Nainon se naina takraye RajVi OS

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Nainon se naina takraye...Our eyes have connected...


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A hospital room....

A man was sitting on the hospital bed.

He was Rajvansh Malhotra.

A nurse entered the room with some tablets.

She:You need to have these tablets now.

Rajvansh:I cannot have these tablets.Take them back.

She got irritated:If you cannot have medicines on time,why did you get yourself admitted in the hospital?You could have sat at home itself.

Rajvansh got embarrassed.

Rajvansh was silent.

Nurse:Have these medicines.

Rajvansh:I don't like its taste.

Nurse:You are so childish.Why should medicines taste good?It's not normal food or incecream to be yummy.But it has very good qualities which can cure diseases. So don't be fussy and have this.

Rajvansh swallowed the tablets with water.The Nurse smiled.



Another nurse told this nurse:These patients are making my life a hell.Some are so irritating.

She:That's the fun of our life.We meet different types of patients.Today I met a patient who is very arrogant.Really a kadoos.Really difficult to handle him.

The other nurse smiled.




The next day....

The nurse entered Rajvansh's room.

She:Show me your arm.I want to take injection.

Rajvansh:What?Yesterday you made me have medicines forcefully.I tolerated it.But I cannot tolerate injection.Just leave.

She got irritated.

She:This is not your home to ask me to leave.I can't leave like that.I have to do my job.Otherwise I will be fired.

Rajvansh:I don't want you to lose your job because of me.Just because of that I am allowing you to take injection.

She said sarcastically:Thank you for showing mercy upon me.

He was silent.

He lifted up his hands and said rudely:You take injection wherever you want.

She looked at his hand and said:Lift your shirt sleeve up.

He lifted his shirt sleeve up and she took injection on his arm.

He moaned softly:Ah!This is so painful.

He:Why can't you take injection without giving pain?

She smiled slightly.

She:You are really a kid.But very cute.

Unknowingly he smiled.

Mere saare vaade vaade
Reh gaye aadhe
Hai kasoor kya, hai kasoor kya haan
Jeet ke bhi haare haare
Khwaab yeh bechare
Yeh fitoor kya, yeh fitoor kya

The next day....

The nurse gave him medicines.

She:Should I force you to take medicines today also?

Rajvansh smiled:No need of forcing me.I will have it on my own.

She smiled.

Duniya deewani, ishq na jaane
Duniya deewani, ishq na jaane
Dil to bas dil ko pehchane

He had his medicines.

The nurse smiled.

Nurse:This is really a surprise. Earlier it was really difficult to make you have medicines. But now you had your medicines easily.What happened to you suddenly?

Rajvansh:Actually nobody cares about me.Whether I die or not..it doesn't make difference to anyone.

Then why should I have medicines and become healthy?

That's why I was lazy about having medicines.

The nurse became dull.

Rajvansh:But now eventhough you are doing only your job,I feel that you really care for me.So I decided to have medicines for you.

The nurse smiled.

Nainon se naina takraye
Na jaane kya dhoonde akhiyaan
Dhoonde akhiyaan

They shared a sweet eye lock.

Nainon se naina takraye
Na jaane kya dhoonde akhiyaan
Dhoonde akhiyaan

Rajvansh:What's your name nurse?

She:Purvi.

Rajvansh:I...

Purvi:I know that you are Rajvansh Malhotra;the famous writer.I have read your books.I really like your writing Rajvansh.

Rajvansh was surprised that Purvi has read his books.

Rajvansh smiled:Thank you.But call me RV.That's show everyone calls me.

Purvi smiled:Okay RV.

They smiled at each other.

The next 2 days they had sweet casual talk when Purvi came to check Rajvansh's BP and to give him medicines.




On the final day...

Rajvansh got ready to go back home as he got discharged.

Purvi:Now you are going back home.You maybe very happy now.

Rajvansh:I am happy to go back home.But I am sad to leave you and go as I really enjoyed the very little time I spent with you.

Kaise tumhein yeh samjhaye
Na jaane kya doondhe akhiyaan
Dhoonde akhiyaan

Purvi was surprised that he talked to her openly.

Purvi:I also enjoyed my time with you.You really made me laugh a lot with your childish tantrums.

They both laughed.

Heer na jaane, na jaane Ranjha
Jaane yeh kaisi dor
Jud jaaye to tode na toote
Ishq ki aisi dor


Rajvansh:Can I take a few photographs with you before going?

Purvi:Sure.

They took a few photographs together with the phone.



Heer na jaane, na jaane Ranjha
Jaane hai dil mera
Kahin pe jaake mil jaayega
Naam yeh tera mera


Rajvansh took a book from his bag and gave it to her.

Rajvansh:This is my new book.I am giving the first copy to you.

Purvi was surprised.

Heer na jaane, na jaane Ranjha
Jaane hai dil mera
Kahin pe jaake mil jaayega
Naam yeh tera mera x (2)

Purvi:But this was your copy.

Rajvansh:I can get another copy for myself at anytime.So this is my small gift for you for tolerating my irritating behaviour and looking after me.

Purvi took the book from him.

Purvi:Thank you.

Rajvansh:Bye...I will miss you.

Purvi:Bye! I will also miss you.

Log deewane dete hain taane
Log deewane dete hain taane
Dil to bas dil ki hi maane

Rajvansh:If you miss me,we can keep in touch with each other.I have written my phone number in the book.You can ring me up whenever you miss me.I will wait for your call.

Nainon se naina takraye
Na jaane kya dhoonde akhiyaan
Dhoonde akhiyaan x (2)

Purvi was surprised that Rajvansh wants to continue their budding friendship.

They shared a sweet romantic eye lock.

Kaise tumhein yeh samjhaye
Na jaane kya doondhe akhiyaan
Dhoonde akhiyaan

Rajvansh waved his hand at Purvi and walked out.Purvi kept looking at him going away with a sweet smile.

Tu jab-jab mujhse roothega
Mera yaar mera dil tootega
Dil tootega jag chhotega
Jab yaar tu mujhse roothega x (2)



Purvi looked at the book.

Slowly she opened the book.

There it was written "To dear Purvi...with ❤️ Your RV. ".

Duniya deewani, log deewane
Ishq khudai kyun na yeh jaane x (2)

Purvi was surprised to see a heart emoji.

She felt goosebumps reading these words.She kissed the words Rajvansh wrote in the book.

Nainon se naina takraye
Na jaane kya dhoonde akhiyaan
Dhoonde akhiyaan x (2)

Dhoonde akhiyaan..( Jabariya Jodi)

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Posted: 2 months ago
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Please continue this and make them meet againsmiley19

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Thank you for the pm

Amazing OS.... greatly written

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Medicine scene was realistic. Injection scene reminded me of my ff kaise mujhe tum mil gaye. Rajvansh's reason was very sad. Both saying that they will miss each other was sweet. Rajvansh giving his first copy to Poorvi was lovely. The heart emoji And Poorvis' kiss on it was romantic.

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Posted: 2 months ago
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Interesting update dear

Just amazing

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 2 months ago
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nice story

i thought RV has terminal disease

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Beautiful OS


Rajvansh is an author and Purvi

has already read all his books

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This was such a sweet os. Please continue it if possible. The pics were cute and perfect. Loved how poori has positive mindset about the job and explained it to the other nurse. Rv not taking medicine because no one was there to care for him was sad but glad that he decided to take medicine after realizing poorvi not only doing her job but also cares for him. Rv being a famous writer was nice and unexpected twist. And loved how poorvi is his fans who has read all his books. Loved that while leaving rv gave a copy of his new book just for poorvi and wants to continue their friendship. Such a cute and unexpected ending. Unexpected because I was longing to read more and I thought it will be long and end with their marriage but still it was best.
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