Part 1
emotional update.. well written
Feeling for Preeta
at least Karan is helping
update soon
Part 1
Emotional Start
Preeta's condition is terrible
but good that Karan is there for support
Thank you very much Reena for the Arjun Bijlani Shraddha Arya edits .
Ruchika:I lied so much to Raj.Poor Raj.
Suddenly she heard Karan's voice from behind:Who is Raj?
Ruchika looked at Karan.
Ruchika:Raj is our best friend.He is dad's best friend's son.He lived with us since childhood as he lost his parents in an accident.
Karan:Why did you say that you lied to Raj?
Ruchika:I hid Preeta's condition from him.
Karan:But why?
Ruchika:Because Raj will not be able to bear it.
Karan:Why do you think like that?
Ruchika:Because Raj loves Preeta.
Karan was shocked.
Flash back...
Preeta to Ruchika:Ruchika..I am in love.
Ruchika was surprised.
Ruchika:Really?Who is he?
Preeta blushed:I will not reveal it now as I am not sure whether he loves me.Once he proposes me I will tell you everything.
Ruchika:Tell me..do you like him?
Preeta blushed.
Ruchika:You love him.Then why don't you take the initiative and propose him?
Preeta was shy.
Ruchika:Don't lose your love due to shyness.So go tell him that you also love him.
Preeta blushed and hugged Ruchika.
Raj,Preeta and Ruchika were doing combined studies.But Raj's eyes were on Preeta.
Ruchika smiled seeing it.
One day Ruchika caught Raj.
Ruchika:Raj...you love Preeta.Right?
Raj was stunned.
Raj:How did you....?
Ruchika:How did I understand it.Right?Because I have seen how your eyes always roll on Preeta.
Raj was embarrassed.
Ruchika:It's ok.Chill.Why don't you confess your love to Preeta?
Raj:I am scared whether I will lose her friendship also.
Ruchika:Nothing like that Raj.She will be happy to know that you love her.
Raj:Are you sure?
Ruchika:Yes.Because she told me that she loves someone but she does'nt know whether he loves her.I think..that person is you.
Raj's face blossomed.
Ruchika:Since you are also mute like her she does'nt know about your feelings for her.So you break this silence and confess your love to her.
Raj smiled:Thank you so much Ruchika for the support.
Ruchika:Thank you?When did you become so formal with me?We are best buddies yaar.
They smiled and had a cute hug.
Ruchika:Ok..so go propose her.
Raj pretended as if he is going to touch her feet to get her blessings giggling:Ok Love guru.
Ruchika giggled:Bless you dear.
Raj went near Preeta.
Raj:Preeta...I want to tell you something.
Preeta:Even I want to tell you something Raj.
Raj smiled thinking:Guess she is going to propose me.
Raj:Ok..you say first.
Preeta:I love a person named Kanishk.He proposed me today.I am so happy Raj.
Raj was shocked.He was shattered.
Raj faked a smile:That's nice.All the best Preeta.
Preeta smiled:You were going to say something.What was it?
Raj:Nothing.I was saying that I am getting good job opportunities.
Preeta:Wow..that's cool Raj.
Preeta went near Ruchika.
Preeta:I am so happy Ruchika..Kanishk proposed me.
Ruchika:Kanishk?
Preeta:Yes,Kanishk is the the person I love.
Ruchika was shocked:What?
She thought:Raj....
Ruchika went to Raj's room.She saw Raj crying.
Ruchika:Raj!
Raj wiped his tears.
Ruchika:I am sorry Raj.I thought that Preeta loves you.
Raj:It's ok Ruchika.I am fine.
After a few days....
Raj:I got a job in Dubai through my friend. I will leave once my visa is ready.
All were shocked.
Raghuveer:What is the need of going abroad?You can work in my company.
Preeta:How can you just leave us and go?
Raj:It's a good opportunity.Please support me.
Raghuveer,Sarla and Preeta nodded painfully.
Ruchika followed him to his room.
Ruchika:Raj...you are leaving purposefully.Right?
Raj looked at her emotionally.
Raj:Seeing Preeta with someone else will break my heart.I know that I have to accept the reality.So once I handle myself I may return.May be to attend Preeta and Kanishk's wedding.
Ruchika looked at him tearfully.
Present...
Ruchika:Raj will break down if he comes to know about Preeta's condition.
Karan:But I think you should tell him the truth.Otherwise he himself will regret not been there for Preeta in her crisis.What if Raj's presence can cure Preeta?Because true love can cause miracles.
Ruchika was in a dilemma.
Karan and Ruchika were sitting near Preeta.
Ruchika:I am sorry Ruchika for fooling dad and mom by lying that Karan is Kanishk.But for their health I can only do this.Get well soon Preeta.Then we will tell the truth to dad and mom.If you get cured dad and mom will bear the ugly truth of Kanishk and Karan's real identity.
Karan:Preeta..please forgive me.
Ruchika:Karan is doing his only on my insistence.He is innocent.
Preeta simply looked at them.
Part 2
nice update
feeling for Raj
Ruchika's dilemma is understandable
she wants Preeta to get better soon
Thanks to my dearest friend Reena for the edits. Ruchika remembered how she and Preeta used to enjoy together. Preeta-Ruchika were dancing after the bath in bathrobe. Jab jab chudee khanke re, jab jab payal chhanke re Jab jab sawan barse re Oye bole bole bole bole bole bole bole jiya 
Sarla came.Sarla:Chee...dancing in bathrobe?Are you both not ashamed?Ruchika:We are practicing dance for our dance competition mom.Sarla:Wear any dress and dance.Sarla walked out angrily.Preeta-Ruchika did high five and laughed. Preeta-Ruchika dressed properly and continued dancing. Piya piya o piya piya, piya piya o piya - (2) Subah sham kare meraa jiya, jiya jiya jiya jiya Piya piya o piya piya, piya piya o piya - (2) 
After the dance,they announced Preeta-Ruchika as the best dance pair.Preeta and Ruchika huggedeach other happily. Naa jane kyon dil dhadke, ghadee ghadee yeh kyon tadpe Ho bedardee tune isko dard yeh kaisa diya Piya piya o piya piya, piya piya o piya - (2) 
Preeta-Ruchika pouted and took selfies. Nind udd jatee hai chain bhee khota hai Tanha tanhayee me han jane kya hota hai Rang khil jata hai aankh khul jatee hai Aaina dekhu toh sharam see aatee hai
Preeta brought fruits 
and Ruchika made fruits salad icecream.
Then they both ate it together. Betabi deke mujhko kyon hosh yeh meraa liya Piya piya o piya piya, piya piya o piya - (2) Preeta and Ruchika dressed up in a beautiful gown for the fashion show in college.They looked like beautiful Princesses.All of them jumped in excitement seeing them on stage. Jab kisee ladke se han ladkee milatee hai
Mere dil me chahat kee han chandanee khilatee hai Jab kisee ke ghar me dholkee bajatee hai
Jab kisee iki dolee phulo se sajatee hai Preeta and Ruchika were in the garden adoring flowers. Meree bhee divanee dhadkan karne lage iya iya
Piya piya o piya piya, piya piya o piya - (2)
Preeta plucked flowers from garden and made
a crown with them.
She wore it and showed crazy childish expressions on her face. Subah sham kare meraa jiya, jiya jiya jiya jiya Piya piya o piya piya, piya piya o piya - (2) Naa jane kyon dil dhadke, ghadee ghadee yeh kyon tadpe Ho bedardee tune isko dard yeh kaisa diya Piya piya o piya piya, piya piya o piya - (2) Piya piya o piya piya, piya piya o piya..........(HDJPK) Ruchika shed tears.Karan who passed by saw his and went near her.
Karan:You are worried about Preeta's condition.Right?
Ruchika wept silently.
Karan wiped her tears.
Karan:Don't cry.Your Preeta will recover soon.You both will live life to
the fullest like before.
Ruchika embraced Karan emotionally.Karan caressed her.
Suddenly Ruchika came back to senses and moved away from Karan.
Ruchika:Sorry Karan.By mistake I...
Karan was silent.
Ruchika:And thank you.Your words gave me relief.
He smiled.She also smiled.
Karan was relaxing in between his office work.Suddenly
he saw
Ruchika sitting
opposite to him.
He was surprised.
Karan:Ruchika!
His face blossomed seeing her near him.
Suddenly she disappeared.
Karan:Oh no..why am I thinking of Ruchika?
Ruchika got inside the room.
Karan thought that he was hallucinating her
and did not mind her.
Ruchika:Karan..look these files.
Karan did not mind her.
Ruchika:Karan...
Suddenly Karan jerked.
Karan thought:Oh..she is really here.
Karan:Yes.
Ruchika:Check these files.
Karan took the files from her.
Ruchika:By the way you look really
handsome in this pink over coat.
Karan blushed:Thank you.
Ruchika:Is pink your favourite colour?
Karan:No,red is my favourite colour.
She smiled.
The next day...
Ruchika was looking at her wardrobe.Suddenly a red dress caught her attention.
She remembered Karan saying that red is his favourite colour.
She smiled.She wore that red dress and went to the office.
She entered Karan's cabin.Seeing her Karan became numb.
He was mesmerized by her beauty.
He got up from his chair and went near her.
He went close to her ear and whispered:You look beautiful in this red dress.
She blushed.
Ruchika thought of Karan's words about telling the truth to Raj and she rang up Raj.
Raj:Hi Ruchika..what's up?
Ruchika:Raj..I am sorry.
Raj:Sorry?Why?
Ruchika:Because whatever I told you about Preeta was not true.They were pure lies.
Raj got tensed:Means?Uncle and aunty did'nt accept Preeta and Kanishk?
Ruchika:Whatever happened is what you can't even think of in your worst dreams.
Raj became restless:What are you saying Ruchika?Tell me properly.
Ruchika told him everything.
Raj could not believe it.
Raj:Is it a prank Ruchika?
Ruchika wept.No.Why should I play such a horrible prank?This is true Raj.
Raj was shattered.He could not control his tears.
Raj:I am coming back Ruchika.I am coming back for Preeta.
Ruchika smiled tearfully.
He cut the call.
Karan came.
Ruchika:Thanks for advising me to tell the truth to Raj.I told him the truth.He is coming back.
Karan smiled.
Raj came back.Raghuveer-Sarla-Ruchika were so happy that thy hugged him.
Raghuveer introduced Karan to Raj:This is Preeta's husband Kanishk.You have not seen him before.Right?
Ruchika-Raj looked at each other.
Raj shook Karan's hands:Hi...
Karan:Hi...
Raj whispered:Hi Karan.
Karan smiled slightly.
Ruchika and Karan took Raj to Preeta's room.
Seeing Raj,Preeta's face blossomed.
Preeta looked at him.
Raj held her hand tearfully.
Raj:Now your best friend Raj has come back Preeta.You will be alright soon.
He caressed her head.Preeta's eyes became wet.
Looking at Preeta,Raj said in his mind:My love and friendship will cure you Preeta.I am confident about it.
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