As The Arrow Moves- The Voice of Dhananjaya Arjuna Chap 19 on PG 46 - Page 14

read your last 2 updates now... awesome brish... u right so well... am obsessed wid dis ff

Bheem is missing. ..update soon Brish...a lovely update again 😊

Originally posted by: Rushika

Bheem is missing. ..update soon Brish...a lovely update again 😊

omg.. you read in minutes.. :o
And yeah, Updating the next chappy now... 😊

Read the 7th chappy 1st even before ur pm 🥳

Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar

omg.. you read in minutes.. :o
And yeah, Updating the next chappy now... 😊

nah my this comment was for 6th chappy...I finished reading the 7th one now 😊

Brish!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗big big biggg hug!!!!! Lovely chappy baby!!! N luna's lines😳😳...i cnt express it in wrds hw much i loved it😃😃😃 continue real sooonnn!!!!!

Originally posted by: Rushika

Read the 7th chappy 1st even before ur pm 🥳

This was fab Brish I loved all of Arjun's raw emotions especially his rage...

Hope they find about Bheem soon!!

Waiting for the next chappy 😊

Awwee that is so great! Thanks.. now updated next chappy see that too :D :D

Originally posted by: Shriya95

Brish!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗big big biggg hug!!!!! Lovely chappy baby!!! N luna's lines😳😳...i cnt express it in wrds hw much i loved it😃😃😃 continue real sooonnn!!!!!

Updated madam. Check.
And u will have to express how u liked it 😡

Loved this chappy Brish...yayiiee Bheem returned after a hiatus of 8 days 🥳

Sorry Brishti for being late 😔 or should I say sorry as your updating speed is greater than my reading speed 😆 before I come online for next time you posted 2 more chapters 👍🏼 I am sure Lord Krishna is with you in this noble project & He is helping you to proceed so soon 😊 you are blessed, dear 😊
Saved all the chapters 😊 enjoyed your style of narration 👍🏼 so the initial danger is gone, & the poor children are feeling for the first time that they are under a serious trouble 😭 I loved Kunti's silent emotions & the brotherly bond very much 😃 finally as a Yudhisthir fan I loved how he took all the responsibilities on his hand like a true eldest brother please show how he is becoming a father figure for fatherless Arjun 😊 as we all know, Arjun loved & respected him very much & treated him as his Guru 😊
Dhritarashtra's characterization is nice 👍🏼 will you show him black like SPMB or a bit grey? I think he is also a villain of MB. Loved the part where Arjun was feeling hurt by his touch 👍🏼
Finally Bheem is out of danger 😊 everybody is relived 😃 waiting for the next part 😃
Carry on dear 😊 Jai Shri Krishna! Jai Gaandivdhari Arjun!