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oh yeah...now that you mentioned...I remembered that scene there😛

You are most welcome Bhaiya...reading you is always a pleasure😃

She helped him come out of is fears...and that thanks said everything...am glad you liked it😃

Bless you too Bhaiya🤗

Thank you so much Bhabhi🤗

Warmth in someones hands is more to be felt...it does much more than words can do... this is what I tried to show here...am glad that you liked it😃

Love you too Bhabhi😃🤗

Thank you so much Sneha😃🤗

Your appreciation really means a lot😃🤗

This time I'm trying to write something different where there are no dialogues...rather I have tried to express everything through their gestures and expressions...hopefully you would enjoy this too. So here it goes...😉😊

He entered the house at 11 pm and she opened the door...without saying anything she went away to the bedroom. Instantly he realized that she is angry with him...as he had promised to be on time today and take her out for dinner...but as usual he was stuck up in an emergency case and couldn't make it on time. He freshened up and searched for her to have dinner together...but what he found was a chit on the dining table that said that he should have it alone as she doesn't want to have it with him tonight. How could he see his love missing her dinner...he very well knew how to do away with her anger. He went to the kitchen...searched for something and soon found what he was searching for...he knew this would definitely work for him. He searched for a recipe on youtube and started cooking as per the instructions...but as expected when you are doing something for the first time...you end up messing up everything. One by one the utensils kept on falling down as he had not much experience of working in the kitchen. Nidhi came to the kitchen on hearing the noise and saw everything messed up...she gave an angry look to him but he gave her a smile...he signaled her to go back to her room and that he would manage everything...she stamped her foot in frustration and left from there. After a lot of hard work he managed to make what he wanted to...he knew this is her favourite...sooji halwa...he took some halwa in a bowl and went to her. She saw him but turned her face away from him...he came and sat close to her and held her hand but she pulled it away from him. Now he held her face and turned it towards him... With his eyes he tried to say sorry...he held his ears even...but she didn't relent easily but he could make out that the ice had started to melt. He took some halwa and offered it to her...she didn't accept it but when he requested her to try...she opened her mouth and its taste melted away all her anger. He could see her smile and realized that she liked the halwa a lot and now its time to ask for her forgiveness. He kept the halwa aside and sat down on his knees holding his ears saying sorry...she smiled at this gesture from him...held his shoulders and asked him to stand up...he did so and took her out to the dining table for dinner...he warmed up the dishes and both of them had dinner together. He promised her that they would go out on Sunday surely but she laughed as she knew his promises are meant to be broken when it comes to his patients and his work.

End of this one...

Thanks a lot Bhaiya for the appreciation😃

I know you were busy so there is really no need to say sorry😊🤗

She understands his work pressures so her narazgi is transient😛

Hmm...pizza burger and noodles...hmm ab us par koi story sochungi😛

Love you Bhaiya🤗

Loved the cute and innocent love of roothna manana, i loved the caring nature of Ashu and understanding of Nidhi, who has the belief of his promises never get out, but she is happy that his efforts are too worthy to get angry more!

Beautiful and too well crafted!! 👏

Surely will wait for the pizza and noodle angles in some story, luv ya!

You are most welcome Bhabhi🤗

His efforts wont let her be angry for long...and she knows that😛

Thank you for your lovely amazing comment as always Bhabhi😃👏

Will try to conceptualise a story on these lines too...lets see what comes to my mind😛😆

love you Bhabhi❤️🤗

Thank you Sneha...glad that you liked it😃🤗

Thank you Anjani😊🤗

Please say something more too😉