As The Arrow Moves- The Voice of Dhananjaya Arjuna Chap 19 on PG 46 - Page 24

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Posted: 10 years ago
It was such a an adorable update Brish ⭐️ Simply loved it 😊
I love these lines n the hidden pain here πŸ˜”


I am the only person in the universe who is happy to be away from home." I said. "I know dear. And I am the only Mother on Earth who feels safe by sending her sons away."
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Posted: 10 years ago
Such a beautiful mother-son bond. Arjuna- always the eager one to learn. I liked the update but somehow it clashed with my ideas on Arjun- the thing that he used to hate wars. But hv ur writer's liberty. Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Such A Beautiful Update !! Loved Arjun's Simplicity And Craving For True Love !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
aww brish another heart warming update !! the pritha parth bondings have been brought out beautifully...arjuns dilemma too uve hit the spot .. its perfect ... let me get my mind straight and il give u a long detailed comment okay ???
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Posted: 10 years ago
pritha puthr parth... wow brish dear... described thier relationship so very beatifully...
wen arjun said that he missed his father i was in tears...little arjun is not @ all d confident emotionally controled grown up arjun... lots of questions n fears in his mind...and u potrayed al those feelings so beatiful dear... and mata pathr havin debate of who loves whom was very very sweet...continue soon yaar...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Shani-

Brishti, I haven't even seen your pm yet for the chappy update!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Arjun feels a connect with the gurukul due to living in the forest as a child...😊
You know, even the gurukul track in ⭐️Bkind of indicated this -
The first night in the gurukul, the kid Pandavas were all cosily sleeping, and the kid Kauravas were busy swatting mosquitoes!!πŸ˜†

Awww...Arjun-Kunti bonding😳
Again, his eagerness and willingness to learn!!πŸ‘πŸ‘

Poor kid is scared of war and bloodshed - don't worry, Madhav sab samjha denge!!πŸ˜›


Yes Divya...those were the golden days of StarBharat !!! Aww..those kids :D
I really love Arjuna and Pritha together..dunno y I love dem! That's why I write like dat abt dem.. Actually Pritha is my most fave female character from Mahabharat
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: raj_a_p

Yesss.πŸ˜† The moment I was waiting for. The Pritha-Parth moment. You have really portrayed their love very beautifully. Waiting for the next update.



Thank you for those words Raj Bhai :):) glad u liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Cotswolds

Oh my brishti.. This is a gold mine..πŸ‘

Stories of mahanayak. I plan to read them soon.. Lovely..πŸ‘



Glad to see you here Cots! πŸ˜ƒ Oh that is great news please read them soon and hope you like it!! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

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And the quest for knowledge begins .This is just perfectly done Brish Pritha Paarth bonding was very adorable . He is scared of bloodshed this defines his character perfectly .Sitting in the favourite corner of palace with mixed feelings in his heart about geeting back his actual home but the lain to leave his mother is well portrayed ...Brish update ASAP Many authors have written about the bird's eye peircing but I am eager to read about Arjun"s POV and your take on it ...



Yes! That will be the actual difficult part. These are the actual difficult parts of writing Arjun's POV!!! I will do lots of research and read many analysis of the incident only then I will portray it.. But that will be soon enough Frappz dun worry...
And keep encouraging me!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Shriya95

Like I said previously,parth getting sooo eager to go to school n start his quest of knowledge is very heart warming to see!! N pritha felling a sense of safety on sending her sons away again underlines a lot of things about the animosity shown to them in hastinapurTheir entire convo was very pleasing to read, read it twice or thrice,just the convo!! He is unwilling to fight!!! Poor dear,this gives a hint that how much circumstances n krishna will affect him to fight!!! I'm super exited about the gurukul episode!!!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ


Ooh.. I wrote it with lots of feelings you know!! Really I've writing abt Pritha and Arjun 😳 Glad u liked it love!!! Keep reading it once twice n more! I will b overwhelmed with joy
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