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Posted: 6 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: bawaswift

The way to Hardstone thru tea.. ! ๐Ÿ˜‰

Yeah,, it happened in the show... as Dr. Ashutosh always loved adrak wali chai... n so did Nidhi,, so the similarity in the taste took them close for the first time,, n then it became the routine to carry on with this kinda tea n recall each other's words n so on,,, following the love..
Lovely,, Awesome n very fine shot if we see the eyes speaking of Ashu..
I have always mentioned Ashu's eyes speaking.,, n every one including Indu di has agreed ,,, ๐Ÿ˜Ž
The revelation of the feelings came thru each other's gesture,, n i loved this take ,, as few hearts can understand this feeling.. n Nidhi cud gather it.. โญ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘
Lovely times for Nidhi to cuddle down n feel the love of the unplanned date n time spending with her heartthrob.. !
Lovely,,, fab,, n full of new feelings of a girl's heart..
Thanks dear,, God bless..


Thank you so much Bhaiya๐Ÿ˜ƒ
I agree...I don't know much about Ashu as a character but yes...SK as an actor speaks wonderfully through his eyes...I've seen him in other shows...I really appreciate the actors who speak through their eyes๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ‘
I'm glad you could relate this short story to the show and you liked it๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Bless you too Bhaiya๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 6 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Very sweet shot Manisha ๐Ÿ‘

A pair of eyes looking at the most beautiful girl, this is what Ashui made her realise with his eyes and lovely gestures โค๏ธ
A girl can spend all her nights recalling those eyes that made her standing at the Cloud 9 and today Ashu's one sweet gesticulation cleared her heart that he is sailing in the same lovely boat, and have little to match her words!
Beautifully shown Nidhi's heart beats increasing every time she is remembering the lovely time she cud spend with him. What lies for her, she is not aware, but is aware of the first feeling of love, that she has experienced and is enjoying all alone in her dreamy world!
Love makes you beautiful : and her red cheeks in shy and love are making her night more beautiful than ever!
Thanks for the beauteous Sweetie, luv ya โค๏ธ ๐Ÿค—


@red...well said Bhabhi...experience haan...ahem ahem๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰
The feeling of being in love for the first time is so special ...I feel every one goes through such feelings once in their life...the future may or may not be in their favour but this feeling is precious๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Thanks a lot for your wonderful words Bhabhi๐Ÿ˜ƒโค๏ธ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 6 years ago
#73
Tum ho mere liye anmol...

Ashu was never interested in shopping... but today Nidhi asked him to come with her for buying some dresses for her and he couldn't say no to her. He went with her halfheartedly to a showroom where she started selecting sarees for her. She shortlisted few of them for herself but wasn't able to finalise one... She looked at Ashu who was looking here and there trying to pass his time. He went to him and asked him to help her finalise the best one for her but he told her to choose any one that she likes. She told him that she wasn't able to select and that's why she needed his help...but as he wasn't able to choose like this...the salesman suggested that she can try each saree one by one and the one which suits her the most can be selected. Nidhi agreed to this and one by one he helped her try the sarees and Ashu was looking at her mesmerized. Nidhi waited for his response whenever she tried a saree and his expressions told her whether he liked that or not. After many trials she tried a light pink coloured saree and when Ashu saw her in that saree...he just couldn't take his eyes off her...he was lost in her beauty and elegance when Nidhi slightly gave him a pat on his shoulder and he was brought out of his trance. She asked him about that saree and his smile made it clear that he liked that one for her. She chose that saree only and when she saw the price...she decided to leave it as it was very costly. But her husband won't let her leave that beautiful saree just because it was expensive. Nidhi was about to leave the showroom when he excused himself and asked her to wait in the car and that he would be back soon. He returned with that saree for her and she was surprised to see that...yeh kyun le aaye...itni mehengi saree hai...kya zaroorat thi iski? she asked him. He just gave her his smile and replied...keemti hai lekin tumse zyada nahi... Nidhi blushed on hearing this from her husband and both of them went back home after spending a wonderful evening together.


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Posted: 6 years ago
#74
Aww,, cho chweettt...
Ashu hai hi itta achha bachha... ๐Ÿ˜Ž

Very nice shot Manisha... โญ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘
Kahan se lati hai itne ideas.. ๐Ÿ˜›

Loved to see her trying the sarees n the one last took his heart n mind n everything away from him... to Nidhi... ๐Ÿ˜‰
Cost never value much when it comes to the love n his or her wish.. Loved to see the Nuero surgeon at last shopping for his beautiful wife.. the saree that looked beautiful on her... n the surprise made her more loving., n rest of the evening becoming the most wonderful..
Aisa hi hota hai... ye hubby log na aise show karte hai jaise wife ko shopping is a time pass.. but when it comes to Ahem Ahem... sab side mein ho jata hai... ๐Ÿ˜†
Loved it. .keep the flow going dear.. n God bless..

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Very right, this is a great feeling that price do not matter and a spouse or even a lover is there to bring you what you desired, if it is in the reach of their pocket.
Very beautiful shot, yet another lovely time spend with AshNI ๐Ÿ‘
Nidhi looks gorgeous in pink, and when Ashu saw her attired in that Saree, not his but every heart wud have got melt ๐Ÿ˜‰
Wondrous feeling, when he bought it for her when she left to see the high price! He is like that - not much words to say, but to show his heart in every possible way he can! โค๏ธ
Thanks for this beautiful evening shared of our own AshNi Manisha ๐Ÿ‘
Luv ya so so much โค๏ธ ๐Ÿค—



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Posted: 6 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Aww,, cho chweettt...

Ashu hai hi itta achha bachha... ๐Ÿ˜Ž

Thanks you Bhaiya๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Hmm ek dum aap ki tarah achha ...haina๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†

Very nice shot Manisha... โญ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘
Kahan se lati hai itne ideas.. ๐Ÿ˜›

Ideas aa jaate hain Bhaiya๐Ÿ˜‰
Bas aap ki dua hai๐Ÿ˜›

Loved to see her trying the sarees n the one last took his heart n mind n everything away from him... to Nidhi... ๐Ÿ˜‰
Cost never value much when it comes to the love n his or her wish.. Loved to see the Nuero surgeon at last shopping for his beautiful wife.. the saree that looked beautiful on her... n the surprise made her more loving., n rest of the evening becoming the most wonderful..
Aisa hi hota hai... ye hubby log na aise show karte hai jaise wife ko shopping is a time pass.. but when it comes to Ahem Ahem... sab side mein ho jata hai... ๐Ÿ˜†

Aap ke liye yeh indication hai...Bhabhi sun rahe ho na๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜›
Ek special day aane wala hai...Bhaiya aap bhi sun rahe ho na๐Ÿ˜‰

Loved it. .keep the flow going dear.. n God bless..

Thank you so much Bhaiya...meri koshish pasand aayi...hum khush huye๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 6 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Very right, this is a great feeling that price do not matter and a spouse or even a lover is there to bring you what you desired, if it is in the reach of their pocket.

Very beautiful shot, yet another lovely time spend with AshNI ๐Ÿ‘
Nidhi looks gorgeous in pink, and when Ashu saw her attired in that Saree, not his but every heart wud have got melt ๐Ÿ˜‰
Wondrous feeling, when he bought it for her when she left to see the high price! He is like that - not much words to say, but to show his heart in every possible way he can! โค๏ธ
Thanks for this beautiful evening shared of our own AshNi Manisha ๐Ÿ‘
Luv ya so so much โค๏ธ ๐Ÿค—



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Price never matters when its about the happiness of your loved ones๐Ÿ˜ƒ
This is such a beautiful feeling when you get such surprises from your spouse๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Glad that you enjoyed reading this short story...I'm happy to be a part of this beautiful evening spent with Ashni๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Love you too Bhabhi๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿค—

Thank you so much for these pics...KK really looks gorgeous in pink...Bhaiya to kahin kho gaye honge๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by braveheartdoc - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#78
Bhaiya aap ke liye๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 6 years ago
#79
Agar tum saath ho...


Nidhi thought of inviting Ashu for lunch as it was an off for both of them...initially he was reluctant but he agreed when she insisted. He asked her what special she is cooking for him to which she told him that it would be a surprise for him. Ashu agreed to meet her at 1 o clock sharp...she was eagerly waiting for him and he was there right on time. She welcomed him inside and after spending some time with her he asked her to reveal her surprise now...she went in and came out with pizza in her hands. Ashu didn't like pizza at all but the delight on her face stopped him from showing his dislike towards the pizza. She asked him to taste one slice and he picked up one although he wasn't willing to eat it. When he had one bite his expressions showed that he didn't like the taste...aapko achha nahi laga? she asked. He understood what she wanted to hear...nahi...aisa nahi hai...achha hai... But she couldn't go wrong in deciphering his expressions...agar achha nahi laga to aap bata sakte ho...zabardasti khaane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai... She told him. He revealed his dislike for pizza in general and she told him that he should have told this beforehand itself when he saw pizza so that she could have made something else. But he told her that he didn't want to hurt her sentiments...as she had worked so hard to make this pizza and he would definitely have it. "Waise sach bataaun itna bura bhi nahi hota pizza... ya yeh kahu ki tumne banaya hai to achha lagne laga hai... He came closer to her and said...Nidhi blushed on hearing this and both of them smiled to each other. They had a nice time with pizza lunch and each others company. As is always said when you have a great company with you...even the things you dislike become dear to you.


End of this one๐Ÿ˜Š


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautifully expressed in the last lines.. that good company can even make the disliked dish more tasty.. !
Loved the shot Manisha... โญ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘
As usual,,, Ashni moments matter in the last.. n that happened once again here... Awesome to see him swallowing her efforts n pain she took to made it..
What makes love more special is the way the other one reacts.. Its obvious that things do differ n here too their likes n dislikes differ., but what much loved is... Nidhi making lunch for Ashu,,, n Ashu coming right on time n loving her dish even after tasting it..
Waise Ashu loved... Hare chane ki curry n methi muthiya... ๐Ÿ˜‰

Nicely expressed what true love means n what matters the most... !
Thanks for the sweetness spread here dear..
God bless..
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