Karnabharath : If they knew the truth before the war(updated:page 15) - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dhrashtee

I just happened to run across this story. and I'm loving it. I've always felt bad for Karna! He had to face so much in his life since he was considered a sut putra. I am glad he is getting all the love and respect he deserves in your FF. I had never been able to connect to Karna in the old Mahabharat, probably because they didn't explore his character like the new mahabharat. But I'm in love with the new Karna!!! Again, I am glad i found this SS to read where Karna gets all the love he deserves.

Now coming to his marriage with Draupadi, I will wait to see how you explore this issue. I remember you mentioned that Karna has all the qualities Draupadi wanted in her husband. If it wasn't for Krishna's doings, she would have been happily married to Karna! :P

Waiting for next post. pls cont soon :)

dhrashtee.. Thanx a lot for liking it..😳I am really glad that u found it.
and about Droupathy and Karna ..Do you really want to see them together?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelic_Friend

Hi dear!πŸ˜›

Thanks for updating! I was waiting for this update for many days!😳 I really loved this update... But I felt it was short! You updated after a long time and you made it short!πŸ˜” Anyways, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this update!πŸ˜ƒ Waiting to see more Karna-Arjun bonding!πŸ˜‰ Precap sounds really interesting!⭐️

But this time please update fast and PM me!😳

Take careπŸ€—

Angelic ,u always inspire me with ur nice comments..thnx a lot dear..i will update soon..Embarrassed
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Archanapajit

no dear..i am fed up with her tears ...now iam gonna show her
tactics..πŸ˜‰and about the next part..πŸ˜›..dats a secret between us..πŸ˜†


yayaya her tears πŸ˜†


awww waiting for the secret to come as an update πŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Archanapajit

dhrashtee.. Thanx a lot for liking it..😳I am really glad that u found it.
and about Droupathy and Karna ..Do you really want to see them together?


I dont think I want to see them married... not in this story at least! πŸ˜†

I was just agreeing with the point you made earlier about how Karna would be the appropriate man to marry her, had she not been influenced by Krishna. But then again, we wouldn't have had Mahabharat if she hadn't married pandavas. Would we?!πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

When are you updating again?😳 By the way, what is ur name?
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Posted: 10 years ago
dhrashtee ,u can call me archu..I am glad to see that u agree with me..btw i haven't seen you in Karna AT..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Archu!!
I am usually a VERY much silent reader unless some of the FFs catch my attention. Even though I love reading a lot of FFs ( Most of the times, they are better than the show) I rarely comment. So, I haven't really been to any AT's... ;)

I love this story of yours so I had to comment. :)

If you dont mind me asking, where are you from? I live in US.
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey it was another very beautiful update exciting to see pandavas n karna getting closer but please iss relation ko aisa hi rehne do no panchali karna wedding warna karna-pandava ki abhi abhi hui dosti khatre mei pad jaegiπŸ˜• n agar tujhe phir bhi dikhani ho na unki shadi to pehle iss bar karna ko thoda bhaav khane do ,panchali ko yeh ehsaas karwa ki karna ko kitni takleef hui hogi swayamvar ke time pe !πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am more of a silent reader. But this really caught my attention and after reading it all I could not help but comment!
I am really liking your take on the characters. And I appreciate you for according this stature to Karna.

Bookmarking this thread. Can't wait for the next update!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dhrashtee

Hey Archu!!

I am usually a VERY much silent reader unless some of the FFs catch my attention. Even though I love reading a lot of FFs ( Most of the times, they are better than the show) I rarely comment. So, I haven't really been to any AT's... ;)

I love this story of yours so I had to comment. :)

If you dont mind me asking, where are you from? I live in US.

drashtee..thanx a lot for your nice comments yaar..I am from Kerala..
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 11:guys do read and give me your valuable comments..πŸ˜›
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Mata kunti was with Arjun ..Karna followed them on his horse..When they reached the palace gate Bheem and sahadev ran to mata...All 5 of them lost themselves in her warm embrace..She consoled them saying ,"My sons ,How can I be ever in danger ..I am not afraid of anything or anyone in this world when you all are with me.."
Karna felt slightly uncomfortable ,when he saw Kunti's eyes searching for him..Even though he accepted his brothers already and got closer to them very easily ,he couldn't completely forgive the person who abandoned him in the river..she slowly walked towards him.Karna was avoiding her eyes,but he had to when she lifted his chin..and smiled brightly at him..Kunti took his hand in hers.She called others with a blink of her eye..They all came and stood around Karna and kunti .Yudhishtir was the first to put his palm over Karna's ..Bheem ,Arjun and others imitated his act one by one.Kunti placed her other palm above sahadev's .."My sons ,Promise me that you will be together hand in hand,whatever happens in your life.Karna promise me that you would take care of your brothers and 5 of you should obey his decisions."
All 5 of them nodded happily..Karna was in a dilemma.Even though it was not explicit,he could sense very well that,she would ask him to be the ruler of IP.He has to choose between two families.."Mata ,I will take care of my brothers and you till my last breath..But i have a family in HP ,my parents and my wife..they are responsible for whoever i am now.I cant abandon them.They won't agree to come with me too.Please don't order me to take up the throne of IP. Yudhishtir is the most apt one for that position."
Kunti interrupted him.."Putri Droupathy,please bring thali for doing Aarthi.. Karna,My son,i want to see you rule this country accompanied by your brothers .You are the eldest and the most deserving person.I don't have any doubts in that case"Karna couldn't make up his mind to obey his mother's words.Droupathy came with the thali..
"Putr Karna,i have one more request to you ..please forgive Droupathy .She is married to all 5of your brothers and connects them like the thread of a beedchain.I wanna tie you up as the most precious bead of this chain so that..."
"MATA "Karna couldn't control his voice.He was literally shouting.."I don't have any problem with Droupathy..She is the wife of my brothers and plays the best role in their unity,i know that very well.But for me she is my sister for now and forever..I can't give any other defenition to my relationship with her..and did you ask her opinion at least once,before asking me!!!!"He changed his gaze to Droupathy who was still looking down with her determined eyes."Jyesht Bhrata Karna, I have insulted you at the swaysmvar mandap unknowingly.I am really sorry for that..I am relieved to hear that you have forgiven me..Thats really kind of you..Mata told me about this before..But in my case also ,i have accepted you as my elder brother the moment i heard the truth..and how can i marry my brother ?Please tell me"
Kunti was able to,understand their reluctance .She knew that Karna is married to Vrishali,who is also from sut gotra.She loved Vrishali personally,but still didn't want someone other than a Kshatriy kanya to be the queen of IP.karn continued looking at Kunti."Mata, i can read your mind now"..He smiled at her."I am still glued to my decision of not taking up the throne.Don't worry about anything now."Yudhishtir,I will be there to protect the Dharm and dignity of IP throne always.."
"Jyeshth ,Do you mean you will be there always,just like Bheeshm pitamah is protecting the HP throne"Bheem couldn't stop himself..Everyone seemed surprised to hear Karna 's words.Arjun had a rather disapproving look..
Vasudev was watching the whole convo silently .He smiled at the comment."Bhrata bheem ...he did mean that...jyesht Bhrata Karna,i came here all the way from dwaraka to be a part of your coronation.But you disappointed me by rejecting the throne. i had to go back witnessing your sacrifice!!!But what you said clearly suits a person like you.."
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