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Res! So many emotions. Will come back later.
Unres-Rani!!!I simply loved this excellent piece of writing, so crisp and so eloquent.I loved Pragya thinking of her husband vs. the rockstar, feeling possessive as well as desire for him at the same time. Oh the descriptions of Abhi in concert, the details of mikestand, thrusting hips, hair.. oh that whole imagery was alluring to Pragya as well as the reader.😳And what a pleasant pleasure surprise for Abhi!Loved how Pragya took him through it! Hot and passionate.And the best part was them making peace with each other's profession/hobby parts that they don't exactly belong to.. understanding of that space they end up not 'sharing' with each other!Thank you Rani.
Thank you so much Tia. I'll let you in on a funny secret -my part time campus job is renting out/cataloguing electronic equipment and I've come to hate mike stands because I have to handle them so much. Somehow subconsciously they must have made their way into this story and it's both hilarious and gratifying to me that you mention it. 😆😆
And I'm really glad you liked the last bit - I didn't have that in the first draft and it felt incomplete before.
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