SS||Cocktail||Complete|| - Page 10

Created

Last reply

Replies

394

Views

83k

Users

92

Likes

1.3k

Frequent Posters

kank_dah thumbnail
Anniversary 18 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#91
amazing.so rk did find out abt madhu nd ansh
bria thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#92
love it...plz do not discontinue it...
.SmokeySilence. thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 10 years ago
#93
I really enjoy this FF. its very different and total fun. its bol but so what. we do watch eng movies and the language is pretty much like that, i really enjoy the different concept. damn RK is just 22 n he has a son. πŸ˜† i like madhus character here. she is fun. do update soon.
gihu12 thumbnail
Group Promotion 1 Thumbnail Fascinator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#94
Loved it so much
continue ASAP
sweettaz16pm thumbnail
Engager 2 Thumbnail Engager 1 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#95

Part 5

"Who the hell could that be?" Pari asked as we both heard the doorbell ring.

"Whoever it is, I'm going to kill them for ringing the bell" I bit out, standing to my feet I headed towards the door and opened it.

"What?" I snapped and stilled instantly seeing him stood in front of me. F*** me like a horse. What the F*** is he doing here?


"What the hell are you doing here?" I questioned crossing my arms around my middle and forcing myself to stand in the place so he doesn't get in.

"Where is he?"

"Who?"

"Why the hell didn't you tell me you've got our son?" he clipped out angrily.

"Oh I'm sooo sorry" I smiled ever so sweetly at him. "You were only next door and I couldn't be bothered walking across to knock on your door and tell you that" I responded.

"Where is he?"

"Who?"

"Ansh you crazy ass" he yelled pushing the door.

I held onto it stopping him from coming inside. "Don't you dare. And who the hell told you that Ansh is your son? Hmm? Because I don't remember saying that"

"You running away like a coward was one proof, another was your stupid joke right now" he smirked.

Did he just call me a coward? Me? I'm just going show who's the coward. "Listen ass hat Get out or I'll use my ninja skills on you" Where the f**k did I get ninja skills from? what the hell is the other word for it? Shit shit shit.. What the hell's the word?

"What the hell is ninja skills?" he laughed so loudly throwing his head back, I looked back at Pari who was snickering. Traitor.

"Get out!" I snapped breaking his little joke.

"Where is he?" he pushed inside.

"I'm telling you he's not your son!" I yelled following behind him as he started walking around searching for Ansh.

Please Ansh don't wake up. Please please. Mommy will buy you lots of candy and chocolate, I will never ever threaten to put with you with the monster. I prayed mentally just hoping all goes well.

"Listen get out or else I'm calling the police" I followed behind him as he walked upstairs, I wish he tripped and fell down cracking his skull right now. Damn him. he's going to take my baby away. No, no I won't let the ass do that, I'm not letting him waltz in here after 5 bloody years and let him take my son away.

"Ansh" He started calling. Asshole's going to wake Ansh up. I noted how he went for one of the spare bedrooms and sighed, I walked down the hall and locked the door from outside so he wouldn't be able to enter, I turned and noted him coming towards me.

"Move, lemme see him" he stood before me.

I shook my head. "Look he's not your son! You must've hit your head and lost your memory or something"

"Listen you" he pointed his finger at me. "Let me see MY son"

"He's not your son! He's Pari's kid" I snapped pointing back at Pari who looked shocked. I narrowed my eyes at her to act normal but the bitch was lost in her own damn world.

He glanced at Pari once then looked back at me. "Sure he is" he tried to push me aside but I fought back.

"Pari get the mace can" I yelled trying to pull him back and away from the door.

"Mommy" I heard Ansh call.

Shit!

"What should I do? What should I do?" Pari panicked holding onto the can.

"Listen asshat if you don't leave now I'm going to spray you with this bitch" I threatened tugging on his hair and kneed him on the groin, he picked me up like a sack on his shoulder.

"Spray him" I yelled as he tried to unlock the door.

"Aaahhh" I screamed at the burning liquid hit me, I was thrown down landing on my butt and could hear RK and Pari scream and cough as well.

I rubbed my eyes crying, coughing and moaning. "Oh my days... my eyes... my eyes are melting" I crawled on my foot and recognising RK was beside me shouting and groaning I pushed him then straddled his back tugging on his hair.

"All your fault!" I yelled keeping my eyes pressed closed.

"Get off" His voice came out muffled which meant his head was probably face down on the carpet.

"Mommy" I heard Ansh call again.

"Shut up and go back to sleep" I screamed. "My eyes.. My f**king eyes" I cried in agony.

"Aww you said a bad word mommy" I heard Ansh speak again.

"Bitch get off me" RK yelled coughing and trying to crawl away from my hold.

"Pari call my dad!" I yelled tugging his hair so his head was pulled back then smacked his head down so he hit his face on the floor.

I was thrown off and opened my eyes seeing a blurry image of him crawling away coughing and rubbing his own eyes, I was coughing, I could feel the tears streaming down my cheeks and was on all fours like a donkey.


"Call Uncle and ambulance" I heard Pari and knew she was shouting into her smartphone.

"Call wolf?"

"No uncle you dipshit!" Pari screamed coughing.

"Call Deepika"

"No asshole! Uncle. Madhu's tattooed wrestler dad" She shouted. "You're a f**king moron, you stupid shit. I'm going to swap you" she screamed.

"Mommy open the door" Ansh called again.

"Go to sleep or go to hell" I yelled. My eyes. My poor eyes. I wanted to cry right now but the pain wasn't letting me. Once I could see I was going to kill that bas***d.

"I thought this is meant to be a smartphone" Pari screamed followed by a cough. "It's not working. Call Madhu's dad!" she yelled again almost as if about to cry.

"Send a message?"

"Yes. Yes. Send a message to Madhu's dad" she replied eagerly shouting. "Tell him to come to Madhu's right now. There's a kidnapper" she coughed and babbled. "My eyes are on fire" she cried. "I want to cry and go home to my mom" I swear down she was now a crying mess.

"Sending to Garret"

"What the f**k? I said Madhu's dad asshole"

"Bitch the phone doesn't know who my dad is. What the hell did you put my dad as in your phone?" I heaved trying to keep breathing.

"Bad ass?" she responded with a heavy breath.

"Well call him" I tried once again to open my eyes but failed.

"Mommy" Ansh called.

"Sleep! Or else I'm putting you with the monster downstairs" I shouted back. My eyes were killing here, my face was melting, and my son was being a pain in the ass.

"Call bad ass" Pari tried again.

"Calling"


"Hello there's a kidnapper, it's the guy who raped Madhu and left her knocked up with that devil" she cried. "My face is on fire"

...

"No he didn't throw acid on me" She responded back sharply to whatever my dad asked her.

...

"Come quick"


20 minutes later I was sat on the couch with a cold towel pressed to my eyes, Pari was lying down on the other sofa whilst RK sat on the arm of the single chair with an injured nose (which I injured when I smacked his face into my floor and made him bleed) and my dad settled beside me.


I pulled the towel away glaring at RK.

"Not now, rest your eyes first" my dad pressed the towel on my eyes again, he knew I wanted to fight again but he was trying to be adult here for once.

"Pa" Ansh called. I knew he must be angry and about to cry right now but the mace shit is dangerous and I sure as hell don't want him to be affected by it or else I'd be going down for melting his eyes.

"Should I let him out yet?" my dad asked as I told him Ansh wasn't allowed till the mace crap has gone.

"Yeah, it shouldn't be effective anymore" I responded.


I pulled the cold towel away hearing his footsteps and saw him skipping into the sitting room.

"Mommy..." he halted eyeing RK. "Who the hell are you?" he crossed his arms and narrowed it on him then looked back at me. "You crappy dog" Ansh yelled and then rushed up to RK punching him where it hurts. "You hurt my mommy" he climbed up on the sofa whilst RK was groaning in pain bending, Ansh held onto his hair and tugged. "You hurt my mommy"

"Ansh come here" My dad called him firmly to which he listened but not without smacking RK's cheeks twice.

He climbed onto my dad's lap hugging him by the waist.

"I killed him for you mommy" he told me so sweetly then reached up touching my swollen bloodshot eyes. Before I responded he spoke again. "But you look weally ugly"

"Thanks" I muttered looking back at RK who stared dumbfounded and shockingly at Ansh. Take that asshole. Meet the son you wanted! I smirked inwardly.


Precap - ???


So the father and son meeting for the first time? how was it? Wink

Please do hit the like and comment. πŸ˜ƒ

I might give another update tonight but it depends. πŸ˜›

The inevitable has been updated so do check as well 😳


If you'd like pms please add this account - sweettaz16pm

LoseYouToLoveMe thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#96
Wonderful update Dear 😊 thanks for pm πŸ˜ƒ Loved the father-son's first meeting πŸ˜› waiting to see what RK does next πŸ˜‰ An update tonight? 😲 i want it 😳 pls update tonight itself 😳 & Yay Me First πŸ₯³
Edited by lwrimaforever - 10 years ago
HappySoul-4va thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#97
hahah..that was a funny update..u r just awesome in making up emotions in a different way..
Waiting for inevitable update
karamjeet thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#98
Superbbb update nd Ansh is tooo good ...loved it father son meeting...
aDarkAngel thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#99
OMG OMG OMG ... I died laughing while reading this 🀣 🀣 Trust me it's my soul which is writing this comment πŸ€£πŸ˜‰ !! The whole scenario, their mace encounter, shucks her preventing him seeing their son is so damn hilarious that I read it multiple number of times already ...am still loling πŸ˜†πŸ˜†!! Ansh's punching his dad and his comment on his moms awful look was like cheery on cake πŸ˜†πŸ˜† !! Hahhahahha loved it now am dying to read the next πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by aDarkAngel - 10 years ago
meiejrishbala thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
oh god i'm so in love with this story😊
rk met ansh and he is shockedπŸ˜†
i liked madhu's last comment "meet the son u wanted"πŸ˜†
Top