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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnkx for awesome comments.... itz been a while ever since i wrote on this forum....anywayz.... iw waz buzy w/ skool...n valentines day stories...so ya....
RECAP:IT wAZ NANDINI
Nandini puts on a confusing expression....n then smiles...
she remembers the same romantic moment she spent with karan when she waz like kt's age... she remembers teh tyme when they use to playfully feed each other ...meet eachother secretly...n HOW EVERYTHING WAS RUINED WHEN SHE MARRIED ANSH
nandini puts on a serious face..n leaves angrily shuting the door behind her harshly..
lakshya n kt's attention iz grabbed by the sound...kt runs towards the door...n sees a palo waz stuck when at the side of the 2 doors...kt opens the door n sees nandini. her beautiful charaming happy face is dulled as she gazes her eyes on nandini. nandini puts an angry face n leaves saying "THANK YOU", after kt helps her from removing her sari palo fromt the door.
kt watches her go down the stairs n gets worried

PART 12 (continue)
Lakshay cums from behind worried n hoping dat it waznt tulsi or manthan....
L: kaun tha voh..???
kt is silent, especially after looking into nandz eyes she worrries dat nandini wud tell everyone abt them. she imagines how tulsi wud feel abt this... a very horrific picture pops into her head ... tulsi slapping her.
lakshya looks at kt n snaps his fingers in front of her face to wake her up....
L: kya hua...???
KT: lakshya ... muhje bohot daar lag raha hai...kehin ushe neh bata diya baa aur subh koh toh..
L: kaun...kisski baat kare rahi hoh...
KT: woh...muhje bohot narazgi seh satre karahi thi...woh itne ppl keh samne bol diya toh mein kya karongi....(she continues her jiborish... abt wat will happen if nandz tells everyone abt them. lakshya on the other hand has no clue wat or who kt iz tking abt.)
kt starts to cry....she gets more n more anxious abt the outcome...
lakshya pulls kt over, inside...n shuts the door...
he holds kt by her shoulders, n shakes her
L: kt...kt...hosh mein ajaooh... (kt continues to cry her eyes out) kuch bhi hohjaye... lekin mein tumhara sath nahi chodonga....tum kyun itni woried ho....aaj nahi toh kal wohlogo koh pata chale nehi walal tha nah...they wud wud hv found out anyhow!
kt (sits down her eys still weepping): lekin lakshya tum nahi samaj sakete..
lakshya innterupts her...hols her very tight from her shoulders
L: kya nahi samaj saketha mein...bolo kt...lkya nahi... Roti tum hoh lekin kabhi tumne soocha hai keh muhje kya hota hoga...tum ladki ho....tum roh(cry) sakti ho...lekin mera kya...mein toh aisa nahi kar saakta...Jab jab tum rohi hoh...tum jantiho keh dard kisko huan...???? har baar....muhje ...SRIF muhje, mere dil mein dard hota hai...aisa lagta hai keh kisineh mere dil mein needles poke kiya[translation: it feels as if sumone poked needles into my heart] 😭
kt stares at lakshya...her dark brown eyes look into lakshya's pupils n see her reflections in them... she feels soo relived n thnkful, that her love iz sooo supporting n engouraging... she is even strongly proved abt how much lakshya loves her...
she starts to think, "wow lakshya, muhje pat nahi that keh tum muhje itna pyar karteh ho...mein kabhi samajhi nahi payi...abh toh muhje aisa lagne laga hai...keh mera pyare toh tumhare pyare seh compare kare toh kuch bhi nahi hai"
L: kya huah...feelin better...(kt nods) kise sooch mein padegayi tum.
KT: yehhi ...keh tum muhje itna pyaare kareteho...
L:(grins, n wipes her tears) kareta tha, karetah huan...aur karetaha rahonga....(smiles)
KTs hugs him tightly....n lakshya hegs her bak



END OF PART 12...PART 13 CUMING UP SOON...SO STAY TUNE.... HOPE U LIKED IT!!
RANI
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
oooooo! cool! Your part touches reader's heart rani712. That was so romantic. Do continue with your part13. Can't wait to read what happens after. will nandz tell everybody or not?
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
ur soo write i love reading ur stories, i dont know makes me feel like there real and lol i dont know 😳 but its really good keep up the great work 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
Continue soon, i really like all your stories. They are so sweet n romantic 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 13
lakshya n kt contitue hugging...then suddenly kt remembers the necklace lakshya waz giving her n their romantic moments were stoped by a sudden entry of nandz...
KT: lakshya (still hugging)
L: kya huwa....
KT: tumne muhje bataya nahi keh tum woh neck lace kahase layai
Lakshya momentarily reembers his promise to baa abt the necklace...
L:opppz woh toh pahanana bhool hi gaya...(he lets goo of kt)
the goes into the balcony where he supposingly kept the necklace n brings it inside...
KT: its ok mein khud pahaine loongi (she tries to grab the necklace but lakshya pushes it away)
L: its ok....muhje pahananah aata hai..
KT;theek hhai
kt moves her hair on one shoulders while lakshya puts on the necklace....
KT: wow!!! kitna beautiful hai...
L: nahi....
he holds her from her waist...rests his head on he shoulders....both look into the mirror...
L: nahi...abh yeh khobsurat lagraha hai...
kt shly smiles n looks down...
KT: thank-you lakshya....
lakshya smiles
"muhje thank-you koi nahi bolaga.." a voice calls from behind....it was baa...(not tulsi...the one who is suppose to b 130yrs old by now 😆 😆 😆 )
lakshya n kt look bak...suddenly lakshya lets goo of kt...
L: baa app yaha..???
ba: janti huan....necklace dun mein aur thankyou mille tuhje (she pulls lakshya ears)
L: ooowwhhh girl-friend.....yeh aap kya karerahi hai...meri honai wali wifey keh samne mere eezad kah kachara kyun kare rahi ho???
kt laughs at the lakshya's conditions...
KT: baa apne diya yeh necklace...wow...kitna expensive hoga nah...
ba: woh muhje paata nahi....lekin tu mere lakshya ki bahu banewali hai...toh yeh tumhe pahan nah padega....
kt smiles....
ba: aur yeh hi necklace muhje meri saas neh diya tha...
L:( surprised...) kya....??? apki saas....wooooow...toh yeh kitna old hoga nah...
Ba: haan...isliya toh meinai kt koh diya hai...kyunki mein jaanti huan yeh aisa sambhal kar rakkhe gi....var tumhare tara ladko kah kya bharosa....
kt n lakshya both laugh
KT: toh abh apki story finish kijyai nah
Ba: ok...meinai gayatri koh diya...usse nahi sahil ki maa koh diya.....aur usse nai ganga koh diya tha...jabh ganga aur sahil seperate huwai (lakshya loooks down in sadness) tabh woh muhje yeh necklace phir seh daidiya tha....aur muhje kaha....(she comes towards kt, lifts her chin) keh yeh necklace meri lakshya ki honawali wife koh denah....
kt loooks way shyly....while lakshya stands tehre proudly...
kt: (touches the necklace) baa...lekin kissse koh paata chalgaya toh....kyunki yeh baat ...sirf mein, lakshya, aapa, gangachachi...
lakshya interrupts
L: u mean tumhari mom...
kt: ok baba...mami, aur archita keh sivai koi nahi janta ...actually...aabh woh....OMG !!(shew yells remembering dat she forgot all abt nandini knoeing it)
L:Kya huwa abh???
KT: nandini....
Lakshya puts an "OMG" expressioon on his face..leaving baa confused
KT: mein neechai jahti huan...
Baa:(to lakshya) kya huwa...usko
L: woh kya hai nah ke...nandini aunty koh pata chalgaya...keh...u knoe
baa; (smile) i hoep keh woh sabh koh bool deh....
L: yeh aap kya kaharehi hai..
baa: haan...tum dono bolneh wale nahi ho...archita aur ganga ki baat ise ghar mein koi soonai gah nahi....aur rahi meri baat...kt muhje uski kasam diyi hai...isse liya everyday mein thakurji seh yehi prarathana karti huan...keh meri jitaiji...tum dono ki shaddi jald se jald hojaye....lekin pata nahi thakurji meri kabh sunnaigai, patanahi, kabh mera aakhari sapna purakarengai!!
baa leaves the room....

TO BEEE CONTINUED......friday!!!!!

rani
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
Wow that necklace wus really old. That was a lovely story. do continue it. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 13 (CONT...)
KT goes down stairs....her eyes still searching for nandini....she suddenly then sees nandini going towards tulsi....kt gets an icky feelin dat shez gona telll tulsi everything.....kt runs after her.....
nandini misses tulsi but sees kt standing rite in front of her blocking her way....nandini looks down...
N: mere raaste seh plz hato
KT: hat jaongi.....lekin plz aape mera ek kaam karegi....
N: kya..??
KT: plz aap baa koh kuch maat batanah....mein nahi chahati ke...
nandini interupts her...
KT: deekho...tum joh bhi ho....meinai nah kuch deekha hai aur sunno hai....aur joh person neh kuch nahi deekha ya suuna...woh bhala kisse seh kya kehaga...(she holds her by the cheeks)... joh huwa usse bhul jao....theek hai... (smiles)
kt gives yer a bright tearful smile...
KT: (in relief) thank you...nandiniji...ummm i dunno mein aapka shukriyada kaise karo...aur patta nahi...muhje aisa kyun lagta hai keh hamara kuch rista hai...like when u held me by my cheeks i fel as if....u were my mom..
nandini smiles in a shock...n gets her arms away from kt's cheeks...kt...starts to leave....
N; sunnno....
KT: han! (she stops)
N: (in sadness)yeh joh tum aur lakshya karerahe ho...voh galat hai...aise tum bohot seh people koh dukho poochaogai... ( and she walks away leaving kt confused)
KT: (thinking) uska maatlab kya tha??? ohweell watever it waz...(she sees nandini walking away n waay from her)
nandini on the other hand...had tears rolling down the cheeks....
N:(thinking) kaash mein tumhe bata sakti keh mein kaun huan tumhari....baata sakti keh hamara rishta kya hai...kids hoteh huwai mein akeli jeeh rahi huan....(shee wipes her tears....jus then tulsi cums toward her)
tu: arrre nandini....tum theek toh ho nah...
N: haan maa...i m fine...
tu: umne kuch liya nahi...
N: baas...abhi leeti huan...
Nandini n tulsistart to chat...but who cares we rnt interested in dat. 😆 😆

End of part 13

hope u liked it....
part 14 cuming up sooon...2day

rani
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Posted: 17 years ago
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woahhh.... cool part! I neva knew that kt was nandini's child. but oh well. like alwways i love your story and can't wait to read next part to it.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnkx for gr8 comments..before i start this part i waanna say...dat this iz preety boring i dunt think u'll like it very much... this part iz only to build up on the storyu......n its basically abt tulsi's SANSKAARS...n stuff...
PART 14
ITS LATE AT NIGHT..
kt is in her rooom in front of her dresser taking off her jeweleery n stuff...she takes off the necklace....the voice of baa floates in her head (about her being lakshya's wifey n all)...putting a smile on her face.
then the thing nandini said cums bak in to her head tearing away her smile n leaving her in silence...n in thoughts if watever shez doing is wrong or wat...
tulsi cumes into her room from behind...kt sees her from the dresser mirror....n decides to quickly hide the necklace in the drawer .
tu: arree krishna.... wow mein bohot khush huan aaj....especially cuz u were amazing today....aur on top of that tumne mere manthan keh liya vrath rakha...wow...!!
kt puts a fake smile on her face...knoeing dat it waznt for manthan but for lakshya...
tu: beth...yaha...
tulsi pull kt over to her bed n both sit down
tu: krishna tumne joh mere parivaar keh liyan aur mere liya kiya hai, its jus fabulous...tumne mere manthan kah rishta koh yes bole kare bohot mahan kaam kiya ...
kt:( in confusion) yeh aap kya bool rahe hai baa...
tu: muhje paata hai keh manthan tumhare type kah ladka nahi hai...jabhse tum chooti thi aur koi tumhe haridwaar mein pooch ta tha keh tum kisse shaadi karogi tabse yehi kahati aayi ho tum keh 'muhje toh ram chaiya, jabh ram milaiga tabh uske sath shaadi karongi..aur koi krishna seh toh kabhi nahi karongi'(tulsi smiles )...muhje paata hai keh yeh ram jaisa toh hai nahi...baada naughty kishaan kaniya [suppose be lord krishna] jaisa hai mera manthan... aur janti hai....voh tuhjse boohot... yani bohot pyare kareta hai...itna pyaare toh tumhe koi bhi nahi karesakta...
kt listen...she doesnt looking into tulsi's eye...she felt guilty ....she waz teribbly upset abt the kind of pic tulsi has in her mind for her....n wat shez doing to the pic in tulsi's mind, trashing it!!...
nandini's words cum bak n forth into her ears....
tears roll down her cheeks while tulsi waz talking...
suddenly tulsi hears her sniff, see her tears...
tu: arree.....tum toh bohot emotional hogayi....mein toh sirf yuhi aayi thi...mere dil ki baat baatanai...aur kahenai...keh kitna garv(proud) hai muhje tum par aur tumhare faslepar... i m very pround of u sweetheart[in hindi]. muhje paata hai keh tum mere sikayai huwai sanskar peh kabhi aanch nahi aanai dogi...humesha bado kah aadar karogi...n apni khushi seh jada dusroki khushi deekho gi...
kt really starts to cry...she tightly hugs tulsi...
kt:baaa....(crying)
tu: arre beta...y r u sad... tum toh yaha hi rahenai wali ho...mere paas...meri aankho keh samne...ise mein sad honeki koi baat nahi hai...
tulsi comforts her n wipes her tears...
tu: ok...abh smile....
kt gives tulsi a forced smile...
tu: good...ok mein abh chalti huan...kal panditji aanai wale hai...tumhari aur manthan aur lakshya aur poonam ki shaadi fix karneh...toh jaldi oothanah hai...theek hai...good night...sweet dreams[in hindi]!
kt: good light baa...
tulsi turns off the lights.... n leaves...
KT alone in her rooom changes her chlothes n tries to fall asleep ...but she cant! she keeps reflecting upon wat tulsi recently told her (the Hugeeeeeeeee lecture she gave her)...she thinks abt tulsi's expectation for her....n how she has been runing her impression tulsi has in mind for her....by seeing lakshya...n still loving him...knoeing dat she will soon be married to manthan....
kt: baa...yeh aapne muhje kaise musibat mein daldiya hai....abh mein karoo toh kya karo...kaise baatao lakshya koh....keh chahateh huwai bhi mein usseh pyaare nahi kare sakti..
she prays to god
KT; hai thakurji muhje shakti denah keh mein lakshya koh without feeling a pain baata sakho keh usko pyaare karte huwai nahi karesakti pyaree aur lakshya koh shakti dena keh woh this ruth koh bardash kare sakhe...plz thakurji plzz.

end of part 14//// it waz preety sad n borring...i think..!!

Rani
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow gr8 secen rani loved do continue

love
pari
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