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Posted: 6 years ago
#31
Very nice story dear... β­οΈπŸ‘
This one reminds me of Sk's another show... ARCB,,, 😳
Liked Nidhi's presence of mind n holding him to give him the affection as his fears were mounting.. !
So.. he has come out of his fears.. this is what Nidhi states..
The Thanks later said it all n made a smiling bridge between them... 😳
Loved the feeling Nidhi puts in.. main yahin hu.. aapke paas.. πŸ€—

Thanks once again for the beautiful shot... God bless..
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Posted: 6 years ago
#32
Very sweet shot Manisha πŸ‘
Ashu's fears stuck him cos Baba left him and due to his lonely life he is struggling to come out of that fear! Nidhi rightly held his hand and shook him up! Her hand did the magic and he felt secured.
Loved the continuous dear! The endearment, the sweet talk made him normal and the strict Dean is all left with thanks to his intern today.
Awesome and i felt the warmth in the hands of Nidhi lend to Ashu, and she is so right - braving one's fears is the right thing!
Thanks for the sweetness, luv ya Sweetie ❀️ πŸ€—
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Posted: 6 years ago
#33
Beautiful story. Thanks a lot.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Nice n cute... πŸ˜›

It had to be Dr. Dean at the door.. n i loved Nidhi mumbling... πŸ˜†
Hardstone ready to kill his pupils.. n ordered Nidhi to be on time the next day... For God's sake Ashu... for once can you have the mercy on her.. ?/ She was at her cousin's,, n your repeated commands target her here too... πŸ˜‰
Maza aa gaya... πŸ˜† n loved Nidhi laughing on the interactions.. n made the atmosphere easy for her cousin n friends.. ! Lovely,, cute,, want more from you.. β­οΈπŸ‘
Thanks dear.. n God bless. .!


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I have realised that you all love the khadoos Ashu and cute Nidhi's interactions a lot...ab I'll think of a FF or something on these lines...lets see if I can bring it on πŸ˜›
You are most welcome Bhaiya... i loved reading you as alwaysπŸ˜ƒπŸ€—
Bless you tooπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 6 years ago
#35

Thanks for these awesome caps Bhaiya...these are so cuteπŸ˜›πŸ‘
keep coming up with moreπŸ˜ƒπŸ€—
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Posted: 6 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Awesome, cute and very cute, loved it Manisha πŸ‘

It was confirmed that hardstone will be of the same nature even outside KGH πŸ˜›
Loved how Ashu and Nidhi met and talked, and other side of their hearts were saying another story πŸ˜‰
It was obvious that Nidhi had to talk of him, to her friends. Talking of Ashu was her nature after joining KGH, and talking of his tantrums and stonic heart, was what making her so close to him!
Loved the little shot, with her friends laughing over the Dean's behaviour. i wish Nidhi had a sound sleep after that incident πŸ˜‰
Thanks dear, for the amusing shot, luv ya so much ❀️ πŸ€—


Once you talk about someone in good or bad ...you are indirectly being attracted towards that person... this is what happened with NidhiπŸ˜‰
Sound sleep...yeah...but with loud alarms onπŸ˜†πŸ˜›

Thanks a lot Bhabhi for the appreciation for my works alwaysπŸ˜ƒπŸ€—
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Posted: 6 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Sweet story...πŸ‘


Thank you Anjani... hope I can keep up to the expectations in future as well😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Very lovely story Manisha... β­οΈπŸ‘
Your little stories are a watch... !!!
Loved how Nidhi is feeling for Ashu by now n thought of the perfect gift for him.. n so loved him loving n accepting it by wearing it on the next day only...

Hmm... something is cooking up at both the sides... πŸ˜‰ loving it... ❀️

her smile gave him an immense pleasure which was unknown to him till now. He too responded with a thank you signal through his eyes which could be seen and understood only by the one for whom it was meant.
Lovely lines... very well put in... πŸ‘
Thanks dear.. n God bless..


Thank you Bhaiya...i'm just trying my bit to increase the forum activity...as i have too many small small ideas cooking up in my mind...therefore I started this thread for small storiesπŸ˜›
i'm glad you loved those lines...they were just random thoughts penned down😊
Bless you too BhaiyaπŸ€—
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Posted: 6 years ago
#39

Brilliant Bhaiya...the smiles on the faces of both of them...so cuteπŸ˜ƒ
loved themπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 6 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

If you only knew the way i look at you, when you have your back at me -

I smile wider than the sky, cos i love you endlessly!


Lovely shot once again Manisha dear πŸ‘
I loved the Title - her smile is his present, and so is his smile to her. And the " Present time " is all their smiles to each other. So, both the present time and the gift are what matter right now!
Loved to see him attired in her gift. Loved to see him so happy after times. Loved to see her happy to see him happier in his gift!
The smiles they have given to each other - by acceptance and by acknowledging, they both have gift each other an unknown feeling that has a large from to fill their voids and get them to the reach of love!
Beautifully expressed AshNi' s feelings in the last lines dear ⭐️
Thanks so much for the lovely shot, it's so pleasant to get these little shots from you in this so silent forum!
Luv ya dear, just luv ya ❀️ πŸ€—


Brilliant line BhabhiπŸ˜ƒπŸ‘
loved to read you Bhabhi ...I dont have enough words to express how well you have put this down...loved it...just loved it...I always tell you that you should write some day... but aap maante hi nahi😳
waiting for the masterpiece Bhabhi
love you tooπŸ˜ƒβ€οΈπŸ€—
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