Karnabharath : If they knew the truth before the war(updated:page 15) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Great writing! Enjoyed it very much!
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#22
beautiful story i was waiting for something like that where panadavas n karna have a good co-ordial relation can u plz add a scene where if everything in your story goes well n pandavas n karna unite then adding vrushali where they have the same karna-vrushali scenes as of mrutinjaya book n all pandavas tease him especially arjunπŸ˜‰ or create a special os on this situation or another os like that
plz only if u wish to!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Thankzz for your support guyzz..i'll surely include karna-vrishali scenes...but not the same one from mrityunjaya..@nuckts I'll try my best to make you happy with whatever I can create..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 4...guyzz this is a very shortb update..im coming to the most awaited part of the story

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"Gandhar raj ,you have no rights to decide the rules for the empire of Hastinapur.Here noone wanted to hear your opinion"Mahamahi Bheeshm got provoked by Shakuni's words of conspiracy against Karna."Maharaj ,we all have wronged this child many times ,Now its time for us to pay for all those mistakes.I dont allow him to be at the recieving end of punishments any more.He has not even asked for what he deserves,instead he's pleading you for a peaceful life for his mother and siblings. You have to fulfill his wishes and send him to rule Indraprasth with blessings."Bheeshma finished looking into the lifeless eyes of king Dhritarashtra.
Everyone in the courtroom were eagerly waiting for his decision.Duryodhan was not yet relieved from the shock and was silently waiting for his father to speak in favour of him.
"Maharathi Karna ,I am proud to accept you as a part of kuruvamsh.I always knew that you are born to rule and not to service.But today you are standing here violating an order from me. Being the king ,It's impossible for me to ignore completely ."A wide smile came on Shakuni 's face. " If I forgive you today,I would have to answer the questions from my people tomorrow.At the same time I dont want to give you any severe punishment. Here by I order to arrest Karna and keep him in lock up for 1 week,for violating the royal order."Bheeshm and vidur seemed clearly upset with that but didnt raise voice against the kings decision.one week arrest is something which Karna can live with,they thought."and Regarding your request ,Indraprasth is a free country by now.But I cant give you any guarantee that we won't plan an attack against them.I 've not yet forgiven them for insulting me and Hastinapur, by forming alliance with tha Yadavas.Karna stood there without uttering a word,his eyes were searching for his friend Duryodhan . Duryodhan stood up for the first time since karna entered the assembly.He seems to be happy with the decision."Pithashree ,I accept your decision.My friend Karna deserves it for going against your order." he aproached Karna with a wicked smile on his face."My friend ,have you ever been loyal to me.You have known this way back,I can say now .Whenever I planned against the Pandavas you tried to oppose me, putting nice act of a welwisher.You are a liar.Now I understand how they all escaped from Varanavrat. It was you,who informed them about the whole plan.You were actually a spy of them,and I never realized that.Now that your cursed mother accepted you in public ,you cant hide the truth any more"Duryodhan whispered to karna,so that nobody else could hear them."Duryodhan,you are crossing the limits"Karna who were looking sympathetically at him,lost his temper hearing Duryodhan 's words about Kunti."I wiil show you who has crossed the limits and what are the consequences."Duryodhan ordered the army men to tie his hands and send him to lockup.Karna never thought the person who had been his best friend and mentor,would be the first to turn against him.He didnt react but was merely staring at Duryodhan while he were made to go to lockup with the militants.

Everyone's eyes got destracted by the loud noise with which the court door opened. It was bheem who opened it and all 5 of them entered the assembly.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
uff you are making biting my nails plz update soon and i want a karna-arjun scene plz plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
You are a great story teller. πŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
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πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‰ i'll continue as soon possible dears..thnk uu
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
pls update the best story of the forum
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Part 4 is awesome!! You are a brilliant story-teller πŸ‘
And to end it on a cliff-hanger...😈
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Oh dear, what a point you've brought this to πŸ˜²πŸ€£πŸ‘
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