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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: reema2000

great job!

on to the next chapter =D

Thank you! Will update soon.

Edited by taran13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sorry I haven't been able to post the next part.....I was busy working on another Fan Fiction. I will update soon hopefully by today or tomorrow.Keep reading!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sorry for the wait....I will post the next part in an hour or so!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 21:

Jeet:Lo! A gaye.

Angad, Kripa, Mahi and Shabd got out of their cars and stood beside the other four. They were making a plan to eat first and then do the activities.

They went to their car and got out the food the girls had made along with blankets to sit on. They went to a nice spot and started to eat.


Jeet:Khana to acha banaya hai tum ladkiyon ne. DELICIOUS!

Soni:Actually, main aur Raji di to kuch bhi to nahin kiya. Saara khana to Mahi aur Kripa ne banaya hai. Compliment to un dono ko do.

Jeet:Excellent food! Tum dono kamaal ka khana banati ho.

Veer:Aur compliment Jeet se mila hai.

Shabd:Arre Jeet, tumhe to food citic bana chahiye tha.

Jeet:Main bhi yeh soch raha tha par phir maine apna mann badal diya.

Everyone:JEET!

The gang finished their meals and decided that they would play volleyball since a net was already up.

The girls went to change into comfier clothes; they came out in shorts and nice t-shirts with their hair tied.

They agreed on the teams of consisting of four people each; Mahi, Kripa, Shabd and Amgad on one and Jeet, Veer, Soni and Raji on the other.

Everyone got into their positions to play volleyball. It started out with Raji, Veer, Jeet and Soni's team winning. Angad and Shabd did not like that, they were sore losers. They were very competitive. Angad and Shabd called for a time out and the four made a new game plan. With their new strategy, they ended up winning the game with a dejected Jeet.


Veer:Mujhe lagta hai ke hume ghar jana chahiye. Asmaan ko dekho.

Raji:Haan, Veer theek keh rahe hain. Chalo saman gai mein rakh te hain aur ghar chalte hain.

Jeet:Theek hai. Chalo saman akhata karte hain.

Everyone quickly gathered their belongings and put them in the car as it had started to pour droplets. By the time they were going to sit in the car, it started to rain real hard and sound thunder. Mahi held on to Shabd as she was scared of thunder.

Shabd:Kripa, kya tum age beht sakti ho? Mahi ko aisa mausam pasand nahin hai.

Kripa:Koi baat nahin. Main Angad ke paas beht jati hoon.

They sat in their cars, said good-bye to the other four and headed home. The weather had gotten really bad, that you couldn'teven see the road ahead of you. They arrived at home and Shabd's house, there was no way Angad and Kripa could get home.

Shabd:Angad, Kripa tum aaj raat yehin ruk jao. Mausam kharab hota ja raha hai.

Angad:Shabd, tum fikar mat karo. Hum pahonch jayenge. Main Kripa ko choodunga.

Kripa:Haan, Angad mujhe chod dega.

Mahi:Nahin Kripa. Tum dono yahin rahoge.

Angad+Kripa:Par....

Shabd:Bas. Tum yahin rahoge. Kal tum dono chale jana.

Angad+Kripa:Theek hai.

Mahi:Ab chalo, andar chaltein hai. Warna hum bheek jayenge.

Kripe:Ek minute, humare paas to kapde nahin hai.

Mahi:Koi baat nahin. Tum dono humare le lena. Chalo mere saath.

Angad went in with Shabd to find clothes and Kripa went with Mahi to find her some clothes. They changeed and decided that they would sleep in their rooms.

Mahi's Bedroom

Kripa:Tumhara ghar bahut acha hai.

Mahi:Thank you. Actually daddyji ne hume gift kiya tha. Ek early wedding present.

Kripa:Oh. Acha Mahi, tum Angad ko bachpan se janti ho na?

Mahi:Haan.

Kripa:To mujhe batao, woh bachpan mein kaisa tha.

Mahi:Oh....to yeh baat hai. Theek hai, ek din....

Mahi told funny and embarrasing stories about ANgad when he was a child. Kripa felt an attraction towards Angad and felt something for him that she never felt before. Mahi noticed the attraction for Angad in Kripa's eyes.

Mahi:Kripa, ek baat poochoon?

Kripa:Of course, poocho.

Mahi:Main dekh rahi hoon ki tum Angad ke liye....kya tumhare dil mein Angad ke liye kuch feelings hai?

Kripa:Pata nahin Mahi. Main bahut confused hoon. Mera dil abhi toota hai par mujhe itna dard nahin hua. Par jab mein Angad ko dekhti hoon, main kuch aur hi mehsoos karto hoon. Shayad maion Angad se pyar karne lagi hoon....shayad.

Mahi:Main khush hoon ke tumhe Angad jaisa ek ladka mile. Woh sach mein ek bahut acha ladka hai.

Kripa:Ek minute Mahi. Mere mann mein Angad ke liye feelings hai par main tumhe batana chati hoon ke main Angad se pehle.....

Mahi:Main janti hoon, tum Shabd se pyar karti thi.

Kripa:Tumhe kaise pata chala?

Mahi:Woh actually, maine party mein sab kuch sun liya. Par main tumhe kuch bataon?

Kripa:Kya?

Mahi:Main kay salon pehle Angad se pyar karti thi.

Kripa:Kya!

Mahi:Haan, par ab main sirf aur sirf Shabd se pyar karti hoon. Kyon, jalan ho rahi hai?

Kripa:Nahin to, main to aise....

Mahi:Koi baat nahin. Main bhi aisi react kiya tha jab SHabd kisi aur ladki ke bare mein baat karte hain. Anyway, main puri koshish karoongi ke tum aur Angad ek ho jayen. Ab bahut raat ho chuki hai. So jate hain.

Mahi and Kripa went to sleep after their heart to heart conversation. They had become closer then ever, like they knew eachother for years.

Shabd's Bedroom

Angad:Shabd, ek baat poochoon?

Shabd:Sure.

Angad:Kripa kaise ladki hai?

Shabd:Woh bahut sweet hai, seedhi saadhi, intelligent...rk minute. Tum kyon jana chate ho>

Angad:Woh bas, yuhin.

Shabd:Yuhin? Angad please. Sach batao.

Angad:Theek hai. Pata nahin, par jab se main Kripa se mila hoon, mere liye uskeliye feelings hone lage hain.

Shabd:MUJHE PATA THA! TUM KRIPA SE....

Angad:SHABD! Dheere bolo. Mahi aur Kripa sun lenge.

Shabd:Theek hai baba.

Angad:Par tumhe kaise pata chala?

Shabd:Tumhari ankhin mein tumhara pyar Kripa ki liye saaf nazar a raha hai. Par tum fikar mat karo, main tum dono ko ek karke hi rahoonga.

Angad:Thank you. Ab so jayein?

Shabd:Haan, mujhe bahut neend arahi hai. Kal iske bare main baat karege.

Angad and Shabd bonded really fast, like they were brothers. They had no secrets between them

Hope you liked it. Sorry for the late update. Busy working on my other fan fic. But do comment! Thanks.

Edited by taran13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey this was a really nice part.. I really liked the shabd and mahi part....please continue soon with more shabd and mahi...I am not really into angad and kripa. Thanks for updating
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sl032597

hey this was a really nice part.. I really liked the shabd and mahi part....please continue soon with more shabd and mahi...I am not really into angad and kripa. Thanks for updating

Thanks so much for your comment! I really appreciate it. Angad and Kripa are just side characters, you could say cameos. I will definetly add more Mahi and Shabd parts....after all the story is about them! Thanks again for commenting, it means alot!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey gr8 update
cute parts between kripa nad mahi and shabd and angad!
continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: stars_shine*

hey gr8 update
cute parts between kripa nad mahi and shabd and angad!
continue soon!

Thank you for your comment. I am glad that you liked this part. I will most likely update tonight. If not tonight then tomorrow. Keep reading!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 22:

It has been six months since the day Mahi and Shabd arrived in Mumbai. They are well known in the fashion industry as well as Angad and Kripa and the hearthrobs of many teens. However, the teens hearts were broken when they found out that Mahi and Shabd were engaged and Angad and Kripa were going out. They also got the good news that Raji was pregnant. No one was happier then Mahi. After a lot of planning, Angad finally got the courage to ask Kripa out. Today was their six month anniversary and Angad planned on proposing to Kripa.

Shabd and Angad were at a jewelry store looking for a ring for Kripa while Mahi kept Kripa busy.


Angad:Ugh! Mujhe koi unghoti nahin mil ri. Ab main Kripa se kaise propose karoon.

Shabd:Calm down bhai! Don't worry, tumhe woh unghoti mil jayegi.

Angad:Ek baat batao. Tumne Mahi ke liye unghoti kaisi dhoondh li?

Shabd:Oh...woh maine nahin dhoodi.

Angad:Phir kisne?

Shabd:Mere bhaiyon ne.

Angad:Kya!

Shabd:Haan...woh mere bhaiyon ne plan banaya tha mujhe aur Mahi ko ek karne. Matlab...apna pyar ka izhaar karna. Aur unki mehndi wale din humne kar liya. Phir kehte haina...chat mangni phir bya.

Angad:Kitne lucky ho tum. Mujhe to woh unghoti kahin bhi nahin mil ri. Kitne dino se hum dhoondh rahe hain. Par mili kya?

Just then Angad saw the perfect diamond ring. It was like it was just meant for Kripa. Angad quickly went over, asked the salesperson to pack that ring for him. After packing the ring, the salesperson handed the bag over to Angad.

After they bought the ring, they quickly went over to Angad's place to do last minute preparations; like checking the restaurant and flowers etc.. After they were done, Shabd dressed Angad in a nice black tux for the special occasion. When Shabd was done, Shabd called Mahi to give her the thumbs up to bring Kripa over.


Kripa:Mahi, hum kahan ja rahe hai? Kuch to batao.

Mahi:Sorry, main kuch nahin bata sakti. Bas tum yeh pehno aur jaldi bahar a jao.

Kripa:Par Mahi....

Mahi:Chup! Jaldi tayyar ho jao. Please?

Kripa:Theek hai.

Kripa went inside and got dressed in the white dress that Angad wanted to see her in. She got out looking extravagent. Mahi quickly but carefully - not wanting to ruin her dress - got her into the car and drove her to the restaurant where they first went out. Mahi got Kripa out of the car and were heading to the restaurant when Mahi turned to leave.

Kripa:Mahi, tum kahan jaa rahi ho? Hum to Angad aur Shabd ko mil re hain?

Mahi:Haan par main apna phone to car main hi bhool gayi. Ti jaa, main abhi leker ati hoon.

Kripa:Theek hai.

Mahi (whispers):Haan keh dena!

Kripa:Tumne kuch kaha kya?

Mahi:Nahin to, and walks off.

Kripa (to herself):Pata nahin Mahi ko kya ho gaya hai. Kuch batati nahin. Aur Shabd, woh aisa act kar raha hai jaise aaj kuch hone wala hai. Aur yeh Angad, phone bhi nahin uthata. Pata nahin usko kya ho gaya hai.

As Kripa was talking to herself, Mahi just smiled. She was walking in the opposite direction as Kripa when Shabd pulled her towards him so that her back was facing the wall and Shabd was covering her with no room to move.

Mahi:Shabd! Yeh tum kya kar rahe ho? Kisi ne dekh liya to?

Shabd:To kya hua? Aur koi dekhne wala nahin hai. Humne sara restaurant book kar liya hai. To koi ana wala nahin hai.

Mahi:Acha.

Shabd:To Ms. Mahi Malhotra. Tum kab Mrs. Mahi Shabd Sareen banogi?

Mahi:Kyon, itni jaldi bhi kya hai?

Shabd:Tum shaadi nahin karna chati? Main betaab ho raha hoon. Batao na, hum kab shaadi karein ge?

Mahi:Bahut jald.

Shabd:Kab?

Mahi:Bata doon?

Shabd:Please?

Mahi:Theek hai. Do hafte baad. Maine abhi mummyji se baat ki hai. uno ne shaadi ki tayyarian bhi shuru kar li.

Shabd:Sach! Tumhe pata nahin tumne mujhe kitna khush kiya hai. Bahut jald, hum ek hone wale hai, phir humare bache hone wale hain phir hum pachon ek happy family ban jayenge aur hum picninc par jayenge, games khele ge, ghoomne jayenge aur.....

Mahi:Shabd! Tum kitna bolte ho. Aur tumne sab kuch bhi soch liya hai. Hum pachon?

Shabd:Haan, maine kaha tha humare teen bache honge aur hum do hain to hum paanch huye na?

Mahi:Haan, yeh to sahi hai par teen bache?

Shabd:Kyon? Tumhe teen bache ache nahin lagte kya?

Mahi:Nahin, bahut ache lagte hain. Kyon nahin honge. Tumhare jaise honge, BADMASH!

Shabd:Mahi!

As Mahi and Shabd were discussing their wedding, Kripa was upset that everyone was keeping her in the dark for something but she did not know what.

As Kripa walked in to the restaurant, her mouth dropped. There were lit candles everywhere, rose petals on the ground, and romantic music playing in the background. She then saw Angad standing in front of her.

Angad came up to her and gave her a red rose.


Angad:Kripa, main janta hoon hum kuch hi mehne mile the, par main tumse kudhbhi se zyada pyar karta hoon.

Angad went down on one knee as Kripa had tears spring to her eyes and took out the ring.

Angad:Kripa main tumse vaada karta hoon ke main tumhe hamesha khush rakhoonga. Main apni jaan se zyada tumhe pyar karoonga. Marte daam tak. Kripa Sharma, kya tum mere saath zindagi bhar do gi? Kya tum mujhse shaadi karo gi, will you marry me?

Kripa:Haan. Main hamesha tumhara saath doon gi.

Angad got up and placed the ring on her finger.

Mahi+Shabd:Yes, WOHOO! Congratulations!

Kripa+Angad:Thank you.

Shabd:To terd hua. Hum dono couples ek hi din mein, ek hi mandap par shaadi karein ge.

Mahi:Theek do hafte baad.

Kripa:Itni jaldi? Hum tayyarian kaise karein ge. Aur...

Shabd:Tum fikar mat karo. Humne sab kuch sambhal liya. Hum charon kal ki flight se Bhatinda jaa rahein hai.

Mahi:Chalo Kripa, hum tumhara saman pack karne mein madat karti hoon.

Kripa:Theek hai, aaj raat tum mere ghar par raho gi.

Mahi:Sure, Shabd, main tumhe kal subah milti hoon jab tum aur Angad hume pick karne ao ge.

Shabd:Manzoor hai. par hum kudh dinner karte hain aur tum dono apna special dinner kar lena. hum tumhe 1 1/2 ghante mein milenge? Theek hai?

Angad+Kripa:Haan.

Everyone left to their respectful tables and had dinner. The girls chattered excitedly about the wedding while the guys just stared at their happy faces just mesmerized.

Do Comment! Please do read my other FF and comment on that as well. I would love to know how I am doing. It is a totally different dtory. Thanks. Hope you like it.


Edited by taran13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey this was a really cute part..I loved the shabd and mahi part..please continue soon
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