MS FF - Yeh Ishq Hai [Part 25 PG.14] - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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This is sooooo good..cant wait to see what happens next
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Posted: 16 years ago
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come on faster faster... i cant wait...its soooo nice...u really rock!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you so much for the comments! They truly are appreciated. I will post parts 7 and probably 8 by tomorrow....so just continue reading this fan fic!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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really good
plz continue soon
Edited by rkath - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you to all who commented and to the silent readers. Here's part 7. ENJOY!

Veer:Ab sab ko plan samajh a gaya hai?

Jeet+Soni+Raji:Haan.

Veer:Theek hai chalo.

Soni:Mahi! Tum theek to ho?

Mahi:Haan Soni, main bilkul theek hoon. Bas Shabd yuhin baat barare hain.

Veer:Kyon Shabd? Bahut fikar ho rahi hi Mahi ki?

Shabd:Nahin to, main bas ek dost ka farz nibha ra hoon.

Jeet:Theek hai theek hai. Ab bas bhi karo. Khushboo bahut achi a rahi hai aur mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai.

Shabd:Tumhe khane ki bijay kuch bhi nahin dikhay dera?

Jeet:Nahin!Said Jeet took the plateful of muffins to the dining table with two already in his mouth.

Mahi:Tum log khalo, main sab ki liye coffee banati hoon.

Shabd:Nahin, tum aram karo. Kitna kaam karo gi? Main coffee banata hoon.

Mahi:Shabd main...

Shabd:Nahin Mahi, tum yahan behto aur muffin khao.

Shabd pushed Mahi down on a chair and stuffed a muffin in her good hand and he left to go make coffee. Just that he didn't know how. He just said that so Mahi wouldn't have to work; she already did so much and she burnt her hand. That wouldn't be nice so he blurted out the first thing he said.

Raji, Veer, Soni and Jeet keenly observed their squabble smiling. They would have to put their plan into action soon.


Raji:Man jao Mahi. Kitne Pyar se tumhe yeh keh raha hai.

Veer:Haan Mahi. Pehli baar Shabd coffee banara hai. Pehlie yeh pani bhi nahin garam kar sakta tha.

Jeet:Haan Mahi. Par teri daat deni padi gi. Kaisa jadoo kar diya hai tumne Shabd par. Kudh help karna chata hai.

Mahi:Jiju, aap bhi na!

Mahi flushed red at that statment.

Shabd:Ab bas bhi ki jiye. Khana thanda ho jayega.

Shabd came with cups of coffee that he guessed how to make. He always saw his maid make some for him and tried to do it the same way. Hopefully it turned out right.

Shabd:Yeh lo Mahi, pehle tum coffee piyo.

Mahi:Umm...thanks Shabd.

Mahi carefully sipped the coffee as it was still hot. Shabd keenly observed every expression on her face. He kept staring at her that he didn't notice that the others took their cups and were drinking it as well.

Mahi:Shabd, bahut achi bani hai.

Everyone:Haan Shabd. Coffee bahut achi hai.

Shabd hadn't noticed that everyone else took their cups. He was too busy paying attention to Mahi. For him, the only comment that mattered was of Mahi's. Yet he didn't know why.

Shabd:Oh...thank you.

Mahi:Ab tum bhi behto aur khana khao or coffee piyo.

Mahi pulled Shabd into the seat right beside her putting a coffe cup in one hand and a muffin in the other. Shabd liked the feeling he got when Mahi touched him. It felt right and it felt like nothing before. The rest of the gang noticed and smiled thinking that their plan was working.

Mahi:Chalo, sab ne kha liya. Main kitchen saaf kar deti hoon.

Shabd:Main bhi help karta hoon.

Raji+Soni:Nahin Shabd tum behto. Hum madat karte hain.

They pushed Shabd back into his chair when he tried to get up. He was upset that he couldn't spend alone time with Mahi. He like it, he didn't entirely know what he was feeling towards her but he didn't like being away from her. With the closeness they had approached in the last couple of hours.

Soni:Haan tum aram kar lo. Bahut kaam kar liya.

Shabd:Maine bahut kaam kiya hai? Mahi ko aram karna chahiye. Aur uska haat bhi jal gaya.

Jeet:Ek kaam karte hain.Kyon nahin Shabd aur Mahi aram karein aur Raji aur Soni table saaf kar deein aur Bhai aur main bartan saaf kar dein?

Veer:Haan, tum dono bahar jao. Relax ho jao. Hum thodi der main aate hain.

Mahi:Jaisa aap chaien. Chaliye Shabd.

Mahi and Shabd walked out into the beach while the four were happy that they got them alone together.

Mahi and Shabd decided to walk along the water. The water felt nice and so did the atmosphere.


Mahi:Shabd, tum bahut achi coffee banate ho. Kahan se siki?

Shabd:Oh woh kahin se nahin. Mujhe yaad nahin tha mere gharwale kaise coffee banate the to main sab kuch guess kiya tha. Mera guess sahi tha na?

Mahi:Haan sahi tha par kisi ko food poisoning ho gayi to?

Shabd:Sorry baba. Age se main tumhari madat le loon ga.

Right after he realized what he said. He didn't know why he said that, he just did because he liked alone time with her and getting help from her would be alone time.

Mahi:Kya?

Shabd:Woh main...maine kaha ke age se main tumhari yan Raji yan Soni ki madat le loon ga. Tumne kya suna?

Mahi:Oh...woh maine socha ki tumne kaha ki tum age se meri madat le lo gay.

Shabd:Kyon? Tumhe mere saath akele main waqt batane mein acha lagta hai?

Mahi:Fitteh mooh tera Shabd. Tum kaise socht te ho. Maine to kaha jo maine suna. Bas. Main aisa nahin soch ti.

And Mahi started to walk away but Shabd caught her arm turning her around so that their bodies aren't even inches apart.

He stared deeply into her eyes making her look back when she shied away.


Shabd:Par mujhe tumhare saath akele main waqt batana bahut acha lag ta hai. Pata nahin par jab tum mere saath ho ti ho mere mann mein different se feelings a jate hain. Maine pehle aisa kabhi nahin feel kiya hai jaise main tumhari liye feel karta hoon.

Shabd kept on staring into her eyes while she did the same. No one felt the need to move, it felt right the way Shabd's strong arms held her, protecting her. He liked the way how she felt against him when he held her like this, he wanted to hold her like this forever. They both were lost in their own world as the waves made a soft sound hitting against the shore.

Hope you like this part. Sorry i couldn't post part 8 but i'll definetly post it tomorrow. But please do comment! Thanks.

Edited by taran13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26
awww... this is such a cute part...I cant wait to see what happens next. shabd and mahi are finally getting close.. please continue soon. thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks to everyone who read. Here's part 8.

Part 8

Shabd:Arre Mahi! Main to mazak kar raha tha! Tumne itna seriously le liya.

Mahi:Fitteh mooh tera Shabd!

Shabd finally let go of Mahi even though he didn't want to. He had no idea what kind of attraction he felt towards her; but he knew he felt something.

To annoy Shabd, Mahi started to splash the ocean water at Shabd. It just happened to be really cold water.


Shabd:Mahi! Ruk Jao! Pani bahut thanda hai! MAHI!

Mahi:Main nahin rukungi!

Shabd:Acha? Theek hai.

Shabd ran towards her and picked her up in his arms and spun her around until she was dizzy. Then he dropped her in the water.

Mahi:Ouch. SHABD!

Shabd:Kya hua? Lagi kya?

Mahi:Haan. Ab meri madat karo.

Mahi stuck out her hand for Shabd to take to help her up; but when Shabd took it, she pulled him down in the water too.

When he fell, she started to laugh. Shabd loved the way Mahi looked and sounded the way when she laughed. When she laughed, she forgot everythin around her. When she laughed it made you happy because you know in one way or the other that you did something to cause that happiness. And he was glad that he gave her that happiness.


Shabd:Mahi main tumhe nahin chodunga!

Mahi:Pakad sakte ho to pakdo!

Mahi stuck out her tongue and ran around the water splashing him even more. He quickly caught up to her and picked her up once again but didn't drop her, he just spun her around. Once again Mahi started to laugh.

Soni, Jeet, Raji and Veer noticed Mahi and Shabd playing in the water together. It looked like the more time they spent alone together, the closer they got.


Raji:Kitne achi jodi hai na? Dono kitne khush hain.

Veer:Haan, bas unko ehsaas ho jaye ki woh dono ek dossre se pyar karte hain.

Soni:Ab to hamara plan to kam ho raha hai.

Jeet:Haan. Par ab hum kya karein?

Veer:Pata nahin, kuch sochte hain.

Mahi:Kya sochna pade ga jiju?

Veer:Arre Mahi, Shabd, tum dono kab aye?

Shabd:Bas abhi.

Mahi:Kaunsa plan kamyab ho raha hai?

Soni:Woh shopping ka plan. Humne socha tha ki kyon nahin hum shaadi ki shopping yahan bhi karlein?

Mahi:Oh, to theek hai. Shabd aur main kapre badal ke ate hain.Chaliye Shabd.

Jeet:Phew. Mujhe laga ki hum charon pakad jayenge. Acha hua ki tumne kuch soch liya Soni.

Soni:Thank you. Ab chaliye, shopping nahin jana kya?

Jeet:Kya? Hum sach mein shopping jayenge?

Soni:Haan, jao aur gadi nikalo.

Jeet:Chaliye Bhai.

As Jeet and Veer went out to take out the car, Shabd came downstairs wearing jeans and a aeropostale t-shirt.

Raji:Shabd?Tum a gaye? Mahi kahan hai?

Shabd:Woh abhi bhi tayyar ho rahi hai.

Soni:Mahi bhi na.

Mahi:Mahi bhi na kya Soni?

Mahi asked that question while coming downstairs wearing a green skirt and a white halter top. Mahi's hair was left down since it was still wet.

Soni:Ki tum bahut waqt laga ti ho tayyar hone mein. Ab chalo, Jeet aur Veer bahar intezaar ka rein hain.

Mahi:Chalo. Arre Shabd, chalo na.

This time, Soni and Jeet were in the front seat Jeet driving and Veer and Raji were in the middle seat. This time, Mahi willingly sat beside Shabd in the back seat immediatley starting a conversation with him. The four were happy that Mahi and Shabd put aside their differences and were working on becoming friends. They just hoped that they realized that they were falling for each other.

When Jeet looked in the rearview mirror, he noticed that Mahi was talking contiuosly to Shabd while he just kept on staring at her. He was truly mesmoerized. Jeet winked at Veer who just smiled knowing what he was referring to.


Jeet:Chalo, shaadi ki shopping karte hain.

Soni:Mujhe jewelry dekhni hai Jeet. Chalo!

Raji:Aur mujhe kapde dekhne hai.

Veer+Jeet:Kyon?

Raji:Shaadi ki liye aur shaadi ke baad naye kapde chahiye.

Mahi:Phir main kya shopping karoon? Meri to shaadi nahin ho rahi.

Shabd:Arre Mahi, hum ghar walon ki liye shopping kar lete hain.

Shabd put his hand around Mahi to comfort her who liked the gesture. The other four just smiled and watched.

Veer:Theek hai, tum dono ghar walon ki liye shopping kar lo aur hum shaadi ki shopping kar lete hain.

And the group seperated to do their own shopping. As the time passed, the shopping bags pile grew bigger. Shabd held most of mahi's bag since her hand still hurt a bit.

Mahi:Shabd dekh yay. Woh kitna sundar hai. Mummyji main bahut acha lage ga.

Shabd:Mahi, aur kitna shopping karo gi. Main thak gayan hoon.

Mahi:Theek hai, hum gadi mein yeh bags rak te hain aur beht jaate hain.

Shabd:Thank you.

Then they walked towards the car putting their bags in the trunk. They also sat in the trunk with the door open. Soon it started to rain and Mahi got happy. She loved the rain when she was a little kid. She started to put her hands and legs into the rain.

Shabd:Tumhe barish mein khel ne acha lag ta hai?

Mahi:Haan. Jab main choti thi, mujhe barish mein khel ne main bahut mazaa ata that. Pata hai Shabd, ek baar main bimaar bhi par gayi thi, par us din bahut mazaa aya Soni aur Raji di ke saath.

Shabd:To chalo, baarish mein khel te hain.

Mahi:Sach Shabd? Theek hai chalo.

Mahi took Shabd's hand that he held out and they both started to run in each puddle. He noticed the glow on Mahi's face when she was playing in the rain. She looked so happy, she acted like the child not caring what anyone else thought. That's what he loved about her.

In the background,the song TUM SE HI plays from JAB WE MET.


Aa aa..aa aa…aa aa..aa aa.. aa..
Na hai yeh pana
Na khona he hai
Tera na hona, jaane
Kuyn hona he hai - Mahi jumping from puddle to puddle while Shabd just watches
Tum Se Hi din hota hai
Surmayi shaam aati hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Har ghadi saans aati hai
Zindagi kehlati hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi - Shabd remembers every moment he spent with Mahi since the first day he met her and how important it was to him
Na hai yeh pana
Na khona hi hai
Tera na hona, jaane
Kuyn hona hi hai
Aa aa..aa aa…aa aa..aa aa.. aa..
Aankho mein aankhe teri - Mahi bumps into Shabd and they have an eye lock session
Bahoo mein Bahe teri - Thunder sounds and Mahi hugs Shabd (she hates thunder)
Mera na mujh mein kuch raha
Hua kya
Bathon mein bathein teri
Rathe saogathe meri
Kuyn tera sab yeh ho gaya
Hua kya
Mein kahin bhi jaata hun
Tum Se Hi mil jatha hun - Mahi pulls Shabd in every puddle and splashes him
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Shor mein khamoshi hai
Thodi si behoshi hai - Shabd slips and falls down into the puddle while Mahi starts to laugh
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Aa aa aa aa aa aa…
Aadha sa vaada kabhi - Mahi lends her hand to help Shabd get up
Aadhe se zyada kabhi
Jee chahe karlu is tarah
Wafa ka
Chode na chute kabhi - Shabd gets up but doesn't let her hand go but holds on tighter
Tode na toote kabhi
Jo daaga tum se jud gaya
Wafa ka
Mein tera sarmaya hun
Jo bhi mein ban paya hun
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Raaste mil jate hai - Shabd pulls Mahi into the rains and into each and every puddles, also splashing her
Manzile mil jati hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Na hai yeh pana
Na khona he hai
Tera na hona, jaane
Kuyn hona he hai
Aa aa aa aa aa aa …

Mahi let's go of Shabd's hand and just stands in the rain with her arms out while Shaabd just looks at her.


Shabd:Yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai? Kyon main Mahi ki bare mein aisa soch ta hoon/ Kyon mujhe khushi milti hai jab Mahi khush hoti hai? Jab Mahi ko chot lag ti hai, mujhe dukh kyon hota hai? Kyon? Mujhe kya hogaya hai? Kya yeh pyar hai? Am i in love with Mahi?


Hope you guys enjoyed. Please comment, i like it.
Thanks



Edited by taran13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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owww chooooo chweeeeeeeeeet 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww this is soo sweet. please update soon..waiting...
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Awwwwwwwwww. That was wonderful 😊... please update soon...
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