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Posted: 6 years ago
#81
Very beautiful shot Manisha 👏
The delight of one's face do makes difference and so does the fake emotions! I loved how you have shown the lovers trying to make each other happy - with one letting go his taste and gathering heart to eat the pizza, and the other making it a habit for him to say No to the dish she has made if it's not liked by him!
Sometimes we can say this not knowing the likes and dislikes or may be communication gap. But loving each other's every thing in life makes the love much more special! This is what Ashu tried ⭐️

As is always said when you have a great company with you...even the things you dislike become dear to you.

Very well said 👏 Loved this one as well, as i have always loved all your write ups Sweetie ❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Beautifully expressed in the last lines.. that good company can even make the disliked dish more tasty.. !

Loved the shot Manisha... ⭐️👏
As usual,,, Ashni moments matter in the last.. n that happened once again here... Awesome to see him swallowing her efforts n pain she took to made it..
What makes love more special is the way the other one reacts.. Its obvious that things do differ n here too their likes n dislikes differ., but what much loved is... Nidhi making lunch for Ashu,,, n Ashu coming right on time n loving her dish even after tasting it..
Waise Ashu loved... Hare chane ki curry n methi muthiya... 😉

Nicely expressed what true love means n what matters the most... !
Thanks for the sweetness spread here dear..
God bless..


Thanks a lot Bhaiya😃🤗
when you have someone who loves you...the efforts they put in for your happiness... becomes so dear to you😃
This is what I tried to show...here he doesn't like it but he is ready to acknowledge the efforts she put in and she wants to respect his likes and dislikes😃
This is what true love all about😃
Bless you too Bhaiya😃🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Very beautiful shot Manisha 👏

The delight of one's face do makes difference and so does the fake emotions! I loved how you have shown the lovers trying to make each other happy - with one letting go his taste and gathering heart to eat the pizza, and the other making it a habit for him to say No to the dish she has made if it's not liked by him!
Sometimes we can say this not knowing the likes and dislikes or may be communication gap. But loving each other's every thing in life makes the love much more special! This is what Ashu tried ⭐️

As is always said when you have a great company with you...even the things you dislike become dear to you.

Very well said 👏 Loved this one as well, as i have always loved all your write ups Sweetie ❤️ 🤗


Thank you so much Bhabhi...when both of them understand each other and try to think about the other one before one self...then there is no place for arguments, misunderstandings and tensions😃
So i feel understanding is the most important thing in any relationship😃

Thanks for appreciating every work of mine here and everywhere else Bhabhi...love you too😃🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
#84

Tere liye main...

Nidhi was really upset as she needed money for her Baba's treatment who was admitted to the hospital. She asked her friends but no one was able to help her in this situation. While going back from the hospital to meet Baba in the other hospital...she was praying for help in front of the idol in her hospital which was overheard by Dr Ashutosh. He had developed a soft corner for her now that he knew that she is naughty and bubbly but a thoughtful and helpful person at heart who is ever ready to help the others. He decided to help her...but he knew she won't accept financial help directly from him. He had to find out another way to help her. Next morning everyone was surprised to see a notice on the notice board that stated the start of medical benefits for the families of the employees of the hospital. They would get entire treatment for free and that was effective with immediate effect. Nidhi's friend saw this and told Nidhi about this on phone. She was very happy and relieved at the same time to know this and she immediately came to the hospital to arrange for the transfer of her Baba to KGH. He met Dr Ashutosh and told him about her father's health and he asked to shift him there immediately. Nidhi was very thankful to him and he was relieved to see the smile on her face. Nidhi was full of appreciation for what the Dean had done for the entire hospital staff but she didn't know as yet that all this was done just to help her in this difficult time and luckily everyone would get to avail the benefits of this new policy in the hospital.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#85
Nice shot Manisha... ⭐️👏
Ashu has been like this.. helping all those in need... !
I liked his noble thought of helping Nidhi.. n introduced a new policy.. goodness dont need a proof.. it only needs some reason to help someone out.. n Ashu is one of them,, undoubtedly.. 😃
So a soft corner is already developed... 😉.. hmm...
Loved the shot.. thoughtfully written.. n as always you are fab in writing yet another one...
Thanks dear... keep the flow in going...
God bless..

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Posted: 6 years ago
#86
Very beautiful shot, yet once again Manisha 👏
Helping others, is the best thing one can do! And that's what Ashu tried while lending his hand to Nidhi's help! As you have said, he knew that she won't take his help with money, he opted for a new policy and helped her ⭐️
Magnificent take on his way to make sure, she got the help and she cud not get any indication that he did all this only and only for her ❤️
Pure and a heart of gold! Loved the beauty of the shot dear 🤗
Thanks for the most generous part cos this has touched many hearts!
Luv ya ❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Nice shot Manisha... ⭐️👏

Ashu has been like this.. helping all those in need... !
I liked his noble thought of helping Nidhi.. n introduced a new policy.. goodness dont need a proof.. it only needs some reason to help someone out.. n Ashu is one of them,, undoubtedly.. 😃
So a soft corner is already developed... 😉.. hmm...
Loved the shot.. thoughtfully written.. n as always you are fab in writing yet another one...
Thanks dear... keep the flow in going...
God bless..


Thanks a lot Bhaiya😃🤗
Helping someone in times of need is so important and a gentleman like Ashu...would never see Nidhi suffering like this😊
Also he knew that she wont accept any help outwardly...so he found another way to help her...this is what a noble person would do😃

Thanks a lot for all the appreciation and motivation😃🤗
Bless you too Bhaiya🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Very beautiful shot, yet once again Manisha 👏

Helping others, is the best thing one can do! And that's what Ashu tried while lending his hand to Nidhi's help! As you have said, he knew that she won't take his help with money, he opted for a new policy and helped her ⭐️
Magnificent take on his way to make sure, she got the help and she cud not get any indication that he did all this only and only for her ❤️
Pure and a heart of gold! Loved the beauty of the shot dear 🤗
Thanks for the most generous part cos this has touched many hearts!
Luv ya ❤️ 🤗


Thank you Bhabhi for your lovely review...any gentleman would do so to help a person in need😃
He surely has a heart of gold😃
Loved to read you Bhabhi as always😃👏
Love you loads❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
#89
Tum ko dekha to...

Nidhi and Ashu planned to go out on a date ...their first date after both of them confessed their love for each other. Both of them had butterflies running through their stomach as this was something new for both of them. Ashu reached their meeting point before time and was waiting there...after some time he saw her coming...she looked gorgeous in a long skirt and top. He lost himself when he saw her in this dress as he had never seen her before like this. He was lost in her thoughts when she came close to him and started laughing...he was brought out of his thoughts because of this and he became confused as to why she was laughing? When he asked her the reason for this...she told her that she was amused to see him dressed in formals even for a date. Ashu felt embarrassed and told her that he didn't have any casual wear as he never felt the need for them before. Nidhi realized that he was used to a particular lifestyle and that's why he didn't have any casual wear. She asked him to come with her to a shopping mall before they went out for a date. In the mall she asked him to leave his coat in the car only and they went to buy some clothes. After a lot of search and trials...she finalized a pair of jeans...t shirt and a jacket for him. She was happy to see him in that attire...although he wasn't very comfortable in that outfit...but for her happiness he decided to wear that. They both out on their date...their first ever...and Ashu felt so different and happy that day...this was an unknown thing for him. He felt so complete with her and both of them complimented each other so well.


The end of this one😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#90
So so beautiful short story .Thanks.
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