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visma

@kuttu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#341

It was quite a night for the couple. so what does the morning after bring I hope not revenge. As Rk has already claimed her as his.

The writing wasn't that bold but had a romatic feel to it.

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Menika

@BrunoMars

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#342

UHm, okejj, Gosh! Am I the only one here that finds it hawt here...? *tries to control herself* Gosh! *breaths in*...*breaths out*You know I actually had to control myself before writing a comment and I am still not recovered.

Okejj, I think I am alright now.

Gosh you write so well! It was like, I don't know, whatever I will say right now could be taken differently than I meant,,, But your story is so complete, everything. Though I don't know what is going to happen, I am loving the mystery. And each and every update is so good. Especially this one. Like, Gosh! I am still in a state of amazement. That was so good. You explained everything, details, feelings, facts, opinions, you've got it all. And it comes together and it just, it is like magic. Yep, that is the word. It is so real and yet so unreal. Weird, I know. -It is your fault I am being so weird right now!- This was so hawt, how you bring the story. From Madhu's confusion to this. That is a huge step, yet I don't feel like you missed something. You are an awesome writer. I will just stop talkking, I clearly haven't everything under control right now.

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paagalbandar

@paagalbandar

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#343

its amazing...loved it...but, please keep the assence of their witty talks...i love their witty way of dealing with each other in the show:D

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sessy

@sessy

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#344

wow just wow

i love this update u explained very well how madhu is feeling

thx for the pm

looking forward for u r next update

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RuthlessQueen

@RuthlessQueen

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#345

Originally posted by: sparikh
Nice story...RK still working w/Bhatia?? What's up with that??? Surprised, MB gave into the attraction...RK didn't use any contraceptives...is that his plan; to make her preg & destroy her more??? Can't wait for his plan to backfire...

-Sona

Oh NO! Don't say RK "worked" for Bhatia. He'll make a masala dhose out of you. Just kidding! But really that's not what he did. He just did Bhatia a favour. Nuhh actually it's not even that. He did whatever he did for his advantage. You'll see more of it in the future. Oh so you noticed he didn't use contraceptives. Good girl! I'm sure the paragraph before the last one, explains it all. Let's see if it's his plan or not =) If you are not happy with this dark RK, please feel free to let me know.

Originally posted by: Sofia13
it was awesOme👍🏼 n very rOmantiC😳😳
Amazing Update👏
juSt lOved it..!!

Continue sOon..

Thank you so much Sofia! Hugs! I'm so glad you loved it! 😳

Originally posted by: love4all
nice part dear
hope everything will be ok soon

Thanks a lot! =) Lets keep our fingers crossed!

Originally posted by: unknowngirl
Wow !! At last u did update ..😃 It was really passionate & romantic one but not vulgar at all..😛 Beautifully written..Continue soon..😊

Oh yes, finally! I know that was a long wait. Thank you so much for the lovely compliment 😊 I'm happy you liked it.

Originally posted by: ytanuja
Awesome job,

Thanks a lot! =)

Originally posted by: elegenttashu
After a long tym dear. Hope ur
all problems hav
solved.Anyway awesome & wild update & thanxx fr the PM.

Aww that's sweet of you! I'm fine. Thanks a bunch! I'm glad you liked the update! =)

Originally posted by: Sheel22
Wow Very romantic and hottie update...Aww Awesoe,.. Waiting eagerly for next part...:)

Thanks a lot! Glad you liked it! =)

Originally posted by: paras99
lovely update ...one of the best i have ever read on this
forem...beautifully written...eagerly waiting for your next update...

Thank you so much for the sweet compliment! =) I'm glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: Gouthami.b
nice update yaar

Thanks a lot! =)

Originally posted by: sumihalil
superb yaar.😉 continue s😛😛n

Thank you very much! Glad you liked it! 😊

Originally posted by: Chandni1996
LOVED IT!! PLEASE DO CONTINUE!!! LOVED URNOTE AT THE BEGINNING lol bio!

haha Thank you so much! I'm so glad you loved it =)

Originally posted by: leafmaria
Lovely post. Busy right now, so can't post a big comment.

-Maria

Thanks a lot! Feel free to let me know what you think once you have time! =)

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RuthlessQueen

@RuthlessQueen

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#346

Originally posted by: anushka2112
Oh my dear what an amazing update all my harmones are screaming in joy ...what a passionate RK he is careful though ...I love the situation in which madhu was ...ignorant of consummation ...but RK make her solace. ...me really feeling good at my decision not to read it during family function otherwise either or me would have fainted ...lolz
good good good night ...lol ...
Update soon waiting ...
thanks for the pm

Wow! Thank you so much for the great compliment! I'm so happy you liked how I portrayed Madhu's naivety when it comes to intercourse. I wanted to show the caring and protective side of RK and I'm glad you noticed.

Thank God, there're at least some people who do not regret RK's fast move! =D

Originally posted by: Santhu.The.King
OMG awesome... Just Read All Part's.. Continue Soon... 👏
And BTW .. Please Don't Skip the After Morning Scenes.. ☺️
I Wanna Read them In Your Writing... 👍🏼

Awww that's very sweet of you! Thank you so much! I'll do the special morning scene for you. Not to worry!😳Cheers!

Originally posted by: ssafdar
great update ☺️, but even as RK consummated his relationship with Madhu why i do get a bad feeling that Madhu will be hurt???? that this is part of some nefarious plan by RK.

Thank you so much! Hmm... Even I have a bad feeling about this. You wait and see. This RK is similar to the initial revengeful RK! So beware! Not only Madhu, I'm worried about my readers too! So feel free to let me know what you think of this. =)

Originally posted by: SiMi81
Mlle_Fabuleux Arey-Va your FF was worth the wait! It was HoTt,HoTt,HoTt! I loved it!
RK & Madhu=PyAaR...Please update soon!

***"You know that when I hate you, it is because I love you to a point of passion that unhinges my soul." ~Julie de Lespinasse ***

Thank you so much! I'm glad you fount it very hot! =D If you have anything against the dark RK in my story, your feed back is welcome!

That's some marvelous quote SiMi81! Perfect for RK & Madhu passionate, dark love. Thank you for sharing this with me =)

Originally posted by: TheDarkKnight
Great update!!
Loved it :P

Thanks a lot! I'm glad you loved it! =)

Originally posted by: ornellamg
Thanks for the PM. It was a very good read...worth the wait. Will be waiting for your next update.

Aww thanks a bunch! I'm glad you enjoyed! =)

Originally posted by: sheethal
nice update

Thanks a lot! =)

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RuthlessQueen

@RuthlessQueen

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: shanaiyaa
awesome update, plzz update soon next time

Thanks a lot! I will try to update soon, but no promises since I broke my last one =P

Originally posted by: vaani21
This is wonderful!😳😳👏.I imagined myself on the bed😆.Too good.I want to read more of your work Reesha Can,t wait. Make it fast.😃

Thank you so much! =D Glad you liked it! =O You took Madhu's place on the bed? You bad girl! =P I'm glad you enjoy my work, I'll try to update soon! =)

Originally posted by: Khushi2187
Hi.Im new to this forum.Yor FF is awesome.I read all parts just now.Tht was amazing.Loved it.Waiting for update.Plzzz update soon.Im in love with ur FF.Add me in ur PM list.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Welcome to this forum! Thank you so much for your kind remarks! I'm glad you loved it! =)

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag
amazing n hot. ..

Thanks a lot! =) I'm glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: rhea49
thnxx for the pm
update soon
enjoyed the part

You're welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed it! =)

Originally posted by: raii
nice update!!! you wrote it brilliantly... update soon plz

Thank you so much! I'll try to update soon! =D

Originally posted by: kuttu
It was quite a night for the couple. so what does the morning after bring I hope not revenge. As Rk has already claimed her as his.
The writing wasn't that bold but had a romatic feel to it.

Yes. Thank you! Tell me your view of this dark RK. I'm curious what the readers think. What do you mean it wasn't bold? As in not explicit?

Originally posted by: BrunoMars
UHm, okejj, Gosh! Am I the only one here that finds it hawt here...? *tries to control herself* Gosh! *breaths in*...*breaths out*You know I actually had to control myself before writing a comment and I am still not recovered.

Okejj, I think I am alright now.

Gosh you write so well! It was like, I don't know, whatever I will say right now could be taken differently than I meant,,, But your story is so complete, everything. Though I don't know what is going to happen, I am loving the mystery. And each and every update is so good. Especially this one. Like, Gosh! I am still in a state of amazement. That was so good. You explained everything, details, feelings, facts, opinions, you've got it all. And it comes together and it just, it is like magic. Yep, that is the word. It is so real and yet so unreal. Weird, I know. -It is your fault I am being so weird right now!- This was so hawt, how you bring the story. From Madhu's confusion to this. That is a huge step, yet I don't feel like you missed something. You are an awesome writer. I will just stop talkking, I clearly haven't everything under control right now.

Oh wow! To be frank, I enjoyed reading your review. Thank you so much for taking time to read and leave such a beautiful, sweet review. I love lonng paragraphs! =D My writing really had that effect on you? I'm flattered. Thank you again! lol You should have kept talking, coz I loved what you had to say.

Feel free to write more about your view on this dark RK, whether you like him or the sweet RK the show presents in the current track.

Thanks a bunch for the sweet compliments! Your feedback is very motivating .

❤️

Originally posted by: paagalbandar
its amazing...loved it...but, please keep the assence of their witty talks...i love their witty way of dealing with each other in the show:D

Thank you! Glad you loved it. I'm sorry. I'm not a Hindi speaker. I understand the show thanks to written updates. So since I don't get the full translation, I'm not aware of their complete dialogues. I just get a gist of the actual episode.

Originally posted by: Jhanvi11
Please update soon!!))

I'll try!

Originally posted by: sessy
wow just wow
i love this update u explained very well how madhu is feeling
thx for the pm
looking forward for u r next update

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. =D