FF-Luv U Hamesha pt 18 page 33 7/11/08 EKT - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: tulipbaby53

AMAZING!!! BRILLIANT! SUPERB!!!! 👏

thanks for the PM di! i still don't find what eklavya did right, but i don't find him bad or evil at the same time. i hope things go well between him and KT!
the ranbir and kanya part was really funny! he's tells her not to stand there b/c people will think she's a call girl! 😲😆 their arguing cracks me up! 😆
this was really nice to read after a whole day of studying! i love the balance between seriousness and funny in the FF. it's really nice! there are two completely different couples having their different personalities, and it's wonderful to see how these two couple's stories blend into one FF so nicely!
loved it! update as soon as you can! 😃

Thank U darling. I like all the good points u have mentioned about the ff. It makes me wanna write more and lets me know what my readers want and like. I didn't want this FF being too serious as KSBKBT is so boring i wanted to bring life and humour into it. Ranbir is one character i will always love and never want him absent from our minds. I wanna remember his playful side that was lost in KIT.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72
awesome update! thanks for the pm, I hope things work out for Eklavya and Kt.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome update
thanx for the pm
hope that next part will be posted soon😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 5

Recap-Eklavys tells KT that he knows that KT doesn't love him and issues her with the option to opt out of their marriage knowing full well she wouldn't. He also tells her that he will not touch her during their marriage unless she is ready willing to wait a lifetime if not more. Ranbir and Kanya continue with their arguements getting stuck at night in heavy rain.

Laksh and Vaidehi

Laksh finally comes out of his intoxicated state in bed without his clothes on. Vaidehi is next to him which throws alarm bells at him. He was confused. Vaidehi was awakened by Laksh's sudden panic and had a grin that confirmed what she wanted Laksh to believe. Stupid boy didn't know he was in for a big scary ride that will wipe away any hope of him being with KT. She tried to control her glee.

V-Laksh whats the matter?

L-How did i get here?

V-Don't U remember we got married last night. Your friends and members of your family were present. It was sudden but can't believe we are together. I always thought U wanted KT but i guess U changed your mind.

L-My head! What the ......? I'd never do something like that. I love KT. I'm getting out of here.

V-Fine R all these lies.[shows him pics and video of their marriage throwing Laksh into despair]

L-What have I done? KT must be waiting for me. I'm sorry. I can't even walk out of this marriage after this..[Both consummating their marriage except they hadn't V was being very cunning]

V-Laksh can't this wait tomorrow. We will both go together. I want to meet my in laws and the rest of your family properly.

L-I suppose U R right. If we go now who knows what will happen.

That whole night Laksh doesn't sleep a wink worrying about KT, his Dadi, the family, How will he face them? He'd always done the right thing but for the first time everything was going wrong. It was out of his hand and there was no stopping it. His biggest concern was KT she'd been through too much. She didn't need this. He loved her and can never accept Vaidehi in his life. He didn't love her. Vaidehi was just enjoying Laksh and his dilemma. Poor thing was still a kid well she'll make his problems 10 times worse for him and make him step up and be a man.

Ranbir and Kanya

Kanya by this time couldn't curse her luck any more than this. What a way to end a miserable day. She gets fired, gets in a spat with her ex-boss, 2 of her closest friends end up married coz Laksh was married to save face, she meets her ex-boss again another spat, her brother doesn't pick her up in this rain she is drenched and cold, meets ex-boss again and now this stupid car isn't going anywhere. This proved that either she was unlucky or it was Ranbir. How much she wanted to throttle him but being frozen was making her feel weak.

Ranbir looked at Kanya she looked like she was going to murder him but he liked the fact she was angry it made him feel happy he was getting this response but his beloved car was on the fritz and his mobile was out of range. Looks like he and Kanya would have to wait the storm out but not in the car. There was an isolated barn he could see. He ran out of his car. Kanya was staying put in the car. After checking the place out he came back and relayed it to Kanya.

K-U have no idea how much i hate U right now. If i wasn't feeling cold i'd have thumped U where it hurts just for giving me a night i can never forget.

R-U can be angry with me later we better get shelter and some warmth. That barn nobody is there. I'll sort things out later on but Kanya i don't want U dying onme and have your ghost haunt me. If U R this bad alive who knows what U will be like dead.

K-Is that suppose to be a joke? If U can't joke then shut up will U.

R-Fine. [Extends his hand to help her out]

K-I can move i'm not an invalid.

Both run out of the car and into the barn where they wait the night out.ranbir has a few lighters in his pockets and lights a fire round with the wood that was already in there. The place had hay in there so they gathered some fresh ones and tried to get some Zzzzz'z.

R-Kanya take your cothes off U will cath your death. I promise i won't look U can wear my jacket.

K-PLEASE! I know U want some action well i'm not giving any. U dirty man do U never thing of anything other than that. Sick!

R-KANYA! I am serious. Dry your clothes i won't look honest.

K-U better not or i'll kill U.[ Ranbir closes his eyes while Kanya changes and puts his jacket on. Kanya has her eyes like a hawk on Ranbir]

K-U can open your eyes now. Thanks Ranbir for being nice.

R-I'm nice now. [Smiles at Kanya making her glow]

There's lightening which scares Kanya she runs straight into Ranbir's arms. She holds him really tight and Ranbir allowing her to be this close. He didn't understand why at all but he liked the feel of her in his arms. She sure was getting under his skin. Kanya liked being in Ranbir's arms and could smell his aftershave. She clung onto him that she could feel his stubble rubbing against her cheeks. Ranbir spent the whole night holding Kanya keeping her warm as she was shivering and Kanya just enjoyed the safe haven Ranbir's embrace gave her. Ranbir too could smell Kanya's fragrance she smelt sweet and good enough to eat but he somehow managed to control his urges only just. He wanted to kiss her but he didn't want Kanya to feel like he was taking advantage of her in this situation.

Next Day

Eklavya and KT

Eklavya goes back to his and KT's room where KT is wide awake he could obviously tell that she hadn't slept a wink. She had her make-up smeared and puffed eyes. It was killing him to see her like that but he wanted her to get over Laksh. He didn't want to hurt her despite what he told Ranbir. He still loved her a lot. KT looked at him only just giving him a faint smile.

E-R U ok?

KT-I'll get over it. I have no other choice. U have been my rock Eklavya i don't know what i'd do with out U.

E-U R giving me too much respect KT I deserve your hatred and all the abuse U throw at me.

KT-Whats done is done i want to start me life with a new leaf. A new page where my nightmares R over. But i can only do this after i deal with Laksh. I don't know if i can make room in my life for U Eklavya. This heart has been bruised and battered too many times now.

E-KT I will take whatever U give me but do what feels right to U not what u think is right for others. [ He touches her cheek and kisses her forehead and about to leave]

KT-Eklavya. Thanks. [He leaves KT starts thinking- Eklavya is such a sweet guy despite everything i did to him, threw at him he has never betrayed me ever and all i do is hurt him. Laksh was the first and last mistake i ever make. He and i are never meant to be. Laksh why did U do this to us? Why?]

Eklavya downstairs smirking away. I can't belief this family has fallen for this and golden boy is coming out like the villain. Ranbir was right being bad pays good being good never achieved him anything. Well from now on this was his way. He felt bad at first but if he got the results he wanted well this was the way to go. Bechara Laksh pyar to gaya ab uska zindagi ki bura waqt aram hone wala hain.

Laksh and Vaidehi arrive in Shantiniketan

Vaidehi enters the house with her left feet. Tulsi stops her and brings the aarti out. Puts the rice on the floor in a pot. Vaidehi kicks it with a smile. Laksh gets ashirwaad and then a slap.

T-This is for hurting the family name Laksh. I never expected this from U.

L-Dadi hit me as much as U like this is what i deserve.

T-So U aren't denying anything.

V-U can't hit Laksh its all my fault if i hadn't asked him continuosly and hounded him he might have never done it. Hit me slap me.

T-Vaidehi U R the bahu of this house but he is the son he knows his boundaries and he knows that he's crossed it. He needs to pay but poor Krishna Tulsi is paying for his mistakes.

L-I need to go see KT Vaidehi U will be ok?

V-U go and sort it out i will get to know the rest of the family.

Laksh rushes up the stairs to his and KT's room well Eklavyas now. He see's KT and he starts tearing up. He knew then that KT knew or maybe she was upset he didn't turn up for the wedding. KT walks towards him.

KT-Laksh all i ask is why?

L-I don't know why KT but i will always love U. i don't know how i got married but i did. I can't even fathom what U must be going through but it must have been a moment of weakness i never knew i had. What i did is not worth forgiving but if U can please try. I wish i didn't destroy your life KT. [Laksh embraces KT crying]

KT-KT is dead for U i am your Bhabhie now and address me as that.[Moves away]

L-What?

E-KT Laksh is here! Oh U R here.

L-Tum dono................

KT-Now its really too late Laksh i'm Eklavya's wife now.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#75

OMG

THAT
WAS
FANTASTIC.👏....BRILLIANT .👏....SUPER
LOVE WAT HAPPEN BETWEEN RANKAN
CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76
AWESOME JOB DI!!!! 👏 i loved it sooo much! Cute Ran-Kan moment!
update soon! 😃 sorry for the short commentary, but i gotta go to work now! bye!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
hey di
loved the part
thnx for the PM
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78
that was a brill
pls continue soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
#79
rahima im so happy!
dat part just made my boring day!
wow wat a powerful ending loved it!
and rankan scene was brill with all the chills lol!
i love the plot! it shows ur pure excellence!
eager for more! continue sooooon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#80
omg loved the update soo goood plz write more soon =)
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