abhi's birthday continued. Subhadra made Abhi exactly like Krishna. With yellow dhoti and morepankh. Abhi resembled his mama and Krishna's wives Lakshana and Nila presented a ballad on Krishna's childhood making Abhi do Krishna's role. Abhi enjoyed doing his mama's exploits on stage and followed Satya's instructions perfectly.Panchali took Kajal from her eyes and marked the black Teeka near Abhi's ear. The children enjoyed so much and danced in the end. Ulupi observed Panchali's face still bearing the stress of previous night. Did she do a mistake in going to her? She is worried. She waited for an opportunity to ask Arjun but he is busy with his guests and Krishna. Arjun finally got a private moment with Krishna when they are proceeding to bring Gandiv. He told him the incident of previous nite. Madhav, Again Krishnaa is shattered reminiscing the past events. Ulupi shouldn't have met her I feel he said with concern. Krishna did not agree. Don't find fault with Ulupi. After a point she felt she could not take Panchali's hatred towards her. She in fact redeemed Panchali from incurring sin by hating an innocent one like her. And she helped you by clearing Panchali's misconceptions about your breaking celibacy. You should thank Ulupi Parth. Panchali has the strength to recover not on her own but with your love. Arjun nodded in agreement. Madhav, why am I not able to analyse everything like you? What would have happened to me without you? Krishna laughed. Now put a full stop to your Whys. I promise I will never leave you. I will stand by you even when you are unable to extend your help to Krishnaa. Did she get the dream again? He asked. Arjun again is confused. Why can't he help his Krishnaa? What will happen to her? He wanted to question Krishna but dropped his idea as they entered the royal chamber where Dron,Aswathama,Drupad,Bheeshm, Yudhishtir and Bheem are waiting for them. For Gandiv. They stepped in and Drupad alerted Dron. Don't try to lift Gandiv. Except Arjun and Krishna none can hold it. Dron replied with sarcasm. Thanks for your advice. You must be telling out of personal experience. Krishna smiled while Arjun tried to change their attitude with his trademark charm by exhibiting Gandiv in all its splendour. Dron could not believe his eyes. Such huge bow with great finishing and beautiful designs on it. Arjun let him touch it and feel the divinity. Dron praised Arjun. You deserve this. You exceeded all my expectations. Well done Arjun. But Krishna's Parth is too humble. Whatever I achieved ,I attribute to your training Gurudev he said folding his hands. Drupad admired his Gurubhakti. Really An example he set. My son in law is one in millions. He started. My desciple has no equal at all. Dron continued. Krishna admitted Panchali with Pragati to stop their arguments. And Panchali curiously looked at her father and his guru . She then looked at Arjun and smiled to herself. Tough times for him. Not only he has to handle his wives but now his fatherin law and his teacher. She handed over Pragati to Arjun and returned to see the arrangements for dinner. As she is passing through the garden path she crossed Ulupi who stopped and said. Please forgive me if I hurt you .
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Posted: 9 years ago
The whole update was 'riots' in one word di!!! Senior citizens fighting!!!!🀣 are yeh kaam aurton ka hain!!!!🀣Bechara parth!!! saat saat kaafi nehi tha kya ki aur teen add ho gaye!!!!🀣 Drona-Drupad debating whose son-in-law and whose shishya is parth!!!🀣 'Must be telling with your own experience.'🀣 I hv a suggestion for parth- take pragati in front of them, them themselves will stop!!! 🀣But i am thinking that how cute must be this daughter-father duo!!!!And Abhi resembling Krishna!!! Oh my cutie pie!!!πŸ€—
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