As The Arrow Moves- The Voice of Dhananjaya Arjuna Chap 19 on PG 46 - Page 35

Originally posted by: raj_a_p

Great going Brishti👏. Loved^10 times the Gudakesha part. And.. u have started utilizing cliffhangers...

Originally posted by: Urmila11

WONDERFUL Brishti 👏👏👏 you made the picture lively in front of my eyes loved each bit of it, the different expressions of different persons, SUPERB 👏👏 & loved how Arjun is talking to himself about his main aim 😊 that is the concentration, love him ❤️ loved Guru Dron's explanations to each student. Can't wait to see how Arjun made his Guru proud 😃
Carry on! Jai Shri Krishna! Jai Gaandivdhari Arjun!

wow nice update. duryodhan is so funny 😆. arjun waiting for his turn thinking what is the answer. but i guess he will find it as soon as he aims at the bird.

till now vry beautifully written brish!😉👏!!!:D just superb!😳*i love it soo much❤️the way u amazingly write my mahanayak's pov is just perfect and awesome!*❤️👏...i'm soo amazed by it!*❤️can't wait for next😃update soon😛

nice...
waiting for d nxt part.

Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar

Aww! Thank u so much! 😃 BTW are you still saving my updates in your file? 😊

Yes, I am saving your chapters 😃 all chapters so far are saved in my file 😃

I Really Appreciate Every Line You Write !! Loved Guru Dron's Comments For Everyone, And Also Bheem's 'Poorvabhaas' ! 😆 Arjun's Enthusiasm And Determination Was Very Sweet ! A Perfect Update On Teacher's Day !

loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it

the first story i heard about mahanayak...
wow... i'm smiling... i m feeling extremely happy.. never knew this bit of can be said in this way too...
simple loved it..

Edit: now update fast!!

Beautiful! The way you describe the events from Arjuna's point of view is awesome... Makes fantastic reading for elders and youth. Really love it. Thank you for following thru even though the series has ended. Please continue...

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Beautiful! The way you describe the events from Arjuna's point of view is awesome... Makes fantastic reading for elders and youth. Really love it. Thank you for following thru even though the series has ended. Please continue...

Gudakesha - loved this part the most today and aptly described's Arjuna's feeling when he is called in front to shoot the bird...

Thank you. Actually when I update, hardly people read that's why I don't :p anyways will update