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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnkx for gr8 comments guys
Part 11
everyone iz on the terrace n the laydies hv started this praying thing...(i dunt knoe da rasam stuff...cuz i dunt celelbrate karvachaut)
karan n tanya r doing their pooja rite beside aseem n nands
the song **tere bin** iz playing in the bakground
as tanya picks up dat net to look look a da moon karan sees nands in her...he has an illusion of nandz n flashbaks of thier karvachuiat cum into karan's head
then when nandz sees aseem from dat net she has an illusion of karan n picture of karan pops up in her head.
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now kt iz doin da pooja ...n manthan iz rite in front of her while tanya helps her out with da rasams. kt looks at the chand (moon)... n then when she turn the net to supposingly see manthan but ends up seeing lakshya... tanya gives manthan a glass of water to feed it to kt... jus as manthan goes toward kt with the glass... she feels a headache n when shez abt to fall lakshya grabs her from behind.
manthan gets all worried...everyone is surrounded around kt lakshya n manthan
L: ( worriedly) paani doh jaldhi
lakshya srinkles sum drops of water on kt's face n feeds her sum water.
kt opens her eyes n secretly winks at lakshya...
kt pulls her self up
KT: kya huva muhje
L: (smiles) kuch nahi gir gayi tum...
Tu: ek din kya vrath rakha.. keh baihosh hogai. (to manthan) manthan jaaoh kt koh uske kamre mein laija voh
M: ok dadi
manthan takes kt to her room. he tucks her in on the bed n leaves saying good night sweet heart.
after manthan iz gone archita cums into her room quietly n shuts the door
A: kt uutho... abh yeh natak bandh karo.
kt: kya hai kyun uthah rahi ho
A: arre kya kamal ka natak tha.. tumne yeh sub kab plan kiya
KT: pata nahi...i think muhje idea dilwale dulhaniya layjeange movie seh mila
A: wow...kamal ka kam kiya tumne...u did a fantastic job! theek hai... now tell me... abh woh khanai kah kya??
A: woh tum worry math kareroh, i hv got it all under control
K(mumbles) ish liya mein worry kare rahi huan
A:(makes an angry loook) kya????
KT: kuch nahi
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continueing sooon

rani
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
thnkx for gr8 comments guys
Part 11
everyone iz on the terrace n the laydies hv started this praying thing...(i dunt knoe da rasam stuff...cuz i dunt celelbrate karvachaut)
karan n tanya r doing their pooja rite beside aseem n nands
the song **tere bin** iz playing in the bakground
as tanya picks up dat net to look look a da moon karan sees nands in her...he has an illusion of nandz n flashbaks of thier karvachuiat cum into karan's head
then when nandz sees aseem from dat net she has an illusion of karan n picture of karan pops up in her head.
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now kt iz doin da pooja ...n manthan iz rite in front of her while tanya helps her out with da rasams. kt looks at the chand (moon)... n then when she turn the net to supposingly see manthan but ends up seeing lakshya... tanya gives manthan a glass of water to feed it to kt... jus as manthan goes toward kt with the glass... she feels a headache n when shez abt to fall lakshya grabs her from behind.
manthan gets all worried...everyone is surrounded around kt lakshya n manthan
L: ( worriedly) paani doh jaldhi
lakshya srinkles sum drops of water on kt's face n feeds her sum water.
kt opens her eyes n secretly winks at lakshya...
kt pulls her self up
KT: kya huva muhje
L: (smiles) kuch nahi gir gayi tum...
Tu: ek din kya vrath rakha.. keh baihosh hogai. (to manthan) manthan jaaoh kt koh uske kamre mein laija voh
M: ok dadi
manthan takes kt to her room. he tucks her in on the bed n leaves saying good night sweet heart.
after manthan iz gone archita cums into her room quietly n shuts the door
A: kt uutho... abh yeh natak bandh karo.
kt: kya hai kyun uthah rahi ho
A: arre kya kamal ka natak tha.. tumne yeh sub kab plan kiya
KT: pata nahi...i think muhje idea dilwale dulhaniya layjeange movie seh mila
A: wow...kamal ka kam kiya tumne...u did a fantastic job! theek hai... now tell me... abh woh khanai kah kya??
A: woh tum worry math kareroh, i hv got it all under control
K(mumbles) ish liya mein worry kare rahi huan
A:(makes an angry loook) kya????
KT: kuch nahi
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continueing sooon

rani
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
very nicely written
do cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
hey good but y have u wrote it twice continue sooin plz
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
omg...i read the topic name and i got scared!! 😆
thanx!
good story...keep it up!!
😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
thnkx for awesome comments guys
Part 11 (continuation)
A: wow...kamal ka kam kiya tumne...u did a fantastic job! theek hai... now tell me... abh woh khanai kah kya??
A: woh tum worry math kareroh, i hv got it all under control
K(mumbles) ish liya mein worry kare rahi huan
A:(makes an angry loook) kya????
KT: kuch nahi
Archita leaves, leaving KT alone in her thoughts
kt jumps on to her bed, takes out the pic on lakshya from under her pillow n stares at it
KT;(thinking) mein tumse itnah pyar kyun karti huan lakshya
"pata nahi" a voice calls from behind. kt turns n sees our darling Archita,
KT;(rolls her eyes) tum vapas aagayi
A:(mimiks kt) mein tumse itnah pyare kyun karti huan lakshya.**laughs**
KT rolls her eyes, pretending that she has no idea wat archita's talking abt n then blushes
KT;ouuffff....shut up.
A: kyun kya huva, ek bar phir kare ke dikhaona
KT: (gets mad,) niklo...mere kamre mein seh niklo tum
A: cum on kt .... sirf ek bar
K: (puts her hand on her ears) muhje tumari koi baat nahi soonungi mein...jaao bahar...
kt pushes archita out the door.
A: ok baba...i'll go...but listen mein toh tumhe yeh batane aiieh thi keh terrace ki joh planing kari thi nah, voh impossible hai. ok...byes
archita gets out of kt's room leaveing kt all confused n starts to go downstairs. KT stops archita
KT: archita ...rukkho
archita pretends not to hear this n keeps walking
KT: plz archita i m sorry rukho aur upar aoo nah
Archita turns smiles at kt
A: ok...kya pagal ladki hai, kabhi kathi hai kamre se nikal jaoo , aur kabhi upar bulati hai
kt pulls arcita to her room n locks the door
KT: omg ...abh kya karange... matlab muhje bhuka rehna pare gah.
A: ofcoruse not! mein nai kya sooch hai, keh mein jahke khana tumare kamerai mmein le aoongi . theek hai
KT: are u insane (in hindi) aisa karogi toh subh koh pata chale jaiga
A: (touches her forehead) hai bagwan.. mera matlab tha ke tum khana balcony mein lakshya ke sath khale na...
KT: lekin vo..
archita interrupts her
A: lekin vekin kuch nahi...mein khana laoongi, lakshya aiga aur tumhe khillaiga... tubtak mein sub kho khaidoongi keh tum soh gayi ho aur koi bhi tumare kamre mein nah jaye . ok khush
K:( puts wide smile on her face) OMG archita ur jus great...too gud man. thank u soooo much (n she shakes her hand n hugs her)
A: ur welcome...aur abh muhje jana hoga varna dadi muhje mardaklegi
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End of part 11 guys...hope u liked it...if i need improvement in sumthing...plz feel free to tell me . thnkzz
luv ya all
Rani 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
Part 12
Archita leaves
Kt then changes n puts on a beautiful red sari, with diamond n glitery border. she looks a her self in the mirror n compliments her looks. her eyes are tehn caught by the bright full moon in the navy blue sky along with sparkly stars. she runs out to her balcony n smells the fresh air.
KT: yeh raat kitne beautiful aur romantic hai
"baishak," a voice calls from behind, before she cud see who it waz she iz grabed from her waist by 2 stong hands. 😳 😳
can u guess who it waz???LOL soo obvious......................
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MANTHAN ...........
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LOL jkz Ofcourse it waz 😆 😆 😆 LAKSHYA

she turns n her eyes meet lakshya 😳 😳
she pretended to struggle to get her self outta lakshya hands
KT: lakshya choodoh muhje
L: nahi
KT: plz...stop it lakshya... choodoh nah
but she really actually wished dat he didnt 😆 😳
L: KT, ek bat boluu
KT: kya, lekin pehale muhje choodho.
she still struggle for lakshya to let go off her **PRETEND STRUGGLE**
L:(moves the strip of her hair off her eyes n behind her ears) nahi pehle suno,Kt, tumhe nah, acting karna bilkool nahi aata, i knoe keh tum chati ho ke mein tumhe kabhi nahi choodo lekin yeh toh sirf ek bahana hai, kyun mein nai sach kaha na
KT:(makes a mad face, n pushes lakshya way from her) kya, tumhe aisa lagta hai keh mein chati huan ke tum muhje pakdo. mein tumhari college ki voh stupid ladkio jaise nahi huan. (n turns around looking at da sky)
L:(smiles, comes close to kt, holds her from her shoulders n turns her to face him) ok jaan 😳 i m sorry, i knoe keh tum mere college ki ladkio jaise nahi ho, isse liyya toh mein tumke inah pyare kare tha huan.
tears roll down Kt's cheeks, she cums close to him n put her hands around his neck n hugs him tightly. lakshya puts her hand around her waist n hugs her bak even more tightly
The song
"chane ho mere dil ka,
sirf tum, sirf tum,
sirf tum ho
o janna" from the movie "RUN" plays in the bakground

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hope u liked it
will continue soooon
stay tune
byez

rani 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
Wow rani712! I really liked your story. can't wait to read next part for your story. This krvachauth scene is completely fantastic with laksh and kt in it.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
hey rani dat was briliante but can u continue very soon and write alot plzz only asking
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
well can u plzz hurry up cos i am gonna read one more and den go on a holiday
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