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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 17:

Shabd's Room

Shabd:Kripa, tum?

Kripa:Shabd? Tum mere photographer ho?

Shabd:Haan. Lekin tum? Mujhe yeh nahin pata tha ki tum model bana chati ho.

Kripa:Mujhe bachpan se shauk tha. Par tum kahan chale gay? Maine tumhe dhoond ne ki bahut koshish ki.

Shabd:Woh main U.S. chala gaya tha phir main apni bhaiyon ki shaadi ki liye Bhatinda chala gaya tha.

Kripa:Sach. Tum to hamesha apne bhaiyon ki bate karte the. Unko congratulate karna mere taraf se.

Shabd:Ek kaam karte hain. Jab hum yeh product inaugarate karein ge aur party ho gi, tum wahan congratulate karna. Woh wahan honge. Theek hai?

Kripa:Sure.

Shabd:Ab shoot shuru karein? Hume raat tak yeh shoot khatam karna hai.

Kripa:Haan, chalo.

Kripa noticed that he had a gold band on his finger, but he also had rings in his other fingers as well. Kripa dismissed the thought of him being engaged.

Mahi's Room

Mahi:Angad? TUM!

Angad:Tum meri model ho?

Mahi:Haan, kya tum bhool gaye ki mujhe modelling karne main bahut shauk hai.

Angad:Haan, main yeh kaise bhool sakta hoon.

Mahi:Ek minute. Tum graduation ke baad kahan chale gay the. Na koi phone yaan e-mail. Apni dost ko bhool gaye. Mujhe tumko kuch batana hai.

Angad:Mujhe bhi, lunch par batana. Hume yeh shoot khatam karna hai warna hum sare raat yahan hi rehnge.

Mahi:Theek hai, chalo.

Shabd's Room

Shabd began his photoshoot for his indian dress campaign that Mahi was doing as well. Shabd was a total pro at it. It was like he had been doing it for years.

After their morning session, they had lunch where they caught up, how they were doing what was happening and so on. However, lunch was cut short because of the time limit and Shabd couldn't tell her that he was engaged. Hence, they started their afternoon shoot and were done by 6:45 p.m. It was just in time for dinner. Shabd was excited, he couldn't wait to meet Mahi and tell her who he met and how his day was. He also hadn't been seperated from Mahi for that long so he missed her.


Shabd:Ok Kripa, aaj ka shoot khatam. Tum ek achi model ho. Good job.

Kripa:Thank you. Tum bhi ek baut ache photographer ho.

Shabd:Thanks. Main tumhe kal milta hoon. 7 a.m sharp.

Kripa:Theek hai.

Shabd:Bye.

Kripa:Bye.

Kripa (thought): Tumhe pata nahin aaj main kitni khush hoon tujhse milkar Shabd. Maine tumhe kahan kahan nahin dhoonda. Ab main tumhe bata sakti hoon ki meri mann mein kya hai. Main tum se kab ka batana chati hoon ki main tumse bahut pyar karti hoon!

Mahi's Room

Mahi was a natural model. She never did anything wrong. She even took Angad's advice and used it really well. She truly loved this profession.

After Mahi's and Angad's morning shoot, they grabbed a quick lunch where they caught up on their lives. However, they were really behind so they had to cut their lunch short. Thus, Mahi didn't get the chance to tell him abiut her engagement. But she thought she would tell him later.

Soon, their photoshoot for the day was done and they were packing up. Mahi went and got changed and was going out to meet Shabd - she missed Shabd - when Angad stopped her.


Angad:Wow Mahi. Tum to kamaal ki model ho.

Mahi:Thanks Angad. Tum bhi ek bahut ache photographer ho.

Angad:Thanks. Kya tum aaj raat busy ho.

Mahi:Kyon?

Angad:Woh maine socha tha ki hum itni der baad mile to hum dinner kar lete aur batein bhi ho jayengi.

Mahi:I'm sorry Angad....woh actually main...

Angad:Koi baat nahin. Hum kisi aur din baat kar lenge. Main tumhe kal milta hoon.

Mahi:Theek hai. Bye Angad.

Angad:Bye.

Angad (thought):Koi baat nahin Mahi. Aaj nahin to kal main tumhe apni dil ki baat to batakar rahoonga. Tum janti nahin ho ki main tumhe kitni der se milna chata hoon. Jab main Mumbai aya, tab mujhe pata chala ki main tumse kitna pyar karta hoon. Kitni badi galti ki maine tumhara pyar thukrakar. Ab main apni dil ki baat tumhe batakar hi rahoonga. I LOVE YOU MAHI MALHOTRA!

Mahi walked over to Shabd who was waiting at their car with a huge smile on his face. She guessed that his day went excellent.

Mahi:Hi Shabd! Tumhara din kaisa tha?

Shabd:Bahut acha. Mujhe yeh profession bahut lagta hai.

Mahi:Mujhe bhi yeh profession bahut acha lagta. Yeh excitment kahin aur nahin mil sakti na?

Shabd:Haan, yeh tum sahi keh rahi ho.

Mahi:Arre Shabd, tum yakeen nahin karo gay main kis se mili.

Shabd:Kaun?

Mahi:Angad se. Wohi mera photographer tha.

Shabd:Wohi jise tum...., said Shabd with a hint of jealousy.

Mahi:Arre Shabd, tumhare awaaz sehi pata chalta hai ke tum jealous ho rahe ho.Iski koi zaroorat nahin hai. Main sirf tumhari hoon.

Shabd:Woh main janta hoon. Aur tum bhi yakeen nahin karo gi main kis se mila.

Mahi:Kaun?

Shabd:Kripa se. Woh meri model thi.

Mahi:KYA! Shabd, mujhe lagta hai jo baat tumne aaj subhe ki woh sehi thi. Tumhe hi meri photographer hone chahiye the, Said Mahi with jealousy.

Shabd:How cute. Meri honey wali wifey jealous ho rahi hai. Yeh mujhe acha lagta hai.

Mahi:Main kahan jealous hoon. Ab chaliye. Dinner nahin karna kya?

Shabd:Haan, chalo.

Mahi and Shabd left to have dinner with an end to a great day and the beginning of their careers.

Hope you liked it. Read and comment. I like them!
Edited by taran13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 18:

Mahi and Shabd had finished their dinner, so they decided to head to the beach to watch the sunset. They loved the reflection the setting sun had on the water. The mixture of the colours were simply amazing. No words could describe them.

Mahi sat beside Shabd leaning against him while Shabd held her in his arms.


Mahi:Shabd?

Shabd:Hmmm....

Mahi:Tum kya soch rahe ho?

Shabd:Main yeh soch raha hoon ke Kripa kitne sundar lag rahi thi woh purple anarkali suit mein.

Mahi:Kya! Tumhari hone wali biwi tumhari bahon mein hai aur tum ek doosre aurat ke bare mein soch rahe ho! Mahi got out of his arms and was now facing himTum ek kaam kyon nahin karte, tum us Kripa ke paas jao aur main......

Shabd:Chup. Agar tumhe Angad ka naam liya to main...

Mahi:Tum itna gussa kyon ho rahe ho. Tumhe to...

Shabd:Arre main mazaak kar raha tha. Main to yeh dekhna chata tha ke tum kaise react karti ho.

Mahi:Acha, to yeh baat hai. To kaisa laga mera reaction, Said Mahi with a hint of sarcasm.

Shabd:Bahut acha. Mujhe pata chala tum kitni jealous ho jati ho. I like that.

Mahi:Theek hai. Ek baat batao, agar mujhe yeh pata chala ke Angad mujhse pyar karta aur main bhi abhi use pyart karti hoon, tum kya karte?

Shabd:Main khushi khushi tumhe uske paas jane deta. Kyunki tumhari khushi mein meri khushi hai.

Mahi:Sach. Par yeh kabhi hone wala nahin hai. Kyunki main sirf aur sirf tumse pyar karta hoon.

Shabd:Yeh to main janta hoon, is liye maine yeh sab kush kaha!

Mahi:Shabd!

Shabd took Mahi into his arms again and continued to watch the sunset.

Mahi:Theek hai, ab sach mein batao, tum kya soch rahe the.

Shabd:Main yeh soch raha tha jab humari shaadi ho gi aur humare cute se bache honge, to hum yahan picnic manane ayenge.

Mahi:Acha? Kitne bache, Asked Mahi with a hint of curiousty.

Shabd:Ek ladki aur do ladke.

Mahi:Woh kyon?

Shabd:Woh is liye kyunki humari pyari si angel ko do bhaiyon milenge jo woh use bahut pyar karenge aur hamesha raksha karenge. Aur woh meri ladli ho gi. Ladkon ko tum sambhal lena.

Mahi:Tumne to sab kuch plan kar liya hai Shabd. You're so cute.

Shabd:Acha main cute hoon?

Shabd started to tickle Mahi as much as he could. Mahi tried to get away but he always caught her. Mahi couldn't stop laughing. Then Mahi finally succeeded in running away from Shabd.

Shabd:Mahi! Ruko!

Mahi:Nahin!

Shabd:Mahi, Ouch!

Mahi:Shabd! Kya hua? Tum theek to ho na?

Mahi ran towards Shabd who was now clutching his chest.

Mahi:Shabd! Tum theek to ho na? I am so sorry. Mujhe aisa nahin karna chahiye tha. Mujhe maaf kardo, main abhi...

Mahi had tears spring to her eyes. She should've stopped when he asked her to. Shabd couldn't take that Mahi was about to cry. He quickly gave up on his joke and hugged Mahi as of protecting her.

Shabd:Mahi, tum rona mat. Main bilkul theek hoon. Mujhe kuch nahin hua, main mazaak kar raha tha.

Mahi:Shabd! Yeh kaisa mazaak hai?

Shabd:I'm sorry. Main aaj ke baad aisa kabhi nahin karoonga. I promise.

Mahi:Tumhe pata nahin main kitna dar gayi thi. Akhir tumhe kuch ho gaya to? Mera kya hoga? Main tumhari begaar adoori hoon.

Shabd:I am really sorry Mahi. Main tumhe kabhi chod kar nahin jaonga. Tum meri zindagi ho Mahi. Main apni zindagi ko chod kar ja sakta hoon kya?

Mahi:Shabd.

Shabd:Ab bahut raat ho chuki hai. Ghar chalein?

Mahi:Chalo.

Mahi and Shabd went home and went to bed a little earlier that night. They had to wake up early, they still had to take a lot photo's and the inaugaration for the company they were doing the shoots for was this friday.

The week went on and so did the shoots. The week was so hectic that she couldn't even talk to Raji and Soni properly. However, Mahi and Shabd acted really professionally about their careers. Fortunately, since everyone was so busy for the shoot's Angad and Kripa didn't get the time to tell their feelings. They decided to tell them at the inaugaration party.

It was early morning Friday and Mahi and Shabd were on their way to Jeet/Soni and Raji/Veer's house. Aditya and Yash gave them a day off after they pulled an all nighter last night to finish the campaign shoot. They decided that they would go invite them for the party.

Shabd and Mahi rang the doorbell to their house.


Soni:Mahi, Shabd? Tum yahan? Bahut din ho gaye.

Shabd:Sorry. Woh actually bahut kaam tha aur deadline bhi meet karni thi.

Mahi:Par aaj chuti hai to hum a gaye.

Soni:Bahut acha hua tum dono a gaye.

Mahi:Soni, Raji di kahan hai?

Raji:Main yahan hoon.

Mahi:Raji di!

Mahi ran towards Raji and gave her a big hug.

Raji:Tum to hume bhool hi gayi. Sirf phone kiya?

Mahi:Sorry, bahut kaam tha. Par aaj chuti hai aur weekend par hum sab free hai. Kahin ghoom ne jaye?

Jeet:Haan. Bahut mazaa aye ga. Kyon bhai?

Veer:Haan.

Mahi:Jiju!

Jeet:Kaisi ho sali ji?

Mahi:Main theek hoon. Aap?

Jeet:Hum dono bhi theek hain.

Veer:Shabd, tum kaise ho?

Shabd:Main theek hoon. Are Mahi. Hume jo batane aye the woh to hum bhool gaye.

Mahi:Fitteh mooh!

Raji:Kya bhool gaye?

Shabd:Woh aaj jis kaam ke liye campaign kar rahe the, aaj raat uska inaugaration hai. Tum tum charon ko bulane aye the.

Soni:Phir to hum zaroor ayenge.

Mahi:Shabd, main Raji di aur Soni ke saath baat karna chati hoon. Main jaon?

Shabd:Mujhe bhi Veer aur Jeet se naat karni hai. Tum jao.

Mahi:Chaliye.

Mahi, Raji and Soni went out to the backyard to talk while Shabd, Veer and Jeet went to the kitchen (Jeet was hungry).

In The Backyard

Mahi started a normal conversation. She explained about their house, how fun modelling was, how glad her dreams were coming true. the she told them about Angad.

Soni:KYA! Angad tumhara photographer hai?

Mahi:Haan Soni. Aur mujhe use ajeeb se vibes milte hain. Woh mujhe kuch batana chata hai par keh nahin pata.

Raji:Shayad use lagta hai ke tuk abhi bhi use pyar karti ho. Kya tumhare dil mein us liye feelings hain?

Mahi:Nahin Raji di. Bilkul nahin. Main sirf aur sirf Shabd se pyar karti hoon. Maine us din uske feelings nikal diye jab usne mera dil dukhaya tha.

Soni:Shabd ko pata hai?

Mahi:Haan, use sab kuch pata hai.

Raji:Yeh tumne theek kiya.

Mahi:Ab bahut ho gaya. Mujhe jana hai. Aap dono waqt par tayyar ho jaye. main apka intezaar karoongi.

Raji:Theek hai, hum waqt par tayyar ho jayenge.

In The Kitchen

Veer:KYA! Kripa tumhari model hai?

Shabd:Haan. Aur woh hamesha mere saath waqt batana chati hai.

Jeet:Kya tim abhi bhi Kripa se...

Shabd:Yeh tum kaisi baat kar rahe ho? Main sirf aur sirf Mahi se pyar karta hoon.

Veer:Aur Mahi yeh sab janti hai?

Shabd:Haan. Use sab pata hai.

Jeet:To tumne fikar karni ki koi zaroorat nahin hai.

Mahi:Shabd, chalein?

Shabd:Haan, chalo. Main chalta hoon. Waqt par a jana. Bye.

Mahi and Shabd arrived home to get ready. Mahi decided to wear Shabd's favourite colour, blue. She decided to promote the company that they campaigned for so she wore a light blue anarkali suit with silver flower embroidery. Along with that, she wore the necklace that Shabd gifted her and beautiful silver earings. She decided to leave her hair down, nicely straight.

Mahi came down the stairs to see SHadb dressed nicely wearing a dark blue dress shirt with black dress pants. Both their engagment rings clearly visible.

After an exchange of compliments, together they headed to the party of their first success.

When they arrived at the party, they saw Angad and Kripa talking together. Angad wore a red dress shirt with black dress pants and Kripa wore an ocean green anarkali suit.

They saw Mahi and Shabd enter and headed towards them.


Angad:Hi Kripa.

Mahi:Hi Angad.

Kripa:Hey Shabd.

Shabd:Hi Kripa.

Kripa:Shabd, kya tum hume introduce nahin karo gay.

Shabd:Arre haan. Main bhool hi gaya. Kripa, yeh hai Mahi, meri mangeter.

Mahi:Aur Angad, yeh hai Shabd.

Angad+Kripa:Kya! Mangeter? Fiancee?

>A large dark cloud fell over Angad and Kripa when they heard that the people that they claimed that they loved were already engaged.

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Edited by taran13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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a double post yayaya..thanks..both parts were amazing... I wonder what kripa and angad will do now that they know shabd and mahi engaged, I hope they wont try and separate them. Please continue soon, cant wait
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sl032597

a double post yayaya..thanks..both parts were amazing... I wonder what kripa and angad will do now that they know shabd and mahi engaged, I hope they wont try and separate them. Please continue soon, cant wait

Thank you so much. You are one of my regular commetaters. I truly appreciate it. To find out what happens you are going to have to read the next part; which will be posted up soon. I will post more regularly since my summer break has started. Thanks again!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow... great job... cant wait to see wats next! =D
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Posted: 16 years ago
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truely awesm work....keep it up and update soooon
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Originally posted by: reema2000

wow... great job... cant wait to see wats next! =D

Thank you so much. Keep reading!

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truely awesm work....keep it up and update soooon

Thank you. Keep reading because it will get better!
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Part 19:

Angad+Kripa:Kya! Mangeter?

Mahi:Haan, bahut jald meri sur Shabd ki shaadi hone wali hai. Yehi hai jo main tumhe batana chati thi Angad, par waqt nahin mila.

Shabd:Main bhi tumhe meri sagai ki baare main batana chata tha, par yeh campaign hume bahut busy rakha.

Kripa:Well, congratulations. Hume shaadi mein zaroor bulana. Kripa's voice cracked when she said that last part.Kyon Angad? She elbowed Angad in the ribs

Angad:Haan, congratulations.

Mahi+Shabd:Thank you.

After they found out the bitter truth, Angad and kripa saw everything clearly. They noticed the gold band that Shabd always wore on his ring finger, the diamond ring on Mahi's finger and the necklace that she always wore that incidentally said 'Shabd'.

Kripa quickly came to terms with it. It was too late now, she couldn't do anything. If she hadn't left him before, he could've been with her. She understood that Shabd and her were never meant to be.

However, Angad felt differently. He was upset, heartbroken and angry. How could Mahi do this to him?

Couple of seconds later, Veer, Raji, Soni and Jeet walked in wearing beautiful traditional clothes in order to support the campaign.

Everyone greeted eachother and intrduced themselves to Angad and Kripa. They also invited them for the weekend's picnic that they planned. After much persuasion, they agreed.

The party went on with the inaugaration of the product. Ther photographers (Shabd and Angad) and the models (Mahi and Kripa) were highly praised for their excellent job and skills.

Angad and Kripa were sitting together trying to be happy for their good friends. Just Angad had to try harder.


Kripa:Angad, baat samajh ne ki koshish karo. Mahi Shabd se pyar karti hai. Woh sirf uski hai.

Angad:Par kripa, Mahi mere saath aisa kaise kar sakti hai? Woh mujhse pyar karti thi.

Kripa:Karti thi! Aur waise bhi, tum bhi na uska dil dukhaya tha jab tumne uska pyar thukraya tha. Woh Shabd se bahut pyar karti hai. Dekho un dono ko.

Angad and Kripa looked to see Mahi and Shabd dancing to a slow song lost in each others eyes. you could clearly see the love for each other in each others eyes.

Kripa:Dekha, un dono ka pyar saaf nazar a raha hai.

Angad:Shayad tume theek keh rahi ho. Mahi mere liye bani nahin thi.

Kripa:Aur Shabd mere liye.

Incidentally, Mahi and Shabd overheard Angad and Kripa express their broken hearts.

Mahi and Shabd decided to walk away when they heard that, no one better than them what it felt like when someones heart was broken. How hard it was for them to see the person that they loved in front of you with someone else.

As they were leaving, Angad invited them to sit down. He was trying to be a good friend.


Angad:Mahi, Shabd. Behto naa. Hum kal ki picnic ki liye planning kar rahe the.

Mahi:Theek hai.

Shabd:To kya plan kiya hai?

Kripa:Hum dono ne yeh socha hai ke hum jaldi beach par jayenge kyunki subah ka sunrise ko dekhna bahut acha lagta hai.

Mahi:Excellent idea. Phir tum sab humare ghar a jana. Hum khana mere ghar par banaye ge aur tayyar mere ghar pe ho jayenge.

Shabd:Good idea. Phir sab kuch tayyar ho kar hum beach par chale jayenge.

Angad:Theek hai.

Shabd:Main Jeet, Soni, Raji aur Veer ko batakar ata hoon. Main abhi aya.

Mahi:theek hai.

Kripa:Waise, tumhara ghar kahan hai.

Mahi:Kyon?

Kripa:Kal hum tumhare ghar ana hai na?

Mahi:Oh sorry, main bhi na...

Kripa:It's ok. Ek baat bataon. Main bhi aise hi hoon.

Mahi:Sach!

Kripa:Haan!

Mahi:Yeh lo, mera adress. Subah jaldi a jana. Aur tum bhi Angad.

Angad:Theek hai.

Mahi and Kripa started to talk about fashion and clothes, Angad didn't want to be a part of that conversation so he went to Shabd and started talking to him.

To his surprise, they had a lot in common. They bonded together really fast. Shabd would tell Angad thing about Kripa when they use to go to school together and Angad felt something for her. But just put that feeling aside.

Mahi and Kripa also bonded really fast. It was like they knew each other for years. Kripa here and there would ask things about Angad. She found out that he was a really nice guy. Kripa liked that.

It was time to go and Angad offered to drop Kripa home.

Mahi and Shabd went home but weren't at all sleepy so they just lay down on SHabd's bed and talked. Mahi lay in Shabd's arms while Shabd caressed her head.

They talked about what they had found out at the party and appreciated the effort that Angad and Kripa were putting in to be happy for them. They also found out that they were asking about each other a lot. It looked like that Angad's and Kripa's friendship would turn into something new.

The night went on and Mahi and Shabd went to sleep awaiting tomorrow.


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Edited by taran13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
gr8 parts!!
all very cute!
continue soon!
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