FF-Luv U Hamesha pt 18 page 33 7/11/08 EKT - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
#11

this sounds soo awesome! i've never watched KSBKBT, but this FF sounds really good!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I will update the first part 2morrow thats my aim. Let me think it through tonight. I have the whole plotline in my head just need to set it out and then write it on PC. If I get enough comments then i will continue part 2 otherwise theres no point if nobody is reading it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thnx for the PM di
love the character sketch
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
It sounds really nice yaar
Can wait for the first part
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sounds AWESOME
3 couples in 1 ff wow
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue sooooooooooooooooooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 1

Eklavya

Eklavya was hurting so badly with his bruised self confidence. He had nobody and was in a turmoil with his family that had turned on him. Was it his fault he looked like the spitting image of his father? He couldn't undo what his father had done to Nandini Mom and nor could he undo all the wrong that his family had done to him. He had nightmares of the time he'd spent in prison but that wasb't what hurt him the most it was what his grandmothers words that killed him inside the woman he devoted his life to. U R your fathers son. U R Ansh those exact words haunted him over and over. He had them even when he was awake. He felt like the loneliest person in a crowd full of people. Yes his Grandmother accepted him back along with some family members but he couldn't stand the stares he got from his family of suspicion. Despite being proven innocent thoses feelings didn't disappear as he felt like his soul had gone away and all that was left was a lifeless body. Empty. His former self but a shadow. He was confused as to how he felt inside every emotion was overwhelming. To make matters worse KT was getting married to Laksh that too with his blessing. How much his heart hurt? He couldn't take it. Never had he felt so weak. He kept questioning himself why couldn't he get over it?

Ranbir

Ranbir Nanda had heard of what happened to his friend Eklavya as he was a fellow business partner and one guy he failed to turn to the dark side. His motto was live fast with expense, women, party hard and work hard. His friend Eklavya was the opposite to him. He still had problems winning over his lady love KT who had done the worst thing ever possible to a guy and her friend disgusted him Kanya was her name. He'd only heard about this now as he'd been away on business that Eklavya couldn't attend. Ranbir wanted to show Eklavya how to exact revenge and try to make him tough. Ranbir couldn't stand being taken for a ride and he sure as hell wasn't going to let anyone do the same to his friend. He was to surprise his friend Eklavya today and on his way there.

Meeting of Ranbir and Eklavya

Ranbir went to Shantiniketan. He was welcomed there by the members of the Virani household. It was the first time he'd seen the place and it was just like his Mansion. They had a lot of members in their family just like his. He could spot all the women immediately and was already turned off by their dress sense. They were all dressed like Indians they weren't modern like his family were. Fine his Mom and Big D were into their asian attire but here the young generation were overdressed. Well he wasn't here to mess about he was here to fix his friends broken self-esteem and do some real damage to those that hurt him but he had his principles he'd never hurt elders. It wasn't done but the youngsters this should be fun. Everyone introduces themselves. Eklavya came down to greet his friend and had a little smile.

R-Is that a real smile or a fake one bro? Chin up. I'm here now and will make everything ok.

E-Hi bro! This is a surprise!

R-R U going to invite me up or am i to stay here.

E-Sorry come on.

They go up somewhere private to discuss what is going on with Eklavya.

R-So bro spill.

E-What?

R-Why U look like somebody's run U over with a truck?

E-Being accused of something i didn't do. The one person i love is to become someone else's. All these emotions waiting to burst out but having a hard time to let them out in case i really hurt somebody. Need i say more?

R-Eklavya this is why i'm here. U R my best friend and anyone that hurts U hurts me. Let everything out. Don't care about anyone or anything. Being bad is in. Look at me i have no tension. I tread on anyone i want not caring is the way to go. Your so called family hurt U hurt them back. Your love is gone let her there are thousands more out there. U can have your pick. Women come and they go its not the end of the world. Its time U ended being good and start being bad. Have U achieved anything being good? No. So change yourself.

E-Laksh is getting somewhere he has everything. I want KT despite what happened i still love her.

R-Laksh is a mummy's boy so bland. U tried being good now try being bad and see how far U go. With me by your side nobody can stop U. As for KT Then marry her make her yours.

E-How can i she's getting married tomorrow.

R-Simple trick her into it while i will keep Laksh busy. Both won't know what hit them.

E-But thats not right!

R-If need be we can get someone to help us i met Vaidehi and she is crazy about Laksh and he is supposed to be a noble guy right i'll make sure those 2 get together.

E-How do U know Vaidehi?

R-Trust me in my line of things U know everyone. Besides she's one of my conquests being rich sure has its advantages.

E-I don't want any details thank U.

R-So we all set.

E-U really have this all worked out. One day bro U will meet your match.

R-R U supposed to be my friend or my enemy. Stop cursing ok. No woman has been born that can take Ranbir Nanda on. I'm a ladies man i love them and leave them not one woman can take me on.

E-Whatever U say bro but i'm glad u came. Definitely showed me how to move past all my problems.

R-Thats what friendship is all about.

E-This time tomorrow KT will be all mine.

R-Yup and Laksh won't know what hit him. I almost feel sorry for the guy. He deserves all he gets. Vaidehi is one person no guy wants in their life.

E-I can't wait!

R-Well bro U need to treat them mean to keep them keen. She's a sati savitri type of girl right?

E-Yep!

R-Then treat her badly U will see she will try to win U over just be nice for a couple of days will do the trick.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
two of Akashh.somebody save me.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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dee wonderful.. i can see the scene in front of me now. two Aakashjis face to face.. unbelievable dear.. superb start..loved it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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rahima di ahr u have made me happy starting another one of ur brill ff's! YAY!! two akash's in one ff this is gonna be major! :D

love th first part! can see that they're brothers more than frends and the bond between them brill!!
continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20

loved the 1st part plz write more soon =)

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