FF: INTEHA ~ completed ~ P.33 - Page 5

Originally posted by: shamrita

Hey nice prologue...
add me to d pm list also :)
Shalvi

Originally posted by: khwaish.e.arsh

hey tich !!

really liked d first part...u 've picked up d story frm an intrestng point ...wanna see hw u take it further ..nd i wud really like reading Avni's pov on d whole scenario...she was d most balanced nd mature one among all 6 of dem ..in my opinion ,evn more mature den Prithvi ...

i am an ardent Pridaholic...but i thnk i'm gonna like dis ff more than ur Prida FF 😳

continue soon ...nd add me to pm list

--khwahish😊

Originally posted by: cblover

hey tich thats so sweet of u ...nd yes btw nice update...waiting for the next

Originally posted by: akansha_lnmdj

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Originally posted by: Nan08

Tich...

firstly am very very sorry for late comments.. i was bit busy n had not had the time to read thru this new FF or urs...

am glad to see you have started this new FF n that too frm Avni's view.. it would be very interesting to read...the start seems very nice n u have kept the character of avni akin to that from the show... would love to read a story from her POV.. pls do continue .. waiting to see how the story unfolds..

again sorry for late comments 😳

Originally posted by: Preeths609

Hey dat was awesome add me to de pm list and do update soon. Cant wait . looks very promising

Originally posted by: crazypridaholic

Tichhh...

Amazing start...!!! Hmmm n u picked up d story frm right twist😊...wen sami was trying to amend his mistakes...!!! I love dis Sameer's character a lot...watever he did was filled with passion...wether its revenge or love...!!! He went to extreme levels to achieve everything...which make him Black for sometimes...bt he was soo so REAL n I cud easily relate to him...!! Hatts offf to CV's...each n every character was made Brilliantly by dem...Rarely seen cases on Indian telly👏👏...!!

Guesss m rambling... So cuming back to ur update...I wud love to read Avni's POV...bcoz she is d only one who can bring Best out of Sami...!! N ur doing fab job with ur ff's...so plzz cntd😃...!!

N Best Luck with dis one👍🏼...hoping to read some really interesting parts...!!

-Nitika

Hey friends here is part-2. I'm overwhelmed by the response I got for the first part. My sincere thanks to all. Honestly I didn't expect it for this ff as I just wrote it casually in my holidays and didn't even recheck it. Reason: this ff is in first person and I didn't want to interrupt the flow. In other words I really think in some ways it turned out rubbish. It will be evident in this part. Read at your own risk.

A PASSIONATE LOVE-HATE RELATIONSHIP

"Par Saxena kyun Jai?", I asked in astonishment.

I saw that he too had the same expression on his face. And a shade of something guilty. He immediately rushed out saying, "Woh, Avni mujhe calls aa rahe hai, important kaam hai. Mujhe chalna chahiye". I watched him leave. Before my thoughts could go further I was interrupted by a phone call. It flashed Roshni's caller ID.

"Good morning Rosh", I greeted as I picked it up.

Roshni sounded excited, "Good morning nahin di, very very Good morning"

"kya hua? Tum itni utavli kyun ho rahi ho? Sab theek toh hai na?", I asked.

"Teek hai? Di, lagata hai ghar mein ek aur naya mehmaan aane wala hai.", she said.

Rosh told me that Damini di fainted in the morning. And she was feeling nauseous, vomiting thrice. Obviously Mamma and Rosh were excited. So was I. They have called a doctor to confirm and he'd be there in some 2 hours. I have decided to visit my maternal house.

I called Jai before leaving and told him the whole thing. All that I got in reaction was, "Kya?", he was unable to believe it. "Avni aisa ho hi sakta"

I explained to him di's symptoms. "lekin avni aisa kaise ho sakta hai? Zaroor kuch galat fahmi ho gayi hogi. Are you sure?"

I wasn't able understand his confidence. Why was he that sure?

"lekin tum aisa kyun keh rahe ho?", I asked to know his thoughts.

He didn't say anything. There was a silence for a few seconds.

"Jai???"

"Haan Avni, who kuch nahin. Tum keh rahi ho toh sab sahi hoga. Bas main soch raha tha ki Prithvi aur Damini ki shaadi hue do mahine bhi nahin hue. Toh ?.. khair sambhalke jaane. Aur main tumhe akele aaane ki zaroorat nahi hai. Main aa jaaunga tumhe pik karne", he assured. Jai has indeed turned out be caring. Not that he wasn't before. But there was something soothing these these days.

I went to Mamma's place. She was tensed and excited. I have always wished this feeling of Mamma towards me. But fate had other plans. I ended up giving shock rather than excitement. But in other case Damini di deserves it, after all she had sacrificed a lot for us. She kept us safe even by giving us all the freedom. She knew how a society would look upto a house which has no shadow of a man. She had taken all the responsibilities and I feel I have misused my share. I wished the conventional wedding, traditions and pregnancy. I regretted it. But these days when Jai was being a perfect husband and a perfect father I don't anymore.

The things which I couldn't get I'm trying to find then in my sister. May be he too is doing the same. As everyone knew Jai had been exiled from his house, by his dad. May be the love he couldn't get from his father, he wanted to give it to his child. May be he understood the feeling of getting disowned. And he's making up for it.

I don't knew if I'm thinking too much. But then the person who disowned his child, his wife in front of the world had the most caring heart in the world. What could the reason be? Just apprehensive of taking responsibility, isn't it?

I went to Mamma in di's room. There she was reluctant to see a doctor.

"Mamma please maine kaha na, jaise aap log soch rahe ho aisa kuch nahi hai", di told mamma.

I entered the room, "di ek test se kya farak padta hai? Karva lo na."

"Avni tumbhi? Main bilkul theek hoon", as soon as these words escaped her mouth she immediately rushed to washroom to puke. Mamma gave me a glance with *apni di ki zidd dekhi* expression..

Di came out and fell on bed, "please mujhe kuch der akela chod dijiye", she said.

Mamma left angrily but when I was about to leave I saw a red saree at a corner. I picked it up only to find it torn.

"Di, ye kya hai?", I showed it to her. "Itni beautiful saree hai", I said touching it. It was of thesoftest silk ever known and golden spikes highlighted its border.

I turned to di. Her expressions reminded me of Jai's when I asked him why saxena for kids. I brushed it aside to di, "main tumse kuch pooch rahi hoon di"

She turned tensed and pale too, looking like a typical damsel-in-distress. I stroked her hair gently and tried to soothe her. Asking her, what she told me was totally unbelievable.

"Avni who, kal BT companies ki party thi na, toh prithvi ne mujhe ye diya tha pehn ne ke liye. Main ne kaha ki main nahin pehnungi aur who bahut overconfidence se bolraha tha ki 'tum ye zaroor pehnogi'. Is liye maine isse?."

"Iss liye aapne isse phad diya?", I asked, my voice too loud. She shook her head like a typical kid who had admitted her mistake with her lips tightly pressed together and eyes wide open, blinking.

"Di aap bhi na.. hadh kar deti hai kabhi kabhi. Aur aap pehenke kya gayi thi yeh?", I asked pointing to the long red strapless gown she's wearing. Yes, she did wear that. I looked sidewards unable to meet het her eyes for a second, then I turned to her and lifted her chin. She understood the question I wanted to ask. Why? I went towards her and lifted her chin.

"Darasal ek baat bataun? Tumhare jeej kal bahut handsome lag raha tha black Armani mein.", she was blushing. "Ek pal ke liye?.. maine socha? pehenleti hoon.. lekin, usne bhi toh mera banaya khana nahin khaya?", her expression changed.

For a moment I felt like giggle. Those two always fight like kids. May be its no big deal. But I was proved wrong, by di's expressions. The problem is something big. Jeej's unusual behavior is concerning di. Even Jai had changed suddenly when he rejected me. But then I guess, men are confused. Their feet slip easily and they easily fall in the trap of their demons. It's a women's responsibily to hold their hands. Relations doesnt survive if one try to go forward the other. Walking together is important. I have told the same to di.

But she had her own fears. Fear of getting rejected. Fear of getting heart broken.

I know di. She had always tried to show that she's tough and ruthless. She doesn't care about anyone's feelings and doesn't give a damn to hurt someone.

Under this faade is my di, who was protecting her heart between tough concrete walls from getting broken. Until Prithvi jeej entered her life and broke those barriers and touched it.

Even today she's doing the same. She's hurt. And protecting it from being shattered into pieces.

It was another time she was feeling a dizzy. I smiled at her reluctance. "kya, aisi koi baat nahi hai, ok. Who maine kal raat kuch jyada hi peeli thi uska asar hai", she revealed.

"di, you are impossible", I began to lecture her only to be cut short by her,

"avni please I know maine bewakoofi ki par please mamma ko batana mat. Who bahut gussa ho jayengi", she pleaded.

"of course di yehin kahengi, kya yehi sanskar diye hai maine tumhe", I enacted mamma.

"oh god! Shubh shubh bolo avni..", she said as I had a laugh.

Then suddenly jeej entered the room, "damini?" he then looked to me, "oh hi avni. Tum kab aayi?"

"bas yehi koi das minute pehle", I hugged him. I was always comfortable with him. He was a brother-figure to me and I knew that I can rely upon him. I left them alone and came out of the room and went straight to the kitchen. I made a concoction of thyme leaves, lime and honey for di to cure her hangover. Unluckily mamma saw me with it.

"Avni! Kya hai yeh? Kadha?.. kitna kadve hoga. Kiskeliye hai?", she asked me.

"who, who, mamma.. ye di ke liye hai.", I stammered.

She got furious. "damini ne sharab pee. Isliye doctor ke liye manaa kar rahi thi. Abhi khabar leti hoon uski. Itna bhi kya peena, ki uski tabiyat kharab ho jaye?"

I stopped her, "mamma please jeej baat kar rahein hai di se, jaane do na mamma. Ho jata hai kabhi kabhi", I insisted her. Finally she agreed. She had faith in jeej that he could handle di. And why wouldn't she have? Jeej is the best. Only he can handle di.

"theek hai, tum ye dekar aao, main damini se kuch nahin kahungi, main jaanti hoon ki mera damaad uski khabar lega", she smirked.

I then slowly asked mamma Mr. Chawla's number. She understood my intensions. After all she is a mother. "mamma, jai shayad apne papa ko bahut miss karta hai. Isliye toh jab dekho use apne bache ki chinta rehti hai. Shayad jo usse jo pyar nahi milaa who apne bachche ko dena chahta hai"

Mamma patted on my cheeks, "avni, tum kaho toh main unse baat karleti hoon. Badon se baat bade hi karte hai. Kuch baatein hoti hi aise hai"

I refused. I told mamma that my intension is to make Jai happy. But I'm not sure he'll. What if he gets angry? "Mamma tab who narazgi mujhpar dikhayega. Aap pe nahin. Mujhe ye kabhi manjoor nahi hoga ki who aap ko sawal kare?"

She looked at me with the old praising look. I'm glad she had lost trust in me with the circumstances. Her next words made very happy and some thing which made my day, "mera sabse samajhdaar bachcha, mujhe tumpar pura bharosa hai". She gave me his number which I had feed in my mobile. Then I went upto di and jeej's room. All my happiness vanished suddenly as I heard their conversation.

"Don't you dare touch me prithvi saxena. Divorce papers kahan hai?", di yelled at jeej. Her disgust, her hatred and her hurt everything evident in her words.

"damini", he approached to touch her, only to get slushed, "please mujhe samjhane ka ek mauka do", he asked. I could see their hearts are twins and their feelings are like mirror images. So alike.. be it their hurt or anger or their strange love..

"kya samjhaoge tum,. I don't believe this prithvi, tumne mere nashe mein honeka faayda uthana chaha. Mujhe apne bahon mein lene se pehle ek baar bhi nahin socha tumne ki? " she bit her lip and closed her eyes shooking her head. "kya kya kahun, kehne mein bhi sharam aarahi hai, tum itne gire hue nikloge ye maine.."

"Ssshhh, bas damini. Bas karo aur bas bhi karo. Mujhpar gussa hokar tumne party mein itni sharab pee. main tumhe nashe ki haalat mein ghar le aaya, tumhe bistar pe sulaya. Raat bhar neend mein tum mera naam leti rahi. Agar tumhare dard ko kam karne ke liye main tumhe apni baahon mein liya toh galat kya kiya. Main tumhara pati hoon aur.."

"prithvi please! iske aage ek shabd aur mat bolna", she turned her face away from him in embarrassment.

"kyun na bolun? Sach sunne ki himmat nahi hai tumne?", he tried to make an impact, of truthfulness. He couldn't take it anymore. "Tum subah meri baaho mein uthi iska ye matlab nahi hai ki maine kal tumhare saath kuch kiya hai".

"Toh kya meherbaani kiya hai mujhpar?", she retorted.

To which jeej got enraged. He got hold of her arm making her forcifully face him, "agar tumhe meherbaani lag raha hai, toh meherbaani hi samjho", he said pointing his finger at her, threathening, which scared di as she gulped at his anger.

How can someone share such a passionate love-hate relationship? Is it possible to dear and detest a person at the same time? Is it possible to hate the person we love or love the person we hate? I just loved Jai and never ever hated him though he cheated me. My love for him stopped for few moments but I never hated him. I was speechless, their relationship is at the verge of divorce, and didn't interrupt them in that shock.

I saw jeej released di's hand literally pushing it and continued, "Tumhe kya lagta hai main mar raha hoon tumpar toot padne keliye??"

"obviously mar hi rahe hoge. Divorce na deneka reason jo miljayega tumhe", she accused. Mercilessly and foolishly too.

Jeej was stunned. And I could see he was hurt beyond limits overpowering his anger. His expressions said it all. But he didn't utter a word further and left the room only to find me standing still outside.

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So.. wondering??? Don't worry sameer's truth will definitely come out. May be in next part. (I have written it but didn't divide into chapters. So not sure). Aur uski dhulayi jamkar hogi. Uski saari band baaja baraat niklegi. Till then please press the 'like' button so that I would know how many have read it. And comment so that I could improve. The sooner I get your comments the sooner will be the updates. (see I stood by my promise and updated in three days)

PRECAP:

1)Will prithvi sign the divorce papers?

2)I decided to test him and called him out.

"sameer"