~~Fan-Fic Contest Entries~~

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hello Dear Friends๐Ÿ˜›

Few weeks back we had put up a Fan-Fic Contest as many of you requested for it.

Only TWO members participated in the contest.

We are quite disappointed. Firstly everyone demands for the contests and when there are contests held at your request there is hardly any participation from you guys, Is this fair?
There are so many creative talents present out here but whats the problem? why are you guys not participating. We even extended the date on request of many members. But no one participated in the contest Then whats the point of requesting contests?

Kulvaddhu show has ended but the section is still more active than some of the other sections out there and such low response for the much awaited fan-fic contest...well what do we say...

If this continues we will have to stop conducting contests in future.๐Ÿ˜”

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The 2 members who participated in the Fan-Fic contest are:

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘queenyuks๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
&
๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Lois_Lane๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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[Read their entries in the second post and plz comment on the entries.]
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Thank you so much guys for participating in the contest, you both did a very commendable job, so you both are winners of Fan-Fic Contest.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Here is special siggy f
or both of you for your efforts. (I made two siggys but plz feel free to choose one or you may use both sigs)

link: http://i14.tinypic.com/2n82afa.jpg


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Please check the second post to read the entries.

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Regards,
Kimi_dost & Sweet_shagun
Kulvaddhu Development Team
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Entry by queenyuks:

Kuch Haseen Pal

She stood in the balcony of his, No! Correction; their room and looked down into the beautifully and intricately decorated garden. It was all red, yellow and gold along with deep red roses and yellow and orange marigolds.

The low concrete wall was cool under her sweaty palms, and the fresh crisp air refreshing against her warm flesh.

This was her night, her wedding night, their wedding night.

She still remembered the first time she had looked into his deep and mysterious eyes. She had been running down the hall when she had collided with him. The concern in his eyes for her when he had looked down at her fallen state had touched her. She felt even worse when he offered her his hand because jus the previous day she had laughed at him for falling.

Touching his hand has sent a shiver throughout her entire body. Gaze lowered she had muttered an almost inaudible thanks to him, and after a pause also apologized for laughing at him.

Chuckling softly he had said, "It's no problem. It was worth it to hear you laugh."

Thank god her best friend had arrived jus then or she would have gone redder than a tomato. Why hadn't she just understood her feelings then?

Their next encounter was even worse.

She thought she was confessing her love to her childhood friend but it turned out to be him. She remembered how shocked she had been and the only thought in her mind was to simply run away, but she couldn't.

He held her gaze in such a way that breaking away was completely impossible. She was at a point of being completely sucked into their dark depths.

Just the memory of the look he had given her made her blush.

Suddenly she felt arms going around her from behind and the occupant of her thought's warm breath in her ear as he whispered, "Mere bare mein soch rahi thi?"

"Can you suggest a better topic for me to think about?"

"Better than me? Not really. What were you thinking about?"

"How I fell in love with you."

"I don't know about you but I fell for you the first time I saw you. Even though you made me so incredibly angry something about you left me stumped."

"I fell for you that day we were kite flying. You asked me so sweetly to support you and when you had said that you won because I was with you, you left me stumped."

He tightened his arms slightly around her and nuzzled her nape before he whispered huskily, "You always leave me stumped jaan. But I ten to have that effect on people."

"Your mom still isn't too happy with our wedding."

"I don't care. She didn't think of me when she left my dad. I don't mean Amit. I don't consider him my dad. Who I mean is papa. He was always so nice to me, and even now he took me back after all this and gave us this master bedroom. Plus you didn't marry mom, you married me. And anyway, she isn't here. It's only you, papa and I."

"I'm so happy" she said taking a deep sigh and leaning her head back to rest it on his shoulder. "Now just Shourya and Jaanvi have to get married tomorrow and everything will be fine. These last couple of days have been so hectic."

"I'm sure convincing mamaji for Shourya's wedding with Janvi and accepting Rajveer and Carol must not have been easy. I know how he can be sometimes."

"It's all good now. Now I just have to wake up early tomorrow and go over there to help."

"Wake up? Who ever said I would let you sleep?"

He noticed her delicate blush and grinned impishly in return. He slowly turned her around to face him, cupped her cheeks with his hands softly and gazed deeply into her soft brown eyes. She too linked her arms behind his head

"I love you Niyati."

"I love you too Agni."

The End

Entry by Lois_Lane

Shadi ka pehla April fool!!!!

Characters:

Shorya

Niyati

Agni

Janvi

Rajlaxmi

Vikram

Antara
Dadisa

Story:

This story strats with ,after the marriage of Shorya and Niyati both went for honeymoon in Goa, and they both find Agni there too ,what was he doing there you will find out when you read out the whole story.

Symbols:I will use the names only in the starting and will use the symbols instead of full names:

S=Shorya
N=Niyati
A=Agni
V=Vikram
AN=Antara
J=Janvi
Raj=Rajlaxmi
Dadisa

STORY:

Scene 1:

Niyati and Shorya are at the beach sitting in a small hut and drinking

naryal pani from one naryal and looking into each other's eyes, suddenly

another big long straw come into their naryal ,S gets annoyed and turn
around where he see Agni is drinking from their naryal,(in the background
Agni,jyoti,jyoti,Agni Swaha start playing)he is sitting at his table a little away
from S and N's table,S stands up in anger and reach A's table
and said:

S: (angrily)Agni yeh sab kya hai?

A: Kya ho raha hai?main tu naryal pani pee raha hoon.
S:(getting more angry)kyun yahaan itnay saaray naryal
pani walay kharay hain,apna naryal pani pio.

A: (smiling)Laken tum tu meray bhai ho na tumhari cheez meri
cheez hui kay nahin, aur kitni ghalat baat hogi yeh agar
baday bhai kay hotay huay bhi chotay bhai ko paisay kharch
karnay paday.
S: (shouts)Agni sudhar jao , yeh mera aur N ka honeymoon hai
aur main nahin chahta kayโ€ฆโ€ฆ..
N: Shorya(Niyati reach A's table where S is standing)apko humari
kasam aap A kay saath koi jhagda nahin karengay,janay dejiye.

S says nothing but walks away from there taking N's hand in his arm
N looks back to A and winked at him A winked back in reply.

Scene 2:

N and S are doing dinner in their room, feeding each other
and looking at each other and romancing, they come closer
to each other, and S is about to kiss N, suddenly they both
heard the voice of dogs barking outside their cottage, S gets
furious again and said:

S:(angrily) yeah A apni harkaton say baaz nahi aayega
main jaanta hoon yeh uskay kuttay hain jo unsay jaan
boojh kar humain disturb karnay kay liye yahan bhejay
hain.

N:(controlling her laughter)S aap pareshaan mat hon
main ja kar A ko samjhati hoon.

Niyati goes outside she sees here and there and see a
man sitting in hat is hiding behind a tree she goes to him
and said:

N:A aap yahaan kya kar rahay hain?
A:Aray N main kab say tumsay humaray plan kay baray
baat karma chah raha tha laken moqa hi nahi mila.
N: Aap ko pareshaan honay ki zaroorat nahi hai A, mainay
sab kuch soch liya hai,mujhay pata lag gaya hai , yahaan
say kuch dur kay fasley par jo cottage hai wahaan kal S
mujhay aik surprise denay walay hain, hum duno bhi wahin
S ko surprise de dangay.
A: Kamal hai tumharay paas aik dimagh bhi hai, aur who bhi
itna zabardast.
N: Jo plan mainay socha hai na woh meray dimaagh say bhi ziyada
zabardast hai.(she whisper something in A's ears)
A: A gives a big smile.
N: Kuyn aagaya na maza, S aur humara honeymoon tu yaadgaar ban jaayega.
S ko tu yaad bhi nahi hai kay kal kya din hai ,(hehe)ab main jati hoon warna S ko shak ho jayega.(she goes)
A watches her going, and says:
A: Thank God yeh meri biwi nahi hai, mainay tu socha hi nahi tha
kay mera kaam itni asani say ho jayega,main S say kab say badla
lena chah raha tha mujhay pata nahi tha kay S ki apni biwi hi itni
badi joker niklay gi, and than he laughs(hahahahahahahahaha)

S comes out of the bushes and says:
S: Tu yeh baat hai, such much N, yeh honeymoon tu waqai
bahut yaadgaar bannay wala hai, meri joker biwi nay , apnay say
bhi baday joker ka sahara liya hai, and than he laughs(hahahahahaha)
ab tumharay liye mera surprise aur bhi special bannnay wala hai N.

Scene 3:

Next day, S and N are doing lunch in a hotel , suddenly they both
heard a loud voice"Hello Friends"they both looked , Janvi is standing
there.

N:Janvi tumโ€ฆ
J: Haan main.
S: Tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho.
J: Aray tum hi nay tu mujhay bulaya tha.
S: S gets into shock and look at J and signaled at
N.
Niyati is looking at both of them confusingly.

J:who mmmmโ€ฆ.Mera matlab hai kay kal raat ko mainay khwab main dekha kay,
mainโ€ฆmain tum say phone pay baat kar rahi hoon,tumse maafi maang rahi hoon
tu mujhay laga kay tum mujhay bula rahay ho,tu mainay socha k abb abab
mujhay tum duno say maafi mangni chahiye haan.

N:Tu tumnay khwaab main dekha kay hum yahaan goa aaye huay
hain honey moon mananay?
J: Haaanโ€ฆNan..Nanโ€ฆ.naheee mera matlab hai kay ababโ€ฆ.woh
yeh tu itefaaq tha kay tum duno mujhay yahaan mil gaye,main
yahaan kisi kaam say aai hui thi.

N:Aacha tu betho humaray saath,S agar J itni maafi maang rahi hai
tu humein usay maaf kar dena chahiye,kyun theek kah rahi hoon. na main?
S:S takes N hands in his and says, ab tumhari baat main kaisay taal
sakta hoon.
Janvi sits with them.S and J both smile at eachother meaningfully.

Scene 4:

At night N is getting ready to go to that cottage where S has called her

N:Aaaj meray surprise kay saamnay S ka surprise pheeka
par jaayega.Her phone rings she pick up the phone its
A,haan boliye A.

A:Saari taiyari ho chuki hai bus ab S k anay ka intezar hai,
N: Aur is say pehley kay who wahaan pohonchay,humein
wahan puhunch jana chahiye,bus main nikal hi rahi hoon.

A: Main tu pehley puhonch chukka hoon,bus tum aajao.
N:OK,she says and cuts off the phone.

Scene5:

Now A and N jumped into a dark room of that cottage from the window
A takes out a torch in his hand.

A:array S abhi tak aya kuyn nahi.
N:(gets irritated) who kya hai na , kay mujhsay
ziyada time taiyaar honay main S ko lagta hai.

A:(laughs)kuyn kya parlour gaya hai make up karwanay.
N: Shayad.

They heard the sound of foot steps .

A:Lagta hai S aagaya.
N: haan chalo chalo

They both opened the door slowly ,A looks here and there
then calls N to come out she also come out.

N:Torch ki roshni itni rakho kay hum un duno kay

Paoon dekh sakay,dekho nishanay par pohonchtay
hi rassi khinch dena.

A and N are both hiding behind a staircase with A,taking
a rope in his hand.

They both see someone coming into the middle of the room.

On the other side of the cottage, there is room where hiding
J and S , who are waiting for A and N.

J: Tumhain pura yaqeen hai lay woh N , A kay saath mili hui
hai?

S: Haan mainey unki baatein sun lit hi.

They heard the sound of footsteps.

S:Lagta hai who duno hall main aagaye, ab chalo neechay.

They both go downstairs.
J:Lagta hai aagaya oont aur oontni aagaye pahaar kay neechay.
S looks angrily at J.

J:Kya such karwa lag gaya.
S:Nahin, un dun okay liye yeh lafz bhi bahut chotay hain.

J:Ab khencho rassi.

N:A rassi khenchaiye.

Rope pulled at both sides,we heard the sound of water splashing all over in the hall
because there are handles on the roof of the hall where hanging the 4 big pales
of water, and at the same time someone switch on the lights,all A,N,S and J shouts
at the same time,April fool, and laughs, and next moment their laughter disappear,
because they saw Vikram and Antara standing , all wet from head to feet.

S:Ma, papa aap.
V:Haan hum aur agar yeh surprise hai tu bahut he behuda surprise hai.
AN:Aur yeh N aur A aur S tum yeh J kahan say aagayi,tum logon ko
zara bhi sharam nahi ata,S N, tum loog shadi shuda ho kar aisi
harkatein kar rahay ho.
V:(both V and AN are very angry )A tum say humein aisi umeed nahi thi.
mazaaq aik had main acha lagta hai, hum tum duno ko kabhie maaf nahi karengey
chalo,An.

They both walked out of the cottage angrily.

S:Laken maa papa ko yahaan bulaya kisnay.
J:Aur kis nay bulaya hoga, tumhari pyaari N kay siwa.
N:G nahin Janvi g, yeh karnama zaroor apnay kiya hoga

balkay tum duno shamil ho ismay , tum duno nay hi bulaya
hoga.
A: Bilkul mujhay yeh in duno ka kaam lagta hai.
S: Acha main tumhain abhi batata hoon.

Both A and S walks toward each other in a very filmi style,
but they both slipped on the water,J and N also comes forward
and they slipped also.And they all heard a loud laughter, and looks
up on the top of the stair is standing Raj,mujhay tum charo kay
April fool plan ki khabar pehley hi hogayee thi,aur V or AN bhabi
ko mainey hi yahaan bulaya tha yeh keh kar kay S or N unhay
aik party dena chahtay hain.(HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA she laughs)

Aur mujhay tumsay rajlaxmi.Raj see and all A,N,S and J looks
at the staircase is standing Dadisa,who pulls the carpet,and Raj fell
down from the staircase rolling , and comes into the feet of dadisa.

Dadisa:Yeh meray bachoon ko pareshaan karnay kay liye.

All N,A,S and J smiles,and standup to come forward to Dadisa.

And than someone also pull the carpet where A,N,S and J are standing
and they also fell down making a loud voice.they see V and AN standing
who pull the carpet from their feet.

V:Masa ka matlab yani hum duno bachay yani main aur Antara,
tum chaar shetan nahin.

J:Yeh dadi sa main itni taqat kahan say aagayi.
Dadisa:(angrily)Yeh tu kamal hai bournvita ka,raj ko tum logon kay plan
ka pata chal gaya aur mujhay raj kay plan ka,afsoos
mujhay anay main thodi der hogayi varna yeh pani
ki baltiyaan main tum sab par girati aur raaj tum par bhi.

Dadi sa:Kyun kaisa laga mera April fool surprise.

A, N,S and J comes to dadi sa and bow down into her feet saying
"Dadi sa aap mahan hain".

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MALEKA

a.k.a

๐Ÿ˜ŠLois_lane๐Ÿ˜Š


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Posted: 17 years ago
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ooommmggg these r both sooo guuudd!!๐Ÿ‘amazing job to both yuks nd maleka!!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘yu guys r reallii guud!!๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

buh heyy kimi i already told yu guys that i cant write nd so i dint participate n this contest buh i thought atleast dilly nd sharifah nd pri were gunna so...yes its sad thaat onlii 2 ppl participated!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great FF's Yuks and Maleka!!๐Ÿ‘


But HOLD IT! Kimbo wheres my entry yaaaar?!๐Ÿ˜ญ

It took me an hour long to type it up and send it to you last Friday and now its not here.....what happened?!๐Ÿฅบ

~diljaani
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: diljaani

But HOLD IT! Kimbo wheres my entry yaaaar?!๐Ÿ˜ญ

It took me an hour long to type it up and send it to you last Friday and now its not here.....what happened?!๐Ÿฅบ

~diljaani

I never got any entries from you๐Ÿ˜•

I checked my inbox thrice before making this post.

You can send now and I will put it up in this post.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks so much guys ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ .
I'm really glad you guys liked it ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Great FF Maleka. Awsome job ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

Yuks
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kimi_dost

I never got any entries from you๐Ÿ˜•

I checked my inbox thrice before making this post.

You can send now and I will put it up in this post.



omg you didnt get it?! yeh kya ho gaya?๐Ÿ˜•

I've it written on paper๐Ÿ˜ญ

I'll just type it up and send it you later and you can add it....๐Ÿ˜ณ

~diljaani
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Posted: 17 years ago
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w0wwwwwwwwwwwww...they r superbbbb...congoo maleka andd yuks...u guyz deservee itt ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
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WOW great job everyone...!! can u make maleekas yellow a darker color it hurt my poor wittle eyes ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
lOl... but yah there both were very well written n sum berrry smart pple wrote them ๐Ÿ˜† ..they r probably gud at math too ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great job queenyuks

lol im sorry kimi jaanu for not paritcapting but as some of u know that now iam offically working full time n studying so i get no time n already have a fan fic for another show so its but hard for me to do two at the same.
but i would love to particapte in other contest i can finally make siggies so if u wanna have a siggie contest i will surelly be in it n u can give us which pics u want us to make siggie
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