PriDa FF: Fatal Covetion UPD Pt. 16 pg 63 05.05.12 - Page 2

Keva

@Keva

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Yippeeeeeeeee Maham you started a new FF. The prologue is very interesting. Please do add me to the pm list.

Waiting for your next pm.

Thanks a lot for starting a new FF.

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Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Maham!!!🤗 So glad ur writing another FF, anything from u is excellent, so the angst i can handle for ur sake!!😆 but yea me wants some great PriDa scenes...romantic ones😍..regardless, kk??!!! Loved the prologue and for a second when i saw the name Naina out of context i thought the baby's name was that😆, i really like the name Naina these days😳, but what is this?? she is his wife!! Maham how could u, u and ur twists and turns na, can't wait to read more!!!😉 And u r planning to finish the other one na?????😕 U must, me's waiting!!!!!😳 and ofcourse u must PM me, tumhein mujhe PM karna hii hoga(oh boy it's been a long time since i've said that😆)!!!

Edited by desigirl_18 - 14 years ago

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zain_aliya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

d prologue was vry unusual..... looks vry vry interesting n promising.....

since u r writing it so it has 2 hv sm twists n turns... no nt sm bt many.... its vry typical of u 2 create suspence.... bt dats ur speciality n uniqueness....

u make it so realistic..... n its alwz worth reading so many times n still cnt get enough of it....

naina was vry unexpected.... 1st i thot it must b d baby bt dn found dat its his wife....(*hope damini is nt d baby*...😉)

grt job maham... continue soon n surely add me 2 d pm list....

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angullgrl91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

OMGGG! great job! i can tell your an a great writer! and i totally LOVE prida...i miss the show a lot! i hope you cont soon! can you pm me when you cont again? thanks!

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Maz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Have to say that I knew the wife would not be Damini!..I am thinking for now the nurse is Damini 😆...

There is beauty in angst....and complicated relations....so, totally looking forward to read whatever you write in this story....

Good going Maham

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Khwahish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

wow maham ..another ff from u ..cnt w8 to read ....update soon ....

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shalini_s

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

OMG.. Prithvi Saxena and Naina.. waiting for Damini...

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amiya121

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Mahammmmm !!

Are you planning to Kill us with this Shocking Prologue ?? 😔😉

What is this Naina business ? 😕😕

You CAN NOT do this !! 😒😆

I know you love Angst , but do not take it to such Extremes and let there be lots of Romance !! , let there be some Sweet and Lovely moments too !!

Anyway I am sure that you will not let anybody come b/w our PriDa !! and neither should anybody die !! That is a Request !! OK !! Please , Please .............

But a Brilliant piece of Work again !! 👏👏

Love

Amiya

Edit : Why have you not Posted this on the Lnmdj Forum ?

Edited by petunia121 - 14 years ago

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jakhushi

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Posted: 14 years ago

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M.....

Naina !!!! 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

I should have guessed you are upto no good.

Angst.....I am so glad for that baby...wasnt looking for silly romance.....PriDa thankfully was never about that.

They were always about Deep, Strong Love...and hence a good deal of angst.

But....does that have to include killing of innocent PriDaholics on the way girl😛?

Sooo...I am predictable and reacted in the very way prophecised.......so make this better please...eventually.

Update soon....you have a lot of people on tender hooks.

As usual, loving the quality of writing.

Khushi.

Edit : @Amiya... so that we can also say "Now this is going truly international"😉.....I mean inter-forum.😆

@Mazzyyyy.....Nurse!!!!😆😆😆😆

Edited by jakhushi - 14 years ago

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rucha1992

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Oh boy.... oh boy !!!! (m jumping up and down wildly wid joy) 🥳
Finally u r back wid diz amazing ff....well i was getting dat instinct right frm d beginning of d prologue dat it wsnt gnna b as straight as it seemed....n u proved it right...but prithvi already hvng a baby??? 😲...God...derz hs to b sum serious twist coming soon...w8ng EAGERLY for it....update sooooooooooon....plzzzzz get damini into d picture asap!!!
N yeah.. don't u dare forget to pm me !!! 😉
And by any chance...is damini d nurse???...well but u don't ofcourse have to let d cat out of d bag so soon...go on...we'll w8 !!

Edited by rucha1992 - 14 years ago

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