New SS- The Lost Treasure CH-8; Pg-30 - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: PRIDA_LOVER

amazing part sia and kanchan ! thanx di
kep the good work on! we r really glad that u like it
happra tht is moen jo daro , that place is too godd i have visited there , its in pak! haan di its mohenjo daro in pak.. m really looking forward to visit it one day
prithvi ko teasure mil gya damize is there now hehhe 😆😉 keep on reading to know more who knows wat is stored for them
update soon update on its way
and add me in ur pm list haan di have added u in our pm list

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Posted: 14 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: cutiepie_1987

nice start girls..... thanx a lot monika refreshed my history knowledge..... hehe

i wonder our PriDa can meet at such historic place also.... hehe if its PriDa they can meet newhere on earth for us 😉😆
update soon update is coming soon n thanks 4 d pm..... mention not

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mru_bee

great work.. Sia and Kanchan.. thanx a lot Mru we r really glad that u liked it

waiting to read wat the greek goddess thot of the greek god, when they lay eyes on each other in the rain 😆 hehe just keep on reading to know more who knows wat happens next 😆😛

-- Mru

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: rose.three

lovely update!!!
itz good !!!!!!


thanx a lot dear
we r really glad that u liked it

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanq all for ur lovely feedback

here i go with the another update of LT

Previous chapter link :

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/love-ne-mila-di-jodi/1440026/new-ss-the-lost-treasure-ch-8-pg-30?pn=4

PART-2
Seeing that all of them are still busy adoring him,Damini vexed up n went out of the room
Giggles of girls attracted her attention.. due to inquisitiveness she began to inspect wat is happening in there.

After she saw wat was happening there her eyes popped out.
there all the girls had circled around Pri and were trying to flatter and woo him.
Prithvi on other hand trying to maintain civility so he was just having formal interaction with girls. One of the girls cracked a joke so he smiled a bit.
But then,this lady mistook that he too is like Evey other man who doesn't even spare a chance to flirt with these girls.This behavior of Prithvi angered her and she slammed the windows of the room very hard confusing girls and Prithvi.

Evening:

Till then it was evening and all the girls decided to take some rest as they cant venture out in the heavy pore

At the late evening there was a loud noise heard which made damzi run towards the direction of sound and where sees a shadow and beats it up hard thinking that there is thief.The person was pleading her to stop beating him up and begged for mercy ,but Damini never listens.who are you? Why should i listen to you? she utters a shout
Listening to the noise prithvi comes running and rescues the person...its none other than Sami (Sameer...Prithvi's childhood friend)

Yeh tum kya karee ho??pagal toh nai hogaee?!! sami says "bacha diya yarr tune aaj!! itna toh meri mummy ne bhe nai peeta mujhe aaj tak."

At this prithvi shouts at damzi "TUMMAIN ITNI BHE AKAL NAI HAIN KYA?KISIS KO BHE PEET DETEE HO AISE?WOH BHE DANDE SAY?!?"
Damzi says "oh sorry galte hogayee mujhe isse 'DANDE' say nai 'JHAADU' say marna chaiye tha
Pri was dumbstruck to hear this from damz "What? "but 'Broom' (thinking)
Pri : hmm...han 'Broom' se zyaada maar padte hain
Damzi :nai usee 'danda' zyaad strong hota hian...
..
Damz Ads "no 'Rod' ya..."

Pri" Wooden log han rod is a good option.." as they discuss
Sami gets Shock of his life!!!
"kee kya yar mere pb chod ke tum dono mujhe aur kis kis se zyada mar padegi yeh disuss kare hoo ...wah bhabi ka toh main toh samjh sakta hoon lekin tuu dhoke bazz dost..dost dost na rahaa..."as he starts singin these lines eveyone there close there ears with there fingers
Pri: "abey nautaki bas kar...ban kar apna drama tu kab aaya yahan?itne achanak...?"there was a loud thunder follwed by a cool breez
sami continues "...han woh Mom...Framhouse...baarish...chata"
As wind creases damzi's hair and makes her look even prettier Pri looks at her stunned as toh how can one manage to look so beautiful each moment and gets lost in her crystal eyes as she too couldn't stop gazing him...sami kept on babbling and Pri didn't even bother to give a bit of attention to his bestie
Seeing that both of them lost in there own sweet worlds Sameer had an evil grin on his face.
At first he snapped his fingers in front of them but then too no effect,
then is coughed a bit then too there seemed to be no effect on them
Then finally he shouted "yeh sab kya hora hian hann?"

there trance was broken by sami ahme hm..damzi looks away and gets back to her bossy Mod
"yeh toh mujhe pata tha ki tum ek bade flirt ho yeh patahee nai tha ki tum chron say dosti rakhte ho!"says damzi sarcastically ignoring sami's comment n denying her feelings

"Haww.. prithvi tumne mujhe bhe nai bata ya haww..." Sami as he moves by damzi's side and says "u know something prithvi bhabi is right...chor say dosti tch?yeh ache baat nai hain"


"abey Gadhe woh chor tujhe keh rai " Pri says

Sami Shocked "ME!! bhahi aap ne mujhe chor kyun kahan?" making an innocent face ""Kya main aap ko chor lagta hon"

"waah waht ??what did u say bhahi?"
and so does pri realizes what Sami has been babbling "wait a mintue...BHABI?!?!!?"

" kaun bhabi kiske bhabi?main kisei ke bhabi wabhe nai hoon samjhe"Damzi angrily
As her anger mounted marched towards sami "agar dubara kaha na toh sach main dande padenge"
Sami hidding behind pri "aaj ke liye itne pitayee kafee hain bake ka kasar kabhe aur poora karlena plz "everybody had a big laugh over Damzi's rant

Dinner:
They all are now called for dinner
There is this young guy calling everyone for dinner gets the attention of Sami
Sami: "hi ,kaun ho tum?"
"Main yahan ka naukar Ramu.." the person replies
"ohh ramu kaka so young ramu kaka?" hahahh n mocks at him silly
At the table:

Prithvi's uncle is a custom freak believes n strict discipline and there cant be a no for him...
but Sami as always is late for the dinner

"wow garm garm khana!!!!" he makes himself comfortable rubbing his palms sits near Prithvi and just when he is about to his hands on a dish

Pri hits sami by elbow tryin to stop sami from making a fool of himself n putting his uncle off ..as he expects even his guests to follow the custom of his house ie
"pray before u eat"
"tumhain khane se pehle haath jodneka habbit nai hian kya?" ask the uncle
" Main pray karta hoon ji as in pooja"replies Sami
"pooja oh how sweet ...guess some one needs to learn from this child" Aunty says
uncle with raised eyebrow "oh great then carry on do it"
Sami puzzled "abhi?main already ghar main karke aaya hoon"
Uncle insists "koi baat nai phir se karolo.."
Sami trying to get away"Uncle woh it takes time"
uncle insists further "its ok we'll wait"
Sami to pri "koi chara nai hian kya?"
"kyun nai aata hian kya?"Pri mutters
everybody close there eyes

sami opening each dish with his one eye closed says..
Sami "ahem clearing his throat God oh my Good Lord..apne humian khane ke liye paneer de hain,pulav de hain, bayngan ki sbjee de hain...naan ke saath...daal makhne bhe de hain (at this aunty gets suprised that how does he know)
Aur yes how can i forget my fav halwa...asise hee humare state ke emm 16crore logon ko dena ..waise hee humare country ke 100corore logon ko bhe dena...aur usse haath say iss dunyake number toh precisely main bolnai sakta lekin aasha karta hoon ki jitne bhe hain log unn sab ko yahee kahan doge i mean as it is yahee nai woh jo khate hain wahee for example:bread,butter,pizza...etc aisse sab doge ..."
"AAap doge i know aap zarror doge kyun ki basically ur God ur a very Good God ..ahhh hh...thats all and blushes gives this silly ear to ear grin...by now the girls are rolf
and concludes mere prayer sab ko tohda hatke laga hoga"
Pri mutters "...hattke nai 'BAKWAS BANDAL THA' aur thodi der teri pray chalti na tho tujhe fatke padte."
aunty n uncle had these tears n eyes which whr threatining to fall
then uncle starts "yeh prayer nai hain sameer" ("Correct!!" Pri mutters)
"yeh toh kavitha hain" n weeps his tears
aunty then says "Sami yeh kuch naya nai hain woh(uncle) blushes ...bhe aise hee poetry yeh saare likhte rehte hain...lkein tum bhagwaan pay likte ho and woh unke maa pay poetry likhte hain."


PS: A little inspired from here n there
Love
Kanchan n Sia

Edited by sia88 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
awesum part...👏
i luved it like anything..😊
gr8 work guys..👍🏼
so finally d spark can be seen between Prida,am enjoying it..😍
n sameers's prayer was mindblowing...😆
gr8 job..🤗😊
continue soon!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
hey very nyc part juss 2 gud
& awesme 😃😃😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
grr88 updatee.. diii..!
aww.. u all rock
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
Thanks for the update girls.
Sam was tooo funny.....love his nautanki.
But I need more PriDa....please. And really fast.
Khushi.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
Loved this update..

danda yaa broom?? 😆aww poor Sam..

Prida fireworks ki abhi shuruwaat hey .. waiting to see more of them in the future updates..

-- Mru


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