{|VASUSENA Karna - AHAM Sharma's AT #2|} - Page 3

i loved the word karna's eyes carry ancient sadness

I have come 2 pages late.. 🥳.. congo citizens..

Originally posted by: ...Diala...

I have come 2 pages late.. 🥳.. congo citizens..

Nice day to begin a new AT.. We have him today.. 😳

aa gayi iss Panchaali apni saural pe😳

Originally posted by: panchaali

aa gayi iss Panchaali apni saural pe😳

Baby Janu I will see later and tell u.. 😳.. But I know it will be great.. 😳

Originally posted by: --MimiGupta--

sorry ap wrong address pe agaye hai..

apka address to Hashtinapur hai.. Angpradesh mei tumhara kya kaam hai???

u r late Panchaali di.. go to pg 3.. posted my edits there

Dhoop se chhan ke, dhoop se chhan ke
Dhuaan mann huaa
Roop ye chamke, tann anchhuaa
Chidte hain bajte hain
Taar jo mann ke, khanke jhanke hain
Kuchh to hua

having filtered from sunlight,
my heart became like smoke..
My beauty shines, but my body is untouched..
As the strings of my heart get touched, played,
something has happened (to me) certainly..

Dhoop se chhan ke, dhuaan mann hua
Rom rom naapta hai
Ragon mein saanp sa hai
Sarar sarar rarar bhaage bewajah

having filtered from sunlight,
my heart became like smoke..
It passes through every pore of my body,
There is, as if, a snake in my veins,
moving incessantly..

Sarke hai khiske hai
Mujh mein ye bas ke, das ke de gaya
Dard bedavaa

It glides and slides,
living within me, it has bitten me
and given me a pain with no cure..

Dhoop se chhan ke, dhuaan mann huaa
Chhidte hain bajte hain
Taar jo mann ke, khanke jhanke hain

Originally posted by: panchaali

It glides and slides,
living within me, it has bitten me
and given me a pain with no cure..

Great Work Vrish... and Congrats everyone for 2nd AT🥳